Really gorgeous poem, but I wonder if the structure detracts to it rather than adding to it. The logical dependences don't always work, at times they seem pretty arbitrary, but the imagery and tone are really beautiful. It's also a tiny book that begs to be reread from the top as soon as it's finished, very stimulating
I don't have a steady universe, but I have a steady rose.
The world often shifts wonder.
The world leaves everything to the roses which leave everything to chance.