This is a truly dreadful book.
I’m genuinely amazed it got published. The writing is woeful. It reads as if it was written by a school child, and not a very bright one at that. Words are repeated two or three times in a sentence on multiple occasions. Sentences are thrown in at random that have no relevance to the story, either that which we have already been told or what is to come. The author makes the same point twice in a sentence and then again two or three sentences later.
The book can’t have been edited. Even an incompetent Editor would have cut huge chunks of it and changed the numerous nonsense paragraphs into something that 1) made some sense, 2) read as if it was written by someone who had at least passed GCSE English (approximately the 11th grade if you are American) and 3) would have corrected the various missing words. I’m not even sure this was proof read, it really is THAT bad.
If you told me this was simply a series of school essays written by a teenager that had been taped together and self published, I would not be in the least surprised. In fact, I would be disappointed that a teenager had produced something so poor.
If you want a book about Andrew Carnegie, do yourself a favour and don’t waste your time on this.