Getting the rough stuff out of the way, the pacing is off, the dialogue is a little clunky and the main character is a classic Mary Sue. It was also exactly what I needed in my life right now. J. S. Morris gives us a unique take on the classic formula, full of heart and perhaps unrealized potential. The antagonists were fantastic, quickly becoming two (three?) of my new favorite fictional characters. Really, if the book had taken more time to build these and other characters, this would have been an easy four star for me. But if my biggest complaint about a book is that it needs to be longer, how bad can it be?
More than anything, this book made me excited. I think Morris is just warming up. The core of an excellent story is here, it just needed polish. I can’t wait to see his next effort, and how much he’s improved.