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Born Of Sin
The future can’t hold back the past.
Octavia Vail was unaware of her life before being found on a barren Connecticut road as a young child. The locals were shocked that she only spoke Latin and at the dead greenery and livestock around her. Her only possession, a mysterious ring, may have something to do with it. And when the ring’s crest matches a picture of a man who lived centuries ago, Octavia knows she must find out more about him.
Victor Logan Marchette, a vampire who’s lived for over 600 years, is the CEO of a Philadelphia hospital that deals with blood diseases. The first 200 years of his life are a mystery to him, but he’ll soon find out the horrifying reason why. Meanwhile, Octavia begins work as a nurse in the same hospital, and the sparks with Victor begin to fly.
But Victor is betrothed to another, a vampire from a wild clan, under the orders of the vampires’ governing body, Cabalistis. And when vampires in both clans discover Octavia’s presence – and the hidden danger she represents -- it’s all-out war.
Born of Sin is the first in a thrilling paranormal romance series. In a world of darkness and strife, the light of love is all that stands against it. And even for the most hardened vampires, that light… is the true meaning of eternity.
*A re-release of Blood Thirst, An Eternal Romance, and a sneak peek of Book 2.
Octavia Vail was unaware of her life before being found on a barren Connecticut road as a young child. The locals were shocked that she only spoke Latin and at the dead greenery and livestock around her. Her only possession, a mysterious ring, may have something to do with it. And when the ring’s crest matches a picture of a man who lived centuries ago, Octavia knows she must find out more about him.
Victor Logan Marchette, a vampire who’s lived for over 600 years, is the CEO of a Philadelphia hospital that deals with blood diseases. The first 200 years of his life are a mystery to him, but he’ll soon find out the horrifying reason why. Meanwhile, Octavia begins work as a nurse in the same hospital, and the sparks with Victor begin to fly.
But Victor is betrothed to another, a vampire from a wild clan, under the orders of the vampires’ governing body, Cabalistis. And when vampires in both clans discover Octavia’s presence – and the hidden danger she represents -- it’s all-out war.
Born of Sin is the first in a thrilling paranormal romance series. In a world of darkness and strife, the light of love is all that stands against it. And even for the most hardened vampires, that light… is the true meaning of eternity.
*A re-release of Blood Thirst, An Eternal Romance, and a sneak peek of Book 2.
223 pages, Kindle Edition
Published October 1, 2018
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About the author
Deanna Richmond
5 books14 followersDeanna was born in Long Island, New York where she lived most of her life but now resides in Colorado. As a young child, she spent many Saturdays in the library nurturing her love for books.
Deanna attended New York Institute of Technology nursing program. There, she received a Bachelors in Nursing of Science. She also has an Associates in Math & Science and is certified in Forensic Nursing. After many years of working in hospitals and travel nursing, she took time off from work to pursue a career in writing. She also writes under the pen name of Dormaine G.
Deanna attended New York Institute of Technology nursing program. There, she received a Bachelors in Nursing of Science. She also has an Associates in Math & Science and is certified in Forensic Nursing. After many years of working in hospitals and travel nursing, she took time off from work to pursue a career in writing. She also writes under the pen name of Dormaine G.
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June 18, 2018
I’d recommend this....
I’m not sure what I’d call this, kinda a romance,I mean sex and love that will become love but I can’t really call it love when most of the relationship is a dirty hidden secret for just about the whole book a by the time the MC’s are finally getting to know each other ,truly ,the book is ending....
Not a cliffhanger per say,but basically....l
Honestly this felt like more of a weird sorta prequel to me than anything else .....
These two had an amazing chemistry that had me wishing I were the h at times,picture it, your in a semi private library with his sense the man you desire could show up any minute...
You almost feel like he’s there watching you already,the little hairs on the back of your neck start to feel something is amiss,.. Next thing you know his arms are around you from behind and before you have a chance to register what is going on he’s spun you around ... back against a book case,books digging into your back,though you barely notice... before you can blink,he shoves two fingers inside you,knowing just what you need.... then just as your about to explode ,he kisses you and says he’ll see you later tonight ... be ready...
Wow...
Ok, sure I’d have wanted to smack him some where hard and pain for winding me up and walking away but theses two were Hot...
Only thing was one minute hot scorching 🔥 passion,next chapters where Hess trying to push her away our of fear and or mistrust or she’s trying to fight the urge to do the same....
All the while they aren’t really building a relationship or a romance because when ever they get together once they start is just combustible passion, both too fearful to ask questions or offer information....
Neither understand their intense drawn to one another soo honestly , the first quarterly the book is building Octavia’s backstory,then the majority is the two of them coming together in blazing 🔥 passion,then running and hiding ,wanting fight their feelings ,trying to also fight their mutual mistrust and fear and the last 5-10% of the book is truths about them both being finally revealed but only to Victor/Nikolai ,while Octavia walks away with him at the end “maybe “ having a clue about things but not really....
Honestly I don’t know how I feel about this ,yeah I liked it but the story felt more about a bigger picture about Victor’s past and the ppl/creatures who have been manipulating him for centuries ... these evil “Cabalists”? And what ever rotten machinations they’ve been using Victor to carry out then romance....
I liked this because of the chemistry and the passion that,
Leapt off the screen to me but while I admire the hard work and imagination I see went into this, I don’t like the feeling of not knowing what this really is ....
Octavia felt more like 21-22 to 24 at the most definitely not 28 and despite her past there doesn’t really seem to be a reason for her to be a Virgin when she has sex with Victor the first time....
And despite the passion and all the equally passionate to declarations of how they can’t live with out each other,this just felt off because despite their need for each other their “relationship “ was only sex.... their never really got to know each other and everything I know about one another at the end of the book is usually from third person someone else told them this someone else told them that...
I’m curious to see where this goes,but unsure....
I’m not sure what I’d call this, kinda a romance,I mean sex and love that will become love but I can’t really call it love when most of the relationship is a dirty hidden secret for just about the whole book a by the time the MC’s are finally getting to know each other ,truly ,the book is ending....
Not a cliffhanger per say,but basically....l
Honestly this felt like more of a weird sorta prequel to me than anything else .....
These two had an amazing chemistry that had me wishing I were the h at times,picture it, your in a semi private library with his sense the man you desire could show up any minute...
You almost feel like he’s there watching you already,the little hairs on the back of your neck start to feel something is amiss,.. Next thing you know his arms are around you from behind and before you have a chance to register what is going on he’s spun you around ... back against a book case,books digging into your back,though you barely notice... before you can blink,he shoves two fingers inside you,knowing just what you need.... then just as your about to explode ,he kisses you and says he’ll see you later tonight ... be ready...
Wow...
Ok, sure I’d have wanted to smack him some where hard and pain for winding me up and walking away but theses two were Hot...
Only thing was one minute hot scorching 🔥 passion,next chapters where Hess trying to push her away our of fear and or mistrust or she’s trying to fight the urge to do the same....
All the while they aren’t really building a relationship or a romance because when ever they get together once they start is just combustible passion, both too fearful to ask questions or offer information....
Neither understand their intense drawn to one another soo honestly , the first quarterly the book is building Octavia’s backstory,then the majority is the two of them coming together in blazing 🔥 passion,then running and hiding ,wanting fight their feelings ,trying to also fight their mutual mistrust and fear and the last 5-10% of the book is truths about them both being finally revealed but only to Victor/Nikolai ,while Octavia walks away with him at the end “maybe “ having a clue about things but not really....
Honestly I don’t know how I feel about this ,yeah I liked it but the story felt more about a bigger picture about Victor’s past and the ppl/creatures who have been manipulating him for centuries ... these evil “Cabalists”? And what ever rotten machinations they’ve been using Victor to carry out then romance....
I liked this because of the chemistry and the passion that,
Leapt off the screen to me but while I admire the hard work and imagination I see went into this, I don’t like the feeling of not knowing what this really is ....
Octavia felt more like 21-22 to 24 at the most definitely not 28 and despite her past there doesn’t really seem to be a reason for her to be a Virgin when she has sex with Victor the first time....
And despite the passion and all the equally passionate to declarations of how they can’t live with out each other,this just felt off because despite their need for each other their “relationship “ was only sex.... their never really got to know each other and everything I know about one another at the end of the book is usually from third person someone else told them this someone else told them that...
I’m curious to see where this goes,but unsure....
October 26, 2020
Interesting start
Two people who have lost past and happen to meet and talk for one another but there's something wrong with their meet and the secrets others are keeping. I definitely need to know more and how it will continue in the next book.
Two people who have lost past and happen to meet and talk for one another but there's something wrong with their meet and the secrets others are keeping. I definitely need to know more and how it will continue in the next book.
November 17, 2018
I like my monsters to be monsters and Victor the 'hero' is a wrecking ball without restraint when that which he treasures most is threatened.
February 18, 2019
The Book Born in Sin by Deanna Richmond had an intriguing start, a unique idea but fell overall flat.
I couldn’t get into the book, the writing style kept me always at arms length.
The missing day to day life makes it hard to connect with the characters.
The sudden and abrupt changes in actions and scenes made it impossible to follow.
I couldn’t imagine and picture any of it, always chasing behind. But that is what a great book is all about, isn’t it? For me to picture with my own imagination the characters, the actions, the movements and surroundings. Here it was literally impossible for me.
Besides the surroundings, we got that covered in pristine detail, it made me skip it, raging mad. Why the author was apparently able to grasp those superficial information and put it in words, yet the important activity is neglected, I can’t fathom.
I couldn’t get into the book, the writing style kept me always at arms length.
The missing day to day life makes it hard to connect with the characters.
The sudden and abrupt changes in actions and scenes made it impossible to follow.
I couldn’t imagine and picture any of it, always chasing behind. But that is what a great book is all about, isn’t it? For me to picture with my own imagination the characters, the actions, the movements and surroundings. Here it was literally impossible for me.
Besides the surroundings, we got that covered in pristine detail, it made me skip it, raging mad. Why the author was apparently able to grasp those superficial information and put it in words, yet the important activity is neglected, I can’t fathom.
August 27, 2018
🦇Two Fangs UP!!!
“Born of Sin” by Deanna Richmond is the Best Vampire Book EVER!!! Serious accolades!!! Could NOT put down!! Hands clapping wildly!! Victor IS magnetic ....sexy....dominant ....commanding ....urbane sophistication personified...downright dangerous...and ruthless to the core...(drooling on my kindle💦) ....Octavia....is mysterious...alluring ....a walking enigma....”who IS she”.....only time will tell....Together... their romance causes flames to scorch the pages....and my heart to melt....They only see each other...and I only want more of them.....An extremely convincing tale of Vampire lore....Well Done...Ms. Richmond....WELL DONE!!!!
I voluntarily reviewed an Advance Reader Copy of this book
“Born of Sin” by Deanna Richmond is the Best Vampire Book EVER!!! Serious accolades!!! Could NOT put down!! Hands clapping wildly!! Victor IS magnetic ....sexy....dominant ....commanding ....urbane sophistication personified...downright dangerous...and ruthless to the core...(drooling on my kindle💦) ....Octavia....is mysterious...alluring ....a walking enigma....”who IS she”.....only time will tell....Together... their romance causes flames to scorch the pages....and my heart to melt....They only see each other...and I only want more of them.....An extremely convincing tale of Vampire lore....Well Done...Ms. Richmond....WELL DONE!!!!
I voluntarily reviewed an Advance Reader Copy of this book
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October 5, 2019
Good start but didn't stayed like it.
I truly was intrigued when I read the introduction of this book. But my interest faded away, very pity, it could have been great.
Firstly I would have known why Betty and MacKenzie felt so bonded to Octavia, and why didn't they adopted her after she learned English, instead she is taken in by Emily.
I missed details of how they both lived, no information how the house or rooms looked like, what she did in her bedroom, did she play as a child? How did they find out she was or has Anemia Some more details in school, you only have one story when she meets Jared, where you also don't get many information on him.
I find that the development is not great, it could be really a good storyline, but the excitement is missing. I couldn't get connected to the characters at all. Sorry for the not so good review.
I truly was intrigued when I read the introduction of this book. But my interest faded away, very pity, it could have been great.
Firstly I would have known why Betty and MacKenzie felt so bonded to Octavia, and why didn't they adopted her after she learned English, instead she is taken in by Emily.
I missed details of how they both lived, no information how the house or rooms looked like, what she did in her bedroom, did she play as a child? How did they find out she was or has Anemia Some more details in school, you only have one story when she meets Jared, where you also don't get many information on him.
I find that the development is not great, it could be really a good storyline, but the excitement is missing. I couldn't get connected to the characters at all. Sorry for the not so good review.
December 1, 2018
I hesitated to write a review for this book because I helped edit it and gave a lot of feedback during its creation. However, I feel compelled to share my opinion and to give it five stars because I absolutely love the concept, a true soulmate story. Victor and Octavia are forceful, complex characters who exist in a well-constructed and richly described world. Supporting characters were also strong. The background story is slowly revealed in a way that maximizes intrigue and encourages the reader to invest in the fate of the characters. Although it ends with room for more to come, I don’t consider it a cliffhanger because it could have ended there. The main conflicts were resolved and anything to come in the future will be a continuation. I’m looking forward to book two.
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February 25, 2020Dark
Despite its flawlessly fresh, creative writing, I found this story to be too dark and tedious for my liking.
The sex is rampant and violent.
The plot is watered down and thin.
I can't quite put my finger on what exactly it was that caused irritation to my ability to read this with any continuity, but I had suffered disruptive fits of stops and starts and just couldn't get comfortable with it.
In a different setting perhaps the author could excel as the writing ability is really quite exceptional most times.
I'm sorry but I can only give this particular book 3 stars.
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20feb20
Despite its flawlessly fresh, creative writing, I found this story to be too dark and tedious for my liking.
The sex is rampant and violent.
The plot is watered down and thin.
I can't quite put my finger on what exactly it was that caused irritation to my ability to read this with any continuity, but I had suffered disruptive fits of stops and starts and just couldn't get comfortable with it.
In a different setting perhaps the author could excel as the writing ability is really quite exceptional most times.
I'm sorry but I can only give this particular book 3 stars.
VS
20feb20
December 1, 2018
This is the first book I've read by Deanna Richmond and it will not be the last. The well-written storyline grabs your interest immediately, then gradually builds in intrigue, suspense, and steam with the electric personalities and character traits of the H/h. Some of the secondary characters are also very interesting and I would hope that they might have their own storylines. I voluntarily read a free ebook ARC and this is my honest review
December 8, 2018
Very good!
A new and different view of vampires. It was an interesting story with an exciting twist. There are basically two different types of vampires. One side has decided to kill off the other side along with most of humanity! It will be interesting to find out who will win and how they will do it! There is also a romance between one of the fiercest vampires and a young woman who can't remember who she is or where she came from! I recommend this book! 😀
A new and different view of vampires. It was an interesting story with an exciting twist. There are basically two different types of vampires. One side has decided to kill off the other side along with most of humanity! It will be interesting to find out who will win and how they will do it! There is also a romance between one of the fiercest vampires and a young woman who can't remember who she is or where she came from! I recommend this book! 😀
January 11, 2019
Enthralling
This enthralling mystery grabs you from page one. Octavia’s past is unknown, nonetheless her innocence brings her allies and protectors. Victor’s past is also filled with blank pockets he can’t remember. There is so much more to him than being a CEO of a hospital and lab. When they meet their passionate connection is immediate and unbreakable. Victor’s past comes to light slowly as his violent world invades Octavia’s.
This enthralling mystery grabs you from page one. Octavia’s past is unknown, nonetheless her innocence brings her allies and protectors. Victor’s past is also filled with blank pockets he can’t remember. There is so much more to him than being a CEO of a hospital and lab. When they meet their passionate connection is immediate and unbreakable. Victor’s past comes to light slowly as his violent world invades Octavia’s.
January 19, 2019
Unique vampire romance
Deanna Richmond has created a rich and sophisticated take on the vampire romance. I found it so refreshing that story was about something other than a 600 year old vampire who was in love with 17 you for her "mind". In place of that tired formula, the author developed a multilayered supernatural world full of interesting characters and plot with unexpected twists and turns. I will definitely be reading Book 2 and anxiously awaiting Book3.
Deanna Richmond has created a rich and sophisticated take on the vampire romance. I found it so refreshing that story was about something other than a 600 year old vampire who was in love with 17 you for her "mind". In place of that tired formula, the author developed a multilayered supernatural world full of interesting characters and plot with unexpected twists and turns. I will definitely be reading Book 2 and anxiously awaiting Book3.
January 27, 2019
Wow very good
First time reading this author. Lost time sequences occasionally, took a few pages to catch up. I will follow this author. Unique story, different flow. Totally unexpected. Several chapters weave you into the journey quite well. Yes my thoughts are 👍. Get this book and enjoy the ride.
First time reading this author. Lost time sequences occasionally, took a few pages to catch up. I will follow this author. Unique story, different flow. Totally unexpected. Several chapters weave you into the journey quite well. Yes my thoughts are 👍. Get this book and enjoy the ride.
February 3, 2019
Interesting Read
I’m intrigued by Victor/Nikolai’s history. I wonder if the Cabalists manipulation caused some of the tragedy in Nikolai’s life. It seems like they has ulterior motives for everything they do. I hope the curse is that he’s eternally linked to the reincarnation of Natalia so he can make amends for his behavior. Victor/Nikolai appears to truly love Octavia.
I’m intrigued by Victor/Nikolai’s history. I wonder if the Cabalists manipulation caused some of the tragedy in Nikolai’s life. It seems like they has ulterior motives for everything they do. I hope the curse is that he’s eternally linked to the reincarnation of Natalia so he can make amends for his behavior. Victor/Nikolai appears to truly love Octavia.
June 22, 2019
I loved this book
I loved this book. It had everything, love, good character back stories, good story line and kept you turning pages.
I'm looking forward to book 2 and following a new author who has kept me on the edge of my seat.
Thank you Deanna Richmond for a really good read.
I loved this book. It had everything, love, good character back stories, good story line and kept you turning pages.
I'm looking forward to book 2 and following a new author who has kept me on the edge of my seat.
Thank you Deanna Richmond for a really good read.
September 7, 2019
Beautifully and clearly written. Interesting plot, layers, and backstories. Very classic, tasteful, vampire telling, not some of the cheesy, young adult stuff. More like New Adult + Anne Rice. Very poetically written particularly starting at 60%. Slight drama extreme for effect and appeal. Beautiful.
September 12, 2019
Born of Sin (Book 1)
What a super fantastic book! This one will definitely keep you interested. It is an entirely different take on Vampires but a really good one.
There is lots of suspense and wonder in this book. I just couldn’t quite figure out which way things were going to go but I am really glad I read it and would recommend it to others.
What a super fantastic book! This one will definitely keep you interested. It is an entirely different take on Vampires but a really good one.
There is lots of suspense and wonder in this book. I just couldn’t quite figure out which way things were going to go but I am really glad I read it and would recommend it to others.
June 28, 2018
It's nice when the logical conclusion doesn't jump up and bite you in the first chapter. The story was well crafted. I should have realized it was a vampire novel. What I wasn't expecting was an evil curse. I will watch for further books by this author. Put this on your reading list.
October 20, 2018
One continuous fight
This is well written and I love the story of the one thing Vampires look for and hope to find love as thy need it to stay sain. Thankyou for your hard work and may good fortune smile on you always
This is well written and I love the story of the one thing Vampires look for and hope to find love as thy need it to stay sain. Thankyou for your hard work and may good fortune smile on you always
November 16, 2018
DNF - made it to 21% before giving up.
I really did not get pulled into this book. I did not like the main characters. They just did not speak to me or make me want to read more about them, especially Victor. Not sure where this was heading, but it did not intrigue me enough to want to find out.
I really did not get pulled into this book. I did not like the main characters. They just did not speak to me or make me want to read more about them, especially Victor. Not sure where this was heading, but it did not intrigue me enough to want to find out.
November 20, 2018
Born of sin
This story draws you in with its synopsis. At first I thought the book was a little slow moving. It got better as it went on. I would recommend this book if you like cliffhangers
This story draws you in with its synopsis. At first I thought the book was a little slow moving. It got better as it went on. I would recommend this book if you like cliffhangers
January 8, 2019
Really intense reading!
Thanks for writting such a interesting story. ? Little bit of action, romance ,and horror. How much can you pack in one story ? Nice trying to change decade s of belief, but the brain says that's not how it goes.
Thanks for writting such a interesting story. ? Little bit of action, romance ,and horror. How much can you pack in one story ? Nice trying to change decade s of belief, but the brain says that's not how it goes.
January 13, 2019
Octavia's mysterious appearance intrigued me immediately at the start of this tale and propelled me through her journey to find the mystifying stranger that bewitched her senses. This fascinating story was fast-paced and brimming with action and suspense. I couldn't put it down. Really Enjoyable!!!
January 21, 2019
Mystery ,intrigue romance
A very different paranormal story about vampire.
Great intrigue,suspense,twists,a little brutal and good romance.
Looking forward to reading more about Octavia and Victor.
Voluntarily reviewed.
A very different paranormal story about vampire.
Great intrigue,suspense,twists,a little brutal and good romance.
Looking forward to reading more about Octavia and Victor.
Voluntarily reviewed.
January 25, 2019
Amazing book by an amazing author
Great start to this series love how the author gave all the background so you could understand the present, can't wait to unravel the rest of the mystery!
Great start to this series love how the author gave all the background so you could understand the present, can't wait to unravel the rest of the mystery!
February 18, 2019
The book was a good read.
The book was a good read but it took a bit to really get into the book as it kinda started out real slow. If we had been given more of the explanation from the end it would have helped understand why she grew up obsessed over Nokolia.
The book was a good read but it took a bit to really get into the book as it kinda started out real slow. If we had been given more of the explanation from the end it would have helped understand why she grew up obsessed over Nokolia.
June 7, 2019
Born Of Sin(Book 1)
This was a very well-written, extremely violent vampire romance. I started out my vampire entertainment reading with Laurell K Hamilton. Deanna Richmond is darker and even more violent! The plot is fascinating. I will read her again,but will wait a bit.
This was a very well-written, extremely violent vampire romance. I started out my vampire entertainment reading with Laurell K Hamilton. Deanna Richmond is darker and even more violent! The plot is fascinating. I will read her again,but will wait a bit.
July 9, 2019
I gave this book a few tries. Put it down, read something else, came back...but I had the same problem. Too many characters and not enough to the story. I liked Octavia. But then the story from the male pov I was bored.
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