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Promise Not to Fall

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Kendall is the kind of girl no guy wants to be in a relationship with. She’s controlling, has OCD, and never ever backs down when she thinks she’s right. Which is pretty much all the time. Fearing her last few years in her twenties will be like the last five, she looks for some adventure.

That’s when her best friend convinces her to join her on vacation to the Bahamas. On the land of white sand and under a cloudless sky, she never expects is to meet Jake, aka, Island Boy, a local bartender with a sweet tongue for the pretty girls. He’s tattooed, entertaining, and living the dream in paradise as he sets her drinks and her world on fire.

As the moon lights the island, Kendall becomes infatuated with Jake and his bartending skills when he challenges her to try every drink on the menu, including him.

Can Kendall put aside her cynical side and let the dirty-mouthed bartender show her what island life and love are really like?

A version of this book was originally published as Come Sundown by Chelsea Landon, a book written under a pen name Shey Stahl used in 2014. The title, events, storyline, scenes, and character names have been altered to combine the author’s work and copyrighted by Shey Stahl.

290 pages, Kindle Edition

Published July 9, 2018

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Shey Stahl

63 books2,194 followers
USA Today Bestselling Author, Shey Stahl is a lover of sunsets, dirt track racing, collecting antiques, and the south, where her soul wants to be. Writing is her passion, giving words meaning, and readers experiences they’ll never forget. Currently she’s living in the pacific northwest with her husband and daughter, she can usually be found near a dirt track with an iced coffee in hand.

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Profile Image for Candace Tidwell.
326 reviews37 followers
September 24, 2018
The first chapters had me in stitches. Promise not to Fall is cute and sexy. This book is about finding love where you least expect it. It's a quick easy read and I definitely recommend it for one of your lazy afternoons.
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June 17, 2019
🎁 FREE on Amazon today (6/17/2019)! 🎁
Profile Image for Heather andrews.
9,520 reviews160 followers
July 11, 2018
Jake is just a cheeky one, “I’d say I could put the fire out… but my kisses are hotter than that.” Jake often tines surprises his woman and she doesn't know what to think of it, “what’ya say we get outta this effing resort and I show you what the locals do?” He’s asking me out someplace? With him? Alone?" I liked this book, I loved Jake the man was just so sweet and he surprised me with his thoughtful adventures he took Kendall on.
Profile Image for Kathy West.
1,296 reviews26 followers
July 3, 2022
5 ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️- Excellent - Highly Recommended
4 ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ - A good, solid read
3 ⭐️⭐️⭐️ - An okay read
2 ⭐️⭐️ - Meh
1 ⭐️ - Not my cup of tea
Profile Image for Cheryl O'Harney.
1,269 reviews21 followers
July 22, 2018
Title: Promise Not To Fall
Author: Shay Stahl
Genre: Contemporary Romance
Rating: 5/5

ARC received in return for an honest review.

Shay takes us on a little trip to paradise with this sexy, sizzling read guaranteed to spice up your summer.

From the moment the main protagonists Kendall and Jake aka City Girl and Island Boy lock eyes there’s no going back they share an intense chemistry which is both alluring and enchanting. After playing the third wheel within her “holiday group” Kendall finds herself ditched in a beach bar where she plans to drink her way through the entire drinks menu, it’s also where she meets Jake, a hot sexy barman.

Add one female with no filter who’s a little OCD, together with a hot, dirty talking male who knows how to make a cocktail or two and you get this entertaining, fun filled read set in Idyllic surroundings.

Promise Not To Fall is yet again another five star star read from Shay Stahl who is up there with some of the best “Unicorn” authors there are out there at the moment.

Profile Image for Louise  O.
844 reviews8 followers
July 16, 2018
I absolutely loved this book, Kendall is an OCD control freak and Jake is the laid-back bartender who is full of dreams.

Being dumped and jobless was not the plan, Kendall has everything planned always. Going on holiday with your best friend and her fiancé who is definitely not your favourite person wasn’t the plan either. Kendall went into bar with the goal of trying all the drinks on the menu and maybe even sampling the gorgeous Bartender too; Jake aka Island Boy.

Kendall and Jake had amazing chemistry and their hot and heavy encounters did not disappoint at all. Shey brought out the fun, sexy, flirty sides to each of the characters but also had them bringing their hopes and dreams to surface too.

Shey you have done an amazing job of producing this fun and addicting book, I couldn’t put it down!

I personally loved every part of this book and also the minor characters I can only hope that we get to hear their stories too!

5/5 stars from me!
20 reviews1 follower
July 13, 2018
Tropical romance

This is the a perfect book to lose yourself in and enjoy the ride. I loved OCD control freak Kendall and hot head alpha protective Jake. There was heavy romantic vibes from the start and I soaked up their flirtatious energy. The playful banter between them is hilarious and sizzling! There was plenty of laughs, love, and mixed drinks to go around. I immediately fell in love with Island Boy and his City Girl!
Even though both leading characters keep secrets and inner insecurities from each other, it was good to see them both letting go when they finally got to spend quality time together. It allowed them to break each other’s personal barriers and letting everything hang out.
I immensely enjoyed each and every page of this hot summer read! Well done again, Shey! You continue to amaze me with your writing. Keep up with your amazing work!
Profile Image for Kate Dobson.
91 reviews3 followers
February 11, 2019
I really enjoy Shey Stahl and I love books set in the place that will be my favourite when I get there - Hawaii. And it's a good romance, in that it has all the elements, but something just missed the mark for me with this one.
The heroine has OCD but we saw little to no evidence of this. She came on holiday as a third wheel, with a man she despises, and we're supposed to believe someone with OCD would do this? I doubt it, but maybe I misunderstand OCD.
The man she falls for is a bit all over the place, and doesn't really go deep to change his behaviour, just excuse it.
But I do enjoy the way Shey writes and I enjoy the dialogue, sex scenes are good, that sort of thing. So I'll keep reading her books.
It's literally just occurred to me, that the third wheel thing may be setting up for the sequel of the book and that's why it feels a little disjointed?
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1,155 reviews5 followers
September 9, 2019
Kendall and Jake were so much fun! I was looking for an easy fun loving book and that's exactly what I got!

Jake, the Island Boy, knows when he sees Kendall, the City Girl, his world is about to change, but he think it's just fir a night. If he's lucky maybe two. Instead he finds love with someone who is his total opposite.
Jake's relaxed personality helps calm Kendall's type A personality. She finds herself having fun for the first time without worrying and trying to control things. But when she falls for Jake and has to leave him, hearts break. Jake has his own story that will make you fall for this island bartender. He truly is a good guy.

Kendall and Jake share amazing chemistry along with such an ease between them you become invested in them. They become more like friends to read about.

Great story! Definitely worth the read!
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178 reviews20 followers
July 14, 2018
I absolutely loved this book! Not only is it a sexy read that will spice up your summer, there’s a different drink recipe at the beginning of each chapter to add to the fun. Kendall and Jake aka City Girl and Island Boy are both interesting complex characters that add depth to a fun storyline. Personally, I can relate to Kendall’s control freak ways and can sympathize with her reasons for sabotaging relationships (even though this characteristic is rather frustrating). This book is about letting go of what is comfortable and safe to find true happiness and love— sometimes traveling the unexpected path reveals opportunities meant to change our lives and show us who we are really meant to be. I am honestly reviewing an advance copy of this book provided by the author.
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268 reviews
July 17, 2018
Kendall the stressed out control freak is talked into a vacation in paradise with her best friend and best friends fiancé. Yep can you say third wheel. Ditched the first night she finds a unique little beach bar and decides to make the most of it. Now throw in a tattooed Island Boy(*sigh* Jake) the sexy bartender and Kendall's plan to work her way through the entire drink menu! lol. Sounds like a good idea right? Her OCD tendencies and lack of verbal filter mixed with Jake's dirty talkin ways is a recipe for pure entertainment!!!! Such a fun read I want more of this island paradise and its crazy people, Yes I mean Nash ;)
1,519 reviews21 followers
July 18, 2018
If you are looking for a fun, flirty, sexy summertime read.....then you definitely need to read Promise Not to Fall. A tropical setting, fantastic characters, lots of laughter and love...….you will absolutely fall in love with the City Girl and her Island Boy!! Kendall and Jake had this instant, magnetic chemistry from the moment they locked eyes in the bar, and no amount of perfectly mixed drinks (and body shots) would keep them from seeing where it would go. Definitely a vacation to remember for Kendall, and one that completely changed her life for the better. This is one of my favorites from the author and definitely one I will read again!!
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1,107 reviews15 followers
July 14, 2018
I got lost in this book; it was a sweet, sassy & sexy adventure. Then Shey Stahl throws in an overprotective alpha male and you've got yourself the recipe for one hell of a summer read. The push and pull between these two was fantastic! Jake and Kendall were opposites in every way.. both hiding behind some insecurities and secrets; but when they both let go and just live; oh I loved these two so hard! Promise not to Fall is yet another amazing read by Shey Stahl; I recommend it to any and everyone! 💋
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19 reviews5 followers
July 15, 2018
Make me a drink!!!

I was given an ARC in return for a honest review.

Wow! This was such an amazing read. I was instantly in love with both characters and felt everything as they did. I couldn't put this book down. City Girl had a piece of my heart from the start because I knew that there had to be more to her and Island Boy kept me guessing the whole time I was falling in love with him and his sweet affirmations. The only bad thing about this book was the fact that it ended. I would recommend this to anyone and everyone!!!! Great job Shey!
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20 reviews
October 9, 2018
Shey Stahl never fails. She has a way of capturing you, pulling you into the story, making you a part of it. Promise Not To Fall is an emotional tale of self discovery, learning to let go and trust someone other than yourself.

Kendall takes you with her on her journey, from Phoenix to the Bahamas, where she meets Jake. Island Boy meets City Girl and thus begins an adventure that changes both their lives.

Well written, as is the norm with Shey, and full of emotion and humour - I couldn’t put it down.
27 reviews
July 15, 2018
Tropical Paradise

I was given an ARC in return for an honest review
Another great book from Shey!!! The novel has everything, it was sweet, witty, sarcastic, sassy & sexy! It feels like you are right there in the Bahamas. I loved Kendall & Jake, they had amazing chemistry. I loved how at the beginning of every chapter there’s a different drink recipe; I will definitely be trying those drinks this summer. A great summer read! Once again Shey doesn’t disappoint!
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1,303 reviews41 followers
August 16, 2018
This book made me want all the drinks!

Love it! It’s fun and romantic, full of life and laughter. Loved the story and the characters. And no it didn’t remind me of cocktail. I think it was better. I sort of felt like I was there, well I wanted to be. I mean hello hot bartender on the beach. Ahhh to be in my 20s again. Loved the ending I was wondering if she’d ever do it! Ha she cracks me up. Such a fun book.
Profile Image for Gretel.
42 reviews8 followers
November 14, 2018
Something Went Very Wrong

Rather than stream of conscious writing, this approaches stutterings of vulgarity. The language, the actions, the brain cell flickers (too chaotic and amorphous to be actual 'thoughts')- all soon this as a wretched waste of time. Was this a joke? The author has written some enjoyable books, but something went off the rails here. Still, I'll try another in the future because of her overall output.
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52 reviews1 follower
July 16, 2018
Need a vacation

Once again Shey thank you for letting me be part of your ARC team i loved this book .I loved how Jake and Kendall got along together even when she was trying not to fall for Jake .Think I might be taking a vacation soon ,I 💙 Island boy
Profile Image for Lesley Peck.
Author 8 books25 followers
July 16, 2018
First off I LOVE ISLAND BOY!!!

OMG! Jake is everything you want in a paradise fling. You want to pack him up and bring his sexy behind home with you.

This book is the perfect beach read. Sexy, flirty, and fun! I couldn't get enough!!
Profile Image for Karrie Mellott Puskas.
670 reviews6 followers
July 19, 2018
Jake and Kendall. These two just are incredible. Jake my god Jake is HAWT!!! When these two are together holy melt your panties!! I was sucked into the book right from the start and I didn’t want their story to end. One of my favorite books of 2018!!!
159 reviews
August 17, 2018
Loved it

Wow, amazing from start to finish. Loved the honesty of Kendall’s character and who wouldn’t love Jake. Beautiful, fun and captivating from the first to last page. Would love to find out more about Rylee though
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111 reviews
March 10, 2020
A romantic head over heels love story about two people from completely different worlds. Tells us all to take time to slow down and watch the world around us and that love could be anywhere with anyone, even with an Island Boy.
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33 reviews2 followers
October 12, 2018
Great

When you get out of your comfort zone, no one knows it might be the best thing in your life.
410 reviews17 followers
March 1, 2020
It's a beautiful novel, that has you glued to your seat!
Absolutely loved it Jake and Kendall!
Humorous, hot, emotionally touching and an absolute dream to read!
619 reviews1 follower
May 27, 2020
Loved it!!

Gah this book was just what i needed!!! A perfect summer fling/romance!!! I mean who doesn't want to find their own Island Boy?!?!?
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1,151 reviews7 followers
July 20, 2018
Shey Stahl has written another amazing love story. I feel this book is much different than some of her other book. This to me is a more serious romance and love story about discovering to let yourself fully be who you are. This book does make you want to sit at the bar and drink as you read to try all the recipes.

I loved it and I know you will too. Amazing read!
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July 11, 2018
Another great read

Another great book from Shey!!! It literally felt like I was there in the book, and now I want to go to the Bahamas on vacation. Jake is definitely going into the category of bookboyfriend, kendall was hard to warm up to but once she "got out of her own way" I loved her. I loved the ending banter between the two of them, and hoping I'll have the chance to one day see pigs swimming in crystal water in person!!
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