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Alpha Elite #2
Victor
Philanderer.
Mercenary.
Marine.
I didn't join the Marines because I was honorable. There wasn't one scrupulous thing about me. If I saw an advantage, I took it. But serving my country turned out to be the best decision I ever made, because it led me to Alpha Elite Security.
AES was the most sought-after security contractor in the world. Their reputation unmatched, they got the job done—by any means necessary. Which was where I came in. I handled AES's difficult clients, the ones no one wanted to touch. I thought I was invincible.
Then my boss sent me a text. Six words. New client. Sensitive matter. Corporate espionage. But he failed to mention the suspected spy was a gorgeous brunette. And the client? Her husband. Now I had one objective.
Code name: Victor.
Mission: Infiltrate.
VICTOR is a standalone book in the exciting new Alpha Elite Series by USA Today Bestselling author, Sybil Bartel. Come meet Vance "Victor" Conlon and the dominant, alpha heroes who work for AES!
Mercenary.
Marine.
I didn't join the Marines because I was honorable. There wasn't one scrupulous thing about me. If I saw an advantage, I took it. But serving my country turned out to be the best decision I ever made, because it led me to Alpha Elite Security.
AES was the most sought-after security contractor in the world. Their reputation unmatched, they got the job done—by any means necessary. Which was where I came in. I handled AES's difficult clients, the ones no one wanted to touch. I thought I was invincible.
Then my boss sent me a text. Six words. New client. Sensitive matter. Corporate espionage. But he failed to mention the suspected spy was a gorgeous brunette. And the client? Her husband. Now I had one objective.
Code name: Victor.
Mission: Infiltrate.
VICTOR is a standalone book in the exciting new Alpha Elite Series by USA Today Bestselling author, Sybil Bartel. Come meet Vance "Victor" Conlon and the dominant, alpha heroes who work for AES!
460 pages, Kindle Edition
First published November 24, 2021
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Sybil Bartel
50 books1,240 followersSybil Bartel is a USA Today Bestselling author of unapologetic Alpha heroes. Whether you're reading her dominant Alpha Elite mercenaries, her protective Alpha Bodyguards, or her page-turning romantic suspense, all of her heroes are sexy-as-sin and unwaveringly Alpha!
Sybil lives in South Florida, and she is forever Oliver's mom.
Sybil lives in South Florida, and she is forever Oliver's mom.
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November 24, 2021
This is probably one of the more intense couples I've read out of all the Elite series. Vance is spiraling from a past he blames himself for, and Sabine is in a very abusive relationship that has made her extremely vulnerable.
I love that Vance took one look and all he cared about was saving Sabine. He was exactly what she needed to be free. However, the ghosts of Vances past could very well block any happiness these two could have.
Despite the instant connection, this was a slow burn romance. They really had a lot to work through for both of them to be ok which is where the intensity comes from. Well that and the danger they were all in.
I just can't seem to get enough of these dominant men Sybil Bartel excels at writing. They all seem to struggle with something in their past but boy do they really know how to take charge. I find them highly addictive. Vance was another great example of that. I look forward to the next one in the series!
I love that Vance took one look and all he cared about was saving Sabine. He was exactly what she needed to be free. However, the ghosts of Vances past could very well block any happiness these two could have.
Despite the instant connection, this was a slow burn romance. They really had a lot to work through for both of them to be ok which is where the intensity comes from. Well that and the danger they were all in.
I just can't seem to get enough of these dominant men Sybil Bartel excels at writing. They all seem to struggle with something in their past but boy do they really know how to take charge. I find them highly addictive. Vance was another great example of that. I look forward to the next one in the series!
September 28, 2022
Hmmmm, well, Victor aka Vance Conlon was a tad bit unsavory, well, I didn't really dig his INSTA "one look " based notion of a woman, and it was really hard to instantly "trust" that he feels more for this woman stuck in an abusive relationship...and the reasoning for her doing so was also a bit too stretched, I kinda got the distinct feeling she was either totally ignorant (not to say dumb) of the real life or at least the basic stuff, but then she would prove to be way more intuitive and emotionally strong...
I got very mixed feels about her...
Anyhow, this story didn't quite reach me the way Zulu did...
I got very mixed feels about her...
Anyhow, this story didn't quite reach me the way Zulu did...
November 27, 2021
Victor is superb in it's characters and storytelling. Bartel's name is fast becoming synonymous with writing strong Alpha ex-military heroes and the heroines that they must rescue and dominate. And, boy, does she do it in a delicious way. With fantastic banter and slow burning steam, this one does not disappoint. If second chances, a few triggers, strong male and female characters, and an entertaining, fast paced plot are what you fancy, Victor will leave you more than satisfied! 5 Stars! Please note: While this book is #3 in the Series, you do not have to read the first two for it to make sense, nor are there any cliffhangers.
November 23, 2021
Victor is a beautiful and heartbreaking story with lots of sparks and suspenseful moments. While a slow burn is not my go to usually, this one was so worth the wait.
Sabine is not your usual heroine and from outside she looks like any spoiled rich woman that has everything one might want, a beautiful penthouse in Manhattan, a rich husband and a great job. But everything is deceiving, as underneath all that sparkle, there's something hidden that nobody will see. Until him. Until Victor sees himself in her position years ago and their cross paths transform their lives.
Sabine is not your usual heroine and from outside she looks like any spoiled rich woman that has everything one might want, a beautiful penthouse in Manhattan, a rich husband and a great job. But everything is deceiving, as underneath all that sparkle, there's something hidden that nobody will see. Until him. Until Victor sees himself in her position years ago and their cross paths transform their lives.
April 28, 2023
I was never able to get immersed in this one. Vance (call name Victor) Conlon was an intriguing character for one of these former military security teams. Instead of being a burly military "type", he is this complicated, very damaged man who is carrying the unmanageable guilt of causing his girlfriend to die tragically when they were teens. Devastatingly handsome and seductive, the former Marine has become somewhat of a chameleon and is the go-to guy on the team for operations that require a member who can seamlessly infiltrate the world of the uber wealthy. Vance is alternately completely self-indulgent and also self-destructive. He has no interest in letting anyone get close to him, and vice versa. Unfortunately, despite knowing the painful reasons behind his behavior, he comes across as an irredeemably douchey asshole. He's arrogant, manipulative, utterly pretentious (he speaks with a British accent, even though he's from Florida) and imperiously controlling.
Sabine's character remained somewhat underdeveloped, as her circumstances had her ping-ponging between three men: the villain, Vance and her brother. She just didn't seem to have much going on besides being exquisitely beautiful, French and The victim of the unscrupulous men in her life. 😪
There was an effort to spice things up with a bit of Dom\sub talk, but that too, faltered. They were both EXTREMELY attractive, so they got their HEA!
The dialogue was problematic for me. There are a lot of players in the story, and therefore a lot of dialogue. I gathered that the military background of the team and the nature of the operations led to the frenetic quality of the dialogue - I believe it was meant to be concise and snappy. However, it kind of devolved into word salad, and there wasn't enough differentiation between the mission dialogue and the interpersonal dialogue between the MMC and FMC.
Sabine's character remained somewhat underdeveloped, as her circumstances had her ping-ponging between three men: the villain, Vance and her brother. She just didn't seem to have much going on besides being exquisitely beautiful, French and The victim of the unscrupulous men in her life. 😪
There was an effort to spice things up with a bit of Dom\sub talk, but that too, faltered. They were both EXTREMELY attractive, so they got their HEA!
The dialogue was problematic for me. There are a lot of players in the story, and therefore a lot of dialogue. I gathered that the military background of the team and the nature of the operations led to the frenetic quality of the dialogue - I believe it was meant to be concise and snappy. However, it kind of devolved into word salad, and there wasn't enough differentiation between the mission dialogue and the interpersonal dialogue between the MMC and FMC.
December 14, 2023
❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
💋💋
👿👿
🥵
💋💋
👿👿
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November 23, 2021
Story: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Trope: Protector
Angst: 😰😰😰😰
Smexy: 🔥🔥🔥
Triggers: spousal abuse
Just wow! What a powerful, emotional read! These characters grab you from the first pages and just don't let go. Vance Conlon is such a complex character with the most horrid defense mechanisms it makes it hard to like him half the time and the other half, your heart is bleeds for him and you want to take him home and, well.. I'm sure you could come up with something, lol. Sabine is the embodiment of everything Vance needs: submissive, sweet, and broken like him. If you've read Sybil Bartel before, you'll know she is not known for her slow burns, but apparently when she decides to do one, she decides to do it in epic style; the chemistry just simmering. Awesome, moving story about love and redemption - I can't wait to read Romeo's story!!
Victor is the second book in Sybil Bartel's Alpha Elite Series and can be read as a standalone. The story is told in first person, dual POV.
Trope: Protector
Angst: 😰😰😰😰
Smexy: 🔥🔥🔥
Triggers: spousal abuse
Just wow! What a powerful, emotional read! These characters grab you from the first pages and just don't let go. Vance Conlon is such a complex character with the most horrid defense mechanisms it makes it hard to like him half the time and the other half, your heart is bleeds for him and you want to take him home and, well.. I'm sure you could come up with something, lol. Sabine is the embodiment of everything Vance needs: submissive, sweet, and broken like him. If you've read Sybil Bartel before, you'll know she is not known for her slow burns, but apparently when she decides to do one, she decides to do it in epic style; the chemistry just simmering. Awesome, moving story about love and redemption - I can't wait to read Romeo's story!!
Victor is the second book in Sybil Bartel's Alpha Elite Series and can be read as a standalone. The story is told in first person, dual POV.
November 24, 2021
Victor is the second book from Bartel’s The Alpha Elite series, it’s a heartbreakingly, intense storyline, with just as much action as there are sparks filtered throughout, keeping us readers captivated whilst it’s slow burn reaches a flaming crescendo.
Both main protagonists have experienced their share of heartache and pain, Vance is a man spiraling out of control, torturing himself over a past he couldn’t control, nor was he to blame for, as for Sabine, past experiences have led her vulnerable and trapped in an abusive relationship. The pair are brought together when Vance’s services are called upon by Sabine’s partner, however not all’s as it would seem, there’s more going on than meets the eye, but with Vance and the help of a few others from Alpha Elite Security, Sabine herself has the opportunity to finally break free from the clutches of the man who’s controlled every aspect of her life for the previous seven years. All Sabine has to do is put her trust in Vance, which comes easy enough as when she’s around him, for the first time in years she feels safe and protected.
The connection between Vance and Sabine was instant and intense, paving the way for this slow burn romance, they both have their issues to work through in order for them to have any chance of a future together, even at that ghosts from Vance’s past may well put a stop to any chance of happiness these two could have, that or the danger they’re both facing, will they make it out in one piece?
Highly addictive, dominant men we can’t get enough of, that’s what Sybil gives us every time, but this time round she’s smashed it out the ball park when it comes to Vance. The more I got lost in this book, the more I thought ‘I’m not married, I’m single, well I’m now getting divorced, Vance is mine’, however I looked over at my snoring husband and remembered that I had in fact been duped once again. Oh well, this was a great addition to what’s promising to be another fantastic series by this amazing author, here’s to the next book in the series.
𝔸ℝℂ 𝕨𝕒𝕤 𝕣𝕖𝕒𝕕 𝕒𝕟𝕕 𝕥𝕙𝕚𝕤 𝕚𝕤 𝕞𝕪 𝕙𝕠𝕟𝕖𝕤𝕥 𝕣𝕖𝕧𝕚𝕖𝕨.
Both main protagonists have experienced their share of heartache and pain, Vance is a man spiraling out of control, torturing himself over a past he couldn’t control, nor was he to blame for, as for Sabine, past experiences have led her vulnerable and trapped in an abusive relationship. The pair are brought together when Vance’s services are called upon by Sabine’s partner, however not all’s as it would seem, there’s more going on than meets the eye, but with Vance and the help of a few others from Alpha Elite Security, Sabine herself has the opportunity to finally break free from the clutches of the man who’s controlled every aspect of her life for the previous seven years. All Sabine has to do is put her trust in Vance, which comes easy enough as when she’s around him, for the first time in years she feels safe and protected.
The connection between Vance and Sabine was instant and intense, paving the way for this slow burn romance, they both have their issues to work through in order for them to have any chance of a future together, even at that ghosts from Vance’s past may well put a stop to any chance of happiness these two could have, that or the danger they’re both facing, will they make it out in one piece?
Highly addictive, dominant men we can’t get enough of, that’s what Sybil gives us every time, but this time round she’s smashed it out the ball park when it comes to Vance. The more I got lost in this book, the more I thought ‘I’m not married, I’m single, well I’m now getting divorced, Vance is mine’, however I looked over at my snoring husband and remembered that I had in fact been duped once again. Oh well, this was a great addition to what’s promising to be another fantastic series by this amazing author, here’s to the next book in the series.
𝔸ℝℂ 𝕨𝕒𝕤 𝕣𝕖𝕒𝕕 𝕒𝕟𝕕 𝕥𝕙𝕚𝕤 𝕚𝕤 𝕞𝕪 𝕙𝕠𝕟𝕖𝕤𝕥 𝕣𝕖𝕧𝕚𝕖𝕨.
November 24, 2021
I’ve been a huge fan of this author since she started writing and I’ve read every story in her library several times. I have great admiration and respect for the meticulous and professional author she is. Her books have brought me much solace during difficult times by giving me a place to forget and I will always be forever grateful. Her stories are always an enjoyable read that are so captivating and compelling I’d give up sleep for. I highly recommend her library. I was sad when her last series ended but very happy when she started the Alpha Elite series and this is book 2. This story had me feeling such heartbreak at times but I couldn’t put it down. The story follows Vance and Sabine. We met Vance in book 1. As with all of Sybil’s stories you could enjoy it as a stand alone but I think you would enjoy it even more if you read the first book which has a prequel titled Seal. Vance is far beyond elite, he is lethal and although he gives off that he hasn’t a care in the world, he suffers. Then we meet Sabine and my heart broke for her as well. They each suffer silently and couldn’t be a better match. A story filled with such chemistry between this couple it’s a wonder my kindle didn’t catch fire. One of my fav’s this year.
March 31, 2023
all i wanted was snuggles but all i got is struggles
Vance and Sabine were ✨intense✨ to say the least, it was a perfect slow burn and even tho it was an insta-spark from the moment they see each other the story unravels them so beautifully that's just amazing.
Chef's kiss to the love-hate-bromance Vance has with Echo, they beaten and talked the shit out of themselves and I loved them for it.
November 23, 2021
Oh Victor! Victor has some really deep seeded issues. Sabine is a very unexpected surprise, in both work and personal. As Victor does his assignment, Sabine keeps floating into his life, in a really big way. Tons of action and appearances of our favorite characters. Slow burn, but then oh so steamy!
August 25, 2024
Victor is book two in Sybil Bartel's Alpha Elite series. After leaving the Marines, Vance joined the Alpha Elite Security firm and handled the problematic clients of AES. Vance thought he could handle all situations for AES until his boss sent him a new client to investigate the matter of corporate espionage. However, when he realises the husband is not the only one endangered, so is the beautiful wife, this case turns upside down for Vance and AES. Will this case be Vance's downfall? Victor's readers will continue to follow Vance to discover what happened.
Victor is the first book I have read about Sybil Bartel, and I enjoyed it. I wanted her writing style and how she engaged me with the story and the characters. I love her portrayal of her characters and the way they intertwine with each other. Victor is well-written and researched. I like Sybil Bartel's description of Victor's settings, which allowed me to imagine being part of the book's plot.
Reading Victor highlights another side of domestic and family violence and how it can affect everyone who is involved. Also, this book shows how trauma can impact you throughout your life.
I recommend this book.
Victor is the first book I have read about Sybil Bartel, and I enjoyed it. I wanted her writing style and how she engaged me with the story and the characters. I love her portrayal of her characters and the way they intertwine with each other. Victor is well-written and researched. I like Sybil Bartel's description of Victor's settings, which allowed me to imagine being part of the book's plot.
Reading Victor highlights another side of domestic and family violence and how it can affect everyone who is involved. Also, this book shows how trauma can impact you throughout your life.
I recommend this book.
November 5, 2022
My gawd did I ever fall for Vance "Victor" Conlon. He's brash, cocky, brutally blunt, highly intelligent, sexy and has so much swagger it's amazing. Yet he's deeply damaged and as the old saying goes "it takes one to know one." He recognizes the damaged woman underneath Sabine Malcher's carefully cultivated façade. Hired by her husband, Vance quickly switches roles to become Sabine's protector. He starts digging into the husband, Harrington's and the upcoming auction. The deeper he digs, the more it becomes apparent that Sabine is caught in the middle of something that could cost her, her life. Vance is not about to let that happen to the woman he is falling for. Try as she might to resist this man, she can't. But, where the road leads may, in the end, leave her alone.
December 10, 2021
Once again Ms. Bartel has made me fall in LOVE!!
Oh, Victor! He joins my line up of stellar Heroes/anti-Heroes created by her.
No spoilers here, read this one for yourself if:
You want excellent writing
Superbly mesmerizing characters
An engaging enthralling plot
A book you just DO NOT want to put down
Loved this one from beginning to end & I can NOT wait for the next book in this awesome series!
Oh, Victor! He joins my line up of stellar Heroes/anti-Heroes created by her.
No spoilers here, read this one for yourself if:
You want excellent writing
Superbly mesmerizing characters
An engaging enthralling plot
A book you just DO NOT want to put down
Loved this one from beginning to end & I can NOT wait for the next book in this awesome series!
December 6, 2021
It was ok. I didn't like all the false this man projected and I hated the man whore with a woman in every city waiting for him. Feel like I started this series out of order since there was something that happened between Vance and his brothers wife...hope the brother is a free to read, because I am not paying another 5.00 for a 2 or 3 start book
November 29, 2021
The Vance we didn't know.....
Victor, code name for Vance Conlon, is the second installment in the Alpha Elite Series and can be read as a standalone.
If you're familiar with Sybil's alphas and their lifes like me, you already know Vance Conlon and his unorthodox personality, behavior and posture and, I bet, you have not been happy with him. But Vance is so much more than the lone wolf give zero f#cks irresponsible playboy that he shows the world that I was totally unprepared for.
With the mission to inflitrate, Vance finds himself in a devious predicament that his intelligent mind is not able to evaluate. He's completely thrown in a loop of emotions, disbelief and wills that faltered him since he was seventeen. What he saw the first time he met Sabine Malcher was the possibility to do what he hadn't when we he was young, poor and impotent: to save.
Inventively intertwining the present circumstances with specs of the past, Sybil Bartel delivers once again an immensively felt narrative about abuse, recognition, good intentions and ill-fated results, loss, guilt and unsurmountable grief, a life of penance and self destruction, the utmost will for redemption that certainly feels unattainable.
Sabine and Vance seem to be very different characters, with different lives and different worries of their own but, in reality, they are very much alike: both feel guilty by circumstances they were not able to control and think their plights are deserved, both sacrifice themselves everyday to protect others accepting and welcoming punishment and both searh for that tiny sliver of atonement that makes living possible.
Presenting two very complex and dense characters, Sybil invites the reader to peel the layers and live vicariously through Sabine and Vance's battles, their infatuation, enamoration and entanglement, their advances and setbacks, their conquests and losses, their miscommunication and double entendres, their fears and desires, their will to risk weighted down by the unforseeable reperfussions and, undoubtably, their ferocious love. Keeping everything quite tight, the plot reveals itself, bit by bit, counting with the opponents on one side and the AES' mission dynamics, the crazy banter between the crew/adjuvants and its traits of personality and what makes their members tick, a tone down to all the paraphernalia going around showing that their peculiar sense of humour still stands.
So puzzling and all-consuming that you can feel it in your bones!
Great book Sybil!
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review. All opinions are my own.
Victor, code name for Vance Conlon, is the second installment in the Alpha Elite Series and can be read as a standalone.
If you're familiar with Sybil's alphas and their lifes like me, you already know Vance Conlon and his unorthodox personality, behavior and posture and, I bet, you have not been happy with him. But Vance is so much more than the lone wolf give zero f#cks irresponsible playboy that he shows the world that I was totally unprepared for.
With the mission to inflitrate, Vance finds himself in a devious predicament that his intelligent mind is not able to evaluate. He's completely thrown in a loop of emotions, disbelief and wills that faltered him since he was seventeen. What he saw the first time he met Sabine Malcher was the possibility to do what he hadn't when we he was young, poor and impotent: to save.
Inventively intertwining the present circumstances with specs of the past, Sybil Bartel delivers once again an immensively felt narrative about abuse, recognition, good intentions and ill-fated results, loss, guilt and unsurmountable grief, a life of penance and self destruction, the utmost will for redemption that certainly feels unattainable.
Sabine and Vance seem to be very different characters, with different lives and different worries of their own but, in reality, they are very much alike: both feel guilty by circumstances they were not able to control and think their plights are deserved, both sacrifice themselves everyday to protect others accepting and welcoming punishment and both searh for that tiny sliver of atonement that makes living possible.
Presenting two very complex and dense characters, Sybil invites the reader to peel the layers and live vicariously through Sabine and Vance's battles, their infatuation, enamoration and entanglement, their advances and setbacks, their conquests and losses, their miscommunication and double entendres, their fears and desires, their will to risk weighted down by the unforseeable reperfussions and, undoubtably, their ferocious love. Keeping everything quite tight, the plot reveals itself, bit by bit, counting with the opponents on one side and the AES' mission dynamics, the crazy banter between the crew/adjuvants and its traits of personality and what makes their members tick, a tone down to all the paraphernalia going around showing that their peculiar sense of humour still stands.
So puzzling and all-consuming that you can feel it in your bones!
Great book Sybil!
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review. All opinions are my own.
November 24, 2021
Six words changed the course of his life in ways he never saw coming... Vance Conlon gets the wake-up call he never realized he needed the moment she walked into his life. Sabine is a broken woman with a very complicated life, one that he is hired to protect, as well as, her despicable husband.
From outward appearances one would think she has the perfect charmed life, but it's anything but, it's an impossible life she feels completely tethered too, and one she will never be able to escape. But then a rough around the edges alpha walks into her life and offers her the chance to leave it all behind... will she take it?
The pages of Vance give you a addictive story line that you can completely lose yourself in, it's words will transport you to another world that you won't ever want to leave. It's words will tear at your heart, push your personal boundaries, test your patience, and leave you breathless! Just when you think you can't handle anymore, you'll be hit with another wave of unexpected emotion. It's a passionate, intense slow burn romance, that drive you to the brink... it's the best kind of torture that there is!
The moment you meet Vance you will probably hate him a little, but I promise if you give him a chance he will completely redeem himself... and wreck your heart in the best possible way! He's a brazen, complicated, closed-off alpha with a commanding presence that will steal every ounce of your attention... and I loved every single second I spent with him!
I have said this many times... but this is by far my favorite title from this author!!!! It had that extra special little something that edged all the others out of it's way, and into it's well deserved top spot. If there is one book you read this year, please make it this one, you won't regret it, I promise! Highly recommend!!
I requested an advanced copy of this title from the publisher and I am voluntarily leaving my honest and unbiased.
From outward appearances one would think she has the perfect charmed life, but it's anything but, it's an impossible life she feels completely tethered too, and one she will never be able to escape. But then a rough around the edges alpha walks into her life and offers her the chance to leave it all behind... will she take it?
The pages of Vance give you a addictive story line that you can completely lose yourself in, it's words will transport you to another world that you won't ever want to leave. It's words will tear at your heart, push your personal boundaries, test your patience, and leave you breathless! Just when you think you can't handle anymore, you'll be hit with another wave of unexpected emotion. It's a passionate, intense slow burn romance, that drive you to the brink... it's the best kind of torture that there is!
The moment you meet Vance you will probably hate him a little, but I promise if you give him a chance he will completely redeem himself... and wreck your heart in the best possible way! He's a brazen, complicated, closed-off alpha with a commanding presence that will steal every ounce of your attention... and I loved every single second I spent with him!
I have said this many times... but this is by far my favorite title from this author!!!! It had that extra special little something that edged all the others out of it's way, and into it's well deserved top spot. If there is one book you read this year, please make it this one, you won't regret it, I promise! Highly recommend!!
I requested an advanced copy of this title from the publisher and I am voluntarily leaving my honest and unbiased.
May 20, 2022
like Nothing I have Ever Read!
Vance “Victor” Conlon is out for blood. Figuratively and literally. He has a low tolerance for men who abuse women and young girls… physically, emotionally or mentally. Former Marine, member of the Alpha Elite Security Team, Vance is as complicated, strong, defiant, a lone wolf, team player, control-freak & powerful character all rolled into one… although there is his identical twin Brother Ronan, with whom he is at odds and yet.
Sabine Malchur is a complication AES does not see coming but is determined to protect, at all costs. French by birth, at age 19 she comes into some loose valuable diamonds and a Diamond ring. In need of money to pay for her family’s funerals, she goes to Harrington’s for help. There, the heir and owner, Joseph Harrington Bertrand “entraps” her for seven years. He hires AES under the guise of “an attempt made regarding internal espionage” he wants proven is linked to Sabine. And there the adventure begins.
Vance sees a wounded, abused victim in Sabine and is willing to fight to protect her. Does AES agree with him? The second book in this series reunites readers with the awesome computer skills and humor of November, the support of Echo, the cool-headedness of Alpha, the flying skills of Zulu and twin Ronan who is in another series.
Ms Bartel has once again created strong interesting characters in a book you can not put down. Readers are drawn to the quiet strength of Sabine and her background story; how she got caught up with Joseph to begin with and the lies she thought were truths. Will there be a HEA for anyone? Will the demons that rule Vance ever be put to rest? Will he and Sabine find any common ground? Highly recommend this book and can not wait to read the rest of the series.
Vance “Victor” Conlon is out for blood. Figuratively and literally. He has a low tolerance for men who abuse women and young girls… physically, emotionally or mentally. Former Marine, member of the Alpha Elite Security Team, Vance is as complicated, strong, defiant, a lone wolf, team player, control-freak & powerful character all rolled into one… although there is his identical twin Brother Ronan, with whom he is at odds and yet.
Sabine Malchur is a complication AES does not see coming but is determined to protect, at all costs. French by birth, at age 19 she comes into some loose valuable diamonds and a Diamond ring. In need of money to pay for her family’s funerals, she goes to Harrington’s for help. There, the heir and owner, Joseph Harrington Bertrand “entraps” her for seven years. He hires AES under the guise of “an attempt made regarding internal espionage” he wants proven is linked to Sabine. And there the adventure begins.
Vance sees a wounded, abused victim in Sabine and is willing to fight to protect her. Does AES agree with him? The second book in this series reunites readers with the awesome computer skills and humor of November, the support of Echo, the cool-headedness of Alpha, the flying skills of Zulu and twin Ronan who is in another series.
Ms Bartel has once again created strong interesting characters in a book you can not put down. Readers are drawn to the quiet strength of Sabine and her background story; how she got caught up with Joseph to begin with and the lies she thought were truths. Will there be a HEA for anyone? Will the demons that rule Vance ever be put to rest? Will he and Sabine find any common ground? Highly recommend this book and can not wait to read the rest of the series.
November 22, 2025
I love the Alpha Elite Security stories. This is my fourth book, and I’m excited to read the rest of the Alpha Elite Series. This one features the lone wolf Vance Conlon, who has an identical twin named Ronan. Vance “Victor” Conlon is out for blood—both figuratively and literally. He has no patience for men who abuse women and girls, whether physically, emotionally, or mentally. A former Marine and member of the Alpha Elite Security Team, Vance is a complex mix of strength, defiance, independence, teamwork control, and power. Despite having his twin brother Ronan, the two are often at odds. Victor takes on an espionage case for a jewelry company called Harrington’s, and that’s where the trouble begins. The client, Joseph, gives him the short version: the hack of the company files started from his wife’s computer. He gets to “meet” her—sort of. Her name is Sabine Malcher, a French woman whose parents and brother are said to be deceased, though she’s uncertain about her brother Henri, who was reportedly decapitated in a motorcycle accident. She couldn’t bring herself to identify the body. Sabine had gone to Harrington’s to sell her late mother’s diamond ring, a gift from her brother, and in finding the ring, she discovered more diamonds—and that’s when the story truly kicks off. It’s a tale full of lies, unusual levels of deceit from the client, betrayal, angst, and a love story woven through it all. I loved Vance and Sabine's love story because they are two broken people who need to learn to trust, it was just a good read.
June 9, 2023
"Victor" (The Alpha Elite #2), got me going right from the beginning!
Former Marine Victor (Vance) Conlon is a study within himself. Tough, independent and a 'not by the book' member of the AES, he does things his way - but gets the assignments done. Victor, however, for all his toughness and strength, is haunted by his past - a past that triggers his anger and pain.
When he is assigned to investigate a corporate breach - Victor finds that this job will eventually lead to reconciliation and forgiveness. This comes in the form of French beauty, Sabine Malcher. Abused by her 'husband' in all senses of the word, she feels trapped; yet she is also hiding a secret.
Victor is instantly attracted to Sabine; he seesand hears how she is treated. As well, there is a twist to the leaks within her husband's company!
This story was hard to put down for me! So much intrigue, action and chaos for them; the steamy tension, innuendos and Victor's alpha-tough dominance only adds to this entire book!
I was NOT expecting the outcome. This is only my second book of this series, (my bad😊), by Sybil Bartel, and I loved it!
I almost got teary reading how Victor and Sabine were able to help each other through their painful pasts, and move into a future together.
I also appreciated that I was introduced to some of the other members of the AES team in this book!
This is ONE HOT read! I am so immersed in these alpha heroes - wow! 🔥🔥 Definitely onto the next book of this series!! ❤❤
Former Marine Victor (Vance) Conlon is a study within himself. Tough, independent and a 'not by the book' member of the AES, he does things his way - but gets the assignments done. Victor, however, for all his toughness and strength, is haunted by his past - a past that triggers his anger and pain.
When he is assigned to investigate a corporate breach - Victor finds that this job will eventually lead to reconciliation and forgiveness. This comes in the form of French beauty, Sabine Malcher. Abused by her 'husband' in all senses of the word, she feels trapped; yet she is also hiding a secret.
Victor is instantly attracted to Sabine; he seesand hears how she is treated. As well, there is a twist to the leaks within her husband's company!
This story was hard to put down for me! So much intrigue, action and chaos for them; the steamy tension, innuendos and Victor's alpha-tough dominance only adds to this entire book!
I was NOT expecting the outcome. This is only my second book of this series, (my bad😊), by Sybil Bartel, and I loved it!
I almost got teary reading how Victor and Sabine were able to help each other through their painful pasts, and move into a future together.
I also appreciated that I was introduced to some of the other members of the AES team in this book!
This is ONE HOT read! I am so immersed in these alpha heroes - wow! 🔥🔥 Definitely onto the next book of this series!! ❤❤
November 21, 2021
Wow!
A exquisite slow burn is a complete understatement when it comes to discussing this one. While I am already a HUGE fan of this author and her numerous other books, I can honestly say that this story is my favorite. (I know, I say that every time. But this one is truly incredible.)
From the first chapter to the last, I knew I was in for a treat. The men of AES are nothing if not damaged and complicated, just like we want them to be. I sincerely appreciate how strong these characters are, while being so broken at the same time. The passion the two of them have jumps off the pages.
It was sincerely heartwrenching to read certain parts of this story, as the words were filled with such emotional truths. The way this story is designed, a reader cannot reach the end without feeling something, and in my case, certainly changed. I sincerely appreciate reads like this, reads that connect to internal emotions not normally felt.
As usual, this author ties in characters I already love from her other series, and I enjoyed reading about them again. It is my strong suggestion that you read these stories in the correct reading order to get the most from this one.
I have, and will continue to recommend this author and her numerous other books as some of the best in romance reads available today.
A exquisite slow burn is a complete understatement when it comes to discussing this one. While I am already a HUGE fan of this author and her numerous other books, I can honestly say that this story is my favorite. (I know, I say that every time. But this one is truly incredible.)
From the first chapter to the last, I knew I was in for a treat. The men of AES are nothing if not damaged and complicated, just like we want them to be. I sincerely appreciate how strong these characters are, while being so broken at the same time. The passion the two of them have jumps off the pages.
It was sincerely heartwrenching to read certain parts of this story, as the words were filled with such emotional truths. The way this story is designed, a reader cannot reach the end without feeling something, and in my case, certainly changed. I sincerely appreciate reads like this, reads that connect to internal emotions not normally felt.
As usual, this author ties in characters I already love from her other series, and I enjoyed reading about them again. It is my strong suggestion that you read these stories in the correct reading order to get the most from this one.
I have, and will continue to recommend this author and her numerous other books as some of the best in romance reads available today.
November 23, 2021
Victor BROKE me... in the best of ways. I swear each book gets better and better but this one... this one.... this one was beyond all measurable words. I don't know how you do this. Time after time. Bringing every ounce of everything you have into these books and creating these worlds that hold us so tight we can't seem to breathe as we turn page after page. Like, I escaped to the bathtub to read without distraction, and I swear the water was long since cold as I COULDN'T stop. I'm sitting there middle of winter, teeth chattering, in the cold tub, refusing to get out and get warm, because I COULD NOT STOP.
Vance is... BOLD. Idk, is that even the right word? He is pain, guilt, and ferocious male wrapped up into a sexy package of hotness and condescending words. Sometimes, I wanted to slap him... and sometimes, I wanted to kiss him. As always with the men you write.
Sabine is COURAGE. You know at first I thought she was weak. I kept saying what? Sybil does NOT write weak women, what is going on? But girl, as I read through those pages and that truth started to unwrap I saw exactly what Vance saw. That woman was the epitome of strength and courage. In the face of nothing. In the face of literal mind numbing death of soul, she was STRENGTH. She was everything. This book was everything. I cannot WAIT to see what you come up with next.
Vance is... BOLD. Idk, is that even the right word? He is pain, guilt, and ferocious male wrapped up into a sexy package of hotness and condescending words. Sometimes, I wanted to slap him... and sometimes, I wanted to kiss him. As always with the men you write.
Sabine is COURAGE. You know at first I thought she was weak. I kept saying what? Sybil does NOT write weak women, what is going on? But girl, as I read through those pages and that truth started to unwrap I saw exactly what Vance saw. That woman was the epitome of strength and courage. In the face of nothing. In the face of literal mind numbing death of soul, she was STRENGTH. She was everything. This book was everything. I cannot WAIT to see what you come up with next.
November 24, 2021
Powerful & Emotional Story 5 Stars
There are not enough words to describe how phenomenal the stories that Sybil Bartel creates and gives to us the readers. Victor is another one of those captivating, extraordinary, and emotional stories. It draws the readers into the lives of the characters and makes the readers become invested in their journey. From the first page to the last, Victor will have you completely hooked and needing to know what happens with these two characters. Vance and Sabine have painful pasts, losses, and are trying to deal with guilt. Vance is an alpha male, who is stubborn, bossy, bold, but protective. With Sabine, everything is not as it seems, but she is strong and has courage. I love how she can be feisty with Vance. The chemistry between these two is off the charts. Victor is a story that has unique characters and storyline. It is well-written and has lots of suspense/intrigue. Vance and Sabine are strong, flawed characters that are trying to overcome mistakes made in the past and forgive themselves, Victor is a very powerful story that will leave the reader feeling every emotion and understanding what the characters are going through & feeling throughout the story. Victor is a must-read book.
There are not enough words to describe how phenomenal the stories that Sybil Bartel creates and gives to us the readers. Victor is another one of those captivating, extraordinary, and emotional stories. It draws the readers into the lives of the characters and makes the readers become invested in their journey. From the first page to the last, Victor will have you completely hooked and needing to know what happens with these two characters. Vance and Sabine have painful pasts, losses, and are trying to deal with guilt. Vance is an alpha male, who is stubborn, bossy, bold, but protective. With Sabine, everything is not as it seems, but she is strong and has courage. I love how she can be feisty with Vance. The chemistry between these two is off the charts. Victor is a story that has unique characters and storyline. It is well-written and has lots of suspense/intrigue. Vance and Sabine are strong, flawed characters that are trying to overcome mistakes made in the past and forgive themselves, Victor is a very powerful story that will leave the reader feeling every emotion and understanding what the characters are going through & feeling throughout the story. Victor is a must-read book.
November 24, 2021
I voluntarily reviewed a copy of "VICTOR" This is the second book in the awesome Alpha Elite Series written by Sybil Bartel she put did herself this was a nonstop intense drama, with emotional turmoil, heartache, intrigue, suspense, danger, steam, past traumatic issues, twists that you turning the pages.
Vance Conlon code name "VICTOR" a dominant alpha took on client no one else would touch he worked for Alpha Elites Security most sought after security contactor in the world his boss give him a very sensitive new client dealing with Corporate Espionage.
Sabine has been in a very abusive relationship her life looks perfect on the outside but it couldn't be further from the truth when Victor meets her he sees her pain there's immediate chemistry between these two but there both dealing with so much from their past plus the danger their in now.
Sabine has a chance to break away from the abusive controlling man she spent 7yrs with can she put her trust in Victor to help her she dies feel safe & protected when he's around.
I definitely recommend to get this story loved the journey Victor & Sabine take you on this is one book you don't want miss reading I'm so looking forward to the next book in awesome series "ROMEO'S" STORY!!!!!
Vance Conlon code name "VICTOR" a dominant alpha took on client no one else would touch he worked for Alpha Elites Security most sought after security contactor in the world his boss give him a very sensitive new client dealing with Corporate Espionage.
Sabine has been in a very abusive relationship her life looks perfect on the outside but it couldn't be further from the truth when Victor meets her he sees her pain there's immediate chemistry between these two but there both dealing with so much from their past plus the danger their in now.
Sabine has a chance to break away from the abusive controlling man she spent 7yrs with can she put her trust in Victor to help her she dies feel safe & protected when he's around.
I definitely recommend to get this story loved the journey Victor & Sabine take you on this is one book you don't want miss reading I'm so looking forward to the next book in awesome series "ROMEO'S" STORY!!!!!
November 23, 2021
Stunningly beautiful and devastatingly painful, Vance and Sabine are kindred spirits underneath it all. The depth of their pain makes it hard to fathom how they have carried it for so long. When we first met Vance, he comes across as devil may care, do as he wants without regard for anyone or anything. Now we get to scratch the surface and at what is staring back at us is anything but carefree. Sabine's situation reminds Vance of his past, the source of all his suffering and yet he doesn't hesitate to dive into the fray, for her. Sabine's life is one of extremes. Seemingly has it all, a successful husband, a good career, beautiful clothes and a penthouse apartment in Manhattan. But its just a shiny veneer that disguises the bruises, the abuse, the helplessness. She is stuck until Vance bursts into her life and turns it upside down. This is a slow burn for sure but the tension, the attraction between them is enough to spark a three alarm blaze. Magnificent storytelling and wonderful characters with flaws and scarred hearts that kept me up well past my bedtime. 6 tearful, heartbreaking stars for Sabine and Vance.
November 21, 2021
Oh my Lanta! Vance is everything I thought he would be and more. He is the definition of Alpha-Possesive.Protective.and Panty Meltingly Perfect 😍 The hero and heroine have damaged pasts that have set them on a certain path in life, they have similar trauma and have an immediate connection that is a slow burn but so worth it! While still sticking to their story, we get a glimpse of the personality of some newer characters, that I absolutely adored! I can't explain my love for Sybil's writing style...it just consumes you from beginning to end, I never have to question whether I want to read the book or not...it's always an absolute YES! She has a way of putting so much life to her books and her characters, the details are incredible. I am like a child on Christmas as soon as she says she writing another book because I know whatever she writes will be my new favourite. Her stories hold a special place in my heart and if you haven't started reading them, please do yourself the favor, you will not regret it. Amazing as per usual, I can't wait for the next one ❤
November 24, 2021
Victor is and incredibly suspenseful romance that deals with some heavy topics. Vance "Victor" Conlon takes one look at Sabine and becomes instantly drawn to her in a way he had been only one time before. Instantly his assignment goes off the rails, and what follows is and intense and suspenseful story. I'm not always the biggest fans of Insta-Love or Slow Burn, but I didn't want to put this book down so I could see what would happen next. I was at turns frustrated with Sabine and Vance with the decisions they made, or didn't make, along this journey but I loved reading this! If you love intense, emotional and suspenseful stories then this is for you, but you also have to be okay with slow burn because this is most definitely that. I have not yet yet the first book in this series and had no issue following along, but can't wait now to go and grab that, and am most definitely looking forward to the next one!
May 1, 2023
Its okay
This book was not bad it just wasn't for me. Normally I'm a fast reader but it took me a while to get through. The storyline was good but a bit over done and over explained (very wordy). Reading that the H smelled like wet cobblestones, musk and home every single time the h was in his presence got to be monotonous. I found myself skimming pages.
Also, in my humble opinion, there were too many different villains. It was unnecessary, confusing and muddled the story.
Finally the spice level is super low. The H is very alpha, which I loved, but then I wanted the spice level to match his personality and it did not. In fact as the book progressed to the 3/4 mark, and there was still pretty much zero intimacy between the h and H, I was convinced it wasn't going to happen.
They eventually do get together and get their HEA.
I didn't hate it but I didn't like it enough to move on in the series.
This book was not bad it just wasn't for me. Normally I'm a fast reader but it took me a while to get through. The storyline was good but a bit over done and over explained (very wordy). Reading that the H smelled like wet cobblestones, musk and home every single time the h was in his presence got to be monotonous. I found myself skimming pages.
Also, in my humble opinion, there were too many different villains. It was unnecessary, confusing and muddled the story.
Finally the spice level is super low. The H is very alpha, which I loved, but then I wanted the spice level to match his personality and it did not. In fact as the book progressed to the 3/4 mark, and there was still pretty much zero intimacy between the h and H, I was convinced it wasn't going to happen.
They eventually do get together and get their HEA.
I didn't hate it but I didn't like it enough to move on in the series.
October 2, 2023
Unfortunately it looks like I will not be a fan of this particular series. The writing style is different, there's too much of a inner monologue on both sides and it's just booooring. Sorry!
Again the plot was there (great), plenty was going on and yet it left me cold. I had no connection with characters, was not following their inner FUUUCK's/up's.
The "I own you" thrown in a face of a abused woman did not sit well with me (but that's just plot which I rarely comment on).
And if that was supposed to be a sexy romance...well... it wasn't. Talk about a slow burn! It happens...what? Twice? at the end ogf the book? So if you're after some spice this is not for you.
I just don't understand what happended, I used to devour Sybil Bartel's books, but this is the second book in this series I struggled with and I think that's enough for now. I will finish this series at some other time.
November 21, 2021
4.5 stars Every time this author releases a new book, I get excited. I fall into this fantastic world she has created with Alpha, Dominant ex military men, who fall so hard for their women, and have the most hilarious yet very real cantankerous relationships with each other. We're back with AES and out ex Marine, Victor, twin brother of a previous SB hero and alpha as all get out. This was an incredibly slow slow burn, but that's not a detriment to the story, there's enough going on and enough tension of every kind to make it really worth it when Vance and Sabine do come together. It's also so nice to see little cameos from the other AES men and more. I once again cannot wait to see what else this author brings out. Most likely I'll inhale it. I volunteered to read and review an early copy of this. All opinions are my own.
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