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The Talenkai Chronicles #1
Song of Mornius
Can bloody hands wield a staff of peace?
Gaelin Lavahl, after battling to find his freedom, discovers the world to be a much larger place than he had thought. But his mind is haunted. He'd been forced to commit murder during his escape, and now his heart yearns for redemption.
Hearing about the evil cult destroying city after city, Gaelin hopes to make amends by using his staff as a weapon against it.
The problem: the staff weakens him whenever he tries.
Can he stand to wield such power? And will it be enough?
Find out in Song of Mornius.
Gaelin Lavahl, after battling to find his freedom, discovers the world to be a much larger place than he had thought. But his mind is haunted. He'd been forced to commit murder during his escape, and now his heart yearns for redemption.
Hearing about the evil cult destroying city after city, Gaelin hopes to make amends by using his staff as a weapon against it.
The problem: the staff weakens him whenever he tries.
Can he stand to wield such power? And will it be enough?
Find out in Song of Mornius.
- GenresFantasy
465 pages, Kindle Edition
First published January 27, 2019
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About the author
Diane E. Steinbach
1 book29 followersRaised on a tree nursery next to Farmer Green's cornfield in Waukesha, Wisconsin, and then relocated as a child to the Pacific NW, Diane has been a dreamer all her life. She finds the greatest happiness both in nature and in far-off, imagined places--often within the pages of a favorite book.
Diane is currently working on the sequel to Song of Mornius, and plans to continue the adventure through future books set on the magical world of Talenkai.
Diane is currently working on the sequel to Song of Mornius, and plans to continue the adventure through future books set on the magical world of Talenkai.
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December 11, 2020
I won this book in a goodreads drawing.
A kid kills his stepfather and goes on the usual heroes' journey. Dragged for while, but picks up at the end.
A kid kills his stepfather and goes on the usual heroes' journey. Dragged for while, but picks up at the end.
April 21, 2019
I won this kindle e-book in a Goodreads Giveaway. This is a fantasy adventure novel and is the debut book by Diane E. Steinbach. It starts out with an intense, moving scene, but lagged for me in a couple of places in the middle. However, it picked back up and finished strongly. The main character is likeable, and faces struggles of various types throughout the book. He isn't your typical protagonist. There is a terrific set of secondary characters in the book: both good and evil.
The book is original and well written. This author's writing allowed me to easily visualize both the characters and the setting. This is a land where wizards, elves, humans, giants, magic, dragons and much more coexist. The plot was complex and took me places that I did not always expect.
If you love epic fantasies, I recommend this novel.
The book is original and well written. This author's writing allowed me to easily visualize both the characters and the setting. This is a land where wizards, elves, humans, giants, magic, dragons and much more coexist. The plot was complex and took me places that I did not always expect.
If you love epic fantasies, I recommend this novel.
March 18, 2019
‘Trust me in this, Gaelin, you must run.’
Pacific Northwest author Diane E. Steinbach makes her writing debut with a novel many years in the gestation and the result is a fresh view of fantasy adventure fiction. Noting that this novel is Book One of a series she calls The Talenkai Chronicles encourages the reader to gain entry into all the aspects of her fantasy world in preparation for what appears to be a worthy journey.
Whether or not a projected fantasy novel is able to create new world with characters with whom we can identify is key to the success of the opening work. Diane satisfies this credential with an opening that establishes not only her lead character but also the projected direction in which the story will progress. And she accomplishes this with fine quality prose.
‘Dazed, Gaelin examined his hands. His knees were folded to the side where he sat, the red pool widening across the floor. He slanted his gaze to the ax in his lap, the rivulets of blood sliding along the edge of the weapon he cradled. The silence dragger out while he gaped at the wreckage his fury had made in the little room…”Gaelin, run!” the ringing voice repeated inside his head. With painful stiffness, he braced the ax’s head on the floorboards and pushed, drawing his body into a crouch over its wooden handle. He stood, swaying as he lurched to the blood-spattered door…Dragging the ax, he stumbled form the dwelling his stepfather had taken by force…”Run!” said the voice again in his mind, and Gaelin nodded, grasping at last the highly polished wood of his staff,,,”No one can take you from me, now,” he addressed it, recalling how his mother had told him the heirloom’s name the day she had died. “Mornius’….’
A very brief synopsis offers the outline of the adventure –‘Gaelin's staff talks to him. It saved his life. And now, it demands service. The cities are burning on Thalus. Gaelin wants to be a hero, and yet . . .The power of the enemy grows mighty. Gaelin must decide—to resist or submit. Either way, his life will never be the same again. Only one choice can save the world. But which one is right?’
Diane E. Steinbach enters the literary world with a very fine novel that promises a solid career in her new chosen field. The book is lengthy but reads rapidly due to the excellent momentum of the story. Recommended.
Pacific Northwest author Diane E. Steinbach makes her writing debut with a novel many years in the gestation and the result is a fresh view of fantasy adventure fiction. Noting that this novel is Book One of a series she calls The Talenkai Chronicles encourages the reader to gain entry into all the aspects of her fantasy world in preparation for what appears to be a worthy journey.
Whether or not a projected fantasy novel is able to create new world with characters with whom we can identify is key to the success of the opening work. Diane satisfies this credential with an opening that establishes not only her lead character but also the projected direction in which the story will progress. And she accomplishes this with fine quality prose.
‘Dazed, Gaelin examined his hands. His knees were folded to the side where he sat, the red pool widening across the floor. He slanted his gaze to the ax in his lap, the rivulets of blood sliding along the edge of the weapon he cradled. The silence dragger out while he gaped at the wreckage his fury had made in the little room…”Gaelin, run!” the ringing voice repeated inside his head. With painful stiffness, he braced the ax’s head on the floorboards and pushed, drawing his body into a crouch over its wooden handle. He stood, swaying as he lurched to the blood-spattered door…Dragging the ax, he stumbled form the dwelling his stepfather had taken by force…”Run!” said the voice again in his mind, and Gaelin nodded, grasping at last the highly polished wood of his staff,,,”No one can take you from me, now,” he addressed it, recalling how his mother had told him the heirloom’s name the day she had died. “Mornius’….’
A very brief synopsis offers the outline of the adventure –‘Gaelin's staff talks to him. It saved his life. And now, it demands service. The cities are burning on Thalus. Gaelin wants to be a hero, and yet . . .The power of the enemy grows mighty. Gaelin must decide—to resist or submit. Either way, his life will never be the same again. Only one choice can save the world. But which one is right?’
Diane E. Steinbach enters the literary world with a very fine novel that promises a solid career in her new chosen field. The book is lengthy but reads rapidly due to the excellent momentum of the story. Recommended.
April 15, 2021
This was an excellent book from start to finish! It started off quick and reeled my interest right in from page one. I actually made the mistake of starting this in the evening and had such a hard time putting it down that I stayed up way too late. It was worth it.
I loved following the tale of Avalar. She begins her story with a simple want to help people and learn what she can. I loved how she would help anyone who crossed her path, but would do so with a cautious eye. She was never stupid in how she acted, yet she was a novice in fighting and being on her own. She had such a strength about her that made her just blossom throughout the story. She was caring, strong, smart, and should have her own series in my opinion. When her story merged with Gaelin’s is when I really got sucked in. Watching their friendship grow against the odds made for a great story.
I really appreciated that every single character in this book had flaws. Not one was perfect. Something I’ve seen other fantasy writers fall into is having their main character remain flawless. They’re never tired, never weak. They never fail to come through when needed and they never loose a fight. That gets old and it’s unrealistic, so it tends to ruin the story for me. These characters all brought their own strengths to the table, but also their flaws and I feel like this only aided the story. Overall, I can’t wait to read more from this author.
I loved following the tale of Avalar. She begins her story with a simple want to help people and learn what she can. I loved how she would help anyone who crossed her path, but would do so with a cautious eye. She was never stupid in how she acted, yet she was a novice in fighting and being on her own. She had such a strength about her that made her just blossom throughout the story. She was caring, strong, smart, and should have her own series in my opinion. When her story merged with Gaelin’s is when I really got sucked in. Watching their friendship grow against the odds made for a great story.
I really appreciated that every single character in this book had flaws. Not one was perfect. Something I’ve seen other fantasy writers fall into is having their main character remain flawless. They’re never tired, never weak. They never fail to come through when needed and they never loose a fight. That gets old and it’s unrealistic, so it tends to ruin the story for me. These characters all brought their own strengths to the table, but also their flaws and I feel like this only aided the story. Overall, I can’t wait to read more from this author.
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March 18, 2019
As Song of Mornius: Book One of The Talenkai Chronicles begins, so does the driving force of Gaelin and Avalar’s adventure. Diane E. Steinbach records their quest seeking for peace and answers. Only to find they are being compelled by Earth gems, which are being overseen by Ponu a mighty Elven wizard. But there are other Earth gems that have wardens also; they don’t seek peace and healing and they also know about Mornius, Gaelin’s staff. Centered on Gaelin and the importance he and his staff plays in the world's outcome, this makes for an enticing fantasy.
Full of magic and mystical creatures, Song of Mornius is the first novel I have found by Diane E. Steinbach. Rich in characters and places, this novel showcases the author’s imagination and depth of language. It was fun reading this novel as it changes the reader with a unique plot and unlikely characters. I am looking forward to reading more from this author.
Full of magic and mystical creatures, Song of Mornius is the first novel I have found by Diane E. Steinbach. Rich in characters and places, this novel showcases the author’s imagination and depth of language. It was fun reading this novel as it changes the reader with a unique plot and unlikely characters. I am looking forward to reading more from this author.
March 18, 2019
Song of Mornius (The Talenkai Chronicles #1) by Diane E. Steinbach is a riveting first entry into this series. If you are looking for the perfect fantasy style story, this book is spot on. With a heady opening scene, the main character Gaelin is covered in blood, and the story gets off to a strong start. As he travels with his staff called Mornius, Gaelin must confront evil at every turn and trust his own wit and cunning. There are elves, gems, and all kinds of interesting characters that give this story depth and interest. Magical creatures and mystical places make this a unique book that is lovingly written by the author. It is up to Gaelin to save the world as he knows it. Along with a great plot line and magic, Steinbach has also kindly provided a map in the beginning of the book to help readers gain some knowledge about the geography of Thalus, setting the stage nicely. A strong recommendation for a magical book.
March 19, 2019
A new fantasy series from a new author. The premise that the main characters staff talks to him and then later turns around is demanding payment in return. Not something you normally get in fantasy books, so this was a nice new premise to see. The hero, Gaelin, starts this book with a powerful scene that leaves you wondering at first, what happened in the house with the axe? As the story gets underway, we are introduced to other characters who join Gaelin on his journey, like Terrek and Silva, who are just as complex as Gaelin himself.
I really liked this book, it had a compelling and complex story set in a big, wonderful and sometimes scary world full of hidden pleasures and dangers. The author did a great job on the development of the characters and how they interact with each other as well as the writing style she used in this book.
I really liked this book, it had a compelling and complex story set in a big, wonderful and sometimes scary world full of hidden pleasures and dangers. The author did a great job on the development of the characters and how they interact with each other as well as the writing style she used in this book.
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I won this book via Goodreads Giveaways.
I won this book via Goodreads Giveaways.
July 2, 2019
Excellent job world-building and creating compelling characters. Good balance of fun and suspense!
February 22, 2019
It's the Hero's Journey writ large with believable and relatable characters, a lush setting of a world where magic rules and humans are a remnant of a species cast down from the destruction of their own world, long ago. It's an epic journey through a sometimes hostile landscape, and unlikely friendships and allies, all joined together to defeat an ancient evil which threatens both the humans and the world they inhabit, full of twists and turns.
If you love epic fantasy, you'll enjoy this book. It is stand-alone--no cliff-hangers--but I look forward to more offerings from this author, nonetheless. This one's a keeper.
If you love epic fantasy, you'll enjoy this book. It is stand-alone--no cliff-hangers--but I look forward to more offerings from this author, nonetheless. This one's a keeper.
August 14, 2019
Excellent absolutely great read
Once begun hard to put down. The characters are easily visualized and Diane has created some very loveable ones. My favourite is Ponu. I would highly recommend this book and eagerly look forward to the sequel.
Once begun hard to put down. The characters are easily visualized and Diane has created some very loveable ones. My favourite is Ponu. I would highly recommend this book and eagerly look forward to the sequel.
July 11, 2021
Diane E. Steinbach’s ‘Song of Mornius: Book One of The Talenkai Chronicles” is a gorgeously written, beautifully plotted, gripping fantasy novel that captivated me from the very first page. This book is lengthy but well worth the time spent reading it because the story is intricately crafted (and on a refreshing note, it was clearly edited and proofread!).
Steinbach perfectly crafted the believable world of Thalus, relatable characters, and snappy and sophisticated dialogue. The plot is easy to understand, and I found it to be paced well; there were no fluffy or irrelevant passages. Details of the towns and terrains, as well as maps, are provided – I appreciate this so much, as it adds to the believability of the story.
The reader is immediately introduced to the protagonist, Gaelin Lavahl. He has just murdered a man, and the scene is described in precise detail. The reader immediately sympathizes with Gaelin, as the crime seems justified. The story is told from this character’s point of view.
Gaelin, who appears to have a magical staff, is strongly urged to run away following the murder. The staff, which once belonged to his father, has a gem embedded in it. This is Mornius, and Gaelin only knows how powerful the energy emitted is – he’s still not quite sure what Mornius is capable of!
Gaelin, who has been living in a barn, runs from the place where he has been held captive for nineteen years. He arrives in a nearby town, which is ultimately destroyed by an army led by Erebos. Gaelin quickly becomes friends with a man, Terrek, who recognizes the staff. Gaelin saves his life, and later he is then recruited to an army - which battles flying demons!
There is a parallel storyline off the coast of Thalus that involves a giant who is looking for a sword. There is an elf who believes that she and Gaelin should join forces to save Thalus from the dark army – who ultimately wants to rid the land of the elves.
I am excited to read the next installment in this series. You will not be disappointed by Steinbach’s fantastically written tale, and I think you’ll be hooked and excited for the next book in the series, as I am!
Steinbach perfectly crafted the believable world of Thalus, relatable characters, and snappy and sophisticated dialogue. The plot is easy to understand, and I found it to be paced well; there were no fluffy or irrelevant passages. Details of the towns and terrains, as well as maps, are provided – I appreciate this so much, as it adds to the believability of the story.
The reader is immediately introduced to the protagonist, Gaelin Lavahl. He has just murdered a man, and the scene is described in precise detail. The reader immediately sympathizes with Gaelin, as the crime seems justified. The story is told from this character’s point of view.
Gaelin, who appears to have a magical staff, is strongly urged to run away following the murder. The staff, which once belonged to his father, has a gem embedded in it. This is Mornius, and Gaelin only knows how powerful the energy emitted is – he’s still not quite sure what Mornius is capable of!
Gaelin, who has been living in a barn, runs from the place where he has been held captive for nineteen years. He arrives in a nearby town, which is ultimately destroyed by an army led by Erebos. Gaelin quickly becomes friends with a man, Terrek, who recognizes the staff. Gaelin saves his life, and later he is then recruited to an army - which battles flying demons!
There is a parallel storyline off the coast of Thalus that involves a giant who is looking for a sword. There is an elf who believes that she and Gaelin should join forces to save Thalus from the dark army – who ultimately wants to rid the land of the elves.
I am excited to read the next installment in this series. You will not be disappointed by Steinbach’s fantastically written tale, and I think you’ll be hooked and excited for the next book in the series, as I am!
April 3, 2019
this book was awesome… entertaining to read and extremely well-written. Familiar, yet still original… Describing it is a hard task! So much happens, and all sorts of dynamic characters, and a terrific mix of fantasy, adventure, swordplay, alliances and enemies, and a dangerous journey in a dark, gritty world with realistic characters who you believe in – even though they are ‘fantastical’. While it was easy to get sucked into this world that Diane Steinbach created, premise-wise I did think the beginning started off kind of slow until I got more of a feel about this new world and the characters and their storylines – the chapters are told from several different character perspectives who alternate, so there is a bit of ‘getting to know them’ and their backstory/functions in the first part. But the chapters are short and focused, and it really picks up steam as we roll along. SO many surprising twists and turns I always wanted to know what was going to happen next. I did question the need to have just so many characters. Most were great, but some I have no idea their function or any sense of identity or just confused me with their identities/powers/alliance. Even a character list at the end would have maybe helped, but maybe it’s just me. I liked rooting for Gaelin and co, and watching his character develop and change (sometimes in quite unexpected ways!!) The world-building here was so deliciously original and descriptive… absolutely essential for a quality, believable fantasy, and with solid prose that was both literary and realistically rugged. I love how it is told mostly all in dialogue—not a lot of narration here which can kill the pacing of an epic. Overall a really entertaining journey that has few weaknesses and I am definitely invested and want to see where this all goes next. Recommend for fantasy fans who want a powerful, original, literary epic fantasy with dynamic characters and an enjoyable storyline. 4 1/2 stars
February 22, 2021
Song of Mornius: Book One of The Talenkai Chronicles is a well-conceived, impressively plotted, unique fantasy story that holds one’s attention to the very last page. The book has graceful prose that glide the story along well and explains the world that the reader enters very clearly and concisely. In addition to this, the world that the characters in the tale occupy, is a truly singular one that it is interesting to enter and observe. Furthermore, it is a great credit to the author’s inventive imagination that she was able to conjure such an intriguing, one of kind, yet relatable place. The plot also unfolds at a balanced pace that makes it easy to follow, has unexpected but credible turns, and concludes in a way that is well thought out. However, arguably, the novel’s best feature is its expertly constructed, three-dimensional characters. No more is this more evident than in Song of Mornius's protagonist, Galin Lavahl. He is a complex, complicated creation who commits what one might say is the ultimate sin at the beginning of the novel, yet there is reason to see that the act and that which it derives from and that follows it, to be justifiable. Moreover, it is fun to follow the journey that the story takes through his eyes.
Although Song of Mornius contains a great many strengths, it does have one weakness. Namely, at the book’s beginning it is somewhat difficult to fully understand what is transpiring since it is set in such a fantastical world. But, that problem does get rectified as the story progresses, so it is not too much of a deficiency. In other words, it does not take away from the assets of Song of Mornius in any significant way.
Thus, if you like fantasy stories like Lord of The Rings, you will love Song of Mornius. If you like books with an escapist quality that you can get lost in, you are almost sure to like it. Or if merely you have an appreciation for good storytelling, it is a near certainty that you will enjoy this. I definitely did.
Although Song of Mornius contains a great many strengths, it does have one weakness. Namely, at the book’s beginning it is somewhat difficult to fully understand what is transpiring since it is set in such a fantastical world. But, that problem does get rectified as the story progresses, so it is not too much of a deficiency. In other words, it does not take away from the assets of Song of Mornius in any significant way.
Thus, if you like fantasy stories like Lord of The Rings, you will love Song of Mornius. If you like books with an escapist quality that you can get lost in, you are almost sure to like it. Or if merely you have an appreciation for good storytelling, it is a near certainty that you will enjoy this. I definitely did.
October 1, 2019
A Very on The Move Fantasy Novel That Is Filled with Action and Adventure!
Format: Kindle Edition
Song of Mornius: Book One of the Talenchai Chronicles by Diane E. Steinbach is genuinely a fantastic read from start to finish. The reason being that it is an epic book. It thoroughly covers all of the bases that the reader is looking for in an exciting work of fiction. Song of Mornius is filled with not only lots of action and adventure but much more. It is all about interesting characters that make the story live and come to life with every word within its pages. It is a debut novel for the author, but at the same time, is a book that can go on to become other stories. The character of Gaelin is not only exciting but captivating in that he is seeking to find himself.
Gaelin Lavahl fights hard to get his freedom back. However, what he is made to confront much harder is his sense of redemption after he kills someone. It is an action that leaves him feeling distraught and lost entirely. Not only does Gaelin have to tend with his self in his heart. He also has to combat another evil. The evil is in the form of a deadly cult that is destroying lots of cities. Will Gaelin become a hero? He is, after all, skinny and just a peasant boy in the description.
Nonetheless, when his mother gives him a one of a kind staff named Mornius, he knows he is destined to do great things. It is because the staff talks to him. Will he save his world from an evil that is out to destroy everything? Gaelin’s hero journey is one that is enthralling and captures the imagination.
Song of Mornius has all the necessary ingredients that make a fantasy novel stand out. But more than that, the reader will be satisfied with the reading in every way, because it is a book that is unique and has its own exceptional style.
November 7, 2020
Song of Mornius is a fantasy story that takes place in the land of Thalus. Maps of the towns and terrain are provided at the beginning of the book to assist the reader. As the story begins, a young man named Gaelin wakes up in a small cabin where a murder has recently taken place. A voice speaks to Gaelin and tells him to "run"! He goes to the barn where he has been living and retrieves a hidden staff that once belonged to his father. This staff with a blueish gem is called "Mornius" and Gaelin has yet to discover what abilities it possesses. He then flees the land where he has been enslaved for the past nineteen years.
Gaelin reaches the nearest town of Kideran which is under the control of an army that is commanded by a dark and mysterious leader named Erebos. Gaelin soon befriends a man named Terrek who recognizes the Mornius staff. After Gaelin uses the staff to save the life of Terrek, they form an alliance and Gaelin is recruited to help fight against the dach army which consist of flying demons.
Meanwhile, off the coast of Thalus, a giant named Avalar has sailed from her homeland of Hothra in search of a mythical sword called "The Redeemer". She is saved by an elder winged-Elf named Ponu who believes that Avalar and Gaelin could be the heroes who save Thalus from Erebos and his dark forces who want to eradicate all of the Elves and their white magic.
This is a very fun read for fans of the fantasy genre. Steinbach is a talented writer. The story is complex and the characters are brought to life through their actions and thoughts. I especially enjoyed the chapters that involved Avalar and the Elf villages. There is also very nice artwork throughout the story.
Gaelin reaches the nearest town of Kideran which is under the control of an army that is commanded by a dark and mysterious leader named Erebos. Gaelin soon befriends a man named Terrek who recognizes the Mornius staff. After Gaelin uses the staff to save the life of Terrek, they form an alliance and Gaelin is recruited to help fight against the dach army which consist of flying demons.
Meanwhile, off the coast of Thalus, a giant named Avalar has sailed from her homeland of Hothra in search of a mythical sword called "The Redeemer". She is saved by an elder winged-Elf named Ponu who believes that Avalar and Gaelin could be the heroes who save Thalus from Erebos and his dark forces who want to eradicate all of the Elves and their white magic.
This is a very fun read for fans of the fantasy genre. Steinbach is a talented writer. The story is complex and the characters are brought to life through their actions and thoughts. I especially enjoyed the chapters that involved Avalar and the Elf villages. There is also very nice artwork throughout the story.
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September 4, 2021A Fantastical and Wonderful Tale! A Must Read Fantasy Book!!
I have never read any books from this author, however, this book was very interesting from the beginning to the end. This book had a lot of suspense in it, which I truly like when reading books such as this one. This is a new fantasy series from a new author, and they did a excellent job writing it. This book is not something that you normally would read when it comes to fantasy books, so this was a nice new premise to see. In this book, the hero Gaelin, starts the book off with a powerful scene that leaves the reader wondering at first, what happened in the house with the axe? The author brought a lot of vivid imagination to this story, and incorporated the characters in this story as well. With this being said, the reader is introduced to the protagonist, Gaelin Lavahl. The characters in the book are amazing and go well with the story. The reader immediately sympathize with Gaelin, who is the main character of this book, and tells the story from there point of view. I'm not to much of a fan of fantasy books, however, this one changed my point of view on reading fantasy books. The author helped me to understand what I wss reading and even with their vivid and detailed writing it also helped me to stay engaged in the book as well. The storyline is great and I applaud this new author for sharing such a awesome book as well. I am excited to read the next series of this book to see what else the author has in store. I can honestly say that you will not be disappointed with the purchase of this book, nor reading this book at all. I really think you will be hooked and excited for the next book in the series, as I am excited to continue reading the series.
I have never read any books from this author, however, this book was very interesting from the beginning to the end. This book had a lot of suspense in it, which I truly like when reading books such as this one. This is a new fantasy series from a new author, and they did a excellent job writing it. This book is not something that you normally would read when it comes to fantasy books, so this was a nice new premise to see. In this book, the hero Gaelin, starts the book off with a powerful scene that leaves the reader wondering at first, what happened in the house with the axe? The author brought a lot of vivid imagination to this story, and incorporated the characters in this story as well. With this being said, the reader is introduced to the protagonist, Gaelin Lavahl. The characters in the book are amazing and go well with the story. The reader immediately sympathize with Gaelin, who is the main character of this book, and tells the story from there point of view. I'm not to much of a fan of fantasy books, however, this one changed my point of view on reading fantasy books. The author helped me to understand what I wss reading and even with their vivid and detailed writing it also helped me to stay engaged in the book as well. The storyline is great and I applaud this new author for sharing such a awesome book as well. I am excited to read the next series of this book to see what else the author has in store. I can honestly say that you will not be disappointed with the purchase of this book, nor reading this book at all. I really think you will be hooked and excited for the next book in the series, as I am excited to continue reading the series.
January 11, 2021
Song of Mornius
Fantastical, complex, riveting and soul probing.
There were so many aspects of fantasy, complex characters and situations and cruelty that I found myself feeling an array of emotions.
The book was set on another planet. There were Elves and Giants and Humans that were the main protagonists with energetic entities battling to overtake them.
At times it felt like the battles with mankind struggling to fit in a society of people who have different beliefs and customs, yet must work together to overcome evil.
I enjoyed how the author portrayed someone that could do heinous actions while being influence by outer demons and forgiveness can be attained both from within and from those who were harmed.
The story was so vividly described physically and emotionally. Sometimes I had to stop reading to just take in all the nuances of the metaphors and the reflection of humanity in all our aspects of evil to heroic.
Especially heartwrenching was the beginning, of a boy forced to choose between doing something that he knew was wrong over continuing to be abused and broken. Then the journey of coming to terms with the morality of one's actions and how to believe in self redemption. That felt like the theme from the different perspectives of the main characters throughout the story.
I enjoyed the history of gems energies and sources being utilized and being taken to mountain caves throughout many years in the form of ancestor memories. It was tied to the present to make sense of the necessity of giving oneself to the battle on the emotional and physical fronts despite great desire to give in and let go of life.
Fantastical, complex, riveting and soul probing.
There were so many aspects of fantasy, complex characters and situations and cruelty that I found myself feeling an array of emotions.
The book was set on another planet. There were Elves and Giants and Humans that were the main protagonists with energetic entities battling to overtake them.
At times it felt like the battles with mankind struggling to fit in a society of people who have different beliefs and customs, yet must work together to overcome evil.
I enjoyed how the author portrayed someone that could do heinous actions while being influence by outer demons and forgiveness can be attained both from within and from those who were harmed.
The story was so vividly described physically and emotionally. Sometimes I had to stop reading to just take in all the nuances of the metaphors and the reflection of humanity in all our aspects of evil to heroic.
Especially heartwrenching was the beginning, of a boy forced to choose between doing something that he knew was wrong over continuing to be abused and broken. Then the journey of coming to terms with the morality of one's actions and how to believe in self redemption. That felt like the theme from the different perspectives of the main characters throughout the story.
I enjoyed the history of gems energies and sources being utilized and being taken to mountain caves throughout many years in the form of ancestor memories. It was tied to the present to make sense of the necessity of giving oneself to the battle on the emotional and physical fronts despite great desire to give in and let go of life.
April 3, 2019
I read a lot of fantasy books, so this is a genre I am familiar with. But I’ve been suffering high/epic fantasy burnout as of late as to me it all is feeling the same these days… too many “Game of Thrones” wanna-bees or “Lord of the Rings” ripoffs. But the description for “The Song of Mornius” by Diane E. Steinbach was intriguing (although it doesn’t do this incredible book justice, in my opinion) and included some themes that I like. So I decided to give it a shot. My reaction?... WOW. Diane E. Steinbach is unquestionably a very talented writer, but more than that she genuinely impressed me with her thorough world-building and ingenuity on many levels. All too often I read works that feel clearly derivative of other books, and although I appreciate literary influences (as is felt here on occasion as well) when something this fresh-feeling and fun comes along it is a nice change of pace! Ms. Steinbach writes with a contagious energy that thrusts this epic adventure forward from the opening paragraph. For a book that is so long, the time flew by and I was at the end before I knew it! And with writing that is so evocative and descriptive, I felt like I was watching a movie. I liked several of the characters – Gaelin, Terrek, Ponu, Felrina and the others are really good, but my favorite was Avalar. Perfect editing and the ending is satisfying – wraps it all up well but certainly leaves room for the sequel which I can’t wait to read! Highly recommend for fans of epic high fantasy, adventure, action.
May 9, 2020
“I don't know how, but you must hide this again before he sees it. No matter what happens, never let that bastard or his sons near it. Promise me!”
Those last words spoke to Gaelin by his mother race through his mind as he races from his family farm covered in his stepfather's blood. Gaelin had just killed the man who murdered his mother right in front of him and hears her words as he races to turn himself in to the council to receive his punishment. When he stumbles unto an adventure that leads him on a journey of war, giants, and elves and defeating evil. Him finding the truth of who he truly is.
The story-line was very well written and unique and it is all of its own. I have to say that one of my most enjoyable sections is how the elves help protect the giants. Which in most books you find them as enemies. The unique ragtag of characters and the way the hero unfolds make it seem possible that anyone with their own unique calling can be a hero. Here is the one point I found most difficult. The beginning as very hard for me to get into in fact it took me three tries to get past it into chapter two. I felt I walked into a scene of a movie and had no understanding of what was going on. I did find the rest of the story very easy to read and I am glad I finally made myself move on to chapter two. I would recommend this to any fantasy reader out there. This is definitely an all-ages book and I think anyone can find themselves cheering, crying, and feeling for Gaelin as he moves along his journey. I am looking forward to the release of book two.
Those last words spoke to Gaelin by his mother race through his mind as he races from his family farm covered in his stepfather's blood. Gaelin had just killed the man who murdered his mother right in front of him and hears her words as he races to turn himself in to the council to receive his punishment. When he stumbles unto an adventure that leads him on a journey of war, giants, and elves and defeating evil. Him finding the truth of who he truly is.
The story-line was very well written and unique and it is all of its own. I have to say that one of my most enjoyable sections is how the elves help protect the giants. Which in most books you find them as enemies. The unique ragtag of characters and the way the hero unfolds make it seem possible that anyone with their own unique calling can be a hero. Here is the one point I found most difficult. The beginning as very hard for me to get into in fact it took me three tries to get past it into chapter two. I felt I walked into a scene of a movie and had no understanding of what was going on. I did find the rest of the story very easy to read and I am glad I finally made myself move on to chapter two. I would recommend this to any fantasy reader out there. This is definitely an all-ages book and I think anyone can find themselves cheering, crying, and feeling for Gaelin as he moves along his journey. I am looking forward to the release of book two.
August 12, 2020
Song of Mornius is the first book of the Talenkai Chronicles. This book primarily concerns the journey of Gaelin, a young human, who escapes bondage by murdering his step father and sets off on an epic quest to find his purpose. Gaelin has the staff of Mornius which his mother gave to him before she died at the hands of his enslaving step father. The staff is mysterious to Gaelin but seems to communicate with him telepathically and has great powers. The author creates a complex cosmology for the world of Talenkai through the stories of various beings such as elves and giants that intersect with Gaelin on his journey. We come to learn, through multiple character perspectives. that the staff of Mornius is inhabited by a 'Warder" who seeks to protect this world from the evil forces that threaten it. Slowly it is revealed that Talenkai might be a second chance for humans after the destruction of Earth in another intriguing layer of plot.
Then complexity of the world of Talenkai is both the book's biggest strength and potential weakness. Readers have to be willing to shift perspectives constantly and keep many beings and mythologies straight to fully follow the plot of this novel. Readers who enjoy the challenge of fantasy series like Tolkien's Lord of the Rings will be delighted with the Talenkai chronicles. This novel is not for readers who need a straight forward, single perspective, fast moving plot or who do not enjoy common fantasy tropes such as Elvish magic or complex histories of multiple beings.
Then complexity of the world of Talenkai is both the book's biggest strength and potential weakness. Readers have to be willing to shift perspectives constantly and keep many beings and mythologies straight to fully follow the plot of this novel. Readers who enjoy the challenge of fantasy series like Tolkien's Lord of the Rings will be delighted with the Talenkai chronicles. This novel is not for readers who need a straight forward, single perspective, fast moving plot or who do not enjoy common fantasy tropes such as Elvish magic or complex histories of multiple beings.
March 6, 2020
The novel Song of Mornius, by Diane E. Steinbach, is a true epic journey of the main character Gaelin. Gaelin is much like all unlikely heroes as he is parentless, scrawny, a peasant, and definitely not what you would picture from a great hero.
Interestingly,1 there are some unique illusions to biblical characters and dialogue. The magic staff he is given is a reminder to Moses and his staff with which he used to divide the Red Sea and save his people. Gaelin refers to the staff as “Father” which is very reminiscent of God the Father. His unimpressive build and humble background is similar to David in the story of David and Goliath. He also sleeps in the barn in a trough, which alludes to Christ’s birth in a manger. There are many more examples and I found this aspect to be quite entertaining.
The author did a wonderful job of making Gaelin a complex and realistic character who struggles with right and wrong in his journey. The other characters were well written as well. Also the setting came alive in majestic scenes full of creativity and color. The settings pop off the page and really immerse you in the surroundings that Gaelin experiences.
All on all, Song of Mornius is a great fantasy novel, that I highly recommend. It is the first in the series and not likely to disappoint. I did find it to be a bit long due to extensive content and the writers style, however, in order to make it a true epic novel, a decent length is needed.
Interestingly,1 there are some unique illusions to biblical characters and dialogue. The magic staff he is given is a reminder to Moses and his staff with which he used to divide the Red Sea and save his people. Gaelin refers to the staff as “Father” which is very reminiscent of God the Father. His unimpressive build and humble background is similar to David in the story of David and Goliath. He also sleeps in the barn in a trough, which alludes to Christ’s birth in a manger. There are many more examples and I found this aspect to be quite entertaining.
The author did a wonderful job of making Gaelin a complex and realistic character who struggles with right and wrong in his journey. The other characters were well written as well. Also the setting came alive in majestic scenes full of creativity and color. The settings pop off the page and really immerse you in the surroundings that Gaelin experiences.
All on all, Song of Mornius is a great fantasy novel, that I highly recommend. It is the first in the series and not likely to disappoint. I did find it to be a bit long due to extensive content and the writers style, however, in order to make it a true epic novel, a decent length is needed.
April 29, 2020
Great book. Loved it from the beginning. Started off with a lot of excitement and action. It was very descriptive at the beginning when Gaelin killed someone. It was awesome when poor Gaelin was in the tavern and there was fighting all around him, he was scared but all of a sudden he grew some courage deep within himself to help a man who became a, kind of, friend, someone who would help him, especially after Gaelin healed him with his staff, who is, strangely, named Mornius. Mornius helped Gaelin become the healer that he was meant to be. It seemed that it was destined that Gaelin's family were healers. The staff belonged to Gaelin's father and after he died the staff was inherited by Gaelin's mother and then when she died the staff became Gaelin's. It has magical properties to it and gives the owner or wielder a inherent power of healing.The book is quite long but that, for myself, is good because it gives more details about the characters and the scenes itself. I like the name of his staff, it reminds me of something out of a wizarding world like. Gaelin finds himself stressed out and distraught after killing someone at the beginning of the book but works hard at unguilting himself. I am hoping the author writes another book to continue after this one, because I thoroughly enjoyed this one. My favorite character out of all of them was definitely Gaelin, he has an inner strength that seems to shine through.
September 11, 2020
The author Diane Steinbach made the Song of Morinus seem intricate and interesting; the myth of how humans were transported to their present world because of earth’s destruction seemed a fascinating construct woven into the story. The little details like that seem to standout and work to set up the universe of the book, in that way. I found the story relatable to Mary Shelly’s Frankenstein; the present theme of ‘otherness’ presented as being different. I think a lot of readers could find value or relatability in that sort of concept, especially considering the treatment of Giants, Humans and Elves in the story. The main character, Gaelin, has a quirky story arc in which he gains confidence with the help of his friends as well as the staff of Mornius. For me, Song of Morinus felt easy to read for long periods of time as well as just a chapter, here or there, throughout the day. Most of the chapters are seemingly brief and quick to read through. The book has a healthy length to it at around 500 pages, so there is plenty of reading time in there. Steinbach did a great job of painting colorful scenes throughout her book; the ritualistic cult scene piqued my interest as well as many of the action scenes. I admittedly haven’t read many fantasy books, but this was a fun read to open me up to considering more fantasy works. I think the series would be great, I’m looking forward to reading the next one.
December 12, 2020
The Song of Mornius is a wonderful fantasy. The story takes place in the land of Thalus. There are maps at the beginning of the book to help us envision the area.
At the beginning of the story we meet Gaelin. He wakes up in a small cabin whare a murder has taken place. The scene painted is so powerful we wonder what happened in this house.
A voice tells Gaelin to run . He doesn’t hesitate and runs to the barn to retrieve a hidden staff that belonged to his father. This staff has a bluish gem at the top and is called Mornuis. Gaelin discovers the staff has a spirit trapped within the gem.
Gaelin flees with the staff and reaches the town of Kederan. This town is under the control of an army that is commanded by a mysterious leader named Erebos.
Here Gaelin meets Terrek. He uses his staff to save Terrek’s life. They form an alliance to fight against this army of demons.
Gaelin is destined to save his world from evil. As he learns how to use the magic within his staff, we see him begin to grow and mature into the hero he was destined to become.
This book is a long read, just the kind I like ! It grabs you from the first page and with complex characters it digs deep into their exploits.
The author, Diane E. Steinbach is very talented and has written a book with complexities and amazing characters.
This book is the first in a trilogy. I know after you read this, you’ll be as ready for the second as I am.
At the beginning of the story we meet Gaelin. He wakes up in a small cabin whare a murder has taken place. The scene painted is so powerful we wonder what happened in this house.
A voice tells Gaelin to run . He doesn’t hesitate and runs to the barn to retrieve a hidden staff that belonged to his father. This staff has a bluish gem at the top and is called Mornuis. Gaelin discovers the staff has a spirit trapped within the gem.
Gaelin flees with the staff and reaches the town of Kederan. This town is under the control of an army that is commanded by a mysterious leader named Erebos.
Here Gaelin meets Terrek. He uses his staff to save Terrek’s life. They form an alliance to fight against this army of demons.
Gaelin is destined to save his world from evil. As he learns how to use the magic within his staff, we see him begin to grow and mature into the hero he was destined to become.
This book is a long read, just the kind I like ! It grabs you from the first page and with complex characters it digs deep into their exploits.
The author, Diane E. Steinbach is very talented and has written a book with complexities and amazing characters.
This book is the first in a trilogy. I know after you read this, you’ll be as ready for the second as I am.
May 15, 2021
Song of Mornius: Book One of the Talenkai Chronicles by Diane E. Steinbach was an interesting read. When this book popped up in my suggestions I was intrigued by the title and the cover. They say never judge a book by its cover, but I think this one is an exception. The cover was as interesting as the book itself!
The whirlwind of adventure that this book takes you on starts right from the beginning with an opening scene that pulls you in and keeps you wanting to read more/ I had such a hard time putting this book down myself. The plot itself leads you down a road where you question your own decisions that you would make in the situation but ultimately leads the reader to the conclusion in my opinion that there is no black and white in the world. Every big moral decision you make can be sort of grey.
To me the fantasy world that the book set up felt something of a mix between Lord of the Rings and A Song of Fire and Ice. I absolutely love that kind of setting where it can take me out of my own reality for a little while and transport me to somewhere new and intriguing with surprises around every corner just like this book did with all its twists and turns. Defiantly a little bit of a longer read than what I am used to these days but in the end, it is worth it with the world and character building that the author does. I highly recommend this book if you are in the market for a new fantasy novel!
The whirlwind of adventure that this book takes you on starts right from the beginning with an opening scene that pulls you in and keeps you wanting to read more/ I had such a hard time putting this book down myself. The plot itself leads you down a road where you question your own decisions that you would make in the situation but ultimately leads the reader to the conclusion in my opinion that there is no black and white in the world. Every big moral decision you make can be sort of grey.
To me the fantasy world that the book set up felt something of a mix between Lord of the Rings and A Song of Fire and Ice. I absolutely love that kind of setting where it can take me out of my own reality for a little while and transport me to somewhere new and intriguing with surprises around every corner just like this book did with all its twists and turns. Defiantly a little bit of a longer read than what I am used to these days but in the end, it is worth it with the world and character building that the author does. I highly recommend this book if you are in the market for a new fantasy novel!
March 29, 2019
I’m actually very surprised by how much I loved this book! Fantastic fantasy adventure suitable for adults and mature teens. Although there are the common themes/elements present to make it a standard epic-fantasy… “Song of Mornius” is a stellar representation of high fantasy at its best! It’s not perfect (is any book?), but the story is deep and well-developed and truly takes you to another place where elves, Giants, magic wizards, evil does and more collide. But it really struck me as so much more due to the evolution of the characters and the fact that even for a fantasy the rules seemed to go out the window a few times and my jaw dropped more than once – usually involving Gaelin! And I like that we understand the title and the power of Mornius…. An interesting character to watch grow and come into his own powers. Diane Steinbach’s writing is so strong and the multi-layered plot is exciting and intelligent enough to really keep our interest the whole time – which is honestly saying a lot considering I got bored reading GOT! (Shhh, don’t tell). The ending is organic and realistic and ties up loose ends sufficiently, but at the same time, you are ready for more. The author notes she is working on the sequel and I will be sure to want to read it when she does - will be so interesting to see where she takes it next..
April 3, 2019
action-packed, excellently-written and immensely entertaining, “Song of Mornius” (Book One of the Talenkai Chronicles) from Diane E. Steinbach is an absolute must-read for fans George R.R. Martin, Rowling, Tolkien, Arthurian Legends, Mists of Avalon, etc. “Mornius” holds its own with an impressively well-crafted plot structure, and an exciting, varied cast of ‘colorful’ characters and plenty of drama and action and thrills to go around. There are some oft-used tropes here (as required with most standard fantasy), however, Ms. Steinbach did a remarkable job of bringing in a unique voice and making the story wholly her own, and giving it a special feel. I didn’t feel like I’d read this a dozen times before (which tends to frequently happen with debut fantasy authors, it seems), even though the set-up was somewhat familiar. It is long and with a huge, entertaining motley crew of characters…. Some who feel like mere names, others who feel like intimate friends. But an engrossing story with more complex subplots and layers than one would initially think –and I was impressed with the level of character development, especially with young Gaelin, but also with some others. Has a unique vibe of feeling almost mythological and modern at the same time. A great start to a promising series, and I am eager to get my hands on the next one. Recommend.
May 25, 2019
Song of Mornius: Book One Of The Talenkai Chronicles by Diane Steinbach is a fantasy novel set in a magical world of monsters and mayhem. Gaelin is a peasant who has just gone through a horrendous ordeal. Because of this, he is unsure of what he is in life. Is he really even himself anymore? A gift from his mother may be the one thing that is able to answer that question for him. She has given him a magical staff called Mornius which has a spirit trapped inside the gem on its handle. The spirit speaks to Gaelin and tells him that he is destined to stop evil in the world. As Gaelin deals with these thoughts, he comes across other characters like Avalar, a giantess who decides to help the human on his quest for inner and world wide peace. Along the way, their strength and courage will be tested as they face off against a horrifying enemy that seems impossible to stop.
Overall, this was a fantastic novel. The story has done a great job of setting the stage for the beginning of a long saga that will lead to the conclusion of the character's journey. The plot is great and the narrative is finely polished which results in a smooth read that is lots of fun. There are many characters that the reader will come across and each one is given a backstory that helps the reader to know who they are and their motives. Looking forward to the sequel to this awesome story.
Overall, this was a fantastic novel. The story has done a great job of setting the stage for the beginning of a long saga that will lead to the conclusion of the character's journey. The plot is great and the narrative is finely polished which results in a smooth read that is lots of fun. There are many characters that the reader will come across and each one is given a backstory that helps the reader to know who they are and their motives. Looking forward to the sequel to this awesome story.
August 20, 2019
Song of Mornius is a science fiction/fantasy book set in the world of Talenkai. We first met the protagonist Gaelin after he has just killed his step-father in self-defense. He is consumed with guilt over the death, and leaves his home begging to be punished. All throughout the book, readers learn what atrocities Gaelin’s step-father committed toward him as he was growing up including murdering his mother. The only thing that helped Gaelin cope was a staff possessing magical powers called Mornius that was given to him by his mother.
After leaving home, Gaelin meets Terreck and his group of men and decides to join them in the battle against Erebos and his “magic warped humans we call dachs”. Gaelin uses his staff to heal others; so he is able to help the men if injured in battle. Unfortunately, each time Gaelin heals someone, it makes his body weaker. Gaelin also fears, rightfully so, that Mornius may one day be stronger than him.
On the quest to destroy Erebos, Terreck, his men, and Gaelin met Avalar, a giant who also wants Erebos and his magic destroyed. She becomes very close with Gaelin even though they initially disagree over Mornius.
Song of Mornius has great characters! I love the giant Avalar and her determination and heart. It was a great, but long, read! Diane Steinbach is working on the next novel, and I look forward to reading it.
After leaving home, Gaelin meets Terreck and his group of men and decides to join them in the battle against Erebos and his “magic warped humans we call dachs”. Gaelin uses his staff to heal others; so he is able to help the men if injured in battle. Unfortunately, each time Gaelin heals someone, it makes his body weaker. Gaelin also fears, rightfully so, that Mornius may one day be stronger than him.
On the quest to destroy Erebos, Terreck, his men, and Gaelin met Avalar, a giant who also wants Erebos and his magic destroyed. She becomes very close with Gaelin even though they initially disagree over Mornius.
Song of Mornius has great characters! I love the giant Avalar and her determination and heart. It was a great, but long, read! Diane Steinbach is working on the next novel, and I look forward to reading it.
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