Severed Empire: Queens of Osiris

Severed Empire #3

by Phillip Tomasso III

TWO YEARS AFTER THE WAR HAS ENDED Since the demise of the Mountain King, Hermon Cordillera’s daughters have stepped up and share the throne as queens of the Osiris Realm. But when women go missing from the kingdom they are unable to find whoever is responsible for the growing number of abductions… CENTURIES AGO, WIZARDS INVESTIGATED CRIMES THE CROWN COULDN’T SOLVE. Mykal, the young wizard, continues honing his magical skills with his mother, and his tactical training with Blodwyn, his oldest friend. Living in secret within the ancient library ruins, they are surprised when a young woman shows up asking them for help. Mykal and Blodwyn return to Cordillera’s castle, this time as allies. Tasked with unraveling the mystery, they soon realize there isn’t much evidence pointing in any direction. They are ill prepared for the untold dangers that await them. It will come down to more than Mykal’s magic if they hope to survive, and if they want to resolve the case of Osiris’ abducted people.

Genres: Fantasy

330 pages, Paperback

Published March 14, 2017

About the author

Phillip Tomasso III is the award-winning author of many novels, including Before the Sun Sets and Amazon Best Selling memoir, Nothing Good Happens After Midnight.

He lives in Rochester, NY with his 3 kids, works full-time as a Fire Dispatcher for 9-1-1, and is always hard at work on his next story!

Reviews

[Dana Solomon · Rating 4 out of 5]

Great story--atrocious editing!

I love the story line in this series, but almost quit reading because all the extra commas, repeated words and inconsistencies are driving me crazy! For instance, when a character leaves and goes back to the cabin, they shouldn't still be part of a conversation. That was early in book 1, and now in book three the protagonist magics three characters away, but two of them still converse with him. I really want to read book 4; I suppose I can muddle my way through since I've already read the first three. Please, editors, do the author a favor and do your job! This really is a great story!