I think this worked as a full novel best. The way that the story flowed from one book to the next made this work perfect. Overall I enjoyed the story and most of the characters. But I have a serious issue with how they use chemicals to make women want then love them, and occasionally with how certain ones were treated. I do love the alpha males, but it's not cool to keep calling your lover an 'Earth Bitch' even if by definition and explanation it's valid.
Precious Sacrifice
This story did not impress me much. And for being the first book in a series I really thought things would be explained more than they were. I know it was short, but it only makes sense to set a clearer backstory right off the bat. My biggest peeve was that you get the gist of what a Preyfinder is but it's never explained what they really do. There are bad aliens and good aliens out there. Though how good the good ones are is relative because as they travel across the universe they test the population of each planet they go to. If they fail their tests, every living thing is wiped out and occasionally the planet itself is destroyed. They do this so that those people cannot be changed by their enemy and used to increase their army. Is this right? I don't think so. But it's fiction so I'll go with it.
The story itself was interesting but probably could have benefited from being longer. While on a mission, Jadd injures one of his men and is stripped of his title for it. He's also assigned the punishment of going to Earth to chase his target and form a partial bond with her. The punishment comes from him not being able to complete the bond therefore making them both suffer. But apparently that's cool with his higher ups because his prey is going to die anyway. Brittney just doesn't know it. She's given doses of these nano chems that pretty much force her to want him while also determining if her species is worth saving. That's one thing that kind of bugged me. Her first real interaction with Jadd they pretty much just end up screwing each other for the rest of the night. After Jadd finds her again later, Brittney eventually is told she's being manipulated by this chemical, but she still thinks that she loves the guy. Really? I think at best they talked for only a few hours. Yup. That's true love there. Anyway. From there on it's pretty much just the two of them wanting the other. Her bond with Jadd is going faster than expected and he knows there's something about her that he just can't let her get killed even if it means defying an order. His decision could have had a terrible outcome, but it worked out in the end.
There's a battle with an enemy queen factory and some of her minions, but it seemed kind of glossed over. I felt like I missed something when certain things were already over before I even knew they began with this fight.
Going into the next book I was hoping it would be better than this one.
Intimidator
I did enjoy this one quite a bit more than the first. Stom and Willow were able to get to know each other just a little bit more before completing their bond and I think that made a big difference. The factory queen they defeated before was not the only one there and this time it's a little more cunning. Having created some terrifying ways to control people and take over the planet without suspicion this one is already doing greater damage.
Stom is almost like a military hero and that has the opposite effect of what he desires. He's so well known and respected that he's pretty much been pulled out the fighting and forced into politics. Something he hates. Being given a pet is an honor to most and now he's been given this gift. But he doesn't want it. Stom was already mated but he lost his mate and all his children when his planet had to be destroyed after the Bak-lal invaded. He vowed that he would never take a mate again and didn't want a pet. He knows he has to at least play along though, so he intends to do just what he must and then pretend to not capture his target. Which proves impossible for him when he is with Willow.
Willow is a pretty normal girl that does what she can to keep herself and her cousin safe. She has deep scars from losing her parents as a child but she tries to stay strong. Making a bad decision one night to save a girl only earns her a frightful enemy. And it's while being attacked in an ally that she first meet Stom when he saves her...with forks and dinner knives.
Stom was a pretty good guy. He fights his overwhelming desire for Willow with every breath he takes because of his vow to his dead mate but also doesn't want to hurt Willow. The more time they spend together the closer they become but the entire time Stom is still trying to figure out how keep her safe but not as a bond mate. That is taken away from him when they learn that, much like Jadd and Brittney, their bond is progressing much faster than usual. And the farther they are apart the more they physically suffer for it.
When Stom decides to officially bond with Willow they are attacked. Willow gets kidnapped and Stom is near death. As soon as Stom is healed and hears that Willow was taken by a remaining factory queen, Stom doesn't care if the humans see, he is going to get her back. So by the end, the two of them are happy together. But the Earth knows of their existence and they have a fight on their hands that will be hard to win.
I really liked Ally in this story and look forward to getting more of her. I did figure out one of her tricks, but the one at the end was a cool surprise too. I also loved seeing Brask and Talia. Their interactions are always great and I am so looking forward to them getting together.
Defiler
This one had ups and downs for me. I loved how Ally got her own prince in (non shiny) armor who was such a sweetheart and perfect for her. He wasn't like the other warriors and I really liked that. I have enjoyed Brask's appearances since the beginning so I was excited to get his story. Unfortunately I hated how he had to share his bondmate. To me, it made absolutely no sense that a warrior like him would not only be okay with having to share, but would want to. Not only that, I really don't think it added anything but drama to the story because a lot of it was Talia fighting her attraction to both men or Brask and Talia trying to convince Dassenze to complete his bond with her. It was just pointless to me and I didn't like that. It probably also didn't help that I did not like Dassenze. At all. He was too serious and arrogant for me. Talia was okay. I didn't like or dislike her. Though I was little upset when she didn't take the katana from Brask when he first offered it. That make me swoon a little more over him and I would have taken it in a heartbeat. I loved what Willow had become. Too bad it wasn't by something good. And it was so sweet that despite the danger, Stom was always by her side.
This story had a lot more going on than just Talia getting it on with her mates. We meet a couple new people, go on a road trip, there's tons of fighting, lots of killing, and an approaching deadline until the end of the world. The factory queen is cranking out the crazies (one of which totally reminded me of American McGee's Alice) and doing well at causing destruction. Where Dassenze once thought these Earth witches would be the key to victory, he eventually loses that hope when each one seems out for the count. But the four of them refuse to give up and they really do become the key to victory. It was pretty neat the way that their abilities worked perfect to come together and do what needed to be done. Even if the finishing blow seemed easy and convenient.
By the end, the world is rebuilding with help from the aliens and moving on. The bonded pairs have decisions to make and lives to live. Talia has two mates and couldn't be happier. The whole becoming an ascend thing was...interesting? And I still don't know if she ever got Brask's mark making her officially his bondmate. We're told all about the one she got from Dassenze, but nothing about his after we're told it wasn't forming. I could have done without the epilogue. It really was pointless unless the author intends to do more with this universe.
Copy provided by publisher via Netgalley.