I like Holly Rayner's books. However, this one is a disappointment. I feel that the overall idea of the story has potential but the story itself lacks substance. Alyssa, the female lead, was always overthinking things. Alyssa's life was just miserable until Ali came into it. She got caught up in the illusion of the fantasy of being Ali's fake fiancé, that when she came to her senses she had to confront the reality that it was fake. This was a serious let down for Alyssa. "She’d just been too foolish to see it. Too hungry for change. Too desperate for meaning." Too desperate is the key word here. When she’d lost Ali," she had been forced to wake up and pay attention to what she’d had all along. Parents who loved her. A supportive best friend. A yearning to make a difference in the world. All these things, Alyssa had taken for granted." I feel a more positive spin on Alyssa's character would have improved the story. Also, when she went to her high school reunion, it referred to her ex-boyfriend Derek. He was a reporter for the Times. This was an opportunity for the author to add to the story. There could have been a little excitement added by Derek finding out that Ali was a sheik and wanting to interview Alyssa and Ali. It would have been fun to see Alyssa exert herself and turn Derek down. It would have been interesting to have Derek chasing after Alyssa and Ali for a photo op. Of course, Alyssa and Ali would run away and laugh about it. Ali on the other hand was quite dull. His character did nothing for me. It seemed he too was unhappy with his life and tried so hard to live up to his parents expectations. He always felt that he failed at that. It was a little pathetic that as rich as he was and all the things he could do with his wealth, he did not do anything worth having. He had to resort to lying to his parents just to get them off his back. But it backfired on him. Not only did it upset his parents, but he also lost his friendship with Alyssa. Anyway, I just feel this story could have been better. A better storyline, a better plot and better characters. I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.