2.5 STARS
I was very torn on how to review Third Base. I wavered on whether or not to round up to 3 STARS because there were things I really liked about this book, but I felt there was just too much left to be desired and at the end of the day, the book just fell short.
Much of Third Base flowed smoothly, I felt it moved quickly and I enjoyed it at times. I very much appreciated that Heidi McLaughlin changed up the predictability of this sports romance by writing it from the point of view of the hero, the athlete, Ethan Davenport. His romantic interest, Daisy, was more of a mystery in this story and I liked that I didn't really know what to expect.
With that said, there were many times where things felt very disjointed, a bit all over the place. The connection between these characters was missing something. They went from barely divulging any information about their lives with each other to rapidly falling for each other and jumping into bed without a fluid, believable transition. I'll admit that at around the 40% mark I contemplated DNFing, but instead decided to browse other reviews, something I never do, because I wanted to see if it was just me who was struggling to find a connection, to see if things picked up. A review that angrily called Ethan a cheater made me dive right back into the book because I love a story where the main character does something icky to cause pain and angst and emotional turmoil, so I was definitely curious to see where this story was going to go after seeing that. I'm not sure I'd consider what does transpire as cheating, but I will say that it was one of my favorite parts of the book because it added an angsty, dramatic layer I felt the book had been lacking.
Heidi McLaughlin is a lovely writer, and there was a lot about this story that I did enjoy. But as a whole, the story just didn't feel as thoroughly fleshed out as I felt it could have been, nor do I feel that it turned out to be an especially memorable book. The big twist, Daisy's secrets, I couldn't buy into. I can't elaborate without spoilers, I'll just say that none of it jived for me personally. I know it sounds crazy that I can overlook what Ethan did but can't really wrap my head around Daisy's deception, but I just didn't understand it. It just didn't work for me. I wasn't sold.
At the end of the day, I think readers will like this story for its light romanticism and the refreshing perspective of Ethan. I also should note that I'm looking forward to seeing more about Ethan's teammates, I hope they get their own books. As far as Heidi McLaughlin's books go, this story fell short of what I'd hoped, but I certainly look forward to more.