All Too Familiar Cliched SciFi Storyline
"Death Comes But Once," is a quick, somewhat entertaining, unoriginal, and lazily constructed SciFi story.
The basic storyline takes place centuries in the future, where the human civilization ("Commonwealth") is a semi-functional government, stealthily combating a wealthy cabal from within, and an aggressive alien empire without. A murky, neutral zone between the two (2) civilizations, occupied by various species, including humans, is the environment of proxy combat, smuggling, slavery, espionage-you get the gist. A competent, experienced, Pathfinder Marine noncom, after being jettisoned from the military, becomes the unwitting, manipulated pawn of some of the involved players.
The writing is barely ok, as the author needs to hone his skill set. The word "...but...," appears so often, it is nearly a nervous writing tic. The main character is a one dimensional cliche: hardened vet abandoned, falls into alcoholic haze, rescues young, junkie hooker, falls into an espionage game of others, while trying to right himself, and copulates with abandon, falling in love often. He is also submissive to women he finds sexually attractive. The plot lines, devices, are borrow from various, well known sources. It's a bit hackneyed, eliciting the sense of "...been there, done that...," while reading.
The editing and proofreading reading are lackadaisical, with more than a few errors. The eBook is readable and mostly entertaining.
The eBook is a qualified recommended and was fully read via Kindle Unlimited.