I think Danni_ljd said it best when describing this and any other story written by this author, "Look, it doesn’t have to be realistic, it just has to be OTT hot and OTT romantic. This is. It so, so SO is!"
What made this a more "realistic" MFM is that the two Jacks, both bonding over hellish upbringings, decided long ago that they were going to share everything, hard work, wealth and one woman. They had tried once before, going on a date with one woman, but she did not agree with their "philosophy," so when they see Mila for the first time, both of them sense an instant "fate" and act upon it. Mila, although very interested, allows social norms to influence her feelings and runs away. Well, the pair of Jacks didn't get to where they are financially by giving up...