**Actually a 3.75-rating**
This would be so much easier to rate/review for me if I was merely writing up my end results reactions to this book -- a first for me from Lucy Gilmore [and not my last].
If I was giving my review in equal parts Cuteness/Adorable factor... and Did It Serve Its Purpose? --> and by this I mean, give me the story the Summary served up to me. And even sometimes shocking me by going forward a tad and breaking cookie-cutter boundaries by giving readers more. If so, this rating would go through the roof.
I walked into this book knowing full well it was not going to give me emotional punches and mysterious turmoils. By everything it doles out of itself... from Summary to book cover to maybe even a glimpse through the Title...this story should be easy-peasy, slam-dunks. Your typical Rom-Com served up on a golden platter.
You'd be kind of wrong, and this is what is sad about what allows some readers to pick and choose what they read by...outward appearances, alone. They never bother to take a chance on an unknown quantity to be pleasantly surprised by how much judging a book, literally, by its cover [...or synopsis or title...] can sometimes cause you to lose out on what could be a truly enjoyable and oddly different sort of read.
On the surface this book bleeds mediocrity. It's got a baskets of puppies... a quirky woman lead, a quarterback who plays for the NFL...it's got so much going for it, I almost had to take a step back for a bit and re-calibrate my brain to begin reading this story from another level. A much deeper and profound perspective.
Maybe taking a step above most quaint, small-town romantic comedies and notice that the Author put some real passionate effort in her writing--especially on her MCs, Hailey & Cole.
You can tell Lucy Gilmore is also either so passionate about football, just like her heroine... or she faked it really well with some extra help in knowing how to talk the verbiage needed to converse w/football players and also to talk like a hyper-fan who knows Stats and Bios about old games and players from each new generation of team roster.
There is also...a dog lover present. But even more than that...someone who knows about fostering animals, especially from a shelter. And I would go so far to even speculate this could spread into someone who also knows or knows OF the foster care system, and being "caught", "trapped" or born into the system of Foster Care.
That said...this is why this book is so much more than the sum of its outside parts. And it is a shame it could be overlooked because it is worthwhile to spend some quality time getting to know the two MCs, in Hailey and Cole.
Hailey especially because...hmm, a reader eventually realizes by the first couple of chapters into the story that Hailey is really unlike so many heroines you meet in Rom-Coms. Granted she has a lot of inner dialogue that makes you feel like she is shouting "NOT LIKE OTHER GIRLS"...you have to rewind your itchy triggers to fathom...this is a woman who has grown-up in and out of Foster Homes w/ no real parent until she was 12.
By the time she does get the home she has dreamed of, and the parent she has always wanted...Life throws her another curveball and happiness for Hailey seems unattainable unless she is moving through the world always on her own. Hailey is also someone who never draws attention to themselves, so when she DOES meet Cole... she can never admit to him not only that she is a fan, she is a fan of his team... and that she is kind of an idiot savant when it comes to Stats and players Bios. Also, she is not half-bad in being an arm-chair coach...
Cole? Is yet another interesting prospect because when I first began this book I had some idea I would dislike him at some point, but instead I was wildly charmed by him, in very small ways. He has lived a very enchanted life as Quarterback of the Seattle Lumberjacks [think of them akin to the Seattle Seahawks], and it's pretty much a Legacy inside the history of NFL football. We never find this out until halfway through the book, but... Cole's Dad lost out on his own NFL quarterback career, so he is living vicariously through his son.
Those things said, when Cole comes to Hailey's work/office...where she is putting together the annual puppy football game. Hailey is the one who "recruits" the adoptable puppies and sets them into the two teams, whomever has reached this book's version of the Superbowl [called The Kickoff Bowl].
The Summary makes it seem like each time Hailey wins this puppy bowl game then the team she "represents" tends to win the Kickoff Bowl.
So, really, Cole is becoming a near washed-up quarterback who had a really bad shoulder injury a few seasons ago, but he keeps making everyone around him think he is able to do this... except he cannot with such a bum-shoulder he will never admit to. Hence the reason why folks say he is "cursed".
And now he needs to utilize Hailey, her puppies and the puppy bowl game itself in order to break this mysterious curse... when all he really needs to do is admit to his STILL injured shoulder and possibly consider retirement.
At the on-set, both Hailey and Cole are kind of very simplistic characters. Except at their cores they become deeper, and much more fascinating individuals.
I like some reviewer's assessment where they likened Hailey to Sandra Bullock's character in "
While You Were Sleeping
", because the skin fits her so closely. Cole is NOT Bill Pullman [sadly] but he does become a great complex character to pit against Hailey.
What I enjoyed the most is the very first couple of instances of Cole meeting Hailey and him having to use his charms in order to get her to agree to his messed-up plan to break his "curse"--especially when HE has this power all along.
I liked their first meetings because it felt like Hailey was not, and would never, be hoodwinked to Cole's charisma. I mean she kept hiding the fact she was a die-hard Lumberjack fan but would tell him straight to his face how bad of a quarterback he was and how he doesn't use his wide reliever properly. It kept knocking Cole back on his feet as he continued to think his old charms could win Hailey over. She genuinely was not fooled by his "faked" swag.
A couple of chapters in and we are kind of smacked in the face with Hailey's heartbreaking personal story. More by her own POV [not that she outright tells strangers her full bio], but still it impacts a reader, one way or the other.
At some point we also get more and more in-depth with Cole... as we get to know his entire family. And as they warmly embrace Hailey--thinking she will help them break Cole's "curse" as a Good Luck Charm... we can see Cole's family through HER eyes, meeting them for the first time. Especially as Hailey is invited over on Football Sundays.
Now, I bet you are wondering after I said all this, why is my rating not 4-or at least higher? And you are right to feel this way because I myself became a bit despondent because I was willing to overlook a few instances, but then...hmm, I have become a more honest reviewer, over the years, when I admit to myself when the minor details begin to pile up and irk me...the book drains itself of some power. Some instances are easily changeable, but then others?.. so much it ruins the overall storyline and eventual organic level of relatability.
What was once believed, or perceived, is no longer plausible, and now the reading brain has to come into some agreement with the reviewing brain... and compile an answer as honest-as-can-be.
Even with the rare qualities, this book also has some formulaic ones. Immediate turn-offs, for me.
I will explain two instances. Somewhere past the 50%, the book reminds itself there can't be too much push-and-pull between the MCs and the Romance factor has to amp itself. Unfortunately, it takes one of those insta-turns [for me]... and where once Hailey was NOPE-ing Cole and shying away... and Cole was shockingly keeping a wide-berth [Hailey gave off some "keep away"vibes] from her... Then in one moment...Cole is throwing smarmy charms at Hailey...invading her personal space and brushing her long hair strands back... then he kind of just selfishly swoops in for an unsuspecting kiss, just because HE wanted to.
I sat there, dumbfounded, and kind of sad...if not a little depressed...when I had some idea this book would take me down different roads and MCs were not cardboard cutouts of 20-other Harlequin Romance heroes and heroines I have read in my past. I mean... the worst was having to watch Hailey suck in her massive shy introvert-ness, in such awkward moments, and suddenly DESIRE and WANT the smarminess charm Cole was bleeding out...
In a way it deadened me to them being a vital romantic couple. because now, in my wild imagination, I am reading 2 types of books. with 2 versions of Hailey and Cole--one w/an Insta-factor, while the other is in a nice slow-burn. It was simply odd how suddenly Lucy Gilmore's bright shining uniqueness in her great MCs were instantly eeking into cookie-cutter molds of ordinary, everyday horny Harlequin protagonists.
I actually read the rest of the book as a split-apart. I was able to now compartmentalize the formulaic Rom-Com-i-ness that can turn me off...but then also still see Lucy Gilmore's compassion for keeping HER ideals of who Hailey and Cole were, at their core.
I am unsure who told whom this needed re-edits...the "romance" had to be amped [at a certain point] or ramped up a few notches. Or that Cole had to "revert" into sometimes being a douchey player jock. And that Hailey had to become this beautifully sad version of a Harlequin heroine...
...yikes, still, what a lovely HEA. In my head, my first versions of Hailey and Cole [the slow-burn one] got that happy ending, moving on in their life together by building a family of adopted animals and being Foster parents...it warms my heart because the MCs I enjoyed more deserved that righteous ending.
**I received this e-ARC from NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.**