What an awful book. I say this after having really enjoyed Matthew Hanover’s previous two books. His most recent to this, Not Dressed, was particularly good and I thought if he could match that effort with this new book, he might actually gain some traction as a recognized author. But this was a huge step backward.
The problem? Three main characters who are completely unlikable.
First you have the main character and narrator, Scott, who deceives his fiancé, deceives his ex-girlfriend, and throughout the entire book never makes the choices that a decent person would make.
Second, you have the ex-girlfriend, Leila, who is a complete bi-polar nut job. She’s not even remotely likable. And she’s supposed to be this ultra-smart political pundit who goes on TV and crushes anyone who dares to disagree with her, but yet whenever challenged by Scott or her Mom, her usual retort is to simply say “whatever.”
Finally, you have Scott’s sister, Quinn, who is, against all odds, even more unlikable than Leila because of her non-stop jealousy and insecurity.
This is seriously bad. I won’t even get into the dozens (yes dozens) of missing words and other grammatical errors. And finally there’s the author’s nauseating insistence of trying to work in the characters from his previous books as fringe parts of this story. It’s way too much effort and wasted space, especially when he’s not developing those prior characters or really continuing their stories in any meaningful way.
I hope Hanover will regroup, take his time, and redeem himself with his next work.