While searching for a romantic read, I stumbled across this “new to me” author on NetGalley. Though I certainly never shy away from angst, I just got to say this started off as one very depressing storyline. Trey, Harmony’s “married him only because he’s my teenage baby daddy” husband and child are killed right off the bat. It is under that gut-wrenching scenario she meets the firefighter/first responder hero, Preston Ward. After not being able to save her son, he’s drawn into her circle of loss and despair and obviously hopes to find some peace for himself by helping her and her brother, Jake, move on.
Preston has a live-in girlfriend, Sherry. He’s been dating her for two years, so, needless to say, she’s getting ticked off and antsy he hasn’t popped the question. Though he’s considered it, even looked at rings, he can’t seem to bring himself to do it. Why? He can’t picture himself being married to her. (Raising my eyebrow here) So…why the heck is he still with her? It wasn’t hard for me to figure it out. She is one of those sugary sweet, bitchy types who looks down on him because he doesn’t have a high paying job. Sort of like the female character Lemon in Hart of Dixie. Smiles while she is hurling demeaning insults. Unfortunately, that still doesn’t explain why Preston didn’t cut her loose long before meeting Harmony.
Anyway, there are a couple very brief, not overly detailed smexy scenes where Preston allows his girlfriend to help take his mind off of Harmony’s tragic car accident. I’m mentioning because that is a major no-no to some readers. They deserve a heads-up if that’s a deal breaker for them. I can’t say I’m a fan of it myself and didn’t really see the point in including it. Also, there are a few occasions where Harmony mentally compares Trey to Preston…in all possible ways. I think you catch my drift there (physically, emotionally, sexually). Other men/other women drama, dead or alive, is something I prefer left out of all my romantic reads.
It isn’t too long until Preston does break things off with Sherry and finds himself spending more time with Harmony, who recently discovered another reason her husband had been distant the last six months or so. It’s an issue that is explained in even more unwanted details later on. Again, I simply didn’t see the point in adding that element, as well. Marrying him because of the baby was enough drama.
Though most of it was well-written, I must admit if this were a made for TV movie I probably would have changed the channel early on. With its Nicholas Sparks type beginning, I’m usually not up for a lot of sad drama. By 50% into it, I was still waiting for this couple to declare their feelings for one another and take it to the next level. Instead I got a lot of inner dialog why they were attracted to each other and unimportant sub-characters popping out of thin air and hitting on them. I found myself searching for a reason to continue reading. Yes, it was sweet to see them falling for each other but very slow paced, noneventful. That writing trend continued even after they became intimate and officially started dating. My fellow romance book-loving friends, this book just seemed overly l-o-n-g for the limited storyline. When the predictable yet irrational separation came near the end, I was so disengaged I just wanted it to end. In fact, I stopped reading at 90%. Yes, they got their HEA, but by then I didn’t care about any more specific details. I was tired of all the talk about feelings, and frankly, just tired of the whole story.
Title: Searching For Harmony, Author: Kelly Elliott, Pages: not listed, stand-alone, firefighter/first responder hero, heroine’s husband & 18 month old child die, brief OW drama, married due to teenage pregnancy, classy bookcover, slow paced, sweet, innocent, friendship relationship the first half, starts dating around 60%, good guy hero, some steamy scenes with lusty language, young adult romance.
(This review is based on ARC generously provided by the author in exchange for an honest, unbiased opinion. No compensation was paid to the reviewer nor is there any affiliation between the reviewer and author/publisher.)