Reid You know who I am. You know what I can do. I am a Billionaire. Yeah, you know everything! But you have no idea. I am the best. Get that straight There a few things in life I desire and I always get what I want You might have heard about me Forget what you heard But this is reality I want a new heir She is gorgeous My son hurt her He will pay for hurting a good girl And she will see what it means to have a real man...
I'm sorry but this book is truly awful. I've seen people say it need an editor, I don't know if it needs an editor or an exorcist! There's problems with punctuation, spelling, missing words, extra words that make no sense. The writing is immature, I've seen better stories written by 15 year olds. Basically this series of 41 yes FORTY-ONE "books" is just a money making scam. Every book has pretty much the same blurb, a lot exactly the same; You know who I am You know what I can do I’m a billionaire Smart Rich Attractive I many more things to Get your mind out of the gutter My son hurt her He will pay for her in an angel and she will know what it means to be with a real man. They are roughly 30 pages long for £2.30 each. I read this one and another one because they were free and so you don't have to. The two books are basically the same story, billionaire's son bullies virgin girlfriend who is a bigger girl. Boyfriends literally use the same insults in the different books, mainly around her size, needing to go on a diet and trying to bully her into sex. Meet the billionaire dad, they're tall, gorgeous, muscles for fun with big strong biceps and they have tattooed sleeves. The only difference in them is their eye colour. After a night of blissful passion he asks her to marry him and just happens to have a huge diamond ring just her size... He cuts off sons money, making him work from the ground up. Epilogue... surprise! She got pregnant the very first time they had sex. That's literally both books and I imagine the rest are pretty much the same. I'm going to do something I've never done before and give both books this same review. Honestly, there's so many good books you can get for the same price or even less if money is tight. £2.30 for 30 pages x 41, it's a total scam.
Lana is looking for the perfect man. But she knows that she has not found him in her current boyfriend, Tyler. Then he signs her up for a virgin auction. While they are arguing over this Tyler's dad, Reid hears everything. Reid disapproves of the way his son is treating Lana. So he bids on her so he can show her that there are still gentlemen left in the world. Then he does just that. Is this the beginning of a perfect relationship?
This book was okay. I couldn't put it down once I started reading it. There are some editing and grammatical errors throughout the book. I recommend this book to others who like older man younger woman books.
Well.. the story, writing and editing could be way better but other than that it's ok lol. The entire story is OTT... and that's really saying something with this genre. The ending re. Tyler is highly unlikely and as for her so-called friend, I wouldn't speak to her again if it was me.
This was a very short and interesting book and I just finished it before I went on to my next read. I have several of these in my want to get list and I will get them when I can as I do enjoy reading them.
I read most of the reviews and figured it can’t be that bad. Yeah it can. Our FMC can see the toxicity of her mother’s relationship with her stepdad, yet follows in the same path? Find that kinda strange. The dad at first introduces himself as Jack then suddenly within a page it switches to Reid. The boyfriend/son is a prick that signs his girlfriend up for a virginity auction on a bet and figures he’s dodging a bullet by letting someone else “break her in.”If you can overlook the surplus of spelling and grammatical errors along with the punctuation, the story does have some redeeming qualities which is why I gave it two stars instead of just one. At first I thought it was bad form for them to have sex in her boyfriend/his sons bed, but when Tyler came back with her roommate to have sex and found it already soiled, it was hilarious. Then, the roommate admits she’d rather be with the father too and walks out, that was great. It’s a very unbelievable, badly written, instalove age gap novella that has promise if they could clear out all the errors, rewrite the sex scenes (delete all the “her walls” and contradictory “thrust gently” stuff), and maybe give them more than one day for all this to transpire. It had a decent premise but poorly executed.
A short read about falling in love. Basically the girl has a boyfriend who is rich and thinks he can do anything. She is a curvy women that does not know why she is with this guy (neither do I). She meets his dad and apparently they fall in love with each other at first site. The boyfriend is a piece of S(&^. I don't know if I would continue this series though. There are 36 books in the series all no more than 60 pages
I love how dad didn't mess around after he took Tyler's girlfriend and made her his. He made sure that he got nothing from the auction and that money went to Lana, who was to become his wife. Shana was using Tyler because she wanted Reid, but to her surprise, he was engaged to Lana. He put Tyler on notice that he was going to work in the factory from the ground up, and Shana ran off. Great payback.
Lana was a big beautiful woman who had a boyfriend Tyler who belittled her then entered her into an auction for her virginity. Reid was Tyler's father and was unhappy about how his son treated his girlfriend who he was attracted to. Readers should enjoy this book which is short, sweet and sassy. I heartily recommend this book.
It's been a long time since I've left a one star rating but good grief! This reads like it was written on a napkin during a boring class at school. Both the main characters sound like they're thirteen years old and neither has anything resembling depth. Luckily it was a free e-book but I'm not sorry to not be picking a book by this author again.
I loved this book!! It was a great fun read. I had to cheer for this girl who loved this older guy. Personal experience, age gap relationships are great!!! Try it!! I can guarantee that it's the best thing. Great book, great author.
This author found a plot line she likes and has stuck with it, one star for all her stories if you’ve read one you’ve read them all. No, seriously read one and they’re all the same. Please hire a person to fix up your stories.
Overall a good story. Love me a HEA. Edit misses did make it a challenge at times for my head to figure out what was being said. I did make it through and will probably read more of this author’s short stories.
A fun, quick read with hot sex & everybody getting what's best for them. A tough lesson is learned and each character goes on to live their best life helping others.
I would never try to knock someone's hustle, or stomp on a dream. Becoming an author can be very scary, and it takes courage, drive, and determination to write and publish a book. You're essentially opening yourself up to either criticism or praise of something that you created from the depths of your imagination. With that being said, this book is in desperate need of an editor and proofreader. I taught high school English Lit for 15 years, and I don't remember ever grading creative writing assignments with as many errors as this story. While the basic idea of the plot was a workable one, the execution of it just didn't work for me.
And I don't want to be harsh, but the writing was extremely juvenile. I think the author has some good things going plot wise, and she has so much potential in writing sexy scenes, but the story was not written very well. The dialogue was awkward and uncomfortable to read. I knew it was a short book, so I didn't mind finishing it. If the author went back and reworked the book, then got it to an editor and proofreader, I'd be willing to check it out again after the improvements. Keep in mind, I'm only one reviewer. Others may actually like the book. However, (as of right now) its a "no" for me.