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344 pages, Paperback
First published November 9, 2015
In a different time, there was a forest that was as deep as it was plentiful. . .That phraseology isn't wrong -- but it's easy to overuse, and when you do it once in each of the first three paragraphs, you might was well be waving a flag to draw attention to it. Now, there's no author that doesn't stumble a bit, I can't tall you how many times I've posted something here that I wish I'd rewritten a few times -- I don't want to pick on him, but wow, this kind of thing kept coming.
That boy, Novas, possessed deep green eyes as verdant as the wild around him . . .
. . . He was taught that the land was just as alive as he was . . ."
"Over my employment, many people tried to kill the King, and it was my duty to stand in between them. Instead, I put them to death..."Uh, what?
In order to reach the capital of Amatharsus, their journey was not an odyssey of undertaking.Editing is about more than just grammar and spell checking -- it shouldn't be less than that. I don't know if I could find a page that didn't have a problem with the writing.