Mercy! What the heck was this? By the time it was over, I couldn't really make sense of anything that happened. It's like Delores threw everything she could think of at the wall to see what would stick. It was a complete mess.
Theo Canton is a DEA agent who returns to Blue River Ranch when a criminal informant reveals that a gunman is heading there to kill Ivy Beckett, his ex from 10 years ago, and possibly other Beckett family members as well. From there, things just get ridiculously convoluted as the two of them try to figure out who wants to harm Ivy, and deal with the fact that Ivy has kept Theo's son a secret from him for 10 years.
Delores usually gives us three suspects, but it didn't work here, because one of them is Theo's uncle, August Canton, who was already a suspect in the first book of the series. (And I imagine will be a suspect in subsequent books). So we're left with Wesley Sanford, Theo's DEA partner, who is possibly corrupt and was part of a botched raid. There's also Lacey, Ivy's stepdaughter, who is pissed off that she isn't part of her father's inheritance, which has gone to Ivy and her son, Nathan, instead.
The problem is, the motives are too weak to justify the lengths one of these two might have gone to in order to achieve their goals. Wesley....doesn't want to get caught? I think? And Lacey wants her inheritance, but apparently already has all the money in the world to hire a never-ending supply of thugs for hire? And which person is actually the target? Wesley has a beef with Theo. Lacey has a beef with Ivy. I already can't remember what August's motive might have been, but I had pretty much discounted him as a suspect anyway. The reader's attention is just pulled in far too many directions.
For example, the watch that belonged to Ivy's father that was taken when he was murdered. It has turned up with Lacey's fingerprints on it, of all people. She says she found it on the car and threw it away. August says he had possession of the watch, but doesn't know how it found its way to Lacey. This plot strand is abandoned and never explained.
Or how about the woman that Theo, Ivy and the others find on the side of the road, who claims to have been kidnapped? She gets shot, and later dies in hospital. Delores obviously found this a convenient way to deal with the character, because it's never revealed exactly what end the bad man/woman had in mind when they kidnapped her in the first place!
This sort of element extends to Theo, Gabriel and others when they shoot the never-ending supply of thugs. Instead of incapacitating them, they go for the kill shot, conveniently killing them, leaving them unable to be questioned. It's a lazy way of prolonging the "mystery". If Delores can't be bothered with an explanation, it's a case of kill 'em off and forget they ever existed!
Like I said, this was a complete and utter mess!
Then we have Ivy. I've said many a time before, I am not a fan of secret paternity. Ivy is a particularly odious example. She kept Theo's son a secret for 10 bloody years! Inexcusable! She offers up a ripper of an explanation: "I couldn't find you to tell you." Pull the other one, Ivy! In the 10 years that have passed, Ivy went on to marry another man who loved her, but she didn't love in return. This REALLY riles me up. Marrying someone you don't love is really a despicable thing to do. Ivy's even high and mighty about not giving her husband's money to his own daughter. Ugh, I really didn't like her.
The action is repetitive. It's the same old same old Delores scenario of a guns being shot at cars going between ranches and safe houses, and then a great big firefight in the finale before the Big Bad is revealed. Even that showdown was a snore, with Theo and Ivy seemingly neverendingly running between the ranch house and a barn and a vehicle. Zzzz.
So, how's the romance? I thought it was a fizzler! Delores is very much tell and not show in this department, as usual. We get a couple of "reminders of that old punch of heat", but I never really felt it. Especially considering that I thought Ivy was a selfish bitch who married a man she didn't love and didn't even try to find the man she supposedly did love FOR 10 YEARS to tell him they had a fucking child together. Jeez. The book wraps up without this ever being properly discussed.
Usually, Delores' plot template works quite well, but here, none of it really made a lick of sense. There's a lot of running around by everybody, and a lot of supposed urgency, but it didn't make me care a great deal about the outcome.
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