Can I give this negative stars? I can see why this is self-published, it would never make it past an editor's desk. What a mess! There are parts where whole chunks of the story are missing, the author just didn't include them. Sloppy writing, tissue paper characters, no depth, no emotional pull, cringe-worthy dialogue, lots of fake science pretending to be real that could have been with even a simple google search.
I should have read the reviews and maybe I wouldn't have picked up this idiotic drivel. This is one of the stupidest books I've read. The dialogue is truly terrible, horrid really. The pacing sucks. The "love" story isn't much, we don't get to see the building of a relationship, seriously it's skipped over the two main guys go from bearly tolerating each other into an intimate relationship inbetween pages we don't get to see, also no real sexy times either, those get skipped too except for 1 hand job. There is zero character growth, the werewolf is a kid from beginning to end, the only development he gets is going from hating the vamp to patronizing and infantilizing him. The vampire is clueless and just blah throughout.
A five-year-old werewolf (okay he's 20 something but he acts, behaves, and sometimes speaks like he's five) is ordered by his father/pack alpha to guard (he's shit at this job) a weak ass vampire (seriously the only thing that makes this guy a vampire is that he lives off blood and is a couple of centuries old). Werewolves and vampires are enemies but because the vampires used to keep werewolves as slaves once upon a time (hello plot that's been used a million times since Underworld was released). Werewolves suffer some kind of disease that is killing them off (who knows for how long, how or why, the author can't explain because they made up some bullshit that they gloss over because they clearly failed science) The vampire is a scientist that agrees to help them for protection because his own kind wants to eat him because he's so old he's full of power (hahahaha what a joke, he isn't) so they strike a deal. (Why don't the werewolves have scientists of their own? Never explained.)
The main werewolf can tell that the vampire is his mate (how does that work between different enemy species? Who knows we aren't told) and begins to torment him (because if you like someone you bully them like the old myth of pulling the pigtails of the girl you like so she will like you...) They have zero chemistry, their interests, personalities, and even intelligence levels don't match. They make zero sense as a couple. Any relationship buildup is skipped. The sex is null.
The author clearly flunked science class since the science here is pure crap (would it kill you to do even 5 minutes of research on Google?). It's a throw everything at the wall to make it stick and sound impressive but anyone with any kind of decent grasp of science will cringe. Speaking of cringing, the dialogue, it's truely horrible. I've said it already and I'll say it again because it's true.
The last third of the book is just a mess, zero editing or fucks were given by the author. Seriously there are whole chunks of scenes, information, and dialogue missing that should be there to make a cohesive narrative. There are whole paragraphs or pages that don't make any sense because there are parts missing. I think the author had a deadline and just rushed through what should have taken a few days in a few hours with a sleep-deprived brain.
This book was clearly a money grab for the PNR crowd without actually caring if it was a readable story. I have no idea what the others in this series are like and I could care less, you couldn't pay me to touch them.