I was born on a Protected World. You’d think that would be a good thing, but in truth, not so much. You see, a Protected World is a sentry world. One located along the edge of human space, there to sound the alarm if there’s an alien invasion. A world that is marginally habitable, so unlikely to be a target, yet well connected to the rest of humanity, so able to sound the alarm. And that’s the real problem. Marginally habitable worlds can’t support a significant population. And for the few of us that live here, it’s difficult to scrape out a living. You might ask why anyone would want to live in such a place. I ask that question all the time. The short answer is that these worlds were given away to anyone that had the means to claim and settle them. A lot of adventurers couldn’t resist the opportunity. My grandfather, six generations back, was one of those people. There are many stories about my ancestral grandfather. He was apparently quite a character, eccentric as well. Many of his sayings are built deeply into our culture, and most involve the number six. Spend a day in town and you’re likely to hear them. ‘Better to do one thing well than six things poorly.’ Or ‘better to have six good days than one good week.’ Of his many sayings, there’s the one my mother quotes all the time. ‘The sixth son of the sixth generation will stand above them all.’ Well, it turns out that I’m the sixth son of the sixth generation. My father, and all his forefathers, were first sons of first sons down the line from the great Jared Daan. I was my father’s sixth son. Sixth son of the sixth most direct connection to our founder. My parents gave me the name of my ancestor, Jared Daan. I’m the first to bear that name since the great man passed. My mother says I’m destined for greatness. I think that’s crazy talk. But my five brothers hate me for it.
D. Ward Cornell lives on the Kohala Coast of the Big Island of Hawaii. His career as an engineer, consultant, and entrepreneur has taken him all over the world. Many of those places and elements of those cultures are featured in his writing.
Although still dabbling in those fields, his passion now is bring stories to life.
I have the utmost regard for the skill and perseverance the write a book, and the story told in this book has potential, but the telling is flat, implausible, and not very interesting. Characters underdeveloped and uninteresting. Cane vipers falling out of trees? Shouldn't they be in the cane fields? Among novels, I would rate this a "C".
I love the way Cornell spins a story. The recurring theme in his books seems to be the triumph of ingenuity, magnanimity and human spirit over pettiness, narrow mindedness, self interest & evil. Works for me! The sci fi ideas are interesting and imaginative. The action is gripping - and even though you know (having read previous Cornell books) that the good guys will prevail - it does not take away from the suspense or make the plot predictable - there are constant twists & setbacks to overcome. Just finished the ascendancy series which I thoroughly enjoyed - and immediately picked up this series. So far promises to be a great ride.
The basic story is interesting. The style starts out ok, easy reading. Its like "I did this, then I did that." But as it progresses it feels like the main character is running at a frantic pace, doing this and this and this and... I would like to see more character development. I like the characters but they are shallow. Something about the plot felt familiar. I figured out it's the story of Jacob from the bible. Hated by his brothers, framed and sent away, saves the world.
The author has kept the story steadily moving to conclusion in a way that kept your interest as to what comes next. It was hard to put this story away for the day. I think I finished the book in record time. There was no parts of the book that took you around in circles to just increase the books word count like many authors do. In all I recommend the book to any WiFi readers looking for a solid story line.
Very well thought out and written its really been a !it of fun. I am really looking forward to the next book in this series. I hope you enjoy it as much as I have. And I sincerely hope he keeps writing for many more years . got to go book now and start reading the next one. Bravo Donald.
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I wasn’t particularly fond of the beginning. However, I kept reading. It was interesting how he was drawn into events and prevailed. I will probably read the next one for the family drama. Also, to see what he does with his wealth. Thanks for the good read.
Unique story of the of humanity spread throughout our sector of the galaxy. It is not overly dependent on wild technology. It shows what technology is used is basically invisible. The main background of the story is the confederacy of planets in a seemly post-earth humanity. The characters are not too complex but are fairly rational in the decisions they make.
A bit different from the "Michael" time of this Universe. Still a most enjoyable read. I can see the world building needed to set up the new series. Looking forward to a lot of pages!
I couldn’t put it down. The author is newer but I got hooked on his first series. His switch to first person story telling with this series flows better for me. I can’t wait for the next book to be published. Truly wonderful stories.
This is an odd blend of sci-fi and mysticism wrapped conveniently around an intrepid hero. Good character development and some fascinating supporting cast. The story has a few intense scenes and ends on a promise for the future.
If you have read D. Ward Cornell's other books this story line is done much differently, it has less story lines not as many characters. Much easier to follow. Great story
Very likable story with some original concepts more character driven then Sci-fi driven in this book, few exotic technologies but and interesting cultural tradition woven in as the basis of the story. Likable weekend entertainment.
Good book. Characters are a bit underdeveloped and the second half of the book speeds through the story, unfortunately - it reads like a synopsis, rather than a novel. But still an interesting story.
The mystery is exciting. The characters are growing and quite enjoyable. I’m looking forward to more from this group. I don’t know where the story might go from here though.
Another winner! I really enjoy these types of young hero stories. Lots of good tech stuff too that makes it feel legit. Lots of depth and complexity, all for the good. Highly recommended!
Really great sci-fi with just the right amount of ‘fantasy’ thrown in. About the time the “green lantern” stuff becomes strong, the author throws in some combination of Asimov and H. Beam Piper science to pull it back together! Love it!
I loved the single pov. This story of a genius bullied boy who was prophesied to save the world, but instead his getting framed and going to jail was Fantastic.