This was alright. I'm really not into this kind of modern poetry to begin with, practically without form or rhyme. I suppose I just need to read more of it, but whatever makes it great isn't striking me. Some lines or couplets were good in alliteration or imagery, but I found many poems disjointed on subject even within themselves. I assume there's probably devices that went over my head, but I felt less inclined to learn them outside of a few. This might have to do with the sort of everyday life topics of the poems, which rarely interest me to begin with. Anyway, it was worth a read just to see and learn this avenue of poetry.
Quotes:
“The acid ants, the acidic ants, flowering
On the piece of melon in the saucer,
Making milky the wedge of cheese,
Are a garnet, burst into pieces of life,
On the pale pale saucer.
I hold the magnifying glass over them
And stare down as through a hole of water.
They shred with their ice tong jaws, shred and hurry,
Their antenna touch and touch, their
Black rears become more swollen,
They have exoskeletons, spikes,
They take their sweetness back to the queen,
For she alone lays the eggs
With the eyeballs like goldfish in condoms.”