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Suit of Harte’s #2

Shoot the Moon

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All Adam Kern was looking for when his best friend dragged him to the club Harte was some good dancing and a little flirting to distract him from his troubles. He never anticipated meeting the club owner, Jesse Harte, and having a whole new world of experiences opened up to him. On an impulse, Adam follows Jesse to the upper, kinkier floors of the club where an informative tour ends in a steamy scene that both men are looking forward to repeating. The attraction between the two is scorching and over the next few weeks their adventures into kinky sex are nothing short of daring.

Adam loves the thrill of sex with Jesse but soon a gnawing fear sows doubt into his mind about the possibility of a relationship with the other man. Though he loves every moment he spends with Jesse, he fears what these sexual explorations may mean for him. Jesse is successful, an entrepreneur, and a well-known Dominant in the BDSM community, but Adam cannot see himself as a submissive. What sort of future could they have if he is unable to give his lover what he needs?

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First published January 7, 2015

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Jacqueline Grey

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Jacqueline Grey is a bit of a Jack-of-all-trades. She has many different interests and if you asked her what her job was the answer would be a list, even if she gave you the simplified version. She spends her days juggling work with her many hobbies which include dancing, aerial silks, sewing, cosplay, role-playing, drinking tea, and above all, writing. She currently lives on an island on the east coast of the United States. She loves to read and write male/male erotic romance, usually focusing on stories that include BDSM themes to one degree or another.

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Profile Image for Ed Davis.
2,921 reviews101 followers
August 5, 2021
I really like these books. They’re just too short. I love the way Jacqueline Grey writes even though the stories feel a bit rushed.
Profile Image for Jenn (The Book Refuge).
2,695 reviews4,512 followers
July 9, 2020
This was a fun novella in a series about a BDSM club. This one is the second and though I haven't read the first one yet, I can see how fun it is. They are all MM couples and this one is about the owner Jesse Harte and a man named Adam, who comes to the club one night with his roommate.

Adam isn't interested in being a submissive, but he can't fight his attraction to Jesse. Adam and Jesse enter into a weekly meet-up relationship. They start to catch feelings, and Adam worries that he can't offer Jesse what he is looking for. Jesse is a Dominant and Adam doesn't know if he can be what is required.

This is a situation I have seen before, but it was even more fun to see in a gay couple. When one man doesn't know what submitting really means or who is really in control in a D/S relationship.

This was only about 100 pages, so I feel like it could have been fleshed out more. However, that is a problem I always have with novellas. There aren't really intense BDSM scenes, since Adam doesn't like the painful side of play, but it was still super hot and it was very fun.

4/5 stars from me.

*I read this as an eARC from Netgalley. I was offered an advanced copy in return for my honest opinions.*
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2,891 reviews1 follower
July 3, 2020
3.5 stars After reading part one which was excellently written and very enjoyable I was happy to start part two.

There were parts I appreciated and parts where I found it less.

Adam is in a club on the dance floor and sees a beautiful man, Adam is drawn to him. When the man invites him to some other floors with other actions like BDSM, Adam follows. He is unfamiliar with it all and doesn’t understand what he’s looking at.
The man asks if he’s up for fun and Adam gets the time of his life.

After that night they have weekly dates until Adam reaches a point where he knows he can’t go on like this, Saturday’s and nothing more to offer.

The communication was bad, mostly because they had other things on their mind during their weekly meetings.
Adam was opposed against everything submissive and closed himself off from it
The switches of designation like a guy, the guide, the Dominant to a first name, or the young man, the boy, the lover, it was confusing.
The BDSM part was a bit at the background of this story.
The story could have done without the whole family part it wasn’t an attractive addition.
Jesse stayed consistently dominant and that felt right, Adam wasn’t quite an engaging person.
I did enjoy the most parts of this short story but for me, it had some flimsy parts here and there.
Profile Image for Erika.
457 reviews
June 30, 2020
Thanks to Netgalley for a complimentary copy in exchange for an honest review.

This is the second in this series and stands alone, but previous characters make an appearance. I liked that Dillon and Michael (from the first story) popped up again. It was fun to see the continuation of their relationship.

Jesse and Adam were interesting characters. Jesse, the owner of the club, and Adam who has some past issues that keep him from labeling himself as submissive. The length of the story only afforded a taste of their relationship. I kept waiting for them to talk to each other, considering D/s is all about communication, but it never happened. I liked it, but wanted more emotional connection between the characters.
Profile Image for Trio.
3,636 reviews210 followers
December 20, 2020
I'm enjoying the world Jacqueline Grey is building in the Suit of Harte's series. There's a nice variety of characters, kinks, and relationships.

Jacqueline Grey has a lovely way of writing, very appealing, and I'm looking forward to the final book in this series.
Profile Image for Mikki James - Peters .
196 reviews4 followers
June 28, 2020
Adam's friend Ash drags him to Harte a BDSM/kink club, with three floors - one dedicated to dancing; there's bound to be some fun had. Adam is hesitant as he doesn't believe he identifies with anytypes of BDSM/kink but he complies with his friend's wishes. While there he meets the mysterious Jesse, they hit it off and then hook-up. What was supposed to be a one-time thing turns into a weekly meet-up and Adam beginning to want more then no-strings attached. Can Adam turn what he has with Jesse into the real deal, or will this relationship slip through his fingers?

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This book was okay. There was no major plot issues or character flaws. I only had a hard time with following the point of view of the narrator. We start with Adam's POV and then all of a sudden mid-hook-up we get Jesse's POV. It was so abrupt that I had to reread the page I was on a couple times. Prior to transitioning to Jesse's POV, Adam was mid-hook-up with unnamed mysterious guy; so to go to know named to this is how Jesse's feeling was discombobulating. I also wasn't too moved by Adam's so-called adversion to BDSM. We don't find out how his so-called verbal abuse from his parents until move than half way through the novel. I say so-called because there is no real background on what growing up in his house was like. We had a phrase here or there about his father not liking gay people and his parents did ultimately kick him out; but I think they needed to be a bigger catalyst. Adam states how BDSM and submission makes him weak and this is what he was lead to believe by being gay when he was younger - but again this should have been emphasized somehow in greater detail in flashbacks. Despite these setbacks I found the book to be a so/so romance. Both Jesse and Adam had a lot of hot and steamy scenes. However there's not a lot of talking and relationship built up if that is something that interests you, so if you're looking for a deep and soulful romance I wouldn't recommend this book. If you're the type that likes the almost instant love connections after a few romps then this book would probably be more your taste.

I received a free copy of this book via netgalley and have voluntarily given my honest review.
Profile Image for Sheena ☆ Book Sheenanigans .
1,524 reviews437 followers
June 24, 2020

Well that escalated quickly!

It was a straight to the point BDSM kinkfest (eh but not really) with no tricks or gimmicks. Sure there was a lack of a storyline, oddly enough real kink from the MCs, depth, character development, and real romance but we're not here for that now are we?

The non-descriptive sex scenes and what seems to be the lack of kinkiness from the characters were the real downfalls to this read. I generally prefer reading all nitty gritty details on what's happening with our boys but then again, that's just a personal preference. More so, the sex scenes featured were very bland and mediocre despite the primary setting being in the BDSM club, it just didn't delivered.

In any event, this second installment of the Suit of Harte’s series was okay and would probably be ideal for readers who are looking for a quick kinky fix.

788 reviews7 followers
August 3, 2020
3.75 Stars!

Adam went to the club with his friend to have a little fun, dancing and flirting. Being impulsive with the hottest guy he's ever seen; however, leads him down a path he never anticipated. Club owner Jesse is enthralled with Adam and once he has Adam that night, he looks forward to seeing him again.

I struggled with how I felt about this story. The way that the story is structured, I felt like I was missing a lot about both Jesse and Adam. I really didn't get a good understanding of Adam's background and why he had a hard time with Jesse's involvement with the BDSM side of the club until late in the story, when we get to meet Adam's parents. I also didn't really understand why Jesse kept chasing Adam. I get that their connection and chemistry was amazing, but being basically ghosted for weeks at a time is not something most people are willing to deal with. I was happy to see Jesse finally have a real talk with Adam about submission and what he wanted versus what Adam had assumed, but I felt like it would have been good to have some indication from Jesse earlier that he didn't necessarily need a sub to be happy. I guess I just wanted to have a better understanding of Jesse and where he was coming from.

Overall, it was a fast read for me and I enjoyed their interactions. I haven't read the first book in the series, but I admit I am a bit curious about it now. I may go back and read it another day. If you're looking for a hot short read with some kink, this one might fit the bill for you.

*** Copy provided to Bayou Book Junkie for my reading pleasure, a review wasn't a requirement. ***
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231 reviews2 followers
December 13, 2020
Original review: https://myshelfbooks.wordpress.com/20...

I voluntarily read and reviewed an advanced copy of this book. All thoughts and opinions are my own.

Erotica: It is no secret that I hated the first book. What the author called kinky, I thought it was actually demeaning for Michael, so I wasn’t really looking forward to this second story. Another repeat of that awfulness would have buried this saga and pretty likely the rest of this author’s book into the “never touch” place of my shelves. But this second book shows a much more promising style. The characters are better. The romance is way better. The kinky stuff is more sensible and actually appealing instead of nauseating. Overall, it is a nice short story to keep you entertained for a little bit. Nothing out of the extraordinary, but mostly correct. I will certainly check the third book once it gets the new edition.

Angry: Sadly, the author kept reminding me why I hated the first book so much. Maybe it is my own obsession, but it seems that Dillon has even more story time than even Jesse in Shoot the Moon. I know that is not true, but that character rubbed me the wrong way and I can’t stand his presence no matter how short. He is still micromanaging Michael’s everystep. That has nothing to do with any kind of kinky sex…

Am I the only one who thinks someone mixed the covers? The cover of the first book makes much more sense in the second book (it clearly displays Jesse) and the guy of this second cover would fit Dillon’s description way better.
Profile Image for Marlou Klijn.
705 reviews23 followers
August 17, 2020
This book was provided to me by Netgalley in exchange for an honest review.

This was a fun, quick and easy read! I finished it in one morning. I've been on such a romance binge this summer and I love it. I wanted to read something different than just your average contemporary romance, I couldn't find any paranormal romance that struck my fancy, but this book was about BDSM so I requested it on Netgalley.

Writing style: It's nothing special, but I thought it was nice. The way it was written made it very easy to read it and I this story flew by!

Characters: I'm still getting used to the flatness of contemporary romance characters. Adam and Jesse were cute but they had no personalities whatsoever. Their chemistry was great though! I saw the fireworks flying off the pages during their smut scenes.

Story: It was simple, but that doesn't have to be a bad thing. The book mostly dealt with Adam's aversion to being called a sub. He doesn't mind being one as long as it doesn't involve pain, but he hates being labeled as such... Which has something to do with his dad kicking him out of his house for being gay and saying he doesn't want some pansy ass son... Poor Adam. This story really touched some of the struggles a gay man can have in his life.

I enjoyed this book, but it didn't blow me away. I probably won't be reading anything else of this series, or this author. I'm giving Shoot The Moon 3 stars.
Profile Image for Stephanie Panach.
697 reviews12 followers
July 13, 2020
I really liked this story - and the series as a whole. I adored the first story of Michael and Dillon. Jesse was a very interesting side character in that story. I was excited to see him find his person. Jesse is a business man. He owns a club (with a dance side and a BDSM side) and a gym - among other things I'm sure. He is clearly a Dom - but that isn't all he is. Adam is a college age man whose parents kicked him out when he came out as being gay. He meets Jesse at his club and is intrigued by the BDSM aspects - but isn't sure if it is all for him. Adam isn't a submissive in the truest sense - but he does like giving over control to Adam and being on the kinkier side of things.

Jesse is consistent in his feelings for Adam throughout the story - but is a little slow on the uptake of how much Adam really means to him. For most of the book Adam blows hot and cold with Jesse - the sex is very hot, but he doesn't feel like he fits in to Jesse's lifestyle and won't be enough for him. Adam doesn't want things with Jesse to not be exclusive. Jesse takes some time to understand what he wants and what Adam needs from him.

I liked so much about the story - but it felt, unfinished, somehow. Adam and Jesse certainly get a happy for now ending - similar in some respects to Michael and Dillon, but less settled. I was surprised when the story ended - because I felt like I needed more. More resolution - more of a look at how things were going to work between then - more of something.

I hope this isn't the end of the series and I do hope we get to see more!

I received this as an ARC from NetGalley, but these opinions are all my own.
Profile Image for Jacqueline (Fall In Love With The Sound of Words).
464 reviews29 followers
July 21, 2020
I really enjoyed the first book in this series. Nothing much has changed with book 2. I still enjoyed my time in this journey. I wasn’t invested in the characters as much.

One thing I really enjoyed was the discovery portion. Adam is confronted with a side of him he never imagined when his BFF brings him to Harte club, and he runs into club owner Jesse. I love seeing self discovery. The back and forth between wanting and trying to come to terms with that want and the shame that society places on us is fascinating. The harsh words and abandonment of Adams parents for being Gay has tremendously troubled his psyche.

I wish that there was more instances of Jesse helping Adam through this. I also do feel like communication on both sides was very minimal. I’d have preferred Jesse taking a firmer approach in understanding Adams hang ups. I don’t remember them even having a real conversation about Adams fears. Simple communication can usually clear a path towards understanding. Especially with Jesse owning a kink club and must understand the beauty of clear communication.

Still the HEA was beautiful. I enjoyed the book and I can’t wait to get my hands on book 3

Thank you to the author, Netgalley, and NineStar Press for providing an eARC in exchange for my honest review. All opinions are entirely my own.
47 reviews1 follower
June 25, 2020
Merci à NetGalley de m’avoir permit d’acquérir ce roman en échange d’un avis honnête.

J’ai demandé ce livre car le thème de la découverte du monde BDSM est plutôt intéressant et je me suis donc lancée là dedans. Ce livre est un peu court, mais l’histoire n’est pas non plus rushée. La relation qui s’installe ne fait pas fausse, au contraire, pour une fois, c’est plutôt rapide mais bien balancé et écrit. L’équilibre est présent, on a Jesse qui est un dom et Adam qui n’est pas du tout dans l’univers BDSM et qui pourtant se sent attiré par certains aspects (seulement) de cet univers.

La seule chose que je reprocherais à Jesse c’est de ne pas avoir eu une vraie conversation autour de l’univers dans lequel il vit. Il ne lui a pas expliqué que tout soumis n’est pas obligé de faire des démo devant des gens ou de porter un collier de « chien » comme le dit Adam. Mais s’il ne l’avait pas fait, il n’y aurait pas eu ce quiproquo qui a construit le livre et leur relation.

En fin de compte, ce livre est très bien pour une lecture détente mais sexy et je vais de ce pas demander le tome 1 qui peut se lire séparément mais dont on retrouve les personnages dans ce tome ci.

Je recommande donc ce tome !
Profile Image for Charlotte.
899 reviews56 followers
July 1, 2020
Adam's life changes when he heads to Harte with his friend. He hooks up with a man who is sexy and intriguing.... Adam finds himself on the BDSM floor of the club ... and doesn't even get his name.

After a few encounters, Adam realizes that he's been hooking up with Jesse - the club owner.

There was a weird POV switch at one point in the book that really threw me but it may be something that will be caught in a later edit. It wasn't extensive enough to completely take me out of the story, it was just a bit jarring.

Mostly, I enjoyed the exploration of submission and what it can mean. Jesse is clear what he wants and needs and even though that confuses Adam, they get there in the end. Submission isn't just about sexual acts or even physical play... it can be purely about trust.

I wish that this had been a longer piece of writing because I felt as though there should have been a bit more communication between the two men. Jesse is clearly an experienced Dominant and it bothered me a little that he didn't have any discussions with Adam regarding what he wanted.

I really wish that these books were longer because I really enjoy the author's writing style!
Profile Image for K.J. Sweeney.
Author 1 book48 followers
December 24, 2020
3 1/2 rounded up to 4 stars
This is the second book in the Suit of Harte's series, but the third that I have read. These books are short and hot and deal with three different male-male couples who all, to some extent, indulge in BDSM.
In this book, Adam, one of our main characters has no interest in being submissive, or so he thinks until he has sex with Jesse (who is very much a dom). He then struggles to decide what he wants, as he certainly can't deny the attraction to Jesse.
I enjoyed this read and I liked the way that they both question what they really want when faced with someone that isn't into exactly what they would like them to be into. What let the book down a little for me, was that as it was so short, there wasn't really the room for the two to fully explore their feelings and how they would work it all out together. I think that there was room for a much bigger story here, which we didn't get. It was still a fun quick read though.
Profile Image for Allyson Sherwood.
919 reviews12 followers
December 27, 2020
3.5 Shooting Stars

Shoot the Moon, the second book in Jacqueline Grey's Suit of Harte's series was more captivating and spellbinding than the first book. The author's writing is enjoyable and flow-worthy, making the reader flip the pages to the next scene faster. My only hang up was the length and the intensity of the climax of the plot. I wanted more in-depth, more descriptions. Almost like we were just breaking the surface of the problem and not getting down to the real issue of Adam and Jesse's journey.

Overall though, it was a delicious read with active intense scenes of an MM relationship. There are BDSM elements, but not like the first book where it was more D/s, this second book was more low-key per se.

*Copy provided by NineStar Press in exchange for an honest review.
Profile Image for Theresa.
3,588 reviews
March 28, 2020
Unconvincing story. Jesse was a Dom and owned a BDSM club. Adam was not subordinate nor kinky enough. Jesse would never be satisfied with Adam long term. Also, Adam was too insecure and jealous when Jesse scened (no sex) with others. Just not a good fit at all.
32 reviews
July 6, 2020
Shoot the Moon by Jacqueline Grey was a revelation to me! I mean, two hot guys doing bdsm? What could go wrong? Nothing for me.
I don't have a lot to say about the book except I loved it from start to finish. A 5 stars read for me!!
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895 reviews21 followers
July 4, 2020
Shoot the Moon is a super quick novella set in the world of BDSM. It was a fun read. I didn't know it was a short story going in, so I definitely would have wanted more from the characters. For me, their relationship happened way to quickly. Overall, still a good read!
Profile Image for Nadia.
565 reviews
July 7, 2020
I received this ecopy from the publisher and Netgalley for my honest review. It was a short read. I didn’t realize that this was part of a series. I would like to read the first book when I get the chance. The relationship between Adam and Jesse progressed very fast, but there was no real communication between them. I wanted more depth in the relationship to be more believable. That being said I was happy that Jesse and Adam found each other.
Profile Image for Blake.
389 reviews5 followers
January 13, 2021
We continue to follow second of the three best friends from high school.

Since Harte is the owner of the club Harte's you would think that he needs to have a submission not only in the bedroom but in life. But, when you find love sometimes those things don't matter. Harte's goal is to figure out what he really wants and if he can convince his love that he is enough for him.
Profile Image for JustJen "Miss Conduct".
2,396 reviews156 followers
December 2, 2016

We met Jesse in the previous book as Dillon’s friend and owner of the dance/BDSM club. Adam isn’t much into the club scene, but things look up when he meets Jesse after his friend drags him out for a night on the town. Adam and Jesse share an instant connection/lust, though Adam has no idea who Jesse actually is.

While Adam is curious and is fairly easily convinced to check things out upstairs at the BDSM club, he makes it apparent very quickly that he is not into the scene, is adamant he is not a submissive and has no intention of kneeling for anyone. This would seem to be a bit of a problem since Jesse is pretty big into the scene, as a well known dominant, as well as the owner of the club.

They hit some bumps, but feelings trump the BDSM after Jesse realizes he wants Adam any way he can get him, even if it means giving up at aspect of the relationship. For some reason, I didn’t quite feel the connection with these two as I did with Dillon and Michael, and it was great to see them again and doing well.

I found this story line to be a nice change of pace though, with having to deal with each character being into different levels of kink. While it didn’t knock my socks off, it was still enjoyable and interesting enough to keep me invested in the series.

Received in exchange for a fair and honest review written for Love Bytes Reviews.
Profile Image for Alexis Woods.
Author 52 books84 followers
March 14, 2023
Book 2

While this can certainly hold as a standalone, I quite enjoyed having read book one before this. The story follows on from Dillon's with his best friend, Jesse, who owns the BDSM Club. Adam goes to the pub with his friend and has an encounter with Jesse, which leads to another and another. But Adam is sure, so darn sure, that he is not a sub.

KU, contemporary, book in a series, standalone, age gap, BDSM
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836 reviews82 followers
March 22, 2023
2 STARS

I liked the first one but this one was really lacking for me. The characters had no chemistry whatsoever.
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