Marking this as a DNF at 20%. Way too many spelling, punctuation, and grammar errors - and the first one is on the first page! Too many words used incorrectly. Too many awkwardly written and repetitive sentences. The main character is supposed to be a highly educated person with a PhD and I just don’t see it. I did like her interactions with Jessica and Dan, but that’s really it. Dan is the only character who seems to have any real experience or expertise with archaeology and everyone else seems borderline useless!?! I really wanted to love this book, because I preordered it and I had been looking forward to it for months. I just can’t get past all the dang errors or suspend my disbelief long enough to enjoy the book.
Edit: I was incredibly bored and I decided to go back to this book so I could hopefully delete it from my brain forever. It's still a 1 star or less for the same issues listed in my original review, but I have some to add; "vague" writing and name dropping The Mummy movie franchise, the actors within said franchise, and Tomb Raider at various points. I'm considering using purposefully vague terms as a way to avoid actually having to describe things as "vague" writing. It feels lazy when every other description is "somehow this happened" or "it was something like a blah blah." The name dropping of the characters from The Mummy movies felt like the author was using that as a replacement for actual character development. I actually feel like I no longer love the movie because I got to the point where I wanted to scream every time anything was mentioned about that series, the characters, or the actors. Comparing so many scenes to movies was also weak. The Tomb Raider reference was just awkward. The character's name is not "Tomb Raider," but "Lara Croft."
Last thing: by the end of the book, I only liked two characters more than I did during the first 20%; Jessica and Dan. The sex scenes were okay, but definitely can't pull this book above the 1 star category.