Woah, woah, woah, slow down. That's how I felt about this book. It started out very strong, with a totally unique premise (half English, half Roman tour guide Francesca is engaged to a man but stirred with desire for another man) & a whole betrayal/revelation (when reading the premise, I had assumed that this Angelo guy was old & ugly and it wouldn't be too hard for the new guy to steal Francesca away from Angelo--it didn't happen exactly like that...Angelo was actually very handsome) & scorching heat & steam with the first sex scene in the middle of the book. I really liked the first sex scene and stupidly expected & hoped for just as good and detailed later sex scenes. Sadly, that did not happen. I would have definitely liked this book better if the other, later sex scenes were as detailed as the first. (I would have rated most of the book a 4, verging maybe to a 5.)
No, the main problem with the book was the whole ending. I as the reader was given whiplash with who was telling the truth over her inheritance. Even Carlo seemed to be deceitful. I mean, he definitely took advantage of her. At the end of the book, I feel like neither man even cared for her enough to let her decide what SHE wanted to do, who SHE wanted to be with. Also, Carlo didn't seem to respect her enough. He was just like you're mine, I want you so badly, I'm the boss.
Also, it was terrible how they were wrapping up the conflict on the second to last page, and I as the reader was confused to the very end. Then, Francesca seemed sick in a way that I assumed her to be pregnant, but it wasn't even confirmed at the end of the novel, so it seemed like a loose plot point!
And LASTLY, Francesca definitely fit the trope of TSTL (too stupid to live). I hated when I would read other reviews, and people would write that about the female characters who I loved & respected, and felt that title was quite far from the truth. But Francesca really fit it. She was not the sharpest tool in the shed, to be honest. I got pissed off when she signed Carlo's documents without reading what they were about! You never do that!! That's how you get taken advantage of. Any high functioning adult should be able to figure that out.
Okay, I know I said lastly, but one more thing: I'm not sure how Carlo was even in love with her at the end of the novel because her personality (extreme naivety, not too bright, her hostility towards him) was not too amazing. So he must have been enamored with her because of the amazing chemistry, desire, and sex between them, idk! I liked her personality in the beginning, as I like most heroines, but she let 2 ppl very close to her fool her. Didn't have a good taste in friends (Sonya was a terrible friend & not the best person either!)
It was a shame that the end of the novel pissed me off because the first half and middle were so promising, exciting, & hot! If only it had continued & there had been less talk of this whole inheritance that confused me & even Francesca! Seriously, did an editor even read this? There were no grammatical errors I noticed, but bad point plots! With some editing, this book would have been great. I also felt like the author either had a deadline, page limit count or something, because she was rushing the end of the book, and it was like why. If I was Michelle Reid, I would have thought to myself you know, this end is really not good. Let me go back and fix it, lol. Like omg!!!