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The Diamond Head Deception
Trouble in Paradise After putting Iowa crop insurance cheats out to pasture independent insurance fraud investigator Luna Nightcrow heads to Hawaii, but not for a vacation. The Shilpa, an Indian ocean liner, sinks and Luna is hired to determine if it still carries "Pacific Splendor" (a rare diamond insured for $15 million). The trouble is that Luna's not the only one looking for the diamond. Secessionists, sportsmen, and other suspects might sink to any depths to recover or smother Pacific Splendor. Action, mystery, and romance abound as Luna dares to look around.
- GenresMystery
220 pages, Paperback
First published September 28, 2010
About the author
James Blakley
4 books95 followersJames Blakley was educated at Missouri Western State College and Washburn University. While at MWSC, he was a local and national award-winning columnist and co-editor of "The Griffon-News" (Associated Collegiate Press Award 1992-93).
Blakley worked 10 1/2 years as a page and as an Assistant Librarian for the River Bluffs Regional Libraries of St. Joseph, MO. He currently lives in Topeka,KS where he worked for The Topeka & Shawnee County Public Library before spending several years in clerical and customer support capacities for international computer companies such as EDS and HP. Additionally, Blakley has worked in information gathering and analysis for various government agencies and programs for over a decade.
Blakley worked 10 1/2 years as a page and as an Assistant Librarian for the River Bluffs Regional Libraries of St. Joseph, MO. He currently lives in Topeka,KS where he worked for The Topeka & Shawnee County Public Library before spending several years in clerical and customer support capacities for international computer companies such as EDS and HP. Additionally, Blakley has worked in information gathering and analysis for various government agencies and programs for over a decade.
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December 8, 2021
I enjoyed The Diamond Head Deception! The first book, The K-Frost Caper has a character-centered nature. This installment has more action which I loved. I also enjoyed the setting of Hawaii and exotic red diamond (which is a real thing) inclusion. I do love action and scenes I can picture easily in my head and picture how they would play out in a show or movie. It makes the book feel very theatrical. The Diamond Head Deception has this theatricality in spades. And laugh out loud witty dialogue!
Just like in my review of book 1 (The K-Frost Caper), I recommend The Diamond Head Deception to mystery readers who love to be surprised and guessing all through the novel and also like to read witty banter between characters and internal dialogue. For this installment, I'm adding that if you like action that is theatrical and you can picture easily in your head, you'll love The Diamond Head Deception.
I received a review copy from the author free of charge. It was my choice to read and I'm leaving this review voluntarily.
Just like in my review of book 1 (The K-Frost Caper), I recommend The Diamond Head Deception to mystery readers who love to be surprised and guessing all through the novel and also like to read witty banter between characters and internal dialogue. For this installment, I'm adding that if you like action that is theatrical and you can picture easily in your head, you'll love The Diamond Head Deception.
I received a review copy from the author free of charge. It was my choice to read and I'm leaving this review voluntarily.
November 13, 2016
The Diamond Head Deception has something that I often find missing in other mysteries. We are a diverse country but often you do not find that diversity in popular mysteries. Not true in this book. It is filled with people of different racial backgrounds. Not only are there a very large number of side characters they are some of the best fleshed out that I have read lately. Luna Nightcrow is a fraud investigator and comes to Hawaii to see if a very valuable diamond went down with the ship and if so is it still there. She is not the only one to wonder. What follows is an exciting journey that starts in a low key manner and ramps up as the story progresses. The book is well-written. There is a very nice flow to the story and the mystery kept me on the edge of my seat. While the book is only a little over 200 pages the story is so tightly written that everything fell in place before a very satisfying ending.
July 1, 2021
A Gem of a Mystery
Solving the case of The Diamond Head Deception is an enthralling chase to catch criminals. And they keep stacking up.
Intrigue beginning in the cornfields of Iowa seamlessly moves to the next case on the Hawaiian Islands. It is game on when insurance fraud is suspected. Especially for independent investigator, Luna Nightcrow, a gutsy heroine who takes firm hold on interest throughout many dangerous misadventures stemming from her inquiries. Breaking up the heat like a cool breeze is some clever wit.
James Blakley’s use of pop culture references to create witty banter within a budding relationship is a fun feature keeping with the fluency. But no time for romance until all the bad guys have been caught.
The romance of this dynamic duo is therefore rooted for to bring about a very satisfying ending to another job well done.
Solving the case of The Diamond Head Deception is an enthralling chase to catch criminals. And they keep stacking up.
Intrigue beginning in the cornfields of Iowa seamlessly moves to the next case on the Hawaiian Islands. It is game on when insurance fraud is suspected. Especially for independent investigator, Luna Nightcrow, a gutsy heroine who takes firm hold on interest throughout many dangerous misadventures stemming from her inquiries. Breaking up the heat like a cool breeze is some clever wit.
James Blakley’s use of pop culture references to create witty banter within a budding relationship is a fun feature keeping with the fluency. But no time for romance until all the bad guys have been caught.
The romance of this dynamic duo is therefore rooted for to bring about a very satisfying ending to another job well done.
January 28, 2020
‘The Shilpa was the last of her kind’ – One very fine mystery thriller!
Kansas author James Blakely earned his degrees from Missouri Western State College and Washburn University, has served as a journalist, editor, and has worked for the River Bluffs Regional Libraries in St Joseph, Missouri and The Topeka and Shawnee County Public Library in his home of Topeka, Kansas. James has a penchant for mysteries and his publications to date include THE STEEL DEAL, THE K-FROST CAPER, and THE DIAMOND HEAD DECEPTION.
James’ facility with language is apparent from the opening of his story in the Midwest and blossoms as his tale speeds to Hawaii. He easily captures the flavor of his locale, as is evident in the following lines – ‘The summer’s biggest event, the Fourth of July, had fizzled. And until the start of football and the end of baseball in September, there wouldn’t be much to get fired up about. The only light show now came from the sun: it scorched the Lower Forty-Eight with intense temperatures for often weeks on end. And few places had it worse than the Midwest. But in Iowa, Corn County Carnival Days was a way to beat the heat. In the middle of what was usually nowhere was a sprawl of cooled tents and booths (each filled with games to play and things to buy). And nearby were the twists and turns of a Ferris wheel, a rollercoaster, and a carousel ride – all nice distractions. But for some the carnival wasn’t just a retreat from the heat: they had business there. Some of it was legal, some illegal. For the criminal set, the tents could provide cover from a satellite sweep; and the crowd, ample alibis to cover their butts.’ Quite ingeniously James has offered a clue to his fine mystery. And in this sun-drenched Midwest atmosphere, one Luna Nightcrow observes.
Creating a convincing protagonist to carry the weight of the caper is something this author does very well indeed, as he offers in the synopsis – ‘Luna Nightcrow isn't a morning until late afternoon, Monday through Friday, office-bound insurance investigator. Armed with a 60,000-volt smartphone stun gun case and brains and beauty that are more formidable, Luna jets cross-country to tackle the toughest insurance frauds on a freelance basis. So, she's all yours: All day, all night, but only if the price is right. After putting Iowa crop insurance cheats out to pasture, Luna travels to Hawaii, but not for a vacation. The Indian ocean liner, The Shilpa, sinks and Luna's hired to determine if it still carries "Pacific Splendor" (a rare diamond insured for $15 million). The trouble is that she's not the only one looking for the stone. Secessionists, sportsmen, and other suspects might sink to any level to recover or smother Pacific Splendor.’
Fast paced and filled with action (and a dollop of romance!), this is a terrific book for an evening’s read. Satisfying on every level – a book that hints at cinematic adaptation…! Highly recommended.
Kansas author James Blakely earned his degrees from Missouri Western State College and Washburn University, has served as a journalist, editor, and has worked for the River Bluffs Regional Libraries in St Joseph, Missouri and The Topeka and Shawnee County Public Library in his home of Topeka, Kansas. James has a penchant for mysteries and his publications to date include THE STEEL DEAL, THE K-FROST CAPER, and THE DIAMOND HEAD DECEPTION.
James’ facility with language is apparent from the opening of his story in the Midwest and blossoms as his tale speeds to Hawaii. He easily captures the flavor of his locale, as is evident in the following lines – ‘The summer’s biggest event, the Fourth of July, had fizzled. And until the start of football and the end of baseball in September, there wouldn’t be much to get fired up about. The only light show now came from the sun: it scorched the Lower Forty-Eight with intense temperatures for often weeks on end. And few places had it worse than the Midwest. But in Iowa, Corn County Carnival Days was a way to beat the heat. In the middle of what was usually nowhere was a sprawl of cooled tents and booths (each filled with games to play and things to buy). And nearby were the twists and turns of a Ferris wheel, a rollercoaster, and a carousel ride – all nice distractions. But for some the carnival wasn’t just a retreat from the heat: they had business there. Some of it was legal, some illegal. For the criminal set, the tents could provide cover from a satellite sweep; and the crowd, ample alibis to cover their butts.’ Quite ingeniously James has offered a clue to his fine mystery. And in this sun-drenched Midwest atmosphere, one Luna Nightcrow observes.
Creating a convincing protagonist to carry the weight of the caper is something this author does very well indeed, as he offers in the synopsis – ‘Luna Nightcrow isn't a morning until late afternoon, Monday through Friday, office-bound insurance investigator. Armed with a 60,000-volt smartphone stun gun case and brains and beauty that are more formidable, Luna jets cross-country to tackle the toughest insurance frauds on a freelance basis. So, she's all yours: All day, all night, but only if the price is right. After putting Iowa crop insurance cheats out to pasture, Luna travels to Hawaii, but not for a vacation. The Indian ocean liner, The Shilpa, sinks and Luna's hired to determine if it still carries "Pacific Splendor" (a rare diamond insured for $15 million). The trouble is that she's not the only one looking for the stone. Secessionists, sportsmen, and other suspects might sink to any level to recover or smother Pacific Splendor.’
Fast paced and filled with action (and a dollop of romance!), this is a terrific book for an evening’s read. Satisfying on every level – a book that hints at cinematic adaptation…! Highly recommended.
January 26, 2022
When a rare, ping pong-sized red diamond that’s insured for millions of dollars goes down with sunken Indian ocean liner The Shilpa off the coast of Hawaii, independent insurance fraud investigator Luna Nightcrow is on the case. With the help of Nani Nyoko, the diamond's appraiser, the two search for anyone and everyone involved with the precious jewel (called “Pacific Splendor”) to find out if the loss is legit. Rupert “Rupee” Sabal, an aging cricket player and founding owner of the red diamond, is the first one to question. Then, there is A.L.O.H.A.: a group of Native Hawaiians dedicated to the preservation of their dying culture who will go to great lengths to stop any perceived threat. Gems of the Rim Investment owner Lono Kuhl is also at the top of the list for investigation. With each lead comes danger and adventure, as Luna and Nani narrow the suspects and the answers to this tropical puzzle.
I enjoyed this unique thrill ride of insurance fraud investigation with female heroine Luna Nightcrow. With her charming wit, master defense moves, and sharp observations she kept me interested and invested through the entirety of the novel. James Blakley knows how to keep the mystery going until the absolute last minute of its gasping reveal.
Diamond Head Deception is a great read for adventure and mystery lovers alike. This book gave me all the feels of having watched a James Bond movie or Charlie's Angels episode. I read this book being fully engrossed with each chapter just waiting on Luna's next move. The chapters are nice and short for people who have busy lives but also like to squeeze in a bit of reading during the day. It will transport you from the wintery blahs straight into an adventurous trip in tropical Hawaii to catch some evildoers!
I enjoyed this unique thrill ride of insurance fraud investigation with female heroine Luna Nightcrow. With her charming wit, master defense moves, and sharp observations she kept me interested and invested through the entirety of the novel. James Blakley knows how to keep the mystery going until the absolute last minute of its gasping reveal.
Diamond Head Deception is a great read for adventure and mystery lovers alike. This book gave me all the feels of having watched a James Bond movie or Charlie's Angels episode. I read this book being fully engrossed with each chapter just waiting on Luna's next move. The chapters are nice and short for people who have busy lives but also like to squeeze in a bit of reading during the day. It will transport you from the wintery blahs straight into an adventurous trip in tropical Hawaii to catch some evildoers!
January 21, 2023
Blakley's Diamond Head Deception, A Grand Chew.
Blakey's Diamond Head Deception presents an outstanding mystery with a strong flavor of John Sandford’s Prey series with the focus on insurance fraud rather than murder. Although murders do occur. However, The Diamond Head Deception is about murder for gain or to cover up the crime rather than murder as a way of life. Tension laces investigation and action throughout the story, and well-defined characters hold my attention on every page. I thoroughly enjoyed the journey.
I won’t waste time covering the details of the story. That’s been covered by other reviewers and the intro to the book. Female heroine Luna Nightcrow is a master of defense, investigation, observation, and problem solving. The tale starts with an action sequence that defines Nightcrow’s aggressive determination to take out the bad guys. Then ends with a show of her generosity and options for future income and excitement.
What I like most about the novel?
1) Blakey doesn’t clutter the writing with vulgar fill words.
2) Great descriptions of people, places, and action.
3) Easy reading that holds my attention.
4) Tension from start to finish.
5) Smooth and believable interaction between characters.
6) Only one noticeable editing error wherein one sentence got in twice back-to-back.
7) Convincing protagonist.
8) Fast pace.
9) A side of romance.
10) Mystery surrounded by an excellent mingling of good and bad characters with just enough hints to enable alert readers a chance to distinguish the individual angles of each.
Diamond Head Deception provides just the right flavor of mystery and adventure to keep readers on the edge and always ready to flip to the next page. A grand read, indeed.
Blakey's Diamond Head Deception presents an outstanding mystery with a strong flavor of John Sandford’s Prey series with the focus on insurance fraud rather than murder. Although murders do occur. However, The Diamond Head Deception is about murder for gain or to cover up the crime rather than murder as a way of life. Tension laces investigation and action throughout the story, and well-defined characters hold my attention on every page. I thoroughly enjoyed the journey.
I won’t waste time covering the details of the story. That’s been covered by other reviewers and the intro to the book. Female heroine Luna Nightcrow is a master of defense, investigation, observation, and problem solving. The tale starts with an action sequence that defines Nightcrow’s aggressive determination to take out the bad guys. Then ends with a show of her generosity and options for future income and excitement.
What I like most about the novel?
1) Blakey doesn’t clutter the writing with vulgar fill words.
2) Great descriptions of people, places, and action.
3) Easy reading that holds my attention.
4) Tension from start to finish.
5) Smooth and believable interaction between characters.
6) Only one noticeable editing error wherein one sentence got in twice back-to-back.
7) Convincing protagonist.
8) Fast pace.
9) A side of romance.
10) Mystery surrounded by an excellent mingling of good and bad characters with just enough hints to enable alert readers a chance to distinguish the individual angles of each.
Diamond Head Deception provides just the right flavor of mystery and adventure to keep readers on the edge and always ready to flip to the next page. A grand read, indeed.
July 23, 2021
Like Bond movies I remember, this book begins with the action-packed wrap-up of a previous case for Luna Nightcrow. Then she’s on to the next case, a rare diamond believed lost in the Pacific.
Elements I liked:
The story has a lot of action and twists and turns. Luna is a strong female lead who uses her intelligence to investigate but is not adverse to taking action, if needed. The diversity of characters in the story and some characters’ distinctive ways of talking are very well done. I enjoyed the light humor and occasional play on words. (“How did you ever get dragged into trying to separate the wheat from the tares?” “It’s a growing field.”)
Elements I struggled with:
The writing is rough, with frequent parenthetical phrases that interrupt the flow, some typos and missed words and odd punctuation that make the whole thing seem like it had been rushed to publish, and a repeated sentence or two that slipped past editing. Luna is frequently referred to as “the insurance investigator” which put an unfortunate distance between her and the reader—not really what you want for the main character. Some actions seemed wildly improbable, such as Luna pausing during a tense search to admire the scenery.
Overall:
The book is an entertaining escape, a fun and fast read in spite of the roughness. Never a dull moment, the wild story carries the reader along with Luna to uncover the truth behind The Diamond Head Deception.
Elements I liked:
The story has a lot of action and twists and turns. Luna is a strong female lead who uses her intelligence to investigate but is not adverse to taking action, if needed. The diversity of characters in the story and some characters’ distinctive ways of talking are very well done. I enjoyed the light humor and occasional play on words. (“How did you ever get dragged into trying to separate the wheat from the tares?” “It’s a growing field.”)
Elements I struggled with:
The writing is rough, with frequent parenthetical phrases that interrupt the flow, some typos and missed words and odd punctuation that make the whole thing seem like it had been rushed to publish, and a repeated sentence or two that slipped past editing. Luna is frequently referred to as “the insurance investigator” which put an unfortunate distance between her and the reader—not really what you want for the main character. Some actions seemed wildly improbable, such as Luna pausing during a tense search to admire the scenery.
Overall:
The book is an entertaining escape, a fun and fast read in spite of the roughness. Never a dull moment, the wild story carries the reader along with Luna to uncover the truth behind The Diamond Head Deception.
November 6, 2021
A highly entertaining and punchy read with a fascinating lead character, original plot and lush setting. Looking to read more adventures of Luna Nightcrow in this diverse, multicultural series!
Luna's a Native American insurance investigator, which off the top, makes her an original character for a mystery/thriller series. In this book, she heads to Hawaii to investigate the insurance claim of a red diamond worth millions. The gem is lost at sea when an ocean liner is attacked by pirates and sinks. (I had to look up red diamonds, and they are real! Kudos to the author for using this little- known gem as the crux of the plot.) I love exotic settings, so this really added to the overall punch of the novel, which is short and a quick read. I also liked the insertion of modern-day Somali pirates, a very real threat on seas. The character of the Indian cricketer was also an interesting choice for an American writer.
Lots of action scenes, which give it a Hollywood-ish feel at times. Not necessarily bad but not my thing. I did, however, appreciate the wide diversity of characters in what is usually a very white genre.
Luna's a Native American insurance investigator, which off the top, makes her an original character for a mystery/thriller series. In this book, she heads to Hawaii to investigate the insurance claim of a red diamond worth millions. The gem is lost at sea when an ocean liner is attacked by pirates and sinks. (I had to look up red diamonds, and they are real! Kudos to the author for using this little- known gem as the crux of the plot.) I love exotic settings, so this really added to the overall punch of the novel, which is short and a quick read. I also liked the insertion of modern-day Somali pirates, a very real threat on seas. The character of the Indian cricketer was also an interesting choice for an American writer.
Lots of action scenes, which give it a Hollywood-ish feel at times. Not necessarily bad but not my thing. I did, however, appreciate the wide diversity of characters in what is usually a very white genre.
April 13, 2020
We meet Luna Nightcrow in full on insurance investigator mode. She is in the middle of taking down Barney for crop insurance fraud. After the shenanigans that she got up to Luna is forced to pay a large sum of money for the damages caused in order to capture the creep Barney, but she had enjoyed using the tractor!
Thinking she had some time off she left the courts to travel back home…
As Luna is an independent Insurance Investigator and gets the job done and done well! She is sought out by major players, especially when a rare red diamond disappears, worth £15 million disappears into the ocean along with ‘The Shipla’.
The race is on to find the DIAMOND!!
We meet some characters along the way, Nani Nyoko – Jewellery Appraiser, Ruppe Sabal - owner of the diamond and Lono Kuhl – Jewellery Investor. Not all is what it seems not all the players are playing the game you expect them to be playing.
My thoughts
I loved the idea of the story, very well thought out. Lots of red herrings and twists that were not expected which was really good. Luna’s character was basically Bond but in female form. At times I forgot that she was an insurance investigator, I thought she was a spy or something, her expertise was so much more than what an insurance investigator needs to be, maybe she just needed to be a private investigator? Her realm expanded beyond where it should be, I felt it was a bit over the top at times.
Overall, I felt that although this novel was fast paced; lots of information thrown at you, different scenarios and as well as the characters to get to know - it sometimes took a while to link certain parts together, I know I had to go back on a couple of occasions to find the link. The right concept but I think the delivery could be tweaked to make it flow better, slow it down, let the red herring sink in or even just enjoying the moment of the art that has been created. There were descriptions for instance of the tractor Luna used or the specific model of phone used that I found rather odd. Lastly, I wasn’t keen on the narration used at times, referring Luna as the ‘insurance investigator’ then switching back to Luna.
But that’s just my view...
Thinking she had some time off she left the courts to travel back home…
As Luna is an independent Insurance Investigator and gets the job done and done well! She is sought out by major players, especially when a rare red diamond disappears, worth £15 million disappears into the ocean along with ‘The Shipla’.
The race is on to find the DIAMOND!!
We meet some characters along the way, Nani Nyoko – Jewellery Appraiser, Ruppe Sabal - owner of the diamond and Lono Kuhl – Jewellery Investor. Not all is what it seems not all the players are playing the game you expect them to be playing.
My thoughts
I loved the idea of the story, very well thought out. Lots of red herrings and twists that were not expected which was really good. Luna’s character was basically Bond but in female form. At times I forgot that she was an insurance investigator, I thought she was a spy or something, her expertise was so much more than what an insurance investigator needs to be, maybe she just needed to be a private investigator? Her realm expanded beyond where it should be, I felt it was a bit over the top at times.
Overall, I felt that although this novel was fast paced; lots of information thrown at you, different scenarios and as well as the characters to get to know - it sometimes took a while to link certain parts together, I know I had to go back on a couple of occasions to find the link. The right concept but I think the delivery could be tweaked to make it flow better, slow it down, let the red herring sink in or even just enjoying the moment of the art that has been created. There were descriptions for instance of the tractor Luna used or the specific model of phone used that I found rather odd. Lastly, I wasn’t keen on the narration used at times, referring Luna as the ‘insurance investigator’ then switching back to Luna.
But that’s just my view...
August 4, 2022
The Diamond Head Deception starts strong with vivid action and adventure and is reminiscent of the 70s Bond films. It morphs quickly into a search for a rare diamond, The Pacific Splendor, last heard to be on an Indian ocean liner, The Shilpa. When the ship sinks, Luna, the main character, is hired to see if the diamond is still on board. However, she’s not the only one searching for the jewel.
The Diamond Head Deception has plenty of mystery and action and is a quick, enjoyable read.
The Diamond Head Deception has plenty of mystery and action and is a quick, enjoyable read.
January 11, 2017
This book is a true mystery/thriller book that is jam packed with action, adventure, excitement, and intrigue! This book was a very quick read with only 216 pages!
I really liked the main character, Luna Nightcrow. She is smart, witty, sassy, ambitious, beautiful, clever, and entertaining!
Luna is in the top of her field as an independent insurance fraud investigator. She is hired for the more difficult and complex cases that most investigators would struggle with. She reminds me of the female version of Walter Sherman (Geoff Stults) on the FOX TV Show, “The Finder.” Luna can find anything and works hard to solve her cases. Luna also greatly reminds me of Stephanie Plum (Katherine Heigl) from the Janet Evanovich novels/movies. Although Stephanie is a Bounty Hunter, they both have the same drive, motivation, and determination to go to any lengths to nab the bad guy. Also, like Stephanie, Luna finds a fun, hilarious, and comical way to go about this that leads her on some crazy, wild adventures and constant laughs.
Although with Luna’s impressive talents and her abilities to investigate some of the most complex cases, her adventures still seem genuine and plausible.
Luna is tasked with going to Hawaii to find the “Pacific Splendor,” a rare and famous red diamond. The diamond was last seen on the “Shilpa,” an ocean cruise liner that sunk. Luna must recover the diamond and catch the perps. However, with this impressive diamond’s value at a cool $15 million, the list of suspects list seems never-ending. Besides delving through possible suspects, Luna also quickly learns that she is not the only one looking for the diamond and the race is on! This is one challenge Luna is not going to back down from.
I feel that the author did jump around a bit throughout the story which made some scenes a little hard to follow. Also, I felt some of the secondary characters weren’t as strong or as well developed as they could be.
However, I think the author did a great job with the in-depth detail of the scenes and locations – whether it was when Luna was in Iowa or Hawaii, I could easily picture it.
This book was very well researched. I didn’t know much about the insurance claims process or the diamond world – excerpt I do love to wear diamond jewelry lol. The author does a great job intertwining these concepts and teaching the audience about both of these topics and others in a fun and easy to understand fashion.
Also, like great mystery books, this book does have some exciting twists that you won’t see coming! So I totally give the author props for keeping the story intriguing and suspenseful!
I would recommend this book to anyone interested in a fun, entertaining, exciting, and intriguing mystery/thriller book. This book does also fall in the romance category, but I think the romance genre plays more of a backseat role, as the main focus is the mystery. There may be a few hang-ups on the writing style, but you will enjoy Luna and her exciting adventures!
**Disclaimer: I received a complimentary copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.**
I really liked the main character, Luna Nightcrow. She is smart, witty, sassy, ambitious, beautiful, clever, and entertaining!
Luna is in the top of her field as an independent insurance fraud investigator. She is hired for the more difficult and complex cases that most investigators would struggle with. She reminds me of the female version of Walter Sherman (Geoff Stults) on the FOX TV Show, “The Finder.” Luna can find anything and works hard to solve her cases. Luna also greatly reminds me of Stephanie Plum (Katherine Heigl) from the Janet Evanovich novels/movies. Although Stephanie is a Bounty Hunter, they both have the same drive, motivation, and determination to go to any lengths to nab the bad guy. Also, like Stephanie, Luna finds a fun, hilarious, and comical way to go about this that leads her on some crazy, wild adventures and constant laughs.
Although with Luna’s impressive talents and her abilities to investigate some of the most complex cases, her adventures still seem genuine and plausible.
Luna is tasked with going to Hawaii to find the “Pacific Splendor,” a rare and famous red diamond. The diamond was last seen on the “Shilpa,” an ocean cruise liner that sunk. Luna must recover the diamond and catch the perps. However, with this impressive diamond’s value at a cool $15 million, the list of suspects list seems never-ending. Besides delving through possible suspects, Luna also quickly learns that she is not the only one looking for the diamond and the race is on! This is one challenge Luna is not going to back down from.
I feel that the author did jump around a bit throughout the story which made some scenes a little hard to follow. Also, I felt some of the secondary characters weren’t as strong or as well developed as they could be.
However, I think the author did a great job with the in-depth detail of the scenes and locations – whether it was when Luna was in Iowa or Hawaii, I could easily picture it.
This book was very well researched. I didn’t know much about the insurance claims process or the diamond world – excerpt I do love to wear diamond jewelry lol. The author does a great job intertwining these concepts and teaching the audience about both of these topics and others in a fun and easy to understand fashion.
Also, like great mystery books, this book does have some exciting twists that you won’t see coming! So I totally give the author props for keeping the story intriguing and suspenseful!
I would recommend this book to anyone interested in a fun, entertaining, exciting, and intriguing mystery/thriller book. This book does also fall in the romance category, but I think the romance genre plays more of a backseat role, as the main focus is the mystery. There may be a few hang-ups on the writing style, but you will enjoy Luna and her exciting adventures!
**Disclaimer: I received a complimentary copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.**
December 10, 2015
Luna Nightcrow (PI, N/A) heads to Hawaii on her next case. The Shilpa (Indian Ocean liner) has sank to the depths of 2,000’ & in its hull is the Pacific Splendor ($15 million rare diamond).
Nani Nyoko (f, jewelry appraiser SPPMI) met Luna when she stepped off the jet in Honolulu, Hawaii.
Lieutenant Sylvester Bay (public affairs officer, coast guard 14th.) informed Luna a RPG had been fired at the The Shilpa but not likely it sunk the ship.
Miguel Diamante (gemologist, ICE, affiliate safe pacific) was also helping with the investigation.
The Indian Navy, Indian Oceanographic Agency & the U.S. Navy Sea Submersible Team were all trying to figure out a rescue mission plan.
Ms. Alsia Aapt (head of security), Ailani Haku (f, cult leader A.L.O.H.A., aka Godmother)
Lono Kuhl (CEO, gems of the rim investment owner, surfer champ) & Rupert Rupee Sabal (wealthy high roller, former cricket player) were possible suspects & interviewed.
Is 1 of these individuals responsible for the sinking of the Shilpa & the loss of the Pacific Splendor?
What beautiful handwriting you have, a psychologist would love to have that analyzed to see what you are made of. That is truly a compliment.
Wow, 1 of my Alma Maters also, Go Lady Blues basketball vs. my other Alma Mater ESU Lady Hornets basketball.
Warning: This book contains extreme violence, graphic adult content or expletive language &/or sexually explicit content which is only suitable for mature readers. It may be offensive to some readers.
I did not receive any type of compensation for reading & reviewing this book. While I receive free books from publishers & authors, I am under no obligation to write a positive review. Only an honest one.
A very awesome book cover, great font & writing style. A remarkable very well written who-dun-it crime mystery book. It was very easy for me to read/follow from start/finish & never a dull moment. There were no grammar/typo errors, nor any repetitive or out of line sequence sentences. Lots of exciting scenarios, with several twists/turns & a great set of unique characters to keep track of. This could also make another great sea-frolicking crime mystery movie, or mini TV series. I felt the author/writer left me hanging, to be continued? The ending wasn’t what I was expecting! There is no doubt in my mind this is a very easy rating of 5 stars.
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Tony Parsons MSW (Washburn)
Nani Nyoko (f, jewelry appraiser SPPMI) met Luna when she stepped off the jet in Honolulu, Hawaii.
Lieutenant Sylvester Bay (public affairs officer, coast guard 14th.) informed Luna a RPG had been fired at the The Shilpa but not likely it sunk the ship.
Miguel Diamante (gemologist, ICE, affiliate safe pacific) was also helping with the investigation.
The Indian Navy, Indian Oceanographic Agency & the U.S. Navy Sea Submersible Team were all trying to figure out a rescue mission plan.
Ms. Alsia Aapt (head of security), Ailani Haku (f, cult leader A.L.O.H.A., aka Godmother)
Lono Kuhl (CEO, gems of the rim investment owner, surfer champ) & Rupert Rupee Sabal (wealthy high roller, former cricket player) were possible suspects & interviewed.
Is 1 of these individuals responsible for the sinking of the Shilpa & the loss of the Pacific Splendor?
What beautiful handwriting you have, a psychologist would love to have that analyzed to see what you are made of. That is truly a compliment.
Wow, 1 of my Alma Maters also, Go Lady Blues basketball vs. my other Alma Mater ESU Lady Hornets basketball.
Warning: This book contains extreme violence, graphic adult content or expletive language &/or sexually explicit content which is only suitable for mature readers. It may be offensive to some readers.
I did not receive any type of compensation for reading & reviewing this book. While I receive free books from publishers & authors, I am under no obligation to write a positive review. Only an honest one.
A very awesome book cover, great font & writing style. A remarkable very well written who-dun-it crime mystery book. It was very easy for me to read/follow from start/finish & never a dull moment. There were no grammar/typo errors, nor any repetitive or out of line sequence sentences. Lots of exciting scenarios, with several twists/turns & a great set of unique characters to keep track of. This could also make another great sea-frolicking crime mystery movie, or mini TV series. I felt the author/writer left me hanging, to be continued? The ending wasn’t what I was expecting! There is no doubt in my mind this is a very easy rating of 5 stars.
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Tony Parsons MSW (Washburn)
August 5, 2016
The Diamond Head Deception by James Blakley
Luna is an investigator goes on vacation in Hawaii. Once there she finds the Shilpa (an Indian Ocean liner) has sunk along with a rare diamond known as Pacific Splendor (worth millions of dollars). Luna is hired to find out what happened to the diamond, if it was on the ship, if it went down with the ship. It doesn't take Luna long to find out she is not the only one looking for the diamond.
The plot is original, with mystery, suspense, drama and a bit of romance. Luna is very likable, she enjoys her job and does it well. She has her suspicions about what happened, and the suspect list begins to grow. She definitely has her work cut out for her on this exciting assignment. Overall I really enjoyed The Diamond Head Deception and feel mystery lover will enjoy it as well. I look forward to reading more by James Blakley.
Luna is an investigator goes on vacation in Hawaii. Once there she finds the Shilpa (an Indian Ocean liner) has sunk along with a rare diamond known as Pacific Splendor (worth millions of dollars). Luna is hired to find out what happened to the diamond, if it was on the ship, if it went down with the ship. It doesn't take Luna long to find out she is not the only one looking for the diamond.
The plot is original, with mystery, suspense, drama and a bit of romance. Luna is very likable, she enjoys her job and does it well. She has her suspicions about what happened, and the suspect list begins to grow. She definitely has her work cut out for her on this exciting assignment. Overall I really enjoyed The Diamond Head Deception and feel mystery lover will enjoy it as well. I look forward to reading more by James Blakley.
April 3, 2023
“The Diamond Head Deception” kicks off in the corn fields of Iowa, as our main character Luna Nightcrow plows down a crop insurance fraudster, quite literally. As the farming scandal winds down, Luna is on her way to the local airport when the next case, also quite literally, chases her down. Taking readers directly from the plains of Iowa to the beaches of Hawaii, author James Blakley, crafts an exciting adventure in the life of an insurance investigator.
In her newest case, Luna is tasked with finding a missing rare red diamond said to be returning to Honolulu for safe keeping in its native state. However, after the ship it was returning home on is sunk by pirates, Luna is called in to investigate. With a diverse cast of characters, this factually well researched and fun book is an enjoyable read. I’ve never laughed so hard, clinched my teeth so tight, or braced for such a wild ride over water, land, and air as I did while reading “The Diamond Head Deception.”
As someone raised in Iowa, who annually travels to Hawaii, I can say the author was SPOT ON with these locales. From the scenery to the routes travelled, places visited, and things to do, so many of the highlights were captured in this read – both in Iowa and Hawaii. Also, as an employee of the insurance industry this book was a perfect fit! While my life is nowhere near as exciting as Luna’s, her insurance fraud investigating is very hands on and entertaining as she works hard to uncover the truth. This is a quick paced, witty, fun, spine-tingling delight. Luna Nightcrow is a fun and entertaining female MC. Bringing the excitement to the insurance agency, the adventure never seems to end.
In her newest case, Luna is tasked with finding a missing rare red diamond said to be returning to Honolulu for safe keeping in its native state. However, after the ship it was returning home on is sunk by pirates, Luna is called in to investigate. With a diverse cast of characters, this factually well researched and fun book is an enjoyable read. I’ve never laughed so hard, clinched my teeth so tight, or braced for such a wild ride over water, land, and air as I did while reading “The Diamond Head Deception.”
As someone raised in Iowa, who annually travels to Hawaii, I can say the author was SPOT ON with these locales. From the scenery to the routes travelled, places visited, and things to do, so many of the highlights were captured in this read – both in Iowa and Hawaii. Also, as an employee of the insurance industry this book was a perfect fit! While my life is nowhere near as exciting as Luna’s, her insurance fraud investigating is very hands on and entertaining as she works hard to uncover the truth. This is a quick paced, witty, fun, spine-tingling delight. Luna Nightcrow is a fun and entertaining female MC. Bringing the excitement to the insurance agency, the adventure never seems to end.
October 31, 2019
Easy Breezy Lemon Squeezy!
That is how I describe this book! It was a fast paced and easy read. No thinking or analyzing is required for this book, which is a good thing! You just go along on the ride with the characters just as you do when you are watching an action flick. This book reminds me a lot of James Bond films. You have the hero (or in this case, heroine) who is super slick and smart and is able to quickly and easily figure out the mystery and who has no fear in going after the bad guys. Luna is chasing around a rare red diamond all over Hawaii but really she is chasing a very large and complicated plan with a mastermind behind it and many people involved. The plot was quick and captivating. It feels like you are watching an action flick. And Luna always has some witty line at the end of every chapter that also gives that essence of a James Bond flick or a tv show from the 60's or such that runs along the same kind of theme. I enjoyed reading this book!
That is how I describe this book! It was a fast paced and easy read. No thinking or analyzing is required for this book, which is a good thing! You just go along on the ride with the characters just as you do when you are watching an action flick. This book reminds me a lot of James Bond films. You have the hero (or in this case, heroine) who is super slick and smart and is able to quickly and easily figure out the mystery and who has no fear in going after the bad guys. Luna is chasing around a rare red diamond all over Hawaii but really she is chasing a very large and complicated plan with a mastermind behind it and many people involved. The plot was quick and captivating. It feels like you are watching an action flick. And Luna always has some witty line at the end of every chapter that also gives that essence of a James Bond flick or a tv show from the 60's or such that runs along the same kind of theme. I enjoyed reading this book!
February 27, 2023
Following a Bond-like opening that wraps up her previous case, insurance investigator Luna Nightcrow is sent to Hawaii to investigate a shipwreck involving a rare diamond. From there, she meets a varied cast of characters and uses her wits, and occasionally her feminine wiles, to solve the mystery. It's a quick read, nothing too deep, and so casual in its execution the prose occasionally slips into contemporary slang. If you're looking for something quick and easy, a mystery that doesn't take itself too seriously, it might be worth investigating.
May 24, 2020
Upon first reading this, you almost don’t know what’s going on. We have a guy named Barney and a lady named Luna. It obviously didn’t have the best start for me.
I know there’s a mystery in all of this, which was something I was looking forward to diving into. But it’s just so chaotic and complicated that it doesn’t really lure you in.
The story line sounded promising, but, unfortunately, it did not have a good execution.
I know there’s a mystery in all of this, which was something I was looking forward to diving into. But it’s just so chaotic and complicated that it doesn’t really lure you in.
The story line sounded promising, but, unfortunately, it did not have a good execution.
November 5, 2016
The third self-published novel by author Blakley, The Diamond Head Deception has a plot that at first glance seemed intriguing. However, I quickly regretted my decision to read this book. Before the first chapter was over, I had a running list of reasons why I wouldn't enjoy finishing the story. Let's itemize them, shall we?
First off, too many nicknames were introduced right off the bat. We are already trying to keep characters straight (which bad guys are into what kind of schemes, which good guys work for which organization, etc). Then we meet Barnabas "Barney" Aikers and Charlene "Charly" Barns (Alias Clover Fields). It was a bit much to take in all at once.
Secondly, the point of view was all over the map. Classic rookie writing faux pas. The reader thinks he's experiencing the story from Luna's point of view, third person limited. However, we are treating to some of Barney's internal dialog, which seemed to be the only way the author could figure to quickly reveal the perpetrators' plot: "Barney asked himself, Was paying crop inspector Clyde Tiller to fake damage to my crops worth this?! And me, selling the real production under a fake name!" I won't even comment on the awkwardness of those sentences. Whoops... I guess I did comment.
My third gripe, which applies throughout the novel, is my skepticism at the role that Luna, the insurance investigator, plays. As far as I know, insurance investigators conduct background research, monitor online and social media activity, and may take video or photo surveillance. In Blakley's novel however, Luna carries a concealed weapon, chases bad guys, and runs over concession stands with a "6R Series John Deere" tractor. And that's all in the first chapter.
The remainder of the novel was riddled with editing errors, superfluous commas, and awkward sentences (e.g.: "The sky was blue, and so was Nani's mood becoming (though it was to be a darker shade).") There was also an odd propensity toward naming specific models of technology. I always knew exactly what model of smartphone the characters were using. Maybe the author was trying to lend credibility, but it was too distracting. Finally, the romance mentioned in the blurb was virtually nonexistent, and I felt that Blakley's portrayal of Luna's feminine feelings was at times a bit chauvinistic.
I did appreciate the fast-moving plot, but the action scenes were sometimes choppy and confusing. I liked that the ending wasn't entirely predictable. However, and won't come as much of a surprise, I cannot recommend this book.
First off, too many nicknames were introduced right off the bat. We are already trying to keep characters straight (which bad guys are into what kind of schemes, which good guys work for which organization, etc). Then we meet Barnabas "Barney" Aikers and Charlene "Charly" Barns (Alias Clover Fields). It was a bit much to take in all at once.
Secondly, the point of view was all over the map. Classic rookie writing faux pas. The reader thinks he's experiencing the story from Luna's point of view, third person limited. However, we are treating to some of Barney's internal dialog, which seemed to be the only way the author could figure to quickly reveal the perpetrators' plot: "Barney asked himself, Was paying crop inspector Clyde Tiller to fake damage to my crops worth this?! And me, selling the real production under a fake name!" I won't even comment on the awkwardness of those sentences. Whoops... I guess I did comment.
My third gripe, which applies throughout the novel, is my skepticism at the role that Luna, the insurance investigator, plays. As far as I know, insurance investigators conduct background research, monitor online and social media activity, and may take video or photo surveillance. In Blakley's novel however, Luna carries a concealed weapon, chases bad guys, and runs over concession stands with a "6R Series John Deere" tractor. And that's all in the first chapter.
The remainder of the novel was riddled with editing errors, superfluous commas, and awkward sentences (e.g.: "The sky was blue, and so was Nani's mood becoming (though it was to be a darker shade).") There was also an odd propensity toward naming specific models of technology. I always knew exactly what model of smartphone the characters were using. Maybe the author was trying to lend credibility, but it was too distracting. Finally, the romance mentioned in the blurb was virtually nonexistent, and I felt that Blakley's portrayal of Luna's feminine feelings was at times a bit chauvinistic.
I did appreciate the fast-moving plot, but the action scenes were sometimes choppy and confusing. I liked that the ending wasn't entirely predictable. However, and won't come as much of a surprise, I cannot recommend this book.
December 29, 2016
I would like to thank the author for the opportunity to read this book in exchange for an honest review.
Luna Nightcrow is an insurance fraud investigator. She has just wrapped up a case involving crop fraud and attempted murder. When an ocean cruise liner, The Shilpa, sinks with a world famous red diamond on board, she is sent to Hawaii to investigate. The case of the Pacific Splendor diamond seems to be more than just a ship wreck though and Luna will need all her wits and some helpful allies to get to the bottom of this case.
This book had an interesting story line that intrigued me. Though it was a quick read, I wouldn’t say it was an easy one. The narrative jumps around with little warning, which can make it hard to follow along. The characters also lapse into cliché conversation that detract from the story. Luna often uses her sexuality as a tool which never felt like a necessity or something that added to the plot.
There were surprises to the story that I did not predict and some of them rather disappointed me. I enjoyed Nona’s character and still have trouble understanding the path her character landed on. Of course, in the end Luna solved the great mystery of the Pacific Splendor and all was well in her world. Which means it’s time to head off for some sexy time with one of the male characters. I am still trying to figure out how that came about and how it adds to the story in any way shape or form.
Because it was a quick read with an interesting premise, I can’t say I wouldn’t recommend it. Though I wouldn’t seek out further works by this author without a heavy recommendation that his storytelling improved.
3 out of 5 stars
Luna Nightcrow is an insurance fraud investigator. She has just wrapped up a case involving crop fraud and attempted murder. When an ocean cruise liner, The Shilpa, sinks with a world famous red diamond on board, she is sent to Hawaii to investigate. The case of the Pacific Splendor diamond seems to be more than just a ship wreck though and Luna will need all her wits and some helpful allies to get to the bottom of this case.
This book had an interesting story line that intrigued me. Though it was a quick read, I wouldn’t say it was an easy one. The narrative jumps around with little warning, which can make it hard to follow along. The characters also lapse into cliché conversation that detract from the story. Luna often uses her sexuality as a tool which never felt like a necessity or something that added to the plot.
There were surprises to the story that I did not predict and some of them rather disappointed me. I enjoyed Nona’s character and still have trouble understanding the path her character landed on. Of course, in the end Luna solved the great mystery of the Pacific Splendor and all was well in her world. Which means it’s time to head off for some sexy time with one of the male characters. I am still trying to figure out how that came about and how it adds to the story in any way shape or form.
Because it was a quick read with an interesting premise, I can’t say I wouldn’t recommend it. Though I wouldn’t seek out further works by this author without a heavy recommendation that his storytelling improved.
3 out of 5 stars
December 28, 2016
3.25 stars
“The Diamond Head Deception” by James Blakley features insurance investigator Luna Nightcrow as she deals with a couple of cases in vastly different circumstances. Using her intuition and analytical abilities, plus a variety of allies and assistants, Luna does her best to bring her cases to a successful close, hopefully while remaining alive.
This mystery story has elements of suspense and gives an interesting view of the lengths an investigator might go to in order to make sure a claim is legitimate. The unconventional solutions she comes up with are vividly depicted in the initial case described, and then the action shifts to more exotic climes. There are multiple secondary characters who act both as intriguing foils and red herrings as the mystery unfolds. I am dismayed by the frequent shifts in points of view which detract from the story as it unfolds but I enjoyed the glimpses of the Hawaiian Islands as experienced by Luna and her associates.
There are intriguing nuggets of information scattered throughout the story, and a delightfully diverse cast of characters although some of the connections didn’t quite ring true for me and I wasn’t completely convinced by way some things turned out. I like capable heroines, and Luna was a fun character to read about, and, although the action got a little fantastical, this will probably be enjoyed by those in search of an entertaining light mystery.
A copy of this title was provided to me for review
“The Diamond Head Deception” by James Blakley features insurance investigator Luna Nightcrow as she deals with a couple of cases in vastly different circumstances. Using her intuition and analytical abilities, plus a variety of allies and assistants, Luna does her best to bring her cases to a successful close, hopefully while remaining alive.
This mystery story has elements of suspense and gives an interesting view of the lengths an investigator might go to in order to make sure a claim is legitimate. The unconventional solutions she comes up with are vividly depicted in the initial case described, and then the action shifts to more exotic climes. There are multiple secondary characters who act both as intriguing foils and red herrings as the mystery unfolds. I am dismayed by the frequent shifts in points of view which detract from the story as it unfolds but I enjoyed the glimpses of the Hawaiian Islands as experienced by Luna and her associates.
There are intriguing nuggets of information scattered throughout the story, and a delightfully diverse cast of characters although some of the connections didn’t quite ring true for me and I wasn’t completely convinced by way some things turned out. I like capable heroines, and Luna was a fun character to read about, and, although the action got a little fantastical, this will probably be enjoyed by those in search of an entertaining light mystery.
A copy of this title was provided to me for review
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