Let the Only Sound Be the Overflow

Love Hunt Me Down #1

by Madalynn_Bohemia

Sterek Fanfic
Why did the annual school trip have to be to a water park? And why, oh why did Derek Hale have to fill in as chaperon?
Words:12955 complete

Genres: M M Romance, Fan Fiction, Shapeshifters, Contemporary, Short Stories, Paranormal

39 pages, ebook

First published August 18, 2013

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[Rosa, really · Rating 3 out of 5]

The first half of this fic reminded me of the South Park episode where the boys visit Pi Pi's Splashtown.



With slightly less urine-related deaths.



But the second half of the fic was all Sterek sexy fun times with a self-lubing butthole, claiming, marking and biting. Oh and KNOTTING.



Now that's what I call a good time.

[Jennifer☠Pher☠ · Rating 3 out of 5]

Huh, I wonder how this is going to play out. Quite the school trip, rawr!

[Meep]

Stiles seems REALLY young, pre-teen young with his sulk and the soft-toy. Plus the coloured wrist bands and pairing-up rules. Seems random for a mechanic to be put in charge of a school trip too, Derek having a deal with the coach is a creepy concept whatever the details.

It's a day at a Water Park, perhaps the issue is I can't swim and had to google 'inner tube' to know what they were sitting in. At halfway I felt I was still getting a tour of a park and the different activities.

Not feeling it. Not one for me.

[Sandra · Rating 3 out of 5]

3.5 stars I actually liked the first half in the water park a lot. It was cute and fun to be “in the know” about Derek being a Were when Stiles obviously wasn’t. And they were obviously becoming friends over the course of the day and Stiles was attracted to Derek (Duh)... so I’m not sure why they had to make it so rapey?

Don’t get me wrong, I’ve read my fair share of non/dub-con fanfic, but this wasn’t going that way. It was just an interesting choice I guess. But anywho, Stiles was still into it, and the sex was def hot.

I read the next one too, I Think I Might Have Inhaled You, and we get some more relationship development and live!Hales fun.

[TrickLolly · Rating 1 out of 5]

So, this fic creeped me out. I was grossed out when Derek told Stiles that he had been wanting to hook up him since he was twelve. Twelve. :/ Meanwhile, according to their age gap, Derek had been eighteen at the time.

[Jerry · Rating 3 out of 5]

3.5 stars, but probably a half star extra because of my addiction to Sterek. This starts out chaste and ends with really fast sex and then knotting and claiming. Also underage, but Derek did wait 5 years to claim Stiles. Fast read.
Just realized this is the first of 4 parts and includes mpreg in last part.

[Skye Blue ☆*~ﾟლ(´ڡ`ლ)~*☆ · Rating 3 out of 5]

The premise was a little weak, it was cute....but the sex was hot!

I can't resist a good knotting.

[Maygirl7 · Rating 2 out of 5]

So much was wrong with this for me.