Gah, what a pair the MCs in this one were: the slut-shamingest manwhore in the West and the mattiest of pathetic doormats who, despite “hating” him, keeps a stalkerific photo collection of him and can’t hide her hapless, helpless “love” that has somehow survived years of his insolent hostility and a move halfway across the country. Oh-so-damaged DP MCs (mommy/daddy issues), which serves as the backstory for their completely effed up relationship. The couple of DP novels I’ve read have just left a bad taste in my mouth. The heroine in this one was so pathetic it actually made me angry. And, OK, we’re supposed to believe she’s a reporter in Chicago, of all places—no WAY.
I just couldn’t get past my dislike of these characters, their effed-up codependent relationship (her obsessive “love” feeds his massive ego, full stop), and just the overall ickiness that seeps throughout this book. Don’t even get me started on the scene where they first have sex—just ewwww, and when she continually accepts the blame for his wham-bam loss of control because, you know, she responded and all and men just lose their sh*t when that happens—no, just no. (At least there’s no “crawling sperm” as in the other DP novel I tried, so small mercies). Once the hero understands that he's misjudged her--hey, she has never had sex, even though she's in her mid-20s, so now she is worthy!--their relationship is so weirdly anachronistic and contingent on her "innocence" that it just turned me off.
I realize this is early DP, but so far she is seriously too eww for me. And I LIKE asshat alpha heroes! And angst! And reluctantly besotted, overwhelmed heroines even, if they’re written with some pride and backbone. But this—just no. I will have to add a new shelf: too ewww!
Some saving graces, to be fair: his dad and the housekeeper were great characters, and their squabbling with the hero was really amusing. Also, DP is a good writer--the pacing in this is brisk and the character development (and the color added by her secondary characters) is well done. So I'm not completely writing her off--I'll have to try some of her more recent (but not too watered down, I hope) books.