"WHAT WAS SHE THINKING?" That was the question that I had in my mind as I was flipping through the pages of Bare: The Cradle of the Hockey Club by Jackie Phamotse. “Are we not taught as kids, that if something is too good to be true, then it usually is? Or is just me?” I was so emotionally invested in this second part of the Bare series. I found myself captivated by Jackie's use of literacy, this time around. I held on to every single word that she wrote. She made it seem so flawless the way that she could make you feel everything that the characters were feeling in the book. I experienced the anger building up inside of me, as I thought of what happens to young black girls in South Africa living the ‘Instagram life’. I felt pain in my chest as I saw the blood, the slashed anal holes, the thought of piss and the watery shit that they swallow - all for a couple of bucks and pretty pictures. "What?" I could see what they saw, and it frightened me. I cowered as I thought of the sophisticated human, walking around in daylight Sandton but acting like an animal in the shadows.
Regardless of this, there was a little excitement that also built inside of me. I could feel my thighs stiffen, and my vulva moisten as I began to imagine Tim's thick rod inside my apple. "Oh yes! Oh my God!"
It cannot just be for the money. Not for the men and not for the girls either. I feel like there is an explanation missing as to why people are tempted to this life. Is it merely just human nature, maybe? Could these books truly prevent one from being a part of this life? *breathes*
Anyway! I can openly say that I was quite impressed by Jackie. She did a great job with this book. You want to finish it, but also don't want it to end. She connected everything to the first book (so you must read Bare: The Blessers Game). She did a great job of answering questions raised in the first book. It is better. A few errors, such as misspelling of one or two character names. Which I think would need a third or forth editing and proof reading of the book, if she prints more copies. But this is a beautiful sequel. Cringe worthy. Scary!
I do recommend that the age restriction gets increased just a bit, maybe to 21. I understand that the series is meant to raise awareness of blessers. If you buy it for your younger sister or brother, engage in a conversation with them. Ask them how the book made them feel, what they think. I do not know if at 15 – 21 years they are aware of the differences between this right and wrong. At this age, they are finding themselves; and I think everyone wants to be popular. Personally, I read the book and secretly, deep, deep within me; I might want that life.