This is a complicated story, one with many layers, and one which I’m not quite sure how to feel about. The novel follows Nathaniel Delaney, the grandson of Anne Delaney from O’Brien’s previous novel Strangers and Sojourners, as well as his two children as they search for refuge from the totalitarian government of Canada in the near future. The story is fast paced, with a similar tone and style to other works by O’Brien such as Father Elijah and Elijah in Jerusalem. The entire book is composed of journal entries from Nathaniel’s perspective which offers a unique look into his state of mind as the events of the book take place, but also makes it hard to separate Nathaniel’s thoughts from O’Brien’s. Additionally, because of the format and briefness of the novel, the world building and character development is less robust making it hard at times to enter into the narrative and buy into the plot.
The novel is jam-packed full of social and political commentary, as O’Brien calls out the modern rejection of individual human freedom and dignity as a result of secularism. These rebukes of the secular age serve as a warning against the rise of socialist, totalitarian regimes in the west, a message which was strongly prophetic at the time of its writing in 1999 and which has come to be even more necessary today. While a strong rebuke against modernism, which is at times moving and captivating, much of the commentary is overly heavy handed to a fault and contains a pretentious, preachy tone. O’Brien has an overly-dismissive attitude towards anything modern and I felt some of his political commentary to be unnecessarily divisive. Additionally, at times this commentary takes precedence over the story, taking away from the development of the characters and plot. This can be seen by what I felt to be lazy and unnatural dialogue or monologues from Nathaniel which were used to shoe-horn in O’Brien’s political opinions. This overt emphasis on ideology rather than content was a noticeable detractor in my enjoyment of the novel. Although I share many of the same concerns as are highlighted in the book, the presentation just didn’t quite work for me.
Yet, beneath the brashness of the political commentary, there are the makings of a beautiful story of Nathaniel’s realization of his own poverty and wretchedness, leading to a message of humility, forgiveness, and faith. Although there were some small moments of beauty depicting their family life, throughout the majority of the novel I felt Nathaniel to be incredibly unlikeable as a character, characterized by a cynical, pretentious, and judgemental attitude. While I’m not sure if this was intentional on O’Brien’s part, it did make for an interesting commentary on the necessity of truth to always be combined with charity and mercy. Through the witness of Nathaniel, the core theme of this novel revealed to me a sad tale of a man with a brain, yet no heart. As Nathaniel comes to recognize his own shortcomings and his heart is softened, it serves as a reminder that man is far more than an intellect and not even the most rational and moralistic arguments can change the human heart if done so without humility, gentleness, and compassion. This is shown through the many failed relationships throughout Nathaniel’s past resulting in his social isolation, resentment towards all those who fail to live up to his moral standards, and ultimately Nathaniel’s self-imposed savior complex which inevitably collapses at the end of the novel. In this regard, I was reminded of Dostoevsky’s Notes from Underground as I was reading, both in its social commentary as well as the parallels between Nathaniel and the Underground Man. However the novel does end on a moment of hope and redemption for Nathaniel, as he learns to forgive his enemies and reject his previous despair over the state of the world. While I came to appreciate these themes later in the novel which were reminiscent of many of those highlighted in Strangers and Sojourners, I felt O’Brien conveyed them without as much tact and gentleness as his previous novel. While still containing many redeemable qualities, it is unfortunate that this story was not able to further develop because of being overshadowed by the larger political commentary throughout the novel. Somewhere in here there are the pieces of a truly beautiful story, yet I was still left quite unsatisfied in the end.