Touch Me

by Cait Sarai

''I was born in flames and chaos. In one moment, I didn't exist at all. In another, the air was tearing through the flesh of my lungs.''

Deep in an unknown forest, a young woman woke up alone and confused. She had no knowledge of her past, what she was, or who she was. Why was she in this world at all?

Fate drove her into the hands of a family of vampires, all of whom brought relief in the slightest touch of her skin. But their touch was more than addicting. With each stroke, mysterious etches appeared on her flesh, divulging information thought to be lost to the world; information of magic, power, and a viciously murdered coven of witches.

With no past and an uncertain future, she must find out her purpose in this life before the supernatural world takes her for all she has to give. Even more so, she must attempt to understand a craving she has for the dangerous vampire family she's found herself enslaved to; a craving to be touched.

All Rights Reserved © 2015

Genres: Romance, Paranormal

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Reviews

[샤나야 · Rating 4 out of 5]

I wish there were more fighting scenes. I mean Katia has so much power and doesn't show off? Whyyyy?😀

[Pickyreader · Rating 3 out of 5]

This was my first wattpad book. I was a fun quick read. There is room for improvement but Cait Sarai is a talented writer.

[Michael · Rating 2 out of 5]

I still like her writing style and will go back to her Struck series when she finishes it, but this book just wasn’t for me. It was more smut than plot and hard for me to understand any of the characters motivations. Also, I felt that the first 37 chapters were build up (and many entire chapters don’t move the plot forward at all) and then the last 3 chapters cram in rising action, climax and aftermath. It was a slow build and then altogether rushed.

[Couleen Santos · Rating 3 out of 5]

It was fine for an easy read type of novel. But i must say that there could be so much more room for improvements huehue

[Laura · Rating 4 out of 5]

4.5

[ira · Rating 3 out of 5]

3.5 ⭐️ plot wasn’t as developed as much as it could be and ending felt rushed

[Antonella · Rating 3 out of 5]

The ending was just meh but the rest of the book was great!

[Doaa · Rating 3 out of 5]

I recently came upon this book on Wattpad and it caught my attention. The story is promising, and I'm sure that, with a little more editing and storyline enhancements, it has the potential to be published. As a reader, I appreciate the author's talent and find the book quite enjoyable. However, since this book was written on Wattpad, I'm unsure how to provide feedback. There are differences between online novellas and traditionally published books that make it hard to review impartially books created on social networks. Novels published on Wattpad, especially, differ from paperback books, because of their different target audiences. As such, important aspects like plot flow and chapter length are typically overlooked or rushed.
Nevertheless, with more focus on the book's captivating characters, engaging plot, and beautiful writing could appeal to a broad audience, particularly young adult readers. What impressed me was the author's unique take on the vampire trope. I think it would be a shame for such a fascinating twist on such an overused trope to go to waste due to insufficient world-building. Therefore, I suggest that the author consider making some modifications(the flow of the plot, but all other aspects of the book just need some delving into) if she ever decides to publish the book. I believe it would be a great fit for young adult readers.