Amateurish, Uninformed, “Woke” Inspired, and Condescending
“No Higher Ground (A Sam Czerny Novel - Book One),” fails at almost every level. The writing execution is amateurish, stilted and simplistic throughout, very much of the hobbyist mode. The science is fleeting and shallow, as if the author skimmed through a few articles and textbooks, while knowledge of the military and government appears gleamed from leftist tweets. The author’s ham-fisted (nothing subtle) advocacy of being a “woke” SJW theme, permeates the book from beginning to end, in a smug and condescending manner. A couple of examples: Conflict between an amoral, aggressive female corporate climber and males is assigned as “misogyny” by the author, not simple friction between unattractive alpha personality types. Another example is the MC, “Sam,” who is drawn as a high functioning, submissive beta male by the author. “Sam,” is intellectually, but a “pleaser,” who is especially submissive to the wife he loves.
All the aforementioned aside, the story is weak, crude, and ill-formed. A century or so in the future, a xenobiologist, “Sam,” is assigned to a joint Chinese-private corporation mission to the far side of the moon. There, while building a lunar base, the Chinese have discovered an apparent alien artifact. After a day or two of pre-flight astronaut training [sic], “Sam,” and the small international team of experts, under the command of the Chinese military, head to the moon. The lunar base is structured around a rail gun and AI bots. A conspiracy for world domination by the Chinese and the corporate sponsor is revealed, as “Sam” and a pair of his associates, discover [Spoiler Alert] the alien AI within the artifact.
The low level quality of the story and its inane plot lines and devices, along with the poor writing execution, makes it not suitable for adults or even teens. “No Higher Ground,” is an excellent example of a hobbyist writer’s product, that while suitable for a writing workshop or club, is not suitable for a public, commercial offering.
The book is not recommended and was fully read via Kindle Unlimited.