An Unbound Soul: Part 3: Science

Erryn's world #4

by Cathfach

Stripped of his immunity, Peter's soul has been laid bare to Erryn. Fortunately, she has accepted the importance of his free will, even giving him permission to try to invigorate the world's stagnant civilization. As his first small steps quickly snowball out of control, he's left wondering exactly what the consequences of his actions will be.

The fourth volume set in Erryn’s world, and the third in the continuing tale of Peter’s adventure.

Genres: Fantasy

292 pages, Kindle Edition

Published May 8, 2021

Reviews

[Robert Day · Rating 2 out of 5]

Main character somehow gets dumber and less cautious despite getting stat increases to Wisdom and Intelligence. Ignores advice and thinks he knows best. Overall the book series is good and quite enjoyable, but Peter doesn't seem to be maturing and is only being more idiotic and reckless. Very disappointing to read a fantasy story with stat increases where the main character seems to be regressing mentally. He's forgetful and potentially willfully ignorant despite access to free knowledge and advice from more knowledgeable people. He also knows that people die in his line of work regularly with some very pointed examples but continues to treat his "quest" lightheartedly. Completely ruined my favorable opinion of Peter in this book.

He has all the knowledge to break his mind control/memory redirection and instead of just taking care of it himself by thinking of his past family, he decides to risk EVERYTHING to get to the bottom floor to ask Erryn to do it for him. Constantly complains that his mindset is stuck in earth mentality but doesn't take any precautions when testing a new magic lightning device... I don't even know where to begin on this one. Who in there right mind would strap a tesla coil to themselves and just turn it on without any second thought and only a glove as protection. Just completely dumb and started to ruin the series for me.

Story is starting to feel contrived and less plausible and it's not the setting, but the main character acting irrationally that's doing it.

[Jonathan · Rating 5 out of 5]

fun

Peter’s quest to clear the dungeon no longer had a penalty, but he still wants to dive so tells no one. He continues to change the world, inspiring new ideas. He learns that he isn’t as unique as he thought and unlocks lost memories of his previous family. He defeats the dungeon.

This is not a stand alone novel but a smooth continuation of the previous one. The pace and entertainment value are maintained as is the quality. I found the story highly addicting and devoured the series in short order. Enjoy.

[Kevin · Rating 3 out of 5]

This is getting more confusing as it goes on. I don't know what the future books will hold. The protagonist will fall into more problems.

I think this series might get more dark because of the knowledge released.

3/5 Stars

[Heli Miranda ahumada · Rating 5 out of 5]

By far one of the best ones of the genre, really imaginative, and the cohesion is nice.

[Miles · Rating 3 out of 5]

3.25*

[Nick Rizzo · Rating 4 out of 5]

Peter grinds levels to complete the newb dungeon. He also introduced technology to the world for better or worse