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The Original Sin

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He is sin.
He is everything wrong in my life. On the flip side of the coin, he holds power over everything I thought I did right in my life.
Sin is a tricky thing like that.
He has his secrets, and I have mine. What began as a young girl’s dream was turned into a twisted game of crime and punishment. He commits the crime; I dole out the punishment I see fit.
Only, like everything else in porn star Simon Sin’s world, he always keeps the upper hand. His summer of sin reveal becomes my summer of sin retold. What happens when everyone’s secrets are shared?

200 pages, ebook

First published July 25, 2015

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M.J. Fields

153 books3,970 followers
MJ Fields is a USA Today bestselling author of contemporary romance novels. She lives in New York with her daughter Miss A, smoochie faced Newfie, Theo and the newest member to the 'fields crew, rescue diva / holy terror Eleanor.
When she’s not locked away in the cave, she enjoys doing home improvement projects, spending time with her family, attending live music and sporting events, the theatre, singing off key, dancing to her own beat, listening to audio books, and reading of course.

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Profile Image for Kay (❦ ᴗ ❦ ✿) BooksandMe.
470 reviews7 followers
August 16, 2015

4.5★

  

“What good is hell without owning a little piece of heaven?”

  


Simon Sin, a six-foot-three-inches of lean muscle and sexuality. The world also knows Sin has ten inches of thick perfection between his strong, muscular thighs. The man is the King of Porn. Need I say more?

Sadi Dee, long, silky, raven hair; cock-sucking lips; and impressive body. A cunning, devious woman with secrets of her own who is obsessed with Sin. Yes, a lady that reeks of mystery and possibly danger.

Usually, I am lured with those descriptions already. That’s all I need and I could dive head in without reading blurbs into the story. But oh, no. Not this one. This was all about that twisted game and secrets. The air of mystery and the mind-fuckery. That’s all what this is.

What I love about actually and the main reason that have held my attention was that this is a world of porn. Of course I’ve read of something in that category of sex industry but this is different. It was like watching a movie, not the porn and the sexual acts although those were actually hot, but it was the workings on the industry. The setting, the taking of videos, what goes on those live streaming or the uploaded videos on the internet. It was a whole load of information in a different way and all I can do is sucked it up.

“Don’t fall in love with my cock, baby. You won’t like the way he loves you back.”

“Just as I am about to pull her head away, she swallows all nine, hard inches of me.”

Oh, you maybe confuse. There was the ten-inch glory of Simon Sin and there was the nine, hard inches. Surprise, surprise! You’ll love the variety. There’s Sin and all his fucking glory, but what will you do if you have more of Sin? That’s like more cock. Smorgasbord, right? I think this is a golden cock worthy, don’t you think? Aha. Interested? Go on, you can read the book. Lol

  

Sexuality. It’s what I love about my book reads. And this one has it. Not just because Sin is a porn star and we’re talking about sexual skills, but sexuality. Owning it, being able to learn what you want and trying something new and accepting it to yourself and being confident about it. No matter what your gender is.

I know, it include so much check on my check list but I can’t just give me my 5★. It was because at some point I had a hard time following the characters. I had introductions and build-up with them, I get to know their personality and if there is character development, I would know it. But I felt I had little time with them. Too much too little I wanted more. More of Sin. More. Just more.

When I started reading this, I was glued to the pages and I want to finish this fast. Or not. You know the feeling when you want to reach the ending because you just want to know all the secrets and yet you’re dreading it because you don’t want it to end? Yep, that’s the feeling the whole time I was reading this. Always checking the chapters and dreading it. Of course, I tried to stop my urge of cheating with my book. I didn’t skim and read the ending and going back to what chapter I’m on, yep. That was some hell of a restraint and control even if I really wanted to.

But as much I love and enjoyed reading this, the ending was quite heart-stopping. Yes, my heart skip a beat and I literally held my breath. Maybe I expected it at some point but when you were there, it still feel like it. I was just shocked and it was hard to get over actually. Maybe I’m not making sense, but it left me reeling and I was just like ‘what the heck had just happened?’ It was a struggle since it was a love-hate relationship. You love how it ended and yet you hate it actually happened.

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Profile Image for  Linathebookaddict  .
1,569 reviews409 followers
August 8, 2015
Wow. Hot, sexy, emotional at times and thrilling!!!
When I got this book, I expected it to be hot and rightdown dirty but I never expected it to be a perfect blend of heat and emotion.
Simon Sin is the king of porn and Sadi is his queen. For years they've built an empire together; an empire built in lies and betrayal.
What I loved most about the book was the unique way it was presented. The chapters show different point of views from our very elusive protagonists. You never know what these people will do, you discover a new personality with each chapter. But a big secret is uniting all these ten characters together. And the master puppeteer? Simon Sin. He is sin and secrets incarnate and you will be attracted and repulsed by him at the same time.
The writing was flawless and the fact that this was written by different authors makes it even more amazing and perfect. I certainly enjoyed it and despite the heavy amount of hotness, I found myself emotional at certain scenes. Read and find out why I think this is the hottest release of the summer!
5 Sinful Stars from me.

If you are easily offended stay away from this; fair warning.

I received an ARC in exchange for my honest review. Thank you, Angelica Chase.
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Author 153 books3,970 followers
July 28, 2015
Well, of course I think it's great... naughty too <3
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Author 8 books180 followers
August 12, 2015
What I loved about this book was how distinct each character was. My understanding is that each character was written by a different author, which means the characters were diverse in personality and speech patterns. It worked really well.

This is not a compilation. It is one story written by several authors. There are 8 POVs, from what I counted off the top of my head, and each one is very individual.

Oh, and was I shocked when I figured out what was going on. I did not see it coming until it was thrown out there. I had my own idea on where the book was going, so when I figured out what was actually happening, I was blown away, shocked, surprised, something I value very much in books. Predictability, blah. Who wants predictable? Throw me a curve ball any day of the week! And you will certainly get that in this.

Love this story and can't wait to see where it's going. Twists and turns around every corner and the cliffhanger! Ahhhh!!!
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August 9, 2015
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The Original Sin

I received this book from the authors for an honest review.

WHAT DID I JUST READ??? OMG I was not expecting this book at all. Ok yes the blurb says it’s about a porn star so I just expected to read some smut….don’t get me wrong ……there was plenty of filth in the book but I was floored by this insanely awesome plot.

So yes this book is about Sin…Simon Sin the #1 porn star ever. It tells the story of his somewhat dysfunctional love to Sadi. The woman who made and destroyed him only to build him back up….see why I said Dysfunctional??? So Sadi and Sin are dealing with his confessions and we only know that he is kinda disrespecting our girl after his cryptic confessions. Then the story goes off into a whole another world for a few chapters and I was like WHU??? But Holy Crap when it all became clear to me what was going on…..Mind = Blown….

Seriously I was dying and then I thought that I had it figured out when…...ANOTHER Epic twist is thrown in your face…OMG…Sadi confesses her biggest secret to us the reader. YIKES!!! I sat and devoured this book in one afternoon. I couldn’t put it down. After each twist was given I had to keep reading, husband and kids be damned.

Profile Image for Philomena Callan Cheekypee.
4,020 reviews432 followers
August 13, 2015
Super unique storyline with many points of view, each from a different author.

This is a hot sexy erotica story. I thought it was a faced paced and quick read that I read in one sitting. I really couldn't put it down. The twists and turns were brilliant. Certainly didn't expect them.

Great praise to the authors for putting together such a great book. Looking forward to reading more from them.
Profile Image for Elizabeth Clinton.
866 reviews36 followers
August 7, 2015
Daryl Banner,Chelsea Camaron,Angelica Chase,MJ Fields,MX King and Ripp Baker know exactly what the word SIN means and his name is Simon Sin King of Porn.
Simon Sin King of Internet Porn has been at the top of his game from the get go but the one thing that keeps him their is his lover,side kick and master mind really behind it all and her name is Sadi.
Sadi who knows all about Simon from growing up with the creepy stepfather but who unknowingly leads her right to him.
Sadie has dreams of being his queen but when life steers you in another direction you basically have to create what you want to make it happen and maybe it leads you right back where you started.
As fate has it Simon tells Sadi all his Sins and she makes the decisions she does to create the life that she wants and she truly believes she deserves.
This book is most definitely Naughty, and down right HOT and you definitely feel like you are at times a Voyeur watching and reading it through a window but one you definitely will not want to turn away from.
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1,945 reviews25 followers
August 7, 2015
OMG...ok...wow...I made it through and survived. What a fantastic, creative and sexy hot story...the whole thing from start to finish was amazing and totally fresh.
I have read most of these authors individually already, but put them all together and let them be free to do their own thing and you get an intriguing story full of lust, betrayal and passion.
Each author's unique voice and POV come through in the final product and when it comes together it's magic. I might not know much about the new writers but I do know the styles of MJ Fields, Chelsea Camaron and Daryl Banner...and I love them all!
Sin and Sadi make quite the colorful couple both in front of and behind the camera and what happens when life takes an unexpected and tragic turn, is dark and surprisingly erotic. I was completely shocked by the twists and turns of this story and to say that it is the ultimate revenge tale is an understatement.
Grab a copy, settle down with a nice cold drink (preferably with alcohol), take a deep breath and just dive in. Don't say I didn't warn you =)
I received a free copy in exchange for an honest review.

***** 5 ***** "summer loving" stars
Profile Image for Laurel Wistrom.
343 reviews9 followers
August 10, 2015
WOW....that's all I can say!! This book written by one of my all time favorite authors MJ Fields and then throw Chelsea Cameron, Daryl Banner, Angelica Chase, Ripp Baker and MX King into the mix and you have a book almost too hot to handle!!

This book is full of SIN but the storyline is fantastic. There were twists I didn't see coming and the the hotness is beyond some people's imagination.

Simon Sin is the the #1 porn star in the world and Sadi the woman who has loved him forever. This story is about a very dysfunctional love between the two.

There is so much to say about this boo0k but I don't want to give anything away. If you are looking for a HOT, beyond any other book, then read this!!

This is a debut book for Ripp Baker and MX King and they did and amazing job. Can't wait to see what they have in store for us in the future. Looking forward to more collaboration between these 6 authors!

Fantastic HOT book!!

I was given an ARC for an honest review.
Profile Image for Sharon Dunn.
1,226 reviews22 followers
December 14, 2015
Okay, I will admit that I was having doubts about this one when I started. I couldn't figure out the direction it was going in but when it did, WOW! It took off!! I was so captivated with the story I was at the end before I knew it. This was a well thought out book by so many talented authors. It left me speechless. So many things that I did not see coming and that is rare after reading so many books. Sin is sex. Any way he could get it and he didn't care who was watching. Sadi is a girl on a mission and her mission is Sin. She wants him any way she can get him no matter what she has to do. It's dirty, sexy, dirty, hot, erotic and did I mention DIRTY? Limits are tested, sins are made and secrets are kept. I wonder who's secret will shock you the most! Get comfortable ladies and grab an extra pair of panties because you are in for a wild ride!! A ride that will have you on the edge of your seat until the end!!
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922 reviews6 followers
August 10, 2015
Sin is the King of Porn and gets whatever he wants. Sadi has a hard life and will do anything to turn things around. When she meets Sin everything changes. Sadi wants to be Queen and won't let anything stand in her way.

The Original Sin BLEW MY MIND!!! It is a fast paced, twisted and intriguing quick read that will keep you on your toes. This story is STEAMY but also filled with plenty of humor and drama to balance it out. The story unfolds in such a unique way, which I definitely wasn't expecting. At first, I thought it seemed rushed but as pieces started to fall into place, the pace made more sense. I could not put this down and finished it the same day I started it. It flowed really well and is very different from anything I've read before. As it ended, all I could think was that I needed more!
Profile Image for Maria York.
667 reviews13 followers
August 10, 2015
Exciting, thrilling, sexy, a bit emotional and yes there are some hot and naughty sex in this amazing multi author written book!
Sadi is out to make something of herself and when she finally catches her Sin she plays for keeps! When things come to the wire does everything turn! Sex is sex or is it! Porn star, sexy men, a few or more surprises and this book will BLOW you away in more ways then ten!
Sin had secrets and so does Sadi but will those secrets help or destroy everything that has been built!
Omg these authors are so amazing! Each of them awesome in their own ways! I love love love this book! It has so much wrapped up in it your not going to want to put it down for even a second! So DONT miss out on this booktastic read!
Profile Image for Bobbie Boyens.
151 reviews
August 10, 2015
WOW just WOW

So as the title has sin in it it is sinfully delicious! Very well put together for as many authors as wrote it. You can tell a difference in writing style but that goes with each personality in the book. This has a terrific storyline and I can't wait for the next installment. Bravo Authors!
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1,751 reviews
August 26, 2018
It was a nice short read. Was not my favorite from the authors. Will read more from all the authors.
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3,920 reviews118 followers
August 13, 2015
5 Stars!

This book right here... MIND BLOWING. Seriously it is crazy and I am pretty sure I harassed my blog partner the entire time I read it because she read before I did. This book is written by SIX authors so to say I was worried about how is would be would be an understatement but... it actually worked. This story is going to push boundaries. It is full of passion and intensity.

This book was fu@$ing amazing. It rocked my world. It should come with a wet panty warning because seriously... WHOA! The steam is off the charts. This book will take you on an erotic journey through the eyes of many men and one very important woman. This is NOT a love story. There is no happy ending. This book is taboo, forbidden, erotic, and seriously twisted.

Sadi is looking for more. When she meets Sin, she has no idea the way he is going to forever change her life, marking her so she will never be the same. And that is where I am going to stop. This book is one big spoiler alert so plot details are unnecessary. The blurb doesn't do it justice... I promise. Just take a chance on this book, even if you are weary. You will walk away glad you did... swear!

I want to brag on my girl Sadi. Yeah that chick was seriously twisted and smart. She made this book for me. Sure the men along the way did but noooo! She rocked this book. She is smart, manipulative, intriguing, intense, edgy, and so full of passion. I loved her alter egos and the way she could change herself. She is definitely going down as one of the TOP chicks who mind fuc$%ed me.

This book has one hell of an ending that left me trying to keep turning the pages. This book stayed with me long after it was over and let me tell you ... the story is far from over. Sure, there is a cliffhanger but it isn't one that will have you screaming and throwing sh!t. No it is one that is going to blow you mind and make you get a devious smile, looking forward to more to come.

I highly recommend this book!

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1,328 reviews31 followers
August 14, 2015
He is sin. Well it is hard to tell which author wrote which character, and then it hit me: why do I care? I dont care. Simon is just so juicy and devious. He is the king of porn. So now if you are in need of a defibrillator or some nitro under your tongue, I will allow you to handle that before reading any more. So Sadi is a strange lady. From a young 16 year old she aspired to be his queen, queen of the AVN, queen of porn and so on.


There were a lot of statistics that involve the entire industry. I myself was not aware how much money an actress makes, nor was I aware of the amount of monthly subscriptions are sold. Sadi and Simon ruled the entire industry. Moving forward along with your smut you will get an education on the industry. I would have volunteered to help, research and guide the authors but I was not asked. I wonder who did the research? Oh well I will help for the next book.

I thought it was very very naughty.


It was on the edge of too naughty. Now moving on to the entire plot. The story of Sadi was not easy to read. I assume that the authors divided the characters and whoever wrote Sadi just killed it. I totally thought she hit her stride and was going to coast, but NO, she had a plan and WOW She was so smart and devious and I loved her.


Finally a girl who has a man by the balls. She is my hero


Now back to Simon. His summer of sin reveal was shocking! A seriously dark and dirty beach read. Be aware that you wont be able to put it down. It is best read in one sitting, just so you know.



What happens when everyone’s secrets are shared?
Profile Image for Christi Lofton.
408 reviews
August 10, 2015
This is a very HOT read with lots of twists and turns. It was definitely not what I was expecting but it had me in the grip of the story the entire time. I have never read a book centered around the porn world and I admit that I was a little frightened of how I might feel about it. Again, it was so not what I expected. The focus was on the people, not on the world they lived in. The world each of them lived in was just a part of who they were. Each of the characters was molded by the life they had lived. Sadi was also a character that I did not expect her to be. She was ballsy, intelligent, strong and determined, all the while being devoted. Her love for Sin was her one flaw. Even though she loved him dearly, she still moved in directions to make sure that her life was not for naught. There were several unexpected moments and one huge twist that I did not see coming. That one twist moved the book to leave it ready for the next in the series. The authors worked together to bring a very good story. I enjoyed every bit of it. Remember that this is erotica through and through so if you are reader who steers away from those types of books you might want to skip this one. If you don't mind the heavy sexual aspects, jump on this one!

**I received an ARC of this book in exchange for an honest review.**
Profile Image for Renee Entress.
5,600 reviews78 followers
August 13, 2015
5 star

I was pulled right into this story. The story flowed well and I was kept interested. The story has laughs, betrayal, naughty fun, secrets, grief, twists & turns, and heartbreak.

This is Sadi’s story. Sadi wanted Simon Sin and she would do anything to keep him. When she lost him she was not sure she would get him back. But Simon loves her doesn’t he? I can’t tell you too much or it will give the book away. This book is loaded full of erotic naught fun. You get twists and turns you might not be expecting but will blow you away. In the end will Sadi have everything she wanted or still be searching for what she wants?

A few of these authors are new to me (Daryl Banner and Angelica Chase). Some are also new authors (Ripp Baker and MX King). This book was a perfect debut and I can’t wait to see what they write next.

I felt I was able to connect with the characters and the story was a great read.

I highly recommend this book and can’t wait for the next story from all these authors.
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263 reviews
September 5, 2015
Prior to starting this book, I hadn't read a synopsis or summary of the book so I wasn't sure what to expect. I just jumped right in. O.M.G. This book was seriously hot! I thoroughly enjoyed the story line, the curve balls, the characters, the writing...everything but the ending. It wasn't a bad ending, but to me it stopped too abruptly.

I will tell you if you enjoyed this book you should definitely check out other books by these authors! Angelica Chase and MJ Fields are two of my favorites!

I was given a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
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1,617 reviews81 followers
August 14, 2015
5 Crazy Ass Must Read Stars!!!!!

Holy Flippin' Hotness! This is just what I needed. A good filthy read. It was more than just a smutty read. It had a story line that sucked me in and kept me swiping for more. The twists kept me on my toes. Wow! I'm really surprised at how much I loved this. The characters were amazingly written and I loved how well it all meshed together.

I would so read another collaboration from all these authors. They rocked this one that's for sure!
105 reviews
August 19, 2015
Sad to say I just could not finish..

MJ Fields is one of my favorite authors but I could not get drawn into this book. I tried reading it, putting it down and going back to it later. This did not work; by chapter seven I was done. Characters were shallow and I could not understand where plot was going.
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249 reviews
December 14, 2015
I thoroughly enjoyed this book. Each person had a unique voice, and I loved how it all tied together, but I did not see how it was tied together until it was finally revealed. I love when that happens!
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531 reviews10 followers
January 8, 2016
WOW!!! ALL I CAN SAY IS THIS BOOK IS HOT HOT & DID I SAY HOT???
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438 reviews2 followers
July 9, 2016
Speechless

Holy cliffhanger Bat man! Hot and sexy and full of secrets that I have a feeling are still unraveling . . . Can't wait to see what happens next!
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151 reviews6 followers
August 17, 2015
WHAT.... wasn't expecting that. Can't wait for the next book :-)
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Author 4 books35 followers
August 10, 2015
Seven Sin's doesn't leave room for anything good. Blown away by this new Sinful delight of a read.
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