Serene, wise collection of poems from a forgotten, working America, the Japanese immigrant experience and where they meet at midnight under a broken street light.
To call Hongo's poems lyrical or narrative is to limit the scope of his beautiful perception. I'm hopping around, enjoying each place I land. I've finished this book and rejoice that Garrett started out with beauty and has ended with a more studied and still lyrical view of the world. His later poems show a growth and maturity that elude many poets.
Hongo is from Hawai'i (Big Island) but has a distinctly Asian American or Japanese American sensibility in his poetry, since he grew up in Hawai'i but doesn't live in the islands. What's worthwhile about his poetry is its ability to strike you in its visual conjurings--pure beauty. Hongo's contribution is a good model for how to use line breaks and figurative language in your poetry.
Some examples-- "Yellow Light" One arm hooked around the frayed strap of a tar-black patent-leather purse, the other cradling something for dinner: fresh bunches of spinach from a J-Town yaoya, sides of split Spanish mackerel from Alviso's, maybe a loaf of Langendorf; she steps of the hissing bus at Olympic and Fig, begins the three-block climb up the hill, passing gangs of schoolboys playing war, Japs against Japs, Chicanas chalking sidewalks with the holy double-yoked crosses of a hopsctoch, and the Korean grocer's wife out for a stroll around this neighborhood of Hawaiian apartments just starting to steam with cooking and the anger of young couples coming home from work, yelling at kids, flicking on TV sets for the Wednesday Night Fights.
If it were May, hydrangeas and jacaranda flowers in the streetside trees would be blooming through the smog of late spring. Wisteria in Masuda's front yard would be shaking out the long tresses of its purples hair. Maybe mosquitoes, moths, a few orange butterflies settling of the lattice of monkey flowers tangled in the chain-link fences by the trash.
But this is October, and Los Angeles seethes like a billboard under twilight. From used-car lots and the movie houses uptown, long silver sticks of light probe the sky. From the Miracle Mile, whole freeways away, a brilliant fluorescence breaks out and makes war with the dim squares of yellow kitchen light winking on in all the side streets of the Barrio.
She climbs up the two flights of flagstone stairs to 201-B, the spikes of her high heels clicking like kitchen knives on a cutting board, props the groceries against the door, fishes through memo pads, a compact, empty packs of chewing gum, and finds her keys.
The moon then, cruising from behind a screen of eucalyptus across the street, covers everything, everything in sight, in a heavy light like yellow onions. (11-12)
Other promising lines--
"Outside, 747s scream over runways, tuck the talons of their landing gear into gleaming bellies, fat with luggage" (15)
"Soft blue in the key of sleep suffocates the air." (35)
"We drift back to the highway, holding our fists like rattles, shaking them like bones." (35)
"All around me the ten thousand things of the universe go slack in the day's new lagoon, and I seep out of myself like water from the soaked earth, like rain from the black sky." (40-41)
"Stepchild"--this poem deals with over 100 years of painful Asian American history and is a good one for thinking through the Chinese Exclusion Act, the Alien Land Laws and Japanese incarceration, and Nisei sacrifice, and Filipino (and other) farmworkers.
"You waken to the old worries, shining like loose change in a church plate, tears of light beading under gas lamps while the hymns rummage through shallow pockets, and the memories flicker into bloom with the dawnlight bleeding through porch screens into the kitchen, where it falls at your feet like scattered rice." (66)
"only the bamboo growing lush as old melodies and whispering like brush strokes against the fine scroll of wind" (75)
Stepchild is the first poem I read because I opened the book to a random page, and it's one of the most powerful things I've read in a long time. It's a long epic poem about the history of Japanese americans.
A lot of the poems follow that kind of trajectory. They're long and full of emotion and thought.