25% DNF
You know I almost asked for my money back, then I remembered that I got a free sample from Kindle. What could be said about this book that hasn’t been said about the War on Iraq? Well for one it’s a fucking mess from the start, and mind you that’s just me stopping at the sample pages and not buying the damn thing. Now I know this seems like a hate review, but not really as I like and ONLY like Ms. Frames Werewolf series. However, despite reviewing her other books; I often try not to be bias with her other works despite the trash heaps that she puts out on the regular basis.
Now I know she does the Butch/Fem pairings but really? Don’t you think that the noble butch and the weak ass femme line is getting old? Speaking of old, Penny is a complete knock-off Paris Hilton in the early 2000’s if she were British. I’ve spoke to a person on this site who commented on this exact book, as she said there was something out of place when it came to the flow of the characters. However, I found the answer what makes the book so hard to keep up with when it comes to the characters, and it’s the lack of soul.
Reading Ms. Frames books, it’s become clear that she takes molds of people that she’s seen on TV or from other books of her favorite lesbian authors, and she changes their names and slaps a weak ass overused plot on them.
Now on the characters, I really couldn’t stand Penny in this book the “mummy” thing has me beyond creeped out. Also, the book was so British sounding it made me think I was in a fucking Mary Poppins movie AGAIN. The writing was terrible, as it didn’t convey an emotion just hollow determination from Penny herself. Penny is so dead set on re-building an empire and hiding her Epilepsy that it makes the motivation lack in sagacity; and since Frames world is built like a perfect pony ride, it makes for an unfulfilled conflict when it comes to Penny’s Epilepsy and her struggles with it.
Case and point, in Frames books all her women are in positions of power; they’re rich, of nobility and they’re all out and proud lesbians. I feel like if Jenny Frames world is tolerant of females in power, how could they not be when it comes to Penny and her Epilepsy? To me Penny being ashamed of her Epilepsy in what seems to be a pretty tolerant world of Jenny’s making; renders her conflict with it to be useless, and it’s not based on the reality we live in today. I know if a person on tv were to have the same issue as Penny in real life, people would be sympathetic to the issue.
The only thing that saves her from this poorly executed conflict, is the fact that she has represented Epilepsy in her books something not many people do. It is one of the few things I like about Frame as she is always exploring learning disabilities in her books. Like I’ve said it’s a good highlight to representation, but often with her its poorly executed and untracked through-out the books as you read it more down the line. Then there was the issue with Penny’s attitude, as she was such a jackass that I had to take an extra week to finish the sample.
As for Quade, she is the perfect Mary-Sue character which tends to be an issue with all of Frame’s butch characters no matter the book you read. It seems like she relies on Mary-Sue characters to solve out the day with love. All Jenny Frame’s butches take on the role of perfect, noble, and patient gentlemen and that gets fucking annoying fast. Personally, I’m not a fan of the bitch turned lover in my books, as it points out to readers and society that you have to be an asshole to people to get rewarded with unconditional love. However, that’s what it seems like with Quade and Penny’s relationship; it’s this attitude that makes me scream at the book in a blinding rage. It makes me wanna knock Penny upside her head. Like you being ashamed of your Epilepsy Penny doesn’t qualify you to be an asshole to people.
I’ve never read her other books in this series; but it seems like its pretty much the same so I’m going to hold my breath when it comes to reading them, as there is no way in hell I’m going to track this mess. Now for my final word on this book, it seems like a half-assed fan-fiction novel. So, for me I’ll just wait to pirate it because I’m not spending my money on this crap, maybe after I read the whole thing maybe my rating might change, but I highly doubt it.