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Two teenagers find kindred spirits in each other when fate brings them together. Wiley's simple life is uprooted when the enigmatic Ruby moves in to the old campground nearby. The two of them are drawn to each other instantly. However, Wiley soon discovers a darkness that Ruby harbors, a sadness that he becomes determined to extinguish. But is it already too late?
Also included is the short story 'Husk': two friends get their hands on a treasure map and decide to locate the cache of possible riches. But they'll soon learn that some things are better left buried.
Also included is the short story 'Husk': two friends get their hands on a treasure map and decide to locate the cache of possible riches. But they'll soon learn that some things are better left buried.
105 pages, Kindle Edition
Published January 17, 2021
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Rayne King
5 books42 followersRAYNE KING is the author of THE CREEK, a Coming-of-Age novella soaked in dread and horror. As an autodidact, he has slowly learned to write through much trial and tribulation. His influences are widespread, ranging from magical realism to cosmic horror. Because of this, his writing borrows elements from a multitude of genres, as he feels comfortable using whatever tools necessary to tell his dark stories.
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July 24, 2022
Really enjoyed those two stories. In the longer one, the novella "The Creek", two 17 years meet. The tale is told in retrospective and a lot happened in that short summer between the protagonist and Ruby. Ruby is part of a commune and her father the priest of the flock. Why did they move to the campground and what has Eleanore the leading lady of the cultists in mind with the ascension? Fascinating coming of age tale you can't put down, even or maybe as you know that there will be some nasty twist. The second story "Husk" is about treasure hunting. Hard to believe what the two treasure seekers find in the end and what is done with the treasure map. Be careful if you ever win a treasure map in a card game! Unusual and strange tale if there ever was one. This is a double feature of sinister stuff told by a very able modern author. Highly recommended!
March 2, 2021
'The Creek' is the debut novella by Rayne King, a great guy who I connected with over on Twitter, some time ago. I was immediately impressed with the cover that King shared and while I couldn't get to it right when it came out, I knew I'd hop on this when I had a lull in my reading. Usually that's when I've finished a really solid book and decide to chomp through a quick read in one sitting, before returning to the other long reads I have already started.
Funny enough, when I flipped to the first page and saw the layout, I wondered if Ross Jeffery had formatted this. Ross has formatted a number of my works (probably the last 6 or 7, I'd have to count!) and I was also pleased to see Ross had done the cover! So happy these two connected.
What I liked: I love wilderness/small-town based stories, and King has delivered there. We're introduced to Wiley, a 17 year old man who lives in a beat up trailer with his alcoholic, corrections officer father. His mom split 6 years ago and has now started a new life, which leaves Wiley conflicted. Shortly into the story, a group arrives at the abandoned camping grounds near where he lives and he finds out that a religious group has purchased it.
King really did a great job of creating this care-free kid, who just likes to hang out with his dog at the creek. It's at this location that he meets Ruby, the daughter of the religious groups leader.
I enjoyed the innocent first interaction they had and how the two of them are both conflicted with how their real lives are compared to how time seems to stop when they're together.
What I didn't like: I think a bit of what I struggled with was the fairly straight forward story that was told. While King doesn't set out to recreate the wheel, there was nothing surprising or shocking. Ultimately, I struggled with believing Wiley was as innocent as he was portrayed, as once he starts attending the religious ceremonies, he willing takes drugs and him and Ruby start sleeping together. For a boy who couldn't look at here a short time ago at the creek, things sure ramped up quickly. Which unfortunately made the final events a bit hard to comprehend, as I just didn't know if Wiley would actually have it in him.
Why you should buy this: I also love finding and reading new authors and first releases and this was a really well done effort. King's first release is in a subgenre of horror that can be tough to deliver in (coming-of-age) and I think he did an admirable job of crafting this story of Wiley and Ruby. Mileage will vary on this one, but if you're looking for a quick, fun, religious novella, this will tick all of those boxes. It also comes with a bonus short story 'Husk' which was a fun read and while I won't go into this one here, it definitely makes me excited to see how King will continue to evolve and grow with each new release.
Funny enough, when I flipped to the first page and saw the layout, I wondered if Ross Jeffery had formatted this. Ross has formatted a number of my works (probably the last 6 or 7, I'd have to count!) and I was also pleased to see Ross had done the cover! So happy these two connected.
What I liked: I love wilderness/small-town based stories, and King has delivered there. We're introduced to Wiley, a 17 year old man who lives in a beat up trailer with his alcoholic, corrections officer father. His mom split 6 years ago and has now started a new life, which leaves Wiley conflicted. Shortly into the story, a group arrives at the abandoned camping grounds near where he lives and he finds out that a religious group has purchased it.
King really did a great job of creating this care-free kid, who just likes to hang out with his dog at the creek. It's at this location that he meets Ruby, the daughter of the religious groups leader.
I enjoyed the innocent first interaction they had and how the two of them are both conflicted with how their real lives are compared to how time seems to stop when they're together.
What I didn't like: I think a bit of what I struggled with was the fairly straight forward story that was told. While King doesn't set out to recreate the wheel, there was nothing surprising or shocking. Ultimately, I struggled with believing Wiley was as innocent as he was portrayed, as once he starts attending the religious ceremonies, he willing takes drugs and him and Ruby start sleeping together. For a boy who couldn't look at here a short time ago at the creek, things sure ramped up quickly. Which unfortunately made the final events a bit hard to comprehend, as I just didn't know if Wiley would actually have it in him.
Why you should buy this: I also love finding and reading new authors and first releases and this was a really well done effort. King's first release is in a subgenre of horror that can be tough to deliver in (coming-of-age) and I think he did an admirable job of crafting this story of Wiley and Ruby. Mileage will vary on this one, but if you're looking for a quick, fun, religious novella, this will tick all of those boxes. It also comes with a bonus short story 'Husk' which was a fun read and while I won't go into this one here, it definitely makes me excited to see how King will continue to evolve and grow with each new release.
August 20, 2021
3.5 rounded up for Goodreads
As far as introductions go, THE CREEK by Rayne King is a solid debut. This is the story of a young man, Wiley who meets a magnetic, young woman named Ruby one summer. Their relationship moves fast (as teenage infatuation often does). The author develops a striking dynamic between Ruby & Wiley. Over the course of just a few days, as they get to know each other, feelings start running pretty hot. Ruby eventually invites Wiley into her strange, religious lifestyle rife with psychotropic drugs and sex. It goes off the rails as one would expect.
The most impressive aspect of King's storytelling is his ability to surround the reader in an enveloping sense of setting. Even as I type this, the images...the aesthetic of this novella is rushing back to me. King has a natural storytelling voice--looking forward to more.
The bonus story, HUSK, was great! Hoping to see Rayne's work in anthologies & such.
As far as introductions go, THE CREEK by Rayne King is a solid debut. This is the story of a young man, Wiley who meets a magnetic, young woman named Ruby one summer. Their relationship moves fast (as teenage infatuation often does). The author develops a striking dynamic between Ruby & Wiley. Over the course of just a few days, as they get to know each other, feelings start running pretty hot. Ruby eventually invites Wiley into her strange, religious lifestyle rife with psychotropic drugs and sex. It goes off the rails as one would expect.
The most impressive aspect of King's storytelling is his ability to surround the reader in an enveloping sense of setting. Even as I type this, the images...the aesthetic of this novella is rushing back to me. King has a natural storytelling voice--looking forward to more.
The bonus story, HUSK, was great! Hoping to see Rayne's work in anthologies & such.
June 23, 2021
Ah, young love. Boy meets girl. Boy loves girl. Girl's...in cult? Uh-oh.
That's obviously a gross oversimplification of THE CREEK, Rayne King's very enjoyable debut novella. I'm not going to go into the plot more than my attempt at humor above as this is a 1-2 sitting novella and I don't want to ruin things.
I will say that this doesn't read like the first thing someone had published. Rayne's writing is very descriptive (the setting was great) and he knows how to write characters you'll care about. Even though I had an inkling about how this story might end, I was completely invested the entire time. That said, I do wish we learned a little more about the cult and its mysterious leadership. This wasn't the cult's story, so it's not a dealbreaker by any means, I just thought some neat ideas were introduced that it might have been cool to have seen fleshed out.
There's also a fun short story called HUSK where X marks the spot. Very creepy and enjoyable, but it's short so I'll say no more about it other than don't skip it.
Rayne's writing is not that of a new author. If this is where he's starting at, I'm on board for whatever's next.
4 out of 5 stars
That's obviously a gross oversimplification of THE CREEK, Rayne King's very enjoyable debut novella. I'm not going to go into the plot more than my attempt at humor above as this is a 1-2 sitting novella and I don't want to ruin things.
I will say that this doesn't read like the first thing someone had published. Rayne's writing is very descriptive (the setting was great) and he knows how to write characters you'll care about. Even though I had an inkling about how this story might end, I was completely invested the entire time. That said, I do wish we learned a little more about the cult and its mysterious leadership. This wasn't the cult's story, so it's not a dealbreaker by any means, I just thought some neat ideas were introduced that it might have been cool to have seen fleshed out.
There's also a fun short story called HUSK where X marks the spot. Very creepy and enjoyable, but it's short so I'll say no more about it other than don't skip it.
Rayne's writing is not that of a new author. If this is where he's starting at, I'm on board for whatever's next.
4 out of 5 stars
May 8, 2021
Review to come but a solid debut.
3.5 rounded up to 4.
I will be looking out for more of Rayne's work.
3.5 rounded up to 4.
I will be looking out for more of Rayne's work.
April 29, 2021
For me, Rayne King's debut novella started off very strong. Everything flowed really nicely and I was genuinely hooked, but as soon as Eleanor came onto the scene and the story took a turn, it all felt a little hurried and disjointed. A shame really because Rayne King writes extremely well.
Another story included here called HUSK was also fairly enjoyable but again it didn't blow me away.
For the writing I'd give this a 4.
For the stories I'd give 2.5. straight down the middle. They were just okay.
Like I say, though, they could've easily scored higher.
Overall, I'm scoring this 3 out of 5.
I honestly believe it's only a matter of time before Rayne puts out something quite special. Just you wait. It will happen.
This one reads super fast. You'll be done in around an hour or so. Give it a go. It's not wasted time. I'm glad I read it.
I'll definitely read his next, too.
Another story included here called HUSK was also fairly enjoyable but again it didn't blow me away.
For the writing I'd give this a 4.
For the stories I'd give 2.5. straight down the middle. They were just okay.
Like I say, though, they could've easily scored higher.
Overall, I'm scoring this 3 out of 5.
I honestly believe it's only a matter of time before Rayne puts out something quite special. Just you wait. It will happen.
This one reads super fast. You'll be done in around an hour or so. Give it a go. It's not wasted time. I'm glad I read it.
I'll definitely read his next, too.
March 22, 2021
The Creek marks newcomer Rayne King’s first foray into indie horror and it is certainly a promising start from someone who hopefully has a lot more stories to come.
The Creek is a coming-of-age novella about Wiley, a seventeen-year-old boy living with his single father in Hudson Valley. A chance encounter with Ruby, a newcomer to the community who has just moved with her parents and sizeable congregation of religious followers, led by her father and the mysterious Eleanor, leads to perhaps the greatest summer of his life.
As Wiley becomes more enamoured by Ruby and finds favour with the cult that she is a part of, Ruby’s apprehension with the life she is living begins to become more apparent. As things at the site begin to take a darker turn, Wiley must decide whether he wants to stay with his newfound love or attempt an escape before it is too late.
King doesn’t break the mould with ‘The Creek’. It is a familiar story with few surprises along the way. The joy in this book is in the telling. King is an exceptional writer, with a joyful and poetic prose style. When the book opens, we’re treated to beautiful descriptions of the story’s picturesque setting and it was so effective at setting the scene and drawing the reader in. ‘The Creek’ is positively brimming with atmosphere and this pays dividends when the story starts to get a little more sinister toward the end.
It is a slow burn story, with a great deal of time spent world-building and setting the scene, giving us ample time to spend with the two young leads. When things start to take a more sinister turn at the midway point, it starts with subtle nods and odd lines that warn of darker things to come. While the ending is unlikely to surprise anybody, it’s hard to feel too let down when the journey getting there is so well done.
The titular novella is followed up by a short story (‘Husk’) which King calls a ‘misadventure horror story’. The description is very apt and I enjoyed this one a great deal. More overtly scary than ‘The Creek’ and with a much more unique premise, it was a nice addition to an already strong book and, like the longer story that precedes it, works well thanks in part to a pair of strong, likeable characters who feel very genuine and well rounded.
‘The Creek’ is a lyrically beautiful novella, expertly carving out a slice of quiet coming-of-age horror with a story of a first love weathering the most unusual of circumstance. It is a very accomplished story for such a new writer and certainly sets a high bar for what comes next.
You can read more reviews of new and upcoming horror releases at https://www.myindiemuse.com/category/...
I also promote indie horror via Twitter - @RickReadsHorror
The Creek is a coming-of-age novella about Wiley, a seventeen-year-old boy living with his single father in Hudson Valley. A chance encounter with Ruby, a newcomer to the community who has just moved with her parents and sizeable congregation of religious followers, led by her father and the mysterious Eleanor, leads to perhaps the greatest summer of his life.
As Wiley becomes more enamoured by Ruby and finds favour with the cult that she is a part of, Ruby’s apprehension with the life she is living begins to become more apparent. As things at the site begin to take a darker turn, Wiley must decide whether he wants to stay with his newfound love or attempt an escape before it is too late.
King doesn’t break the mould with ‘The Creek’. It is a familiar story with few surprises along the way. The joy in this book is in the telling. King is an exceptional writer, with a joyful and poetic prose style. When the book opens, we’re treated to beautiful descriptions of the story’s picturesque setting and it was so effective at setting the scene and drawing the reader in. ‘The Creek’ is positively brimming with atmosphere and this pays dividends when the story starts to get a little more sinister toward the end.
It is a slow burn story, with a great deal of time spent world-building and setting the scene, giving us ample time to spend with the two young leads. When things start to take a more sinister turn at the midway point, it starts with subtle nods and odd lines that warn of darker things to come. While the ending is unlikely to surprise anybody, it’s hard to feel too let down when the journey getting there is so well done.
The titular novella is followed up by a short story (‘Husk’) which King calls a ‘misadventure horror story’. The description is very apt and I enjoyed this one a great deal. More overtly scary than ‘The Creek’ and with a much more unique premise, it was a nice addition to an already strong book and, like the longer story that precedes it, works well thanks in part to a pair of strong, likeable characters who feel very genuine and well rounded.
‘The Creek’ is a lyrically beautiful novella, expertly carving out a slice of quiet coming-of-age horror with a story of a first love weathering the most unusual of circumstance. It is a very accomplished story for such a new writer and certainly sets a high bar for what comes next.
You can read more reviews of new and upcoming horror releases at https://www.myindiemuse.com/category/...
I also promote indie horror via Twitter - @RickReadsHorror
March 4, 2021
The Creek:
Loner Wiley’s life is forever changed when Ruby, her family & the rest of their somewhat strange congregation moves into town. This was a slow & steady burn which I found myself enjoying (read in one easy sitting) and reminded me of the Jonestown massacre.
Husk:
Described as a misadventure horror story, this one really delivers. A treasure hunt gone wrong, two sympathetic characters with a complicated relationship & something dark awaiting them in the wild; this one was (for me) the strongest of the two short stories and an absolute treat to end the read with.
-A strong debut, I’d be nitpicking by adding anything more. Can’t wait to see what the future holds in store for Rayne King.
Loner Wiley’s life is forever changed when Ruby, her family & the rest of their somewhat strange congregation moves into town. This was a slow & steady burn which I found myself enjoying (read in one easy sitting) and reminded me of the Jonestown massacre.
Husk:
Described as a misadventure horror story, this one really delivers. A treasure hunt gone wrong, two sympathetic characters with a complicated relationship & something dark awaiting them in the wild; this one was (for me) the strongest of the two short stories and an absolute treat to end the read with.
-A strong debut, I’d be nitpicking by adding anything more. Can’t wait to see what the future holds in store for Rayne King.
June 2, 2021
The Creek is Rayne King's debut, and I have to say, I'm impressed. Look...here's the thing, as soon as I read the first few pages I knew this guy had great potential as a writer. The skills are there. He's a natural talent.
Neither The Creek nor Husk broke new ground as far as ideas are concerned, but both were well written, and that's what counts if you're looking for future potential. I won't bore you with my reasons for this judgement, but it's the little things...his use of verbs, the way he creates an atmosphere (which is very well done, and has stayed with me since finishing the story) etc. Suffice it to say, I sense the potential in my bones.
I preferred The Creek to the short story that followed, because the idea behind The Husk was a little bit Scooby Doo for my liking. Having said that, I enjoyed the cyclical element and loved the ending. The Creek was very much a tale of religion gone wrong which is right up my street. I also found King to be quite insightful about the human condition, quite perceptive.
As far as editing goes, there were a few minor creases that needed ironing but nothing that couldn't be easily sorted.
Mark my words... we'll be seeing this writer go from strength to strength.
Neither The Creek nor Husk broke new ground as far as ideas are concerned, but both were well written, and that's what counts if you're looking for future potential. I won't bore you with my reasons for this judgement, but it's the little things...his use of verbs, the way he creates an atmosphere (which is very well done, and has stayed with me since finishing the story) etc. Suffice it to say, I sense the potential in my bones.
I preferred The Creek to the short story that followed, because the idea behind The Husk was a little bit Scooby Doo for my liking. Having said that, I enjoyed the cyclical element and loved the ending. The Creek was very much a tale of religion gone wrong which is right up my street. I also found King to be quite insightful about the human condition, quite perceptive.
As far as editing goes, there were a few minor creases that needed ironing but nothing that couldn't be easily sorted.
Mark my words... we'll be seeing this writer go from strength to strength.
June 25, 2021
What a cracking debut this is. You really wouldnt think that it's his first outing with the writing that is within this novella. Flows well and takes the reader on an instant journey into the mind of young Wiley. You can feel his love for the mysterious Ruby, and the rollercoaster of emotions that follow. A good tale you can fall in to and float along with.
The bonus story, Husk, was also great. This was my favorite of the two as it delved more into what i class as horror. Very well written, creepy and atmospheric, yeah...definitely got some shivers reading that. The very idea of following a treasure map to somewhere random and not knowing what to expect is exciting and scary for me. I definitely want more background info on how the map came about (and also more about the thing that it leads to!)
The bonus story, Husk, was also great. This was my favorite of the two as it delved more into what i class as horror. Very well written, creepy and atmospheric, yeah...definitely got some shivers reading that. The very idea of following a treasure map to somewhere random and not knowing what to expect is exciting and scary for me. I definitely want more background info on how the map came about (and also more about the thing that it leads to!)
June 7, 2021
The Creek starts off as a fairly straightforward coming of age story. We have a peaceful, wooded setting and two characters who we just know are going to learn a lot as they begin to like each other.
And then things get weird.
Our main character’s love interest doesn’t exactly come from a normal family, and even though he probably knows better than to get sucked in... he just can’t help himself.
Rayne King packs a lot into this little volume: growing up, love, nature, drugs, cults, death... He’s a good, confident writer. If I didn’t know this was a debut, I don’t think I would have suspected it as such. The writing is descriptive without being overdone. The main characters are fleshed out. And the narrative takes at least two dramatic, unexpected turns—without throwing readers out of the car.
My only complaint? Once the main conflict, the horror, was introduced, I felt the story quit turning and growing and just made a sprint for the conclusion.
Still, that’s minor. As I’ve said before, I’d rather an author leave me wanting more than to wear out their welcome.
The Creek is good stuff.
And then things get weird.
Our main character’s love interest doesn’t exactly come from a normal family, and even though he probably knows better than to get sucked in... he just can’t help himself.
Rayne King packs a lot into this little volume: growing up, love, nature, drugs, cults, death... He’s a good, confident writer. If I didn’t know this was a debut, I don’t think I would have suspected it as such. The writing is descriptive without being overdone. The main characters are fleshed out. And the narrative takes at least two dramatic, unexpected turns—without throwing readers out of the car.
My only complaint? Once the main conflict, the horror, was introduced, I felt the story quit turning and growing and just made a sprint for the conclusion.
Still, that’s minor. As I’ve said before, I’d rather an author leave me wanting more than to wear out their welcome.
The Creek is good stuff.
November 7, 2022
There is another real talent in the horror community, and Rayne King's debut work "The Creek" is proof. The story is short and straightforward, but the real strength is his pensive prose. I look forward to what comes next from RK!
March 25, 2021
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The Creek - Rayne King
Debut novella The Creek is from up and coming indie author Rayne King - cool name right?!
The Creek is a coming of age story about a solemn teenager, Wiley, who’s world is rocked by the arrival of a religious congregation and fellow teen Ruby.
The pair hit it off, but when Wiley becomes further involved with the cult, headed by Ruby’s Father and the curious Eleanor it doesn’t take long for shit to turn sour.
This is a pretty slow burn story, and a little predictable, BUT that being said I really enjoyed Rayne’s writing style and characters and for a debut, it’s a definitely worth your a read.
The book includes short story Husk which I am yet to read, but very much looking forward to.
Thank you for reaching out Rayne, and I look forward to reading more from you in the future.
3/5
The Creek - Rayne King
Debut novella The Creek is from up and coming indie author Rayne King - cool name right?!
The Creek is a coming of age story about a solemn teenager, Wiley, who’s world is rocked by the arrival of a religious congregation and fellow teen Ruby.
The pair hit it off, but when Wiley becomes further involved with the cult, headed by Ruby’s Father and the curious Eleanor it doesn’t take long for shit to turn sour.
This is a pretty slow burn story, and a little predictable, BUT that being said I really enjoyed Rayne’s writing style and characters and for a debut, it’s a definitely worth your a read.
The book includes short story Husk which I am yet to read, but very much looking forward to.
Thank you for reaching out Rayne, and I look forward to reading more from you in the future.
3/5
March 29, 2021
Total transparency here I formatted this book and designed the cover and have socialised with Rayne King on Twitter - he's a big supporter of me and I was sent a signed copy of the book for my work on the project.
Rayne King brings us his debut novella, The Creek - which is a beautifully rendered coming of age tale that is set wondrously within the forest and the creek, these aspects of the book are depicted fabulously well, it reminded me of the work of Callan Wink (with regards to his attention to detail and wildlife) and I look forward to more works possibly set within the wilderness from King in the future.
We are introduced to Wiley early on, who becomes our main protagonist, he's 17 years old and hasn't had the best of life so far, his mother left seven years previously and started a new life and a new family leaving Wiley to live with his drunk, corrections officer father.
When a group arrives at an abandoned camp grounds near where he lives he meets Ruby, they stumble upon one another at the creek, we soon learn that she is the daughter of the religious group that had purchased the abandoned camp grounds and are setting up their commune.
King does a great job in the opening of this book to create a character in Wiley that we instantly connect to, he's care free and happy, he's happy traipsing through the woods and fishing in the creek with his dog. These scenes by the creek are wonderful little snapshots - and it's clear that King knows this area well (I'd be interested to know if this creek is based on one that he frequents or had frequented as a child) - we see teenage angst work its magic as he quickly becomes infatuated by Ruby and teenage love runs rampant.
What I struggled with regarding this book is the quick change in character, that of Wiley - he's rendered fabulously in the opening few chapters, he's a good kid, a loner of a character, almost angelic in a way. But within a few pages everything he's ever know, cared about, his moral compass is thrown out the window, I don't know how much time has passed in the book but it only felt like a few days and in the end it felt as if the prose was rushed to get to the meat and bones of the story - where I would have preferred to remain in the opening for longer to form a lasting connection.
I personally feel that the book could have been longer, which would have allowed this shift in his personality, or his change in character to have been handled a bit softer, we could have seen a gentle decline in all he held to be true and just. But as it is, it does jar the mind of the reader in my opinion - it all happens way too quickly and once he becomes part of this religious group he's soon willingly taking drugs, getting high and having a lot of sex. Which is of course fine, it's Rayne King's story that he wanted to tell, I just felt it was rather rushed and I wasn't connected to the character as I was in the opening few chapters. And if I don't connect with a character or that connection's broken, it's hard to come back from.
On the back of this with that connection missing the parts of the story that come towards the stories conclusion had me not invested and because it deals with a religious cult / group - the ending was nothing new to me and so the impact of this climactic scene was lost.
This book also has Husk - a misadventure horror story which I did enjoy, but as the story is very short I'll not talk about that here, but again Rayne King does a marvellous job at cementing the reader in the sticks, deep in the wood, it's a very cool talent to do locations so well.
But having said that I did enjoy this book, there are elements that I truly cherished, for example the creek, this part of the book was a character in its own right, the way King describes the water, the light, the air, the trees and vegetation, the animals - the scene setting is wondrous and I can't wait to see what he does next. I do love discovering new voices and King is one of those I will be continuing to search out in the future, on the back of The Creek - his debut novella, the future is bright and a new storyteller is emerging.
Rayne King brings us his debut novella, The Creek - which is a beautifully rendered coming of age tale that is set wondrously within the forest and the creek, these aspects of the book are depicted fabulously well, it reminded me of the work of Callan Wink (with regards to his attention to detail and wildlife) and I look forward to more works possibly set within the wilderness from King in the future.
We are introduced to Wiley early on, who becomes our main protagonist, he's 17 years old and hasn't had the best of life so far, his mother left seven years previously and started a new life and a new family leaving Wiley to live with his drunk, corrections officer father.
When a group arrives at an abandoned camp grounds near where he lives he meets Ruby, they stumble upon one another at the creek, we soon learn that she is the daughter of the religious group that had purchased the abandoned camp grounds and are setting up their commune.
King does a great job in the opening of this book to create a character in Wiley that we instantly connect to, he's care free and happy, he's happy traipsing through the woods and fishing in the creek with his dog. These scenes by the creek are wonderful little snapshots - and it's clear that King knows this area well (I'd be interested to know if this creek is based on one that he frequents or had frequented as a child) - we see teenage angst work its magic as he quickly becomes infatuated by Ruby and teenage love runs rampant.
What I struggled with regarding this book is the quick change in character, that of Wiley - he's rendered fabulously in the opening few chapters, he's a good kid, a loner of a character, almost angelic in a way. But within a few pages everything he's ever know, cared about, his moral compass is thrown out the window, I don't know how much time has passed in the book but it only felt like a few days and in the end it felt as if the prose was rushed to get to the meat and bones of the story - where I would have preferred to remain in the opening for longer to form a lasting connection.
I personally feel that the book could have been longer, which would have allowed this shift in his personality, or his change in character to have been handled a bit softer, we could have seen a gentle decline in all he held to be true and just. But as it is, it does jar the mind of the reader in my opinion - it all happens way too quickly and once he becomes part of this religious group he's soon willingly taking drugs, getting high and having a lot of sex. Which is of course fine, it's Rayne King's story that he wanted to tell, I just felt it was rather rushed and I wasn't connected to the character as I was in the opening few chapters. And if I don't connect with a character or that connection's broken, it's hard to come back from.
On the back of this with that connection missing the parts of the story that come towards the stories conclusion had me not invested and because it deals with a religious cult / group - the ending was nothing new to me and so the impact of this climactic scene was lost.
This book also has Husk - a misadventure horror story which I did enjoy, but as the story is very short I'll not talk about that here, but again Rayne King does a marvellous job at cementing the reader in the sticks, deep in the wood, it's a very cool talent to do locations so well.
But having said that I did enjoy this book, there are elements that I truly cherished, for example the creek, this part of the book was a character in its own right, the way King describes the water, the light, the air, the trees and vegetation, the animals - the scene setting is wondrous and I can't wait to see what he does next. I do love discovering new voices and King is one of those I will be continuing to search out in the future, on the back of The Creek - his debut novella, the future is bright and a new storyteller is emerging.
September 6, 2021
The Creek - I enjoyed this debut "indie horror" novella from Rayne King. From the opening sentences it felt like I was sitting across a campfire listening to Mr. King tell his story. The language and flow of the story is so inviting it pulls you in and keeps you wanting more. The character development, setting descriptions and foreshadowing were very well done and kept my interest piqued from the first paragraph to the last.
Husk - was a bonus tale added to this book. I always believe setting is key to terrifying short story. If you can put the protagonist(s) in an area that most people find intimidating, you can conjure up a tremendous amount of fear by the surroundings alone. Add in a little adventure with a horrifying twist, and you have Husk.
You have a successful career ahead of you, Mr. King and a new and loyal fan.
Husk - was a bonus tale added to this book. I always believe setting is key to terrifying short story. If you can put the protagonist(s) in an area that most people find intimidating, you can conjure up a tremendous amount of fear by the surroundings alone. Add in a little adventure with a horrifying twist, and you have Husk.
You have a successful career ahead of you, Mr. King and a new and loyal fan.
March 16, 2022
atmospheric (and a bit creepy)
July 2, 2021
Rayne King tells a dark coming-of-age story with The Creek, circling around young love, family drama, and the mystery surrounding a new girl in the area and the group of people she traveled with to a nearby campground. With each page turned, I had a small feeling where the story was going to go, but that did not detract from King's solid writing and characterizations. This slow-burn horror novella is a great debut from and introduction to Rayne King and I look forward to more in the future! 3.5 rounded up for Goodreads
April 13, 2021
The Creek is told through the eyes of the main protagonist Wiley as he is reminiscing about his first love many years ago. The story takes place around this little body of water simply called The Creek. This Creek is built up to be the special place. The special meeting place. The place people want to hangout and enjoy themselves.
As Wiley tells the story, we are informed of how he had to grow up faster than kids should have to, as he comes from a broken home. We hear about his first drink, passing out, teenage angst, and of course his first love, Ruby.
As the events unfold through the storytelling, we start to get the sense it’s leading up to a very dark tragic event. This event has obviously scarred Wiley as it still lives with him today. Not all of his memories of his childhood are happy memories.
The story starts to touch on different religious aspects, and the way different people believe. So many different Faiths, but one terrifying finale.
The overall feel of the book gives you anticipation at a very fast pace. It’s short. Short enough for me to binge it in one sitting. In fact the high speed pacing and overall length I feel does the book a dishonor. A couple of events throughout seemed to have happened really fast, almost glazed over at times. And the character shift of our main protagonist Wiley seems to happen much sooner than expected. There is definitely room to build this part more, for a more fuller overall feel.
King hasn’t recreated the wheel with The Creek. I’m sure he knows that. A lot of stories involving religious cults lead a certain direction, causing them to be a bit predictable, and this is no exception. But it’s the way we get the, the way it’s told that makes up for it.
Yes, there are grammatical errors, but the overall style, the smoothness, the flow is not that of someone making a debut. I see many more stories in Rayne King’s future as he gets better and better.
I really enjoyed the cool trippy part involving mushrooms and sex.
King also adds a bonus story along with The Creek. “Husk” is a Misadventure Horror Story, but it’s pretty short so I won’t go into detail for it. But I like bonuses, so it will raise my rating a little.
As Wiley tells the story, we are informed of how he had to grow up faster than kids should have to, as he comes from a broken home. We hear about his first drink, passing out, teenage angst, and of course his first love, Ruby.
As the events unfold through the storytelling, we start to get the sense it’s leading up to a very dark tragic event. This event has obviously scarred Wiley as it still lives with him today. Not all of his memories of his childhood are happy memories.
The story starts to touch on different religious aspects, and the way different people believe. So many different Faiths, but one terrifying finale.
The overall feel of the book gives you anticipation at a very fast pace. It’s short. Short enough for me to binge it in one sitting. In fact the high speed pacing and overall length I feel does the book a dishonor. A couple of events throughout seemed to have happened really fast, almost glazed over at times. And the character shift of our main protagonist Wiley seems to happen much sooner than expected. There is definitely room to build this part more, for a more fuller overall feel.
King hasn’t recreated the wheel with The Creek. I’m sure he knows that. A lot of stories involving religious cults lead a certain direction, causing them to be a bit predictable, and this is no exception. But it’s the way we get the, the way it’s told that makes up for it.
Yes, there are grammatical errors, but the overall style, the smoothness, the flow is not that of someone making a debut. I see many more stories in Rayne King’s future as he gets better and better.
I really enjoyed the cool trippy part involving mushrooms and sex.
King also adds a bonus story along with The Creek. “Husk” is a Misadventure Horror Story, but it’s pretty short so I won’t go into detail for it. But I like bonuses, so it will raise my rating a little.
April 26, 2021
I've been thinking over this for a few days. This novella didn't have much of the overt supernatural elements I am used to in my reading, but it was decidedly personal, which was a refreshing change. The scenery descriptions were extremely vivid and one of my favorite facets of the novella, and it would not surprise me if the author grew up in a similar place to the setting. It was light on romance and 'scares', but the character development and the two teens of the story were engaging and interesting. Overall, I enjoyed the quick read and can't wait to see what the author writes next.
April 25, 2021
A Stunning Debut
THE CREEK is a stunning debut. The narrative is seamless, and the suspense throughout this novella is exquisite. The writing is clean, crisp, and filled with details that bring the settings to life. Ominous, multilayered, and compulsively readable, THE CREEK establishes Rayne King as an author with much to say, and the bonus story, HUSK, is an eerie piece of horror at THE CREEK's conclusion. I'm looking forward to more work from King in the future. Highly recommended!
THE CREEK is a stunning debut. The narrative is seamless, and the suspense throughout this novella is exquisite. The writing is clean, crisp, and filled with details that bring the settings to life. Ominous, multilayered, and compulsively readable, THE CREEK establishes Rayne King as an author with much to say, and the bonus story, HUSK, is an eerie piece of horror at THE CREEK's conclusion. I'm looking forward to more work from King in the future. Highly recommended!
August 25, 2021
Wiley is 17 and lives in a double wide trailer with his Dad, who is a Correctional Officer and who also has a penchant for cheap whiskey and beer. Wiley and his Dad have been together since his Mum up and left them several years ago and Wiley only has a vague memory of her but she now has a new family and wishes to rekindle her relationship with him. During the summer a religious group move into the campsite near Wiley’s home and Wiley meets the enigmatic Ruby, the daughter of the Pastor. They become inseparable during the school holidays and spend an idyllic time together exploring the creek and nearby woods, drinking, smoking and sleeping together. Wiley also joins in with the religious services and partakes of their unusual rituals but he is not converted but is accepted by Ruby’s father and the group. However as summer turns to autumn, Ruby’s moods become darker as she awaits the ‘Ascension’, which is the ultimate reward that the group aspire too. Wiley and Ruby agree to part until the fateful day of the Ascension, when the true nature of the groups work becomes apparent.
This is just a short novel but it’s also a very powerful and moving story of a lonely teenager who eventually finds a kindred spirit. The story of Wiley and Ruby starts out quite innocently and their friendship blossoms into love but as the summer wears on their relationship takes on a darker undertone. The tone of the novel also changes with the weather and from bright sunshine we are plunged into cold dark days. Rayne King ratchets up the tension too as the story progresses, as we race to find out the nature of the mysterious ritual known as the Ascension.
There is also an additional short story, Husk, added at the end of the novel which describes a treasure hunt with deadly consequences.
This is a great little debut novel from Rayne King which really drew me into Wiley and Ruby’s world and wouldn’t let me go until the final word.
This is just a short novel but it’s also a very powerful and moving story of a lonely teenager who eventually finds a kindred spirit. The story of Wiley and Ruby starts out quite innocently and their friendship blossoms into love but as the summer wears on their relationship takes on a darker undertone. The tone of the novel also changes with the weather and from bright sunshine we are plunged into cold dark days. Rayne King ratchets up the tension too as the story progresses, as we race to find out the nature of the mysterious ritual known as the Ascension.
There is also an additional short story, Husk, added at the end of the novel which describes a treasure hunt with deadly consequences.
This is a great little debut novel from Rayne King which really drew me into Wiley and Ruby’s world and wouldn’t let me go until the final word.
June 24, 2021
I dug the hell out of this. It was a quick jaunt of a read, but a deep plunge into what happens when you waltz into a cult campground. Told in a truly original, authentic voice. Add a bonus story in the back and you get a great flavor for the author's style. Dig it.
June 13, 2021
The Creek is a coming-of-age story set in backwoods Rural America, an idyllic location, a young man meets young woman love story, set against a mounting note of decay that leaves the reader in no doubt that all will not be well at the end of the story. Indeed, Mr.King’s debut novella is a rare thing – engaging yet tainted, a tragedy that has to happen. It’s a great look at how young lives can be shaped and altered, and the mental and emotional traps families, and extended families (cults) can exert on their members.
I really liked the slow build to this, the inevitability of it all. The prose was strong, voice confident and poetic, description of place spot on. There’s a lot to like here, and as a novella, I lapped it all up in one sitting. The violence, when it finally came, was swift and well documented, the only thing slightly frustrating here was it was clear right from the beginning exactly where we were going – but that is, of course, the nature of a tragedy, that one knows exactly the ending before it happens.
A strong opener and I look forward to discovering more from Rayne.
4 out of 5⭐’s
I really liked the slow build to this, the inevitability of it all. The prose was strong, voice confident and poetic, description of place spot on. There’s a lot to like here, and as a novella, I lapped it all up in one sitting. The violence, when it finally came, was swift and well documented, the only thing slightly frustrating here was it was clear right from the beginning exactly where we were going – but that is, of course, the nature of a tragedy, that one knows exactly the ending before it happens.
A strong opener and I look forward to discovering more from Rayne.
4 out of 5⭐’s
March 24, 2021
The Creek
Two stories a short story and a novella. Husk is the short story. A creepy horror story about a couple, well sort of couple, who get a treasure map and their trek to the booty. 🤓 That’s what pirates call it. I really enjoyed it.
Then the novella was called The Creek. The Creek is a slow burn & it is a coming of age story. We follow Wiley during one summer & he meets Ruby who is the daughter of the head preacher of this traveling religious group. The group settles at the campground site that Wiley lives next to. Through Wiley we slowly get to know these new neighbors of his & we get to experience summer love with Ruby.
This story was very atmospheric. King’s description style really makes you feel like you are there in this forested area in upstate New York. The relationship of Wiley and Ruby is written so well. You feel that heat of new love but also timeliness of this relationship. This is a relationship that has helped shaped Wiley into who he has become as a man it seems. Some of the lines in his stories are really luscious and I found myself reading them over a few times to enjoy them a little longer.
The horror in the story is very subtle, things slowly turn sour. You get the feeling things are not going to end well, it just a matter of when. The character of Eleanor was definitely creepy and I enjoyed getting to know her. Overall for me it was ok. I would say The Creek for me was 3/5 and Husk was 4/5.
Rayne King is talented, I see in his writing he has what it takes to be an excellent horror writer. I will definitely be reading more of his works as they come out cause I know a 5 star read is inevitable.
Two stories a short story and a novella. Husk is the short story. A creepy horror story about a couple, well sort of couple, who get a treasure map and their trek to the booty. 🤓 That’s what pirates call it. I really enjoyed it.
Then the novella was called The Creek. The Creek is a slow burn & it is a coming of age story. We follow Wiley during one summer & he meets Ruby who is the daughter of the head preacher of this traveling religious group. The group settles at the campground site that Wiley lives next to. Through Wiley we slowly get to know these new neighbors of his & we get to experience summer love with Ruby.
This story was very atmospheric. King’s description style really makes you feel like you are there in this forested area in upstate New York. The relationship of Wiley and Ruby is written so well. You feel that heat of new love but also timeliness of this relationship. This is a relationship that has helped shaped Wiley into who he has become as a man it seems. Some of the lines in his stories are really luscious and I found myself reading them over a few times to enjoy them a little longer.
The horror in the story is very subtle, things slowly turn sour. You get the feeling things are not going to end well, it just a matter of when. The character of Eleanor was definitely creepy and I enjoyed getting to know her. Overall for me it was ok. I would say The Creek for me was 3/5 and Husk was 4/5.
Rayne King is talented, I see in his writing he has what it takes to be an excellent horror writer. I will definitely be reading more of his works as they come out cause I know a 5 star read is inevitable.
March 13, 2022
A helluva debut for Rayne King. Seamlessly adds dark twists and turns to a seemingly innocent coming-of-age story. Insightful narration with a strong sense of place. Highly recommended!
July 24, 2021
This was so poetic and a perfect nod to those summers of youth before responsibilities actually kicked in. It is a short read, which made it a great companion on this sunny summer day.
September 25, 2021
3.5/5 Stars
I wanted to like The Creek a lot more than I did. I found Wiley as someone I could personally relate to in ways and I thought it was an interesting concept but a lot of the story I felt like it was a bit repetitive and not exciting, the climax didn't come as a shock. I will gladly admit that the strongest part of this novella was definitely King's writing and I think it was just the story itself that I may not have entirely resonated with or was able to get behind. It has its moments but I had to drag myself to finish it, which is never the best sign for me.
Husk, on the other hand, I very much enjoyed which may have boosted my rating a bit. I enjoyed the character and concept, I thought this was executed much better and I sincerely found parts of it tense and a bit dread-inducing.
I really do enjoy Rayne King's writing very much and will be reading his future work, I don't believe this story was for me though. I can't say I loved this novella, I also can't say I hated it. I would recommend it to people who enjoy a bit of a less intense, slower-paced coming-of-age cult horror story.
I wanted to like The Creek a lot more than I did. I found Wiley as someone I could personally relate to in ways and I thought it was an interesting concept but a lot of the story I felt like it was a bit repetitive and not exciting, the climax didn't come as a shock. I will gladly admit that the strongest part of this novella was definitely King's writing and I think it was just the story itself that I may not have entirely resonated with or was able to get behind. It has its moments but I had to drag myself to finish it, which is never the best sign for me.
Husk, on the other hand, I very much enjoyed which may have boosted my rating a bit. I enjoyed the character and concept, I thought this was executed much better and I sincerely found parts of it tense and a bit dread-inducing.
I really do enjoy Rayne King's writing very much and will be reading his future work, I don't believe this story was for me though. I can't say I loved this novella, I also can't say I hated it. I would recommend it to people who enjoy a bit of a less intense, slower-paced coming-of-age cult horror story.
October 4, 2021
An interesting little novella. Really enjoyed the way this author writes and I really loved the set up here, but the pay off felt underwhelming. I love religious and folk horror, but It just didn’t quite come together effectively, still the author shows so much potential. I would say give it a read since it’s so short.
February 2, 2021
The Creek... A whimsical coming of age love story with a twist that captures teenagers hormonal passions well.
Unfortunately the novella has too many things going against it for me to recommend to anyone.
I found myself highlighting passage after passage of issues that probably could have been caught by an editor. Rayne has a strong voice and a poetic way with his prose but needs direction and correction. A few examples of issues I found:
"The creek burbled soothingly."
"Glancing around the crowd, I wondered if I saw Ruby’s mother, would I recognize the woman as such without having to confirm."
"Yes, a few months spent with someone is a fraction in the grand scheme of things, comparatively speaking, but time is relative and it’s the magnitude of any relationship that governs its significance, the devastation."
A mix of amateur adjective use, and meandering sentences began to pull me further and further out of the story.
The story seemed to rush the ending, and left me feeling apathetic to our main character.
Unfortunately the novella has too many things going against it for me to recommend to anyone.
I found myself highlighting passage after passage of issues that probably could have been caught by an editor. Rayne has a strong voice and a poetic way with his prose but needs direction and correction. A few examples of issues I found:
"The creek burbled soothingly."
"Glancing around the crowd, I wondered if I saw Ruby’s mother, would I recognize the woman as such without having to confirm."
"Yes, a few months spent with someone is a fraction in the grand scheme of things, comparatively speaking, but time is relative and it’s the magnitude of any relationship that governs its significance, the devastation."
A mix of amateur adjective use, and meandering sentences began to pull me further and further out of the story.
The story seemed to rush the ending, and left me feeling apathetic to our main character.
June 8, 2021
This is so good. Just a really well-handled piece of storytelling.
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