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230 pages, Kindle Edition
Published June 16, 2020
"Also, I thought Violeta was your best friend. I never did anything with her" I smiled at her innocently, even though it was a lie. Violeta had fucked me several times when she'd come over for sleepovers, but she'd known that it was nothing more than a bang for me.
That is one of a myriad of samples of the egregious behavior on the part of our 'hero'. When he meets Millie, his sister's friend again his behavior is uncouth at the minimum."Well, your friend Millie, the redhead...I want to bang her." I took in Jane's shocked expression. "And I'm pretty sure she's down. Who knows, maybe she'll even give me some action under the table."
Whaaa? Is this really the hero of our story? Did no one else read these lines? Or how about this little gem?"Your lips were saying hello, but your eyes were saying 'Shall I drop to my knees and blow you right now?"
That's right folks, our hero is better than Tyra Banks at reading a girls eyes and he knows what she's thinking. A clear case of she said 'no' but really meant 'yes' in this narcissistic little mind. There was an additional bar scene where a random chick walks up to him out of nowhere and starts unzipping his pants right there at the bar. Have bars really changed that much in the last few years? I thought that was what Tinder was for. Our heroine was OK. Nothing special. The plot involved Marco wanting Millie to go on a trip with him and quite frankly she came across as a bit avaricious while she recounted the things she wants to do if she decides to go. As in a trip down Rodeo Drive, a Dodgers game, Venice Beach, the spa. It felt transactional and frankly sordid. The whole "trip together" happened too fast and too bizarrely considering they barely knew each other. Don't even ask about the sex party. Sorry but the hero was such a prick I hated him the entire time. A fat no and a fat "F" for me on this one.