In The Fish Kisser , a megalomaniac becomes determined to exact revenge on the Western world through a devious plot of global cyber-warfare. He enlists his own agents to track down and kidnap the experts and educated elite that can help him accomplish the unthinkable. With a series of staged deaths and disappearances, he sets his plan in motion. When the hired henchmen target Roger LeClarc, an English computer expert with a dark secret of his own, the hunters become the hunted. English detective David Bliss, who chased and was chased around the English countryside in Presumed Dead , teams up with Dutch detective Yolanda Pieters to solve this improbable affair. Fighting internal politics, stumbling upon government cover-ups, and even battling Saddam Hussein’s Republican Guard, together they chase a trail of blood, intrigue, and romance across Europe to Iraq in a desperate search for the kidnapped specialists. Fans of the David Bliss character will not be disappointed as James Hawkins turns the action up several notches.
Librarian Note: There is more than one author in the Goodreads database with this name.
James Hawkins was a police commander in the U.K. for twenty years and a Canadian private investigator for a further eight years. From 1992 to 1997, he was director of education at the Canadian Institute for Environmental Investigations. His debut mystery novel, Missing: Presumed Dead (2001), introduced his popular detective, David Bliss.
The editing was the main problem. Choppy, circular, verbose and generally annoying when it wasn't boring. Word-nerds will gnash their teeth - several times used taught instead of taut, passed instead of past and so on. Use of apostrophes and other punctuation woefully inaccurate. Oh, and people being 'on tender-hooks' really did it for me.
However, the story, under all the garbage, is a good one. I think a decent editor could teach this guy to write a real gripper.
I'm going to try the last book in the series to see if that has happened anywhere along the line.