Full-Bodied OrcGasm

by Syn Root

Librarian Note: This is an expanded 2nd. Edition.

A Standalone Orc-Gasm Novella!
w"What held my attention was that his loin cloth was now firmly propped up by the largest cock I had ever seen in my life. "
Maya is in trouble. Her spells have all been cast, and the only charms she has left are hidden between her slick, damp elven legs.

The rainforest is crawling with members of the Hard-Pole Orc Tribe. Every instinct is telling her to run ...Well, almost every instinct. A deep part of this reasonably, innocent elf maiden is curious as Nine Hells to know if these Sexy Beasts live up to their Clan Name...

Now Extended into a Standalone Steaming Hot, Fantasy Monster Erotica Novella. 

This 23k Word Novella describes the Adventure of the Hard-Pole Clan, as well as Maya's Full Bodied Orc-Gasm! Contains Sex, Violence, and a HEA.

164 pages, Kindle Edition

Published June 7, 2017

Reviews

[warhawke · Rating 3 out of 5]

Orcgasm three parts novella now bundled into a full book. In the final installment of the series, war was looming across the land and an unappeased dragon threatened to decimate everything in its parth. It was up to Princess Maya and her friends to save their home and restore peace.

The final part of the series was a lot mellow than the previous one. I like the addition of the dragon, but I has hard time following the story in some parts and I wish there was more sex considering how much previous parts had.

Previous novella reviews:
Part 1
Genre: Erotic Fantasy
Type: Book 1 of Chronicles of Princess Maya
POV: First Person - Female
Rating:




Maya was a Princess from Elven Kingdom on a mission to retrieve a precious jewel. She got the item without problem but going back home proved to be difficult when her concealment magic was depleting while in enemy territory. One thing for sure, the Hard-Pole Clan orcs wouldn't let her crime be unpunished.



Monster erotica is one sub genre I haven't tried before, but now I can proudly say, I popped my cherry lol!

He was pinning me down by the shoulders, but his paws were so large that my chest cavity was easily covered by his weight as well. I could feel the thick head of the beast’s cock pushing my legs to either side, trying to force its way into my body.

When I first started this book, it reminds me a lot of the Lord of the Rings. There's the elf, the orcs, the Wargs and even Sting-like item. Add monster cocks and magical pussy, you get this book haha!

The tales of the way they raped and pillaged towns were the stuff of both legend and nightmare. What I didn't expect was how willingly I would desire such a sexual union, or how considerate the creature would be considering the differences in our size.

I like that there were plenty of actions and dub-con sex. And I like the power that she possessed. However, it was hard for me to follow the story. Since this book is set in a fantasy world, it needed more explanations of how the world works. More elaboration or a glossary would definitely help.

While their sorcerer had cast the charms which persuaded the wars to do his bidding, I had summoned the power necessary to slay those minions and had done so without bringing exhaustion to myself.

The main characters' backgrounds were hardly mentioned. Not knowing their back story made me feel detached. Also, the actual dialogue and inner monologue needed more distinction. Overall, I do like the concept, but the execution could be better.

Part 2


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[Nicole · Rating 4 out of 5]

~3,75~ hot stars from me!!

Wow a super steamy fast paced story, if you love an erotic paranormal theme with extremely hot stories then look no further, beware it can wet many panties.

Maya our heroine lives her adventure at her fullest in this "high temperature" rainforest, page after page the intensity is growing and she discovers all kinds of pleasure. As I said if you are into this kind of theme, you are most certainly going to love it, I'm looking forward to reading more from the author!

[Kira Simion]

I got this in my inbox for free (for some reason?) so there's that lol.

Thank you author for this gift of writing. I just wasn't expecting it. But I thank you for the gift, for a gift is a gift. :)

Shhhhh >->

[Carla · Rating 4 out of 5]

Book Gifted by the author.
http://thesecretworldofbooklovers.blo...

The book was definitely a surprise! It was almost midnight and I was just deciding which book was going to keep me up till late at night when I got a gift book from amazon, the title was long and descriptive and the cover was Hot as Hell! so I had to know what it was about.

I have to say I had a blast reading it! It's a different type of read and not for everyone but I really enjoyed it!

If you want romance and flowers then this is NOT the book for you, but if you have a darker side that sometimes comes out begging for some rough, sinful, uncensored sex scenes then go get this book NOW!

Lets talk about the main character, Maya, I loved her from the start! She lives to satisfy her sexual thirst and from the first encounter I knew I would enjoy them all. She didn't hold back anything from us, and experiences each and every sex scene like it was her last. Which might have been the case...

I have no problem with dark books, this is indeed one of those, the consent is blurry but trust me, you wont be complaining!

It is a fast paced and fun read, I can't wait for the next one.

[Book Snob Sue · Rating 3 out of 5]

3.5 stars. So, this book was gifted to me, not my normal read....but here we are. She is an elf that has stolen from the Orc people, whom are somewhat barbaric. She gets caught by one of them and indulges in some very, very naughty behavior. She channels some type of sexual magic that she didn't know she had. His people are not happy about this and take her back to their leader. This is the part that I kept waiting for the damn book to card me or something....you know because I wasn't old enough to read it's naughtiness, lol.

Overall the writing is good, but that title *shakes head*, not really sure that would have been my first pick....or maybe it's the sub-titles that I didn't love. I really do like Syn Root's writing style in this book and I really liked the pnr aspect, maybe not quite my thing, but I think other people will love it.

[Jen · Rating 4 out of 5]

An engaging fantasy erotica

This is a hardcore erotica with a fantasy setting, which give the author the kind of leeway he needs to accomplish the all out huge size orgy in this. Descriptive enough without being ugly or vulgar, I think Maya is a fun character with lots of potential.

[Casia Pickering · Rating 2 out of 5]

Okay. I have this thing about books that are ridiculous and erotica. The more outrageous the read, the more likely I'm going to grab it. Why? Because I'm a glutton for the crazy.

So, naturally, with a title like Full-Bodied Orcgasm, I couldn't very well leave the book alone. There was no way I wasn't going to be reading this book. Not only that, I told other booknerds about this book because it happened to work for a criteria (I am a part of an online reading competition you can find on Facebook called Book Battle, it is seriously fun guys). Needless to say, there were quite a few others who read Orc erotica for this criteria.

Okay. So, this book . . . I wasn't expecting much with this book. I was hopeful that I would be rocked out of my socks and surprised at what happened, but I wasn't expecting much. Expectations were VERY low on this.

Chapter one ended on the biggest WTF moment that I was ready to keep going. This book also inspired me to do a YouTube series that I am going to be working on starting August 2018. And yes, I will be talking about this gem of erotic literature.

And by gem, I mean bad. For a piece of literature, it is so/so. The writing is boring, the story didn't make sense in places, and the sex scenes seemed forced at times. The ending also made no sense to the rest of the work.

That said, for the ridiculous quality of it, I gave it an extra .5 (which is why I put it as a 2 in GoodReads, I round up). For the whole of the book though, I wouldn't really recommend. Not unless you love ridiculous reads too.

Final rating: 1.5/5

[Mary Jo · Rating 3 out of 5]

Once you get past the crazy title, this is a really well written paranormal erotica story. Maya is an elven princess with powers but what she learns as the story unfolds is that she truly doesn’t understand the extent of her powers. As she is captured by the Orcs and forced into some intense and erotic sexual encounters, her powers start to reveal themselves. When she gets connected with another prisoner, she is able to channel her powers with his help. I truly didn’t know what to expect from this story, I was gifted a copy and decided to dive in. I ended up really enjoying the story with the mythology incorporated along with the well-crafted erotic encounters.

[Lori Vandenburg · Rating 3 out of 5]

This was a very short and straight-to-the-point fantasy story. An Elven maiden finds herself in a unique situation after stealing an artifact. When she wakes up from her post-orgasmic induced blackout with the orc, she discovers that she is bound to a post. She is buzzing with energy. She has now been dubbed as a "witch-slut". She has now been considered a weapon to the Orc King. If you like short, over the top HOT fantasy, then you will like this. I voluntarily reviewed this ARC.

[Linda Barrett · Rating 3 out of 5]

I was recommended that I read this by a friend so I thought I'd give it a shot.
This book definitely wasn't for me as all I could think about whilst reading this was the Orcs from Lord Of The Rings and I found that very off putting.
It wasn't the books fault it was all on me.
The story was quick and simple and flowed very well.
If you like fantasy romance this book could be heaven for you.
I hope you give it a try and you enjoy the hot and steamy moments.

[Jaime · Rating 5 out of 5]

An erotic adventure

This is well written. It has plenty of erotic encounters that only serve to build the story line. The characters are well written, and I will be reading it again. Quite a steamy adventure.

[Mizz Kris Curlz · Rating 4 out of 5]

😮 What did I just read? Um...yeah....little different from my current library choices but oddly enough interesting... Very interesting.

[Nicole · Rating 1 out of 5]

DNF...couldn't even get through this mess

[Wolfie · Rating 3 out of 5]

This book was like a dirty joke that you know you shouldn't laugh at ... But you do anyway just because you are just that twisted.

[Nightshade · Rating 4 out of 5]

I received a free no strings attached copy of this book from the author.

Root's writing has definitely improved since the last book I read. The plot flowed smoothly onwards and the writing was great.
Even though this book is primarily an erotica, and there are plenty of sex scenes, the plot is also very intriguing and makes you want to keep reading to find out what happens next. If erotica is a genre that you like to read then I would definitely recommend this story.

I would like to see what happens to Maya next and where her adventures take her.