I put this in horror hesitantly. I didn’t find it scary, spooky, or eerie at most points. I did find it darkly or creatively interesting at times.
The Call of Cthulhu was better to my mind mostly because there was a lot less of it, which is good for reasons I’ll explain. I think I would have given four stars for that one. I enjoyed its investigative style and the unfolding revelations of a dark cultish mystery. But the ease with which this supposedly apocalyptic monster was dispatched threw off the entire story for me; the scene was kind of grossly comedic.
At the Mountains of Madness was where my opinion of Lovecraft as a writer took a dive. I would often find my mind wandering and wonder why this was happening. The concept of the story is a ton of fun: a scientific expedition into Antarctica unearths civilizations and terrifying monsters come to Earth a half million years ago via cosmic travel. And the plot itself is also solid. It was around page 127 that I finally pinpointed my issue.
It’s the WRITING. It feels like the writing style of classic literature at first, but Lovecraft’s writing is that of an educated man who has average to little talent. I realized that I was reading the same words over and over, that descriptions all ran together because they were mainly composed of impressions rather than concrete details, and these “impressions” seem heavy with strain. It feels like Lovecraft desperately wanted to write of DARK EVIL TERRIFYING HORRIFIC COSMIC AEONS-OLD things, and I really think the broad strokes of his ideas and plot deliver, but the writing itself does not.
On page 127 until the end about 50 pages later, I began tracking words I felt were cropping up a lot. I may have missed some, but the word great occurs 28 times; terrible/terror and horrible/horror each 16; monstrous 15; curious and vast each 10. There are also 6+ instances of strange, frightful, evil, nightmare, hideous, disturbing, grotesque, queer, infinite, and nameless.
There are many other adjectives repeated continually; these are just the ones I happened to track as I read. It’s not only the words that are repeated so much. The descriptions, like of cubes, five points, and huge (vast!) spaces in general are done to death. Lovecraft kept writing and writing, but the events that are sparsely thrown between and the concept of the ancient beings’ history are the only things that seem to be alive. If I tell you, “His face was horrible,” you don’t really know what I mean. The majority of the story is composed of such descriptions.
I like DARK HORROR ANCIENT WOW too, but you should consistently describe what it is that’s so dark and horrible, and not throw a repetitive adjective parade on and off for 100 pages. It’s too bad Lovecraft’s imagination wasn’t paired with a more precise and artistic writing ability.