This writer consistently writes about tough subjects. Here, it’s about single moms and adoptions. The reader knows, after the initial three or four chapters where the story is leading and we don’t want to go there, but we cannot stop ourselves. It’s like seeing an accident on the highway and not being able to look away.
Without spoiling the story, the hero, Ian, makes a big decision that wasn’t his to make. It is devastating. Paige, the heroine, doesn’t take it well, of course. Ian doesn’t learn…ever…and he continues making decisions for Paige and others around him. It really is beyond the alpha male norm. Although he is an engaging enough character, I never had the feeling that these decisions that Ian makes were for anyone else’s good as much as it was for his own, according to his infallible (hmmm) viewpoint.
Paige has far too many issues; this is my second book by Ms. Shay, and all of her characters seem overloaded with concerns, problems, pathos. It really is, at times, too much. I’m not sure how Paige can get out of bed in the mornings, her issues weigh her down so.
There are a few errors:
>> “When they were alone, Elliot told her, ‘He’s married, you know.’” Since Elliot just left the room, and Elliott is the topic of conversation, it is actually Ian who is speaking. This is maximally confusing and forces the reader to go back and reread paragraphs in order to figure out who has left and who is speaking.
>> Small point, but “obgyn” is usually printed like this: OB/Gyn and pronounced by sounding out each letter as in “Oh Bee Gee Why En.”
>> There are several problems with missing quotation marks and figuring out who is speaking becomes difficult; the printed structure of conversations is frequently bad and needs some additional proofreading.
Finally, I do not like cliff hangers. We can infer from what the writer implies that all will be well for Paige and Ian but so much is left up in the air. No doubt it’s to entice us to buy the next book in the series. Not going to work for me: I am not reading any more in this series. When the writing is strong enough, and the topics hold our interests, then we will seek out a good writer’s books.
I rated this book 3.5 stars and rounded down because of the cliffhanger. There are a LOT of things left up in the air. If you like cliffhangers, then by all means enjoy this book. If you do not, then stay away. There are many excellent writers to choose from, writers who do not leave a reader hanging and who know how to end a book while making the reader yearn for more.