Breaking My Heart!!
The first time I reviewed this, I gave it 4 stars. This review I gave it 3 stars. There were too many characters introduced with no resolution for some of them. The story really jumped around and I had to keep rereading to keep up with it. Then, there's those dreaded errors. As soon as I think the editing is getting ready, I'm slapped with more of them and they're really noticeable in this book. Don't know if I'll continue with Mick's books. Is Amelia book written before the next Mick? I'll check. For comparison, I'm including my original review below. Even after reading the book, I can't figure out why I rated it four stars.
Can love really break a human's heart? It appears so. Mick is completely head over heels for Roz. Or, at least he finally acknowledged it. The more he realizes how much he loves Roz, the more he realizes how much he loves his grown children. Love does that to you. Mick allowed his children to get away with so much, I wondered if some other author was writing this book. There was enough of Mick the Tick to know that only the person who created him could show how he's changed, and even his weaknesses. He can still protect those he loves from all enemies - foreign and domestic, and he does. Don't want to spoil this book for others. However, the family reunion in this book leaves me waiting for more. Know that this is just the beginning of the family reunion. There's also a couple of things that I need to check in another Mick book. The only reason this book didn't get 5 stars is because of those recurring typos and incorrect grammar usage. I'm finally convinced that a lot of cutting and pasting is going on. Ms. Monroe's books would be so much better with proper editing. Irritating but not yet distracting. When I'm too distracted by the errors, I'll stop buying her books. I read plenty of books with excellent editing. The book is worth reading because there's a new, extremely interesting character who I can't wait to see interact with the rest of the family...... Spoiler Alert: She's not a Sinatra. She's kin on their mother's side. So, she's Mick and Charles sister but not on father's side so she's not a Sinatra. End of Spoiler Alert.... Also, want to see how the grown children fill or fail in their new positions. Can't wait to read more about the Sinatras. Really love Mick's new heart but want him to keep some of his "Tickness" because he will need it. Of course, Roz and Big Daddy and those Gabrinis will always have his back. Will his children