World building the inescapable curse
The problem with a first book in a Sci-Fi series is that the author has to build the world, as well as the characters and the story line. Outside of Sci-Fi, a round of the characters with hints and you are into the story. Here, with a complex cast of characters and the world to build, I found myself waiting for the story to start until over 75% of the book was done. The action scenes before that were obviously false starts or mere beginnings. I was at the point of giving up on the book, and then when completion was inevitable and action was gearing up, I wasn’t sure it would be worth going on to book two.
Well, I’m there, and it was worth the wait, and I’ll read the next one. It feels like the story is just beginning now.