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The General's Legacy, Part One: Inheritance
A king obsessed with conquest, armies, magic, and monsters powered by the souls of the dead – the legendary General of Valendo defended his kingdom from them all and taught his grandson, Prince Cory, everything he could. But the worst is yet to come.
Cory’s life is changed forever after the general’s death when their enemy strikes at the heart of their Kingdom. Confronted by his grandfather’s world of warriors and magic, and with the lives and souls of all in his kingdom at stake, Cory must do the one thing the old general never could.
End the war.
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Cory’s life is changed forever after the general’s death when their enemy strikes at the heart of their Kingdom. Confronted by his grandfather’s world of warriors and magic, and with the lives and souls of all in his kingdom at stake, Cory must do the one thing the old general never could.
End the war.
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About the author
Adrian G. Hilder
5 books77 followersI was born in 1970 in Lincolnshire, UK to an English father and a Scottish mother and grew up as a child of the Royal Air Force. Moving house every few years with my parents (and later on brother) was the norm and began when I was four months old.
I lived on several RAF bases in the UK and Germany, and there was a time when I had spent more of my life in Germany than I had the UK.
My early years in continental Europe meant family holidays immersed in the bewitching beauty of Bavaria, the Swiss and Austrian Alps. These locations inspire some settings and even events in my stories.
Today, I live in Hampshire, UK with my wife and three boys just a few miles from where Jane Austen wrote many of her works. As a teenager, I had two great passions: computer programming and fantasy stories.
In October 2013, having worked in the IT industry since 1991, I decided the time to realise my long-held ambition to write a fantasy story was long overdue. My debut story, The General’s Legacy, is the result of combining everything I have learned so far about creating fast paced dramatic stories, combined with what my imagination has been brewing for twenty-eight years.
If you would like to know more about me, why I wrote a fantasy story, and my writer's journey I recommend reading the following interview I did with science fiction author and blogger Alexander M Zoltai - one of the earliest and most enthusiastic readers of The General's Legacy:
Notes from An Alien Author Interview - Adrian G Hilder
In the interview, I talk about how I create drama in a story and some of the inspiration that goes into them.
You can try my first book by clicking here to get a free copy.
Or get a free PDF sample right here: The General's Legacy - Part One: Inheritance - Prolog and Chapter 1
The concluding part of The General's Legacy, Whiteland King, was released February 28th, 2017.
I lived on several RAF bases in the UK and Germany, and there was a time when I had spent more of my life in Germany than I had the UK.
My early years in continental Europe meant family holidays immersed in the bewitching beauty of Bavaria, the Swiss and Austrian Alps. These locations inspire some settings and even events in my stories.
Today, I live in Hampshire, UK with my wife and three boys just a few miles from where Jane Austen wrote many of her works. As a teenager, I had two great passions: computer programming and fantasy stories.
In October 2013, having worked in the IT industry since 1991, I decided the time to realise my long-held ambition to write a fantasy story was long overdue. My debut story, The General’s Legacy, is the result of combining everything I have learned so far about creating fast paced dramatic stories, combined with what my imagination has been brewing for twenty-eight years.
If you would like to know more about me, why I wrote a fantasy story, and my writer's journey I recommend reading the following interview I did with science fiction author and blogger Alexander M Zoltai - one of the earliest and most enthusiastic readers of The General's Legacy:
Notes from An Alien Author Interview - Adrian G Hilder
In the interview, I talk about how I create drama in a story and some of the inspiration that goes into them.
You can try my first book by clicking here to get a free copy.
Or get a free PDF sample right here: The General's Legacy - Part One: Inheritance - Prolog and Chapter 1
The concluding part of The General's Legacy, Whiteland King, was released February 28th, 2017.
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May 8, 2019
To begin, I would like to Adrian G. Hilder and Camdaw for sending me a copy of The General's Legacy, Part 1: Inheritance in exchange for an honest review. This is the excellent and highly polished first part of Hilder's debut outing. Part 2: Whiteland King will complete The General's Legacy when it is released shortly.
The tale begins in a highly intriguing manner with readers about to witness an epic battle revealing the intense hatred between the two opposing armies of Valendo and Nearhon. We are introduced to the aging General Garon who is one of the finest warriors, thinkers, and commanders ever recorded within the War Histories of Valendo. Fighting alongside him as many times before are some of his most trusted companions including the mage, Zeivite and the Silver Warrior, Quain. This prologue is a great introduction and is full of short sharp action set pieces showcasing the catastrophic effects this world's magic can wreck, highlighting the courage and wit of some of the characters involved and also included some pretty grotesque monsters controlled by enemy mages.
Fast forward fifteen years and we follow the happenings of current day Valendo. Mainly following the actions of three Princes whose grandfather is the above-mentioned general. The book isn't written in full chapter point of view perspectives like say, Game of Thrones. Instead, it switches between numerous characters actions and thoughts seamlessly well with the pacing nicely composed. These initial aspects introduced the players, family relationships, politics, histories and were slower than the intense prologue. This section was similar to the beginning of John Gwynne's - Malice.
The magic powers controlled by only a handful of individuals in any nation with destructive capabilities that can defeat entire armies is nothing really new to the genre but I think it is presented admirably and furthermore, two of the most interesting/complex characters are magic wielders. Although the action only really takes place in two of the nations, I think the main characters are well sculptured. These include Nearhon's archmage, Magnar and Prince Cory's potential love interests, Julia. About half way through this narrative, proceedings get really interesting when a new dangerous but unknown enemy to Valendo is introduced. At this point, things really heat up and the story is then crammed with numerous sieges, enhanced magery and also with some undead and a mysterious lizard-like man thrown into the mix.
Inheritance, as noted, is the first part of The General's Legacy and I imagine once both parts are released will form the first segment in the fantasy epic of The General Of Valendo. I am unaware how many books Hilder has planned to create in this world but this is a fascinating and highly positive start. This part is approximately 240 pages which I raced through within two days. The chapters tend to be 15-20 pages in length so I was given the "just one more chapter" buzz in the way good books can entice further reading. I will be honest and say that it is a shame that The General's Legacy is not being released as one novel. I don't know much about book marketing but I can imagine it is easier to get a 240-page debut commissioned than it is for a 500+ book. I wanted to clearly mention in my review that this is a two-parter as at the finale, things aren't as tied up or concluded as they are in most full fantasy stories, therefore; I didn't want people to look on this as a negative it if they weren't fully aware. Think more Sanderson publishing Words of Radiance Part 1 and Part 2 in the UK as separate books and you will get the idea. I could only give the book a four-star rating for the above reason. That being said, the last 50% of the book is great, especially the final few chapters. The last scene was interesting, unlike the others and there is an awesome reveal about where the story might go next. Depending on how Part 2 pans out then I may revisit this an upgrade to five-star if the combined full story deserves it but as a standalone, the rating is as I have set.
To conclude, although this doesn't reinvent the wheel, I can easily see the amount of effort Hilder has put into this book even if he wears some of his fantasy influences on his sleeve. It has been edited better than a lot of major name fantasy books I have read recently. This is an exceptional debut outing which fantasy fans should really know about. I think fans of The Faithful and the Fallen would definitely enjoy. I can see this attracting younger readers' too (say 14-18-year-olds) yet that isn't to say that that it doesn't include a good amount of horror and destruction because it does.
Thanks for reading. James x >>> www.youandibooks.wordpress.com
The tale begins in a highly intriguing manner with readers about to witness an epic battle revealing the intense hatred between the two opposing armies of Valendo and Nearhon. We are introduced to the aging General Garon who is one of the finest warriors, thinkers, and commanders ever recorded within the War Histories of Valendo. Fighting alongside him as many times before are some of his most trusted companions including the mage, Zeivite and the Silver Warrior, Quain. This prologue is a great introduction and is full of short sharp action set pieces showcasing the catastrophic effects this world's magic can wreck, highlighting the courage and wit of some of the characters involved and also included some pretty grotesque monsters controlled by enemy mages.
Fast forward fifteen years and we follow the happenings of current day Valendo. Mainly following the actions of three Princes whose grandfather is the above-mentioned general. The book isn't written in full chapter point of view perspectives like say, Game of Thrones. Instead, it switches between numerous characters actions and thoughts seamlessly well with the pacing nicely composed. These initial aspects introduced the players, family relationships, politics, histories and were slower than the intense prologue. This section was similar to the beginning of John Gwynne's - Malice.
The magic powers controlled by only a handful of individuals in any nation with destructive capabilities that can defeat entire armies is nothing really new to the genre but I think it is presented admirably and furthermore, two of the most interesting/complex characters are magic wielders. Although the action only really takes place in two of the nations, I think the main characters are well sculptured. These include Nearhon's archmage, Magnar and Prince Cory's potential love interests, Julia. About half way through this narrative, proceedings get really interesting when a new dangerous but unknown enemy to Valendo is introduced. At this point, things really heat up and the story is then crammed with numerous sieges, enhanced magery and also with some undead and a mysterious lizard-like man thrown into the mix.
Inheritance, as noted, is the first part of The General's Legacy and I imagine once both parts are released will form the first segment in the fantasy epic of The General Of Valendo. I am unaware how many books Hilder has planned to create in this world but this is a fascinating and highly positive start. This part is approximately 240 pages which I raced through within two days. The chapters tend to be 15-20 pages in length so I was given the "just one more chapter" buzz in the way good books can entice further reading. I will be honest and say that it is a shame that The General's Legacy is not being released as one novel. I don't know much about book marketing but I can imagine it is easier to get a 240-page debut commissioned than it is for a 500+ book. I wanted to clearly mention in my review that this is a two-parter as at the finale, things aren't as tied up or concluded as they are in most full fantasy stories, therefore; I didn't want people to look on this as a negative it if they weren't fully aware. Think more Sanderson publishing Words of Radiance Part 1 and Part 2 in the UK as separate books and you will get the idea. I could only give the book a four-star rating for the above reason. That being said, the last 50% of the book is great, especially the final few chapters. The last scene was interesting, unlike the others and there is an awesome reveal about where the story might go next. Depending on how Part 2 pans out then I may revisit this an upgrade to five-star if the combined full story deserves it but as a standalone, the rating is as I have set.
To conclude, although this doesn't reinvent the wheel, I can easily see the amount of effort Hilder has put into this book even if he wears some of his fantasy influences on his sleeve. It has been edited better than a lot of major name fantasy books I have read recently. This is an exceptional debut outing which fantasy fans should really know about. I think fans of The Faithful and the Fallen would definitely enjoy. I can see this attracting younger readers' too (say 14-18-year-olds) yet that isn't to say that that it doesn't include a good amount of horror and destruction because it does.
Thanks for reading. James x >>> www.youandibooks.wordpress.com
November 12, 2016
Fantasy lovers are in for a treat with Adrian Hilder’s THE GENERAL’S LEGACY: PART ONE: INHERITANCE! He was a legend, a fierce warrior and leader who was determined to conquer all he deemed necessary by use of magic, force and even the souls of the dead. His legacy to his grandson was to teach him all he could, but young Prince Cory had no idea how different these lessons were to the reality of war and bloodshed and it was his duty to lead his soldiers into battle and possibly their death.
Frustrated, young, in love with the enemy’s daughter, his heart is torn between defending his people from the attacks of soldiers, dark mages and magic to save his kingdom while leading his army to almost certain death and becoming the man who ends war, altogether. But will it cost him more than he can pay?
Vivid scenes of magic, battles, and a family in crisis, trapped in the life determined by the actions of a now dead ruler, the tension runs high and taut. Mr. Hilder has created a tale filled with loyalty, love and the evils of war and betrayals. Very detailed, yet magically riveting, the dialogue and the characters feel alive as we travel from scene to horrific scene in a land where the true strength of a kingdom is in the strength of the war mage they possess.
Prince Cory stands out as a young man determined to go beyond his limits for his people, his family and the land he loves. Well told, well thought out, complete with non-stop action as the battles continue and the death tolls rise.
I received an ARC edition from Adrian G. Hilder in exchange for my honest review.
Series: The General of Valendo - Book 1
Publisher: Camdaw (November 30, 2016)
Publication Date: November 30, 2016
Genre: Fantasy
Print Length: 247 pages
Available from: Amazon | Barnes & Noble
For Reviews & More: http://tometender.blogspot.com
Frustrated, young, in love with the enemy’s daughter, his heart is torn between defending his people from the attacks of soldiers, dark mages and magic to save his kingdom while leading his army to almost certain death and becoming the man who ends war, altogether. But will it cost him more than he can pay?
Vivid scenes of magic, battles, and a family in crisis, trapped in the life determined by the actions of a now dead ruler, the tension runs high and taut. Mr. Hilder has created a tale filled with loyalty, love and the evils of war and betrayals. Very detailed, yet magically riveting, the dialogue and the characters feel alive as we travel from scene to horrific scene in a land where the true strength of a kingdom is in the strength of the war mage they possess.
Prince Cory stands out as a young man determined to go beyond his limits for his people, his family and the land he loves. Well told, well thought out, complete with non-stop action as the battles continue and the death tolls rise.
I received an ARC edition from Adrian G. Hilder in exchange for my honest review.
Series: The General of Valendo - Book 1
Publisher: Camdaw (November 30, 2016)
Publication Date: November 30, 2016
Genre: Fantasy
Print Length: 247 pages
Available from: Amazon | Barnes & Noble
For Reviews & More: http://tometender.blogspot.com
July 15, 2017
I received this novel for free by signing up for Mr. Hilder's email newsletter. The below review is honest and spoiler free.
I truly feel that an author must take the time to study the various nuances of the beautiful craft of storytelling. And I am very pleased to say that Mr. Hilder has done so.
His gorgeous style of writing transported me directly into a world of magic, political shenanigans, war, love, mystery and waterfalls. This is a refreshing fantasy story that leaves the cursing, bloody descriptions (which I sometimes don't mind), and sex at the door in favor of a story I'd let my teenaged niece read if she read fantasy.
While no novel is perfect, there where a few minor things that detracted from the story, sometimes over-long descriptions, the oft repeated phrase "that word the soldiers use in the taverns" and, mentions of other countries without much context.
Because this is a truly epic tale, the story has been divided into two novels. I am diving into book 2 as soon as I complete this review.
I truly feel that an author must take the time to study the various nuances of the beautiful craft of storytelling. And I am very pleased to say that Mr. Hilder has done so.
His gorgeous style of writing transported me directly into a world of magic, political shenanigans, war, love, mystery and waterfalls. This is a refreshing fantasy story that leaves the cursing, bloody descriptions (which I sometimes don't mind), and sex at the door in favor of a story I'd let my teenaged niece read if she read fantasy.
While no novel is perfect, there where a few minor things that detracted from the story, sometimes over-long descriptions, the oft repeated phrase "that word the soldiers use in the taverns" and, mentions of other countries without much context.
Because this is a truly epic tale, the story has been divided into two novels. I am diving into book 2 as soon as I complete this review.
March 13, 2017
Outstanding! I haven't enjoyed a book this much in a long time. Inheritance has the emotional depth of Naomi Novik's Uprooted plus plenty of action, complex characters and a vivid setting. Overall excellent fantasy that makes you feel like you are there and makes you care about the people. I'm looking forward to reading the second in the series.
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March 29, 2017
Amazing book loved reading this wonderful story. A swords and sorcery what more can you ask for a truly exceptional first part of a truly wonderful larger story. My heart felt thanks to the author Adrian G. Hilder for the gift of allowing me to read one of his amazing stories. This book I would be so delighted to recommend this beautiful story to all my friends so to all happy reading from wee me. ☺♥
July 12, 2017
This is the first I have read from Mr. Hilder, and I am happy to say I loved it. The brother princes, the mages, and the warriors are all intertwined in a carefully constructed world of magic, battles and intrigue. The story is great and I highly recommend it to fantasy readers.
December 8, 2017
OVERVIEW/ANALYSIS: Adrian G. Hilder’s debut The General’s Legacy: Inheritance was a fantasy story that stays true to several beloved fantasy tropes and this was a story that does several things in a solid manner.
The story opens up in midst of an epic battle with soldiers, magic and monsters, we get several viewpoints in to this fight and get to meet several prominent characters such as General Garon, Zeivite the mage and the indomitable warrior Quain. Soon after the events of the battle in the prologue, the real story opens up nearly fifteen years later. We get to meet the grandchildren of general Garon and see how crucial the events of the battle were. The plot soon picks up as we are given may POV characters to follow but the main protagonist prince Cory is the one to watch out for.
Like I had mentioned in my short blurb that The General’s Legacy: Inheritance doesn’t do anything extraordinary. What it does quite well is that it focuses on the known tropes in epic fantasy:
1) Fantastical world settings
2) Heroic characters
3) Lots of action, snappy dialogue and rapid pace
This serves the story quite well as the reader will be taken on for quite a thrilling story as they witness Prince Cory doing his best to live up to his grandfather’s legacy and save the kingdom of Valendo from certain ruin. The action is often intense but never gritty, we know that the characters will be making out horrid scenarios with most of their wits and limbs intact. This aspect of the book might not appeal to jaded readers of the fantasy genre but to a younger audience or to readers who keep an open mind will definitely find something to enjoy with this book. The story also ends on a cliffhanger of sorts as I believe the author had to chop of the book into two parts because of its burgeoning length. This aspect is good to keep in mind as the climax isn’t artificially planned but done to better separate the two parts.
Overall this story was very much in line with the earlier books of Terry Brooks, Raymond Feist and to a certain extent by John Gwynne. Focusing on epic action, heroic characters, and an “easy to follow” magic system, Adrian G. Hilder crafts a terrific fantasy story that will have its fans and some detractors as well. I liked what I read and thought his efforts deserved a semifinal spot for its earnestness. The General’s Legacy: Inheritance is a story that will not surprise in terms of its scope but think of it as an excellent brew that you know hits the right spot always.
The story opens up in midst of an epic battle with soldiers, magic and monsters, we get several viewpoints in to this fight and get to meet several prominent characters such as General Garon, Zeivite the mage and the indomitable warrior Quain. Soon after the events of the battle in the prologue, the real story opens up nearly fifteen years later. We get to meet the grandchildren of general Garon and see how crucial the events of the battle were. The plot soon picks up as we are given may POV characters to follow but the main protagonist prince Cory is the one to watch out for.
Like I had mentioned in my short blurb that The General’s Legacy: Inheritance doesn’t do anything extraordinary. What it does quite well is that it focuses on the known tropes in epic fantasy:
1) Fantastical world settings
2) Heroic characters
3) Lots of action, snappy dialogue and rapid pace
This serves the story quite well as the reader will be taken on for quite a thrilling story as they witness Prince Cory doing his best to live up to his grandfather’s legacy and save the kingdom of Valendo from certain ruin. The action is often intense but never gritty, we know that the characters will be making out horrid scenarios with most of their wits and limbs intact. This aspect of the book might not appeal to jaded readers of the fantasy genre but to a younger audience or to readers who keep an open mind will definitely find something to enjoy with this book. The story also ends on a cliffhanger of sorts as I believe the author had to chop of the book into two parts because of its burgeoning length. This aspect is good to keep in mind as the climax isn’t artificially planned but done to better separate the two parts.
Overall this story was very much in line with the earlier books of Terry Brooks, Raymond Feist and to a certain extent by John Gwynne. Focusing on epic action, heroic characters, and an “easy to follow” magic system, Adrian G. Hilder crafts a terrific fantasy story that will have its fans and some detractors as well. I liked what I read and thought his efforts deserved a semifinal spot for its earnestness. The General’s Legacy: Inheritance is a story that will not surprise in terms of its scope but think of it as an excellent brew that you know hits the right spot always.
April 2, 2017
What a wonderful beginning to a new series by a new writer, Adrian G. Hilder. The General of Valendo – Mercenary General or King-Consort General Garon Allus Artifex-Dendra – is a man who has lived for and thrived on the defence of his kingdom, Valendo, whether as a mercenary or later as the King-Consort. His battles against Nearhon legendary. If you like a battle with magic and mages and men who place themselves on the line, then you’ll love the prologue.
The General dies and his son, {now} King Ceoric, is left in charge, but it’s the General’s grandsons, particularly Cory, who take up the ‘legacy’ of their recently deceased grandfather, someone Cory misses deeply and takes remembered counsel from even after his death.
Cory flowed his limbs and body through all the sequences the general had taught him — not battling against the grief within, just allowing it to be.
All three boys have distinct personalities and desires, but Prince Cory is the one who was thoroughly involved with his grandfather’s strategies and battle stories, the games played in Dendron Castle to teach them how to defend, how to strategize~
'How do you kill a battle mage?’ Cory asked.
‘Luck, or with another mage being really inventive, or… by killing them in their beds before they get to the battlefield,’ Garon replied tersely. They laughed, not taking him seriously. Garon didn’t laugh, his face darkening. ‘You can be sure the enemy has already thought of that.’ Then there was silence. ‘A new battle, boys.’
~ or maybe even how to handle the finely tuned delicacy of diplomacy when the battle is won so there might not be another; for all warriors do not carry weapons.
Fifteen years after the last battle, the kingdom and castle is fuelled by politics and talk of diplomacy. The representative council is full of discussions about reining in money spent on spies and armies in favour of diplomatic missions and trade. They believe that Nearhon and King Klonag pose no threat. After all, King Klonag’s niece, Julia, is visiting Tranmure, the capital of Volando. Why would he support or allow her visit if aggression was imminent? Before he died, the General was instrumental in Julia’s visit, that Cory would be the representative of Volando to see to her on her visit. Cory falls for Julia and Julia reciprocates his feelings, it could be a diplomatic and advantageous marriage for the previously aggressive countries but these are different times.
The days when the king’s word was law were now a distant memory only for the older generation. Now there were three representatives elected by the people to deal with. People with needs, expectations, dreams and fears.
The legacy provided to the three brothers ~ Pragius, Sebastian, and Cory~ is individual, and the consequences of war and long-held animosity affect them all. Inheritance is apt to the end of this book’s title because the kingdom the three princes inherit is dark and fraught with danger and uncertainty.
There are battles, there is magic and battle mages and beasties that come of the magic. Alongside that are arrows and swords and horses, but they are a backdrop to the powerful necromancy and the people, alive and dead, who are summoned when they are needed after the general is no longer able to be the defender of the realm. I found parts of the book to be emotional, especially Cory’s loss of his beloved grandfather and the events leading to and surrounding Pragius’ outcomes.
'All is well, Your Majesty. I attended to the delivery… personally. As always, the young prince returned home via the waterfall. Controlling him was a simple work of magic.’
‘This plan of yours will work, won’t it, Magnar?’ King Klonag did not look up from the fire as he spoke.
‘Of course, my king. I have had many years to plan.’ Magnar bared his teeth in a grin.
The reason this book received 4 stars instead of 5 from me was because of the head-hopping within chapters. I don’t mind a lively and multi-POV, especially when it progresses a story, but a smithy and a housekeeper are a bridge too far. Also, if a change of POV is written within a chapter segment it is superior to a switch within a paragraph or two. There are a lot of names, some of whom I found to be redundant, which could distract from the main voices. In a novel so full of positives I feel harsh, but there it is. Who knows, the next part may change my thoughts.
I’d like to finish by saying that this is a nicely written and tightly edited Young Adult + fantasy, one I feel will appeal to teenage readers up to older fantasy readers~ what an absolute positive that is! I believe the next book~ The General's Legacy - Part Two: Whiteland King ~ will be a buddy read for me very shortly and I’m keenly looking forward to it.
This very good fantasy book is currently free on Amazon [as @ March 31st, 2017.]
The General dies and his son, {now} King Ceoric, is left in charge, but it’s the General’s grandsons, particularly Cory, who take up the ‘legacy’ of their recently deceased grandfather, someone Cory misses deeply and takes remembered counsel from even after his death.
Cory flowed his limbs and body through all the sequences the general had taught him — not battling against the grief within, just allowing it to be.
All three boys have distinct personalities and desires, but Prince Cory is the one who was thoroughly involved with his grandfather’s strategies and battle stories, the games played in Dendron Castle to teach them how to defend, how to strategize~
'How do you kill a battle mage?’ Cory asked.
‘Luck, or with another mage being really inventive, or… by killing them in their beds before they get to the battlefield,’ Garon replied tersely. They laughed, not taking him seriously. Garon didn’t laugh, his face darkening. ‘You can be sure the enemy has already thought of that.’ Then there was silence. ‘A new battle, boys.’
~ or maybe even how to handle the finely tuned delicacy of diplomacy when the battle is won so there might not be another; for all warriors do not carry weapons.
Fifteen years after the last battle, the kingdom and castle is fuelled by politics and talk of diplomacy. The representative council is full of discussions about reining in money spent on spies and armies in favour of diplomatic missions and trade. They believe that Nearhon and King Klonag pose no threat. After all, King Klonag’s niece, Julia, is visiting Tranmure, the capital of Volando. Why would he support or allow her visit if aggression was imminent? Before he died, the General was instrumental in Julia’s visit, that Cory would be the representative of Volando to see to her on her visit. Cory falls for Julia and Julia reciprocates his feelings, it could be a diplomatic and advantageous marriage for the previously aggressive countries but these are different times.
The days when the king’s word was law were now a distant memory only for the older generation. Now there were three representatives elected by the people to deal with. People with needs, expectations, dreams and fears.
The legacy provided to the three brothers ~ Pragius, Sebastian, and Cory~ is individual, and the consequences of war and long-held animosity affect them all. Inheritance is apt to the end of this book’s title because the kingdom the three princes inherit is dark and fraught with danger and uncertainty.
There are battles, there is magic and battle mages and beasties that come of the magic. Alongside that are arrows and swords and horses, but they are a backdrop to the powerful necromancy and the people, alive and dead, who are summoned when they are needed after the general is no longer able to be the defender of the realm. I found parts of the book to be emotional, especially Cory’s loss of his beloved grandfather and the events leading to and surrounding Pragius’ outcomes.
'All is well, Your Majesty. I attended to the delivery… personally. As always, the young prince returned home via the waterfall. Controlling him was a simple work of magic.’
‘This plan of yours will work, won’t it, Magnar?’ King Klonag did not look up from the fire as he spoke.
‘Of course, my king. I have had many years to plan.’ Magnar bared his teeth in a grin.
The reason this book received 4 stars instead of 5 from me was because of the head-hopping within chapters. I don’t mind a lively and multi-POV, especially when it progresses a story, but a smithy and a housekeeper are a bridge too far. Also, if a change of POV is written within a chapter segment it is superior to a switch within a paragraph or two. There are a lot of names, some of whom I found to be redundant, which could distract from the main voices. In a novel so full of positives I feel harsh, but there it is. Who knows, the next part may change my thoughts.
I’d like to finish by saying that this is a nicely written and tightly edited Young Adult + fantasy, one I feel will appeal to teenage readers up to older fantasy readers~ what an absolute positive that is! I believe the next book~ The General's Legacy - Part Two: Whiteland King ~ will be a buddy read for me very shortly and I’m keenly looking forward to it.
This very good fantasy book is currently free on Amazon [as @ March 31st, 2017.]
July 10, 2017
The prologue plunges the reader straight into a historically significant battle. A number of short scenes using viewpoint changes convey a great deal of important information in relatively few pages. We meet the general, mages, and commanders. I had to pay attention to keep all these characters and their roles straight and was glad to settle into Cory's viewpoint in chapter one. There, we see what unfolds after the death of his grandfather, the General.
This book encompasses several character's viewpoints, but the reader is given enough time to understand the main players' personalities and motivations. Aside from the main character, Cory, we spend quite a while with Price Pragius, who finds himself ensnared by a book of dark magic. I found this part especially interesting.
I won't go into the plot in great detail, as others have already done so; I'll simply say that this book is a good fit for readers who enjoy political tensions and military strategies mixed with magic. The story arc continues in book two, and I only read the first book, so it's impossible to judge the plot in its entirety. Given a choice, I would have preferred an ending that made it clear there was more to come but felt less abrupt. Most readers will want to read the conclusion, and fortunately, the second volume is available.
This book encompasses several character's viewpoints, but the reader is given enough time to understand the main players' personalities and motivations. Aside from the main character, Cory, we spend quite a while with Price Pragius, who finds himself ensnared by a book of dark magic. I found this part especially interesting.
I won't go into the plot in great detail, as others have already done so; I'll simply say that this book is a good fit for readers who enjoy political tensions and military strategies mixed with magic. The story arc continues in book two, and I only read the first book, so it's impossible to judge the plot in its entirety. Given a choice, I would have preferred an ending that made it clear there was more to come but felt less abrupt. Most readers will want to read the conclusion, and fortunately, the second volume is available.
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June 8, 2017I am the author of The General's Legacy, so I will not leave a star rating.
The General's Legacy is published in two parts, Part One: Inheritance was released November 30, 2016. The conclusion to the story is in Part Two: Whiteland Kind that was released on February 28, 2017.
You can get your own copy of Inheritance free from adrianhilder.com when you join my mailing list. Just look for the 'Get my Free Book' button.
A sample of genuine comments people have made about the whole story:
"I loved the story. Such a unique storyline. I had a hard time putting it down. I can hardly wait for the next book."
"Was a very solid story line, and keeps you hooked from the start. Well worth the read. Hard to find a good book in the fantasy section these days. Glad I stumbled across this one."
"Damn, we're at the end."
"This plot's so tight I can hear it screeching..."
And of the climax that is coming up in Part Two: Whiteland King my editor made a couple of comments:
"So clever – did not really see this coming! I'm gobsmacked, I love this!"
Others have judged The General's Legacy to strike an ideal balance between world building and plot progression - it's a fast-paced read with mystery and intrigue.
Happy reading!
The General's Legacy is published in two parts, Part One: Inheritance was released November 30, 2016. The conclusion to the story is in Part Two: Whiteland Kind that was released on February 28, 2017.
You can get your own copy of Inheritance free from adrianhilder.com when you join my mailing list. Just look for the 'Get my Free Book' button.
A sample of genuine comments people have made about the whole story:
"I loved the story. Such a unique storyline. I had a hard time putting it down. I can hardly wait for the next book."
"Was a very solid story line, and keeps you hooked from the start. Well worth the read. Hard to find a good book in the fantasy section these days. Glad I stumbled across this one."
"Damn, we're at the end."
"This plot's so tight I can hear it screeching..."
And of the climax that is coming up in Part Two: Whiteland King my editor made a couple of comments:
"So clever – did not really see this coming! I'm gobsmacked, I love this!"
Others have judged The General's Legacy to strike an ideal balance between world building and plot progression - it's a fast-paced read with mystery and intrigue.
Happy reading!
November 30, 2016
This is a good first novel from Adrian G. Hilder. While not perfect this book has a great pace and enough intrigue to keep your eyes on the page. The book starts with a great action scene that gets you hooked as well as sets up the divisive issue of the plot.
But if you are worried that this is another slow mover like GoT or any of those politics heavy series, never fear! This novel is well paced throughout even in the more slower, political moments. There are also a few twists here and there that keep the reader on their toes and guessing as to the plan of action.
There are also likable characters, something that is a must for me, as I hate cheering for the bad guy! You feel for them in the situation that they have been thrown into as they are more than a little unprepared and it gives them a sense of humanity.
There are also a few love interests and sub-plots woven in that gives the whole mix an added depth of flavor and interest.
Over all this classic fantasy (it even has a magic sword and mages!), is a fun read that I really enjoyed. It was light, yet have enough serious notes to keep a good balance between the serious and the light making it easy to read.
At no point do you feel like you need to take a break and read something else.
On top of that you have moments of great prose to enjoy and savor speckled throughout, and you get the feeling that this is a author to watch and I would recommend this novel to anyone looking for a new author or to anyone who wants a classic fantasy where there are magic swords, mages, danger, action, and good characters. -
But if you are worried that this is another slow mover like GoT or any of those politics heavy series, never fear! This novel is well paced throughout even in the more slower, political moments. There are also a few twists here and there that keep the reader on their toes and guessing as to the plan of action.
There are also likable characters, something that is a must for me, as I hate cheering for the bad guy! You feel for them in the situation that they have been thrown into as they are more than a little unprepared and it gives them a sense of humanity.
There are also a few love interests and sub-plots woven in that gives the whole mix an added depth of flavor and interest.
Over all this classic fantasy (it even has a magic sword and mages!), is a fun read that I really enjoyed. It was light, yet have enough serious notes to keep a good balance between the serious and the light making it easy to read.
At no point do you feel like you need to take a break and read something else.
On top of that you have moments of great prose to enjoy and savor speckled throughout, and you get the feeling that this is a author to watch and I would recommend this novel to anyone looking for a new author or to anyone who wants a classic fantasy where there are magic swords, mages, danger, action, and good characters. -
Bookshelves covered the walls. The Knowledge of the kingdom lay within the book lined up on the shelves. They spoke of the clamour of Ephire's floating markets on the great river. They told the tales of eager boys pushing exotic fruits into the hands of bewildered visitors. They described pack animals adding their perfume to the streets where beggars pray their next meal-- streets where press gangs and slavers stalk in search of the able and unlucky.
December 30, 2016
I was really impressed by this first book by Adrian Hilder. I found that the writing style pacy and richly described, more akin Brandon Sanderson than JRR Tolkein. Believable characters abound, and the story unfolds through a series of events that, whilst based in fantasy, do not require you to leap through mental "why on earth" hoops that I have seen with other books.
I would recommend this to anyone who enjoys the modern genre of fantasy, where the imagery is described as if you are watching a box set. Well paced and with a gentle humor. I can't wait for the second book so I can find out how the story unfolds.
I would recommend this to anyone who enjoys the modern genre of fantasy, where the imagery is described as if you are watching a box set. Well paced and with a gentle humor. I can't wait for the second book so I can find out how the story unfolds.
February 27, 2017
A well written fantasy.
This is a good fantasy involving all things that a book should have. Kings, Mages, betrayal and necromancer. I can't wait for the next one. I received this book for free, but voluntarily reviewed it.
This is a good fantasy involving all things that a book should have. Kings, Mages, betrayal and necromancer. I can't wait for the next one. I received this book for free, but voluntarily reviewed it.
April 12, 2017
The next book I’m reviewing is The General’s Legacy: Inheritance by Adrian G. Hilder, the first of the ‘General of Valendo’ series. The series (which so far includes just two books) is high/epic fantasy, set in a medieval-style world of kings and knights and wizards.
As explained in the prologue, the land of Valendo is the neighbor and sometimes enemy of the land of Nearhon. The heroic general Garon once fought against the invading people of Nearhon with the aid of the warrior Quain and the mage Zeivite. The opposing country fought using supernatural monsters called Rippers, summoned by a wicked mage named Magnar. Garon and his companions defeated the invaders and brought peace to the land, and the book’s main narrative begins decades later when Nearhon begins showing signs of new aggression. The heroes of the former war are now gray and elderly veterans, training the new generation for the possibility of another war. The main character is Cory, the grandson of Garon, who becomes romantically involved with Julia, the princess of Nearhon, with the hopes of their union helping to keep the peace between their lands. The story sort of crawls along with that plot for a while, until things pick up when Magnar manages to bewitch a prince of Valendo, Pragius, transforming him into a necromancer who raises an army of burning undead skeleton soldiers to conquer Valendo. This is the most prominent use of magic in the book, and for that I suppose a reader might choose to categorize the book as dark fantasy.
I don’t want to give too serious of spoilers for any of my readers who might want to look into this book later, but one peeve I have with this book is its lack of resolution. It ends with a cliffhanger, and for me the narrative arc felt very incomplete. Readers have different opinions about cliffhangers of course, and some readers wouldn’t be bothered by it. The book had a neat premise for me, and that was a strength for it. Lack of originality is an issue I’ve seen with a lot of indie/self-published fantasy, and this particular book had a story that I haven’t seen before, so I was pleased with that.
One persistent issue I had with the book was the way that it used metaphor and personification. It’s good for writing to be descriptive, but this book used a lot of descriptions that didn’t make very much sense and overall diminished the quality of the book. There were also a fair number of typoes and editing errors throughout the book. Of course, this happens with self-published work and I’m certainly in no position to condemn.
To wrap this up, I’ll say that The General’s Legacy: Inheritance will appeal to fans of the genre, and is a promising first work for a fantasy series. I found it enjoyable.
As explained in the prologue, the land of Valendo is the neighbor and sometimes enemy of the land of Nearhon. The heroic general Garon once fought against the invading people of Nearhon with the aid of the warrior Quain and the mage Zeivite. The opposing country fought using supernatural monsters called Rippers, summoned by a wicked mage named Magnar. Garon and his companions defeated the invaders and brought peace to the land, and the book’s main narrative begins decades later when Nearhon begins showing signs of new aggression. The heroes of the former war are now gray and elderly veterans, training the new generation for the possibility of another war. The main character is Cory, the grandson of Garon, who becomes romantically involved with Julia, the princess of Nearhon, with the hopes of their union helping to keep the peace between their lands. The story sort of crawls along with that plot for a while, until things pick up when Magnar manages to bewitch a prince of Valendo, Pragius, transforming him into a necromancer who raises an army of burning undead skeleton soldiers to conquer Valendo. This is the most prominent use of magic in the book, and for that I suppose a reader might choose to categorize the book as dark fantasy.
I don’t want to give too serious of spoilers for any of my readers who might want to look into this book later, but one peeve I have with this book is its lack of resolution. It ends with a cliffhanger, and for me the narrative arc felt very incomplete. Readers have different opinions about cliffhangers of course, and some readers wouldn’t be bothered by it. The book had a neat premise for me, and that was a strength for it. Lack of originality is an issue I’ve seen with a lot of indie/self-published fantasy, and this particular book had a story that I haven’t seen before, so I was pleased with that.
One persistent issue I had with the book was the way that it used metaphor and personification. It’s good for writing to be descriptive, but this book used a lot of descriptions that didn’t make very much sense and overall diminished the quality of the book. There were also a fair number of typoes and editing errors throughout the book. Of course, this happens with self-published work and I’m certainly in no position to condemn.
To wrap this up, I’ll say that The General’s Legacy: Inheritance will appeal to fans of the genre, and is a promising first work for a fantasy series. I found it enjoyable.
October 5, 2017
The General’s Legacy, Part I – Inheritance
Author Adrian G. Hilder lures readers in a fantasy world of courage, love, magic and more.
“The General’s Legacy, Part I – Inheritance” is the debut novel of Mr. Hilder. The book starts with an epic battle in which the long-lasting animosity between the two armies transpires – the ones of Valendo and Nearhon kingdoms.
The ruler of Nearhon, an evil king, obsessed with conquering the kingdom of Valendo, uses magic and monsters to achieve his dark goals. Over the years the state of Valendo was defended by its legendary King-consort – General Garon Allus Artifex-Dendra. The old man had left his legacy with his grandson Prince Cory, training him into the art of war as well as teaching him everything he thought necessary for the protection of the country. But after the death of the General, the young man’s life changes dramatically with an unexpected attack of the enemy, striking at the very heart of the kingdom of Valendo.
“The General’s Legacy, Part I – Inheritance” is not a very easy read as you have to find your way to remember the names of all characters, places as well as past events in a complex story line. But this only contributes to the overall pleasure of reading a well-written story with an original plot and vivid characters you can sympathise with. What more could fantasy novels’ fans desire? I would certainly love to read the second part of “The General’s Legacy”!
Author Adrian G. Hilder lures readers in a fantasy world of courage, love, magic and more.
“The General’s Legacy, Part I – Inheritance” is the debut novel of Mr. Hilder. The book starts with an epic battle in which the long-lasting animosity between the two armies transpires – the ones of Valendo and Nearhon kingdoms.
The ruler of Nearhon, an evil king, obsessed with conquering the kingdom of Valendo, uses magic and monsters to achieve his dark goals. Over the years the state of Valendo was defended by its legendary King-consort – General Garon Allus Artifex-Dendra. The old man had left his legacy with his grandson Prince Cory, training him into the art of war as well as teaching him everything he thought necessary for the protection of the country. But after the death of the General, the young man’s life changes dramatically with an unexpected attack of the enemy, striking at the very heart of the kingdom of Valendo.
“The General’s Legacy, Part I – Inheritance” is not a very easy read as you have to find your way to remember the names of all characters, places as well as past events in a complex story line. But this only contributes to the overall pleasure of reading a well-written story with an original plot and vivid characters you can sympathise with. What more could fantasy novels’ fans desire? I would certainly love to read the second part of “The General’s Legacy”!
March 31, 2017
It took me a minute to figure out what this story was about. It starts with the famous General Garon and his battle with an enemy king and their battle mages. Then it turns into years later and Garon's grandsons are in charge. I'm not a big war story kind of girl but I did like the paranormal aspects of the story. It was a good read. There are mages and magical beasts but there is also a lot of remembering the past and trying to figure out the problems of today. I think I got lost when the story jumped from past to present. There are also a LOT of characters to remember. If you can get through that, the story itself if pretty good.
I did have to knock a star off because it's a cliff hanger and I HATE cliff hangers.
I did have to knock a star off because it's a cliff hanger and I HATE cliff hangers.
November 27, 2017
Nice read
Good story about a young man coming into his own. The story does not come to any kind of conclusions here. Book 2 must be read. Likeable characters but we mainly follow the main. Give it a try but prepare to buy 2 books. I liked it.
Good story about a young man coming into his own. The story does not come to any kind of conclusions here. Book 2 must be read. Likeable characters but we mainly follow the main. Give it a try but prepare to buy 2 books. I liked it.
October 17, 2017
book was good it is a shame that it had to be cut in 2 though.
March 1, 2017
A stellar debut!
This tale begins with an intense prologue as readers are about to witness an epic battle between the two opposing armies of Valendo and Nearhon. This is a great introduction and is full of action sequences demonstrating the catastrophic magic and grotesque monsters controlled by the enemy wizards. The main story starts fifteen years later in current day Valendo. The pace slows a bit as the main characters are introduced and some necessary foundations of politics and history are laid. The action picks back up when a dangerous, unknown enemy to Valendo is introduced. There are plenty of battles, magical and otherwise. This is the first of at least two parts, so the story isn't finished. I hope Mr. Hilder plans to follow up his amazing fantasy debut with lots more books. I would recommend this to anyone a fast-paced fantasy novel with well drawn characters and a touch of humor. I can't wait to read future books so I can find where the story goes.
I received a free copy of this book and this is voluntary review.
This tale begins with an intense prologue as readers are about to witness an epic battle between the two opposing armies of Valendo and Nearhon. This is a great introduction and is full of action sequences demonstrating the catastrophic magic and grotesque monsters controlled by the enemy wizards. The main story starts fifteen years later in current day Valendo. The pace slows a bit as the main characters are introduced and some necessary foundations of politics and history are laid. The action picks back up when a dangerous, unknown enemy to Valendo is introduced. There are plenty of battles, magical and otherwise. This is the first of at least two parts, so the story isn't finished. I hope Mr. Hilder plans to follow up his amazing fantasy debut with lots more books. I would recommend this to anyone a fast-paced fantasy novel with well drawn characters and a touch of humor. I can't wait to read future books so I can find where the story goes.
I received a free copy of this book and this is voluntary review.
March 7, 2017
A fantastic read from start to finish.The chapters flow seamlessly and you find yourself finishing one chapter and going straight to the next regardless of time or plans.I thoroughly recommend this to anyone who loves fantasy
April 26, 2019
Great read, highly recommended, I put down two other books to finish the generals legacy.
June 27, 2017
The first installment in The General of Valendo is also Mr. Hilder's first novel. I found it to be a very well written debut novel. I found myself really enjoying the story once I got out of the prologue. That isn't to say I would skip the prologue altogether, it just isn't as fast paced as the rest of the book. The prologue does serve a purpose as it gives you an idea of where you're at once you hit chapter 1. I love the little historical facts at the beginning of each chapter as well!
I found the character development and structure to be top notch. You really get a great feeling of who the characters are and what they want to do, and then when they do it, you're not surprised because of how Mr. Hilder has written them. I was easily able to transport myself into Valendo and actually visualize myself riding along with Prince Cory and standing atop a mountain with Zeivite. I loved the imagery that throughout the story but also that Mr. Hilder didn't lose himself in trying to describe every minute detail of information and lose me completely on a page and a half of describing the view Prince Cory gets riding along a stream. I think if Mr. Hilder continues on this path he will be an author I read for a very long time.
Prince Cory, the grandson of the great General Garon Allus Artifex-Dendra, seems to have been groomed for the position of taking over as the next General of Valendo. His grandfather has given him the toolset and now he must find a way to use the tools. Tasked with saving a kingdom and living up to his grandfather's last name, Prince Cory has to put together a regiment of mages, scouts, and mercenaries in a battle to save Valendo from a vindictive King who was defeated by his grandfather 15 years ago and seems hell bent on doing anything to accomplish his task of ruling all of Valendo. Navigating the murky waters of falling in love with his enemies niece and saving his family and country is a task few seem able to handle, with the exception of Prince Cory who seems determined to do whatever it takes to keep his family and land right where it belongs.
As well written as the novel was, it wasn't without it's pitfalls. It was a little straight forward and there were no twists and turns. There were no surprises to be found and you could easily make inferences as to what would happen next. Also, the cliff hanger was a killer! Gah! Hated it.
Overall, the fighting scenes were epic, the story was fantastic, and I can't wait to see what happens next to everyone involved! Will definitely be reading #2!
I found the character development and structure to be top notch. You really get a great feeling of who the characters are and what they want to do, and then when they do it, you're not surprised because of how Mr. Hilder has written them. I was easily able to transport myself into Valendo and actually visualize myself riding along with Prince Cory and standing atop a mountain with Zeivite. I loved the imagery that throughout the story but also that Mr. Hilder didn't lose himself in trying to describe every minute detail of information and lose me completely on a page and a half of describing the view Prince Cory gets riding along a stream. I think if Mr. Hilder continues on this path he will be an author I read for a very long time.
Prince Cory, the grandson of the great General Garon Allus Artifex-Dendra, seems to have been groomed for the position of taking over as the next General of Valendo. His grandfather has given him the toolset and now he must find a way to use the tools. Tasked with saving a kingdom and living up to his grandfather's last name, Prince Cory has to put together a regiment of mages, scouts, and mercenaries in a battle to save Valendo from a vindictive King who was defeated by his grandfather 15 years ago and seems hell bent on doing anything to accomplish his task of ruling all of Valendo. Navigating the murky waters of falling in love with his enemies niece and saving his family and country is a task few seem able to handle, with the exception of Prince Cory who seems determined to do whatever it takes to keep his family and land right where it belongs.
As well written as the novel was, it wasn't without it's pitfalls. It was a little straight forward and there were no twists and turns. There were no surprises to be found and you could easily make inferences as to what would happen next. Also, the cliff hanger was a killer! Gah! Hated it.
Overall, the fighting scenes were epic, the story was fantastic, and I can't wait to see what happens next to everyone involved! Will definitely be reading #2!
May 7, 2017
The General’s Legacy: Inheritance is a very good fantasy war story. It tells the story of battle mages, undead skeletons that rise from underground and enemy kings. It starts off a little slow, but picks up and keep you wanting to know what will happen next; then it ends!
I give this book 4 stars because some parts I felt could have been left out which drag the story on longer that it should, but overall I its a good read and I enjoyed the book. I am looking forward to part II to see how it all ends.
I give this book 4 stars because some parts I felt could have been left out which drag the story on longer that it should, but overall I its a good read and I enjoyed the book. I am looking forward to part II to see how it all ends.
June 20, 2020
Excellent, we'll written, we'll thought out story, Action and Suspence filled!
Complements to the Author!
Complements to the Author!
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June 23, 2017DNF at 10% (half skimming)
The whole prologue was 9%. I couldn't get interested. The blurb already told me the general dies. I guess he dies in a really clever way or when he saves his kingdom? I don't know, but I didn't want to spend dozens of pages just to get to the MC of the book. So, I rushed forward to the part with the grandson and read a few pages, but he didn't catch my interest.
The whole prologue was 9%. I couldn't get interested. The blurb already told me the general dies. I guess he dies in a really clever way or when he saves his kingdom? I don't know, but I didn't want to spend dozens of pages just to get to the MC of the book. So, I rushed forward to the part with the grandson and read a few pages, but he didn't catch my interest.
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