Plot: 3/10
Smut:7/10
Grammar / Character Development: 4/10
While this book was probably only written for the horny people out there just trying to live their best life. This book reminded me of a 16 year old writing her first Wattpad book, and couldn’t help herself.
The characters were not independent in their own character, I felt as though I could many hints of what the author liked and what she disliked throughout the book; while pushing the fourth wall once of twice is all fine and dandy, the wall was pushed way too many times in this book and made it almost impossible to get a clear read on the independence of the characters characteristics.
The smut. Listen, I’m not one to turn down a good smutty book, and while this book did not disappoint in giving you lots, it was poorly written, so badly that I couldn’t help myself from laughing at the scenes. The overuse of the exclamations, using capital letters, exclamation marks and the sorts.
Also, the overuse of the same idioms and expressions, I found to be unbearable. I mean, there must be another word or expression to use than the same thing, that means something similar.
All in all, I rated the book 2 ⭐️ because I expected more from a published author and I got Wattpad level writing and plot progression.