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336 pages, Mass Market Paperback
First published March 1, 2016


DNF @ 45%
The story started off very well, but I thought it turned very cliche, especially from the hero of the story. It's not the author's fault but lately, I've been reading a lot of hero with a tortue past because [insert tragedy reason that isn't really a big deal] and frankly, it's getting very tiresome.
Jake's wife left him and his daughter and now every time he tries to enter a relationship (friendship or more or whatever), Jake keeps mentioning his divorce like a person who lost his virginity. He's always telling himself that "he's ruined" or "he's very messed up in life" or some such nonsense. He's a guy and I just wish he'll just stfu with all those whiney comments.
People become depress after divorces but the way the author painted the hero wasn't grief, depression, or anger but more like a guy who complains and whines 24/7. I'm not sure if that was intended but it came off that way when I read it and it felt very off and honestly, very boring.
And the second thing that I got fed up is Jake hiding behind his daughter from moving forward in his relationship with the heroine, Beth. For my daughter's sake, I don't want my daughter hurt, I can't expose her to a new woman, I can't risk her being abandon again, and etc and etc. Yeah. Please. People get remarried with children. Hiding behind his child is a tiresome read.
You know what would have been a better approach to Jake and Beth's story? Them going through the troubles of being partners in Channel 9 News. Them working together as a couple in a work environment. Them juggling between careers, relationships, and taking care of his daughter. Them finding insecurities with the pressure of work and taking care of his daugther. Things like THAT. Instead, we get hero who whines and bitches all day about his ex-wife and his lack of candy.
Otherwise from the above, this book has great prose and, surprisingly, a very likeable heroine. Too bad I'm fed with the cliche and the hero.