I thought this book was pretty predictable plot-wise, though I still enjoyed the journey. I could easily see Priscilla entering as the villain, Burns was actually a surprise as the spy, though probably because I forgot he existed as one of Rian’s employees, and the dynamic between the h and H was pretty standard- no memorable lines or witty banter between them. I don't usually notice grammatical errors, but the book had an outstanding number of them that it was impossible to ignore. This book could've greatly benefited from another round of editing before publication.
It was the kind of book that once I put it down I didn't want to pick it right up again, but once I did, I couldn't put it down. If that makes sense to ye. I could tell what was going to happen next, but at least the one half-curveball I encountered was Meara's Robert being Rian's stepbrother. That was nicely done McCarthy.
Kathleen was a nicely written character- I liked her, could empathize with her condition of being forced to pretend to be her cousin and then abandoned by her only family in a strange new country. Though, there were many points where she had the opportunity to come clean to Rian and she didn't take them-- I just wanted to shake some courage into her! And that’s where it became obvious that her keepin’ the secret was only to serve as a plot device.
Rian--- now he was a nice male lead! I can dig dark hair and green eyes-- she made him sound lovely! Liked his personality too— though he took his anger a bit far when he learned the truth, especially when he had felt it deep down that 'Meara' was too different from the girl he teased as a boy. I enjoyed how even though he’s lived in America so long, his friends could still hear a hint of brogue in his speech, but being around Kathleen really brought out Ireland in him.
As far as interesting side characters go--- Conor McDermott wins the gold. He had a nice blend of decent, attractive guy mixed with mysterious broodiness. I liked him from the first scene he graced. Found myself wanting to know more about him and how he managed to find himself in Maryland from Ireland. So-- pleased to discover there is a book, Irish Rogue, with McDermott as the male protagonist. Though I don't hold much hope for improved grammar or more twisty plot devices, I'll still track it down to read.
All in all, an enjoyable read.