(Realistic rating: gosh, if it hadn't been for the incredibly dumb and forced romantic conflict, this truly could have been at least a very soft four stars! There's a lot to love about the characters and the development and the actual dynamic of the relationship, but unfortunately... as I said, the romantic conflict is incredibly dumb and forced. So it's very much 3 stars, 3.5 at best!)
Seriously, what is with all of these dudes acting intensely relationshippy with women and then being like WHOA, HEY, WHY DO I KEEP THINKING ABOUT THIS WOMAN IN A RELATIONSHIPPY WAY/WHY IS SHE SAYING SHE LOVES ME/WHY ALL OF A SUDDEN DOES SHE THINK WE'RE NOT CASUAL or whatever?? Is this really how men behave?? It reads INCREDIBLY unrealistic and makes me think way less of them as heroes because they clearly want to have their cake and eat it too, but have something terrible going on in their brains that stops them from actually defining the relationship or committing to a label that literally just describes what they're already doing. It drives me up the wall!! I understood it more in His Unexpected Twins because it was more mutual, so at least both of them were driving me nuts, ha-- but here, where Des is CLEARLY fulfilling a partner role for Natalie and a father role for Sam but then loses his damn mind at the mere suggestion that that's what he's doing, it's incomprehensible and stupid. And I hate it! In case that wasn't obvious!!
It frustrates me especially much because there's a lot here that's really good! A lot of Des and Natalie's backstories feel full and real and honest, and their personalities are both really three-dimensional and realistic and well suited for one another; it makes sense that they'd get along and like each other, why Des would appeal to Natalie and why Natalie would get through Des's shell. I like the way they are together and the way Des is with Sam -- I like Sam as a character! His disability is treated really realistically and his inability to speak stops him from feeling like a twee caricature. The initial connection feels a tad too quick and convenient, but really, other than the ending, the rest of the story is lovely. It just... dissolves quickly into a series of forced romance novel cliches, and it's frustrating when so much of the rest of it is fresh and fun and feels real. Sigh!