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The Submarine Full of Bees

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A Bedtime Story With Added Buzz
This story is a little bit different from other stories. Usually stories are about other people but this story is about you. And usually stories are made up but this story is all true. It’s about the amazing adventure you had today with those bees.
I know what you’re thinking: you’re thinking: I didn’t have an adventure with any bees today!
Oh yes you did! But you can’t remember because that magic flower made you forget.
Let me explain ...

This story is one of the thirty-one stories that make up the critically acclaimed collection A Month of Bedtime Stories
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"A wonderful book well worth adding to any collection" - Book Reviews and Giveaways

"I loved each one and never once was ready to put the book down" - Chodi Kid Books

"These well-written and fast-paced stories are told with a touch of humor that both the child and the storyteller can enjoy" - Online Book Club

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19 pages, Kindle Edition

First published February 9, 2015

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Neil McFarlane

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Author 105 books367 followers
January 22, 2018
Fun story for young readers and great as a bedtime story. Readers take an adventure to learn a bit about bees, honey a few other things. The author did a wonderful job with this cute story. I would have liked to see a couple of illustrations because the adventure is one I think children could use a helpful tool that a picture or two would have added especially in the submarine. All in all. a story I think children will enjoy.
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January 23, 2025
Great read!

Perfect for age 5! It's funny, entertaining, and we will never look at a jar of honey the same way again.
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173 reviews8 followers
July 18, 2022
The Submarine Full of Bees
by Neil McFarlane

A bedtime story is a traditional form of storytelling, where a story is told to a child at bedtime to prepare the child for sleep. The bedtime story has long been considered "a definite institution in many families". The term "bedtime story" was coined by Louise Chandler Moulton in her 1873 book, Bed-time Stories.

The book which I will suggest to you folks today is an exceptionally captivating and extremely fascinating book the substance of this book will make you fall head over heels for this book.

The Submarine Full of Bees by Neil McFarlane is a Bedtime Story With Added Buzz, this story is somewhat unique in relation to different stories. Typically stories are about others yet this story is about you. What's more, for the most part stories are made up yet this story is all evident. It's about the astounding experience you had today with those honey bees.

Fun story for youthful perusers and incredible as a sleep time story. Perusers take an undertaking to become familiar with a piece about honey bees, honey a couple of different things. The creator worked effectively with this adorable story. I would have jumped at the chance to see two or three representations on the grounds that the experience is one I figure kids could utilize a supportive device that an image or two would have added particularly in the submarine. With everything taken into account. a story I figure youngsters will appreciate.

Overall, THIS IS A MUST-READ. Written cautiously, this book is something that will be a joy to peruse and I prescribe you to peruse it. This book is certainly worth the buy and worth the read.

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Profile Image for Tony Parsons.
4,156 reviews102 followers
June 30, 2020
Most people like honey on something.
Honey is either grown in a beehive’s or in the woods hanging from a tree.
Beware of the bears in the woods they love honey.
She has a royal submarine & her 5 Boris’ are going on an underwater expedition.
The Queen Bee (Captain) needed 1 more crew member.
The pay was fantastic.
Down they went.

I do not receive any type of compensation for reading & reviewing free books from publishers & authors. Therefore, I am under no obligation to write a positive review, only an honest one.

An awesome book cover, great hand-drawn colored pictures & proper font & writing style. A very professionally written children’s (preschool/elementary age) fantasy storybook. It was quite easy for me to read/follow from start/finish & never a dull moment. There were no grammar/typo errors, nor any repetitive or out of line sequence sentences. Lots of exciting scenarios, with several twists/turns & a great set of unique characters, settings, etc. to keep track of. This could also make another great children’s fantasy movie, a classroom presentation, an animated cartoon, or better yet a mini TV series. There is no doubt in my mind this is an extremely easy rating of 5 stars.
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1,778 reviews24 followers
August 28, 2019
This is an unusual kind of cute story. It is told so the one reading/listening supposedly did all the things and a Queen Bee made you forget. I'm sure your young child will want to do these things and you too.
A bear runs by while being attacked by a swarm of bees. Hey. I need honey and there might not be anyone at the hive now. The Queen wants to know why your hands are in her hive hole. More importantly, she needs one more man in her submarine crew. He either gets a jar of honey or ten squillion pounds. He picks the money. Just like Alice in Wonderland, he shrinks to fit into the sub with the bees by eating a berry. Where are they going? What are they going to explore? I know it will be fun.
I borrowed this book on a Kindle Unlimited website and so can you.
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1,824 reviews9 followers
October 20, 2020
"I hereby name this creature a quantum techno poppadum." This is the creature you discovered today on The Submarine Full of Bees. If you don't remember making the discovery, then you need to read the book!

McFarlane, Neil. The Submarine Full of Bees: A Bedtime Story For Kids Aged 5 to 10 (p. 11). Kindle Edition.
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Author 1 book81 followers
December 23, 2017
This was a cute, but strange book. A young boy wants some honey so he goes off into the woods to find some. He finds himself on a mission with the queen bee. This was told in the rare second person which made it strange yet charming.
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38 reviews3 followers
November 26, 2016
Hilarious!!!& Awesome!!!

My son & I loved this book! It was really funny! Would definitely recommend for the younger ones for bedtime story!
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868 reviews2 followers
July 6, 2017
Very Funny

This review is by my 9yo son:
Very funny story. Me and my mom really liked it and laughed a lot.
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Author 24 books10 followers
July 16, 2017
Definitely different and unusual. It keeps you wondering right to the end, what the heck is he getting at?
Profile Image for Lisa Reeder.
38 reviews
December 8, 2017
I read this delightful story to my grandsons and they absolutely loved it!!!
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22 reviews1 follower
January 1, 2019
Very cute bedtime story!

I loved the "me" story, very cute to read to my grandchildren!
Would love to read more "me" stories to share with the grandkids.

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5 reviews
August 6, 2020
The Funniest Bedtime Story Ever!

We love this story. We were hooting and holding our sides the whole time, don’t cha know. We can’t wait to read other stories by this author.
85 reviews
September 13, 2022
Fun book, which h my 7 year old grandson enjoyed me reading to him
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January 25, 2024
Son absolutely loved this book!

Such a fun book. Encourages little minds to use their imaginations . A joy to read. The perfect bedtime story.
24 reviews
July 20, 2019
It was definitely a cute bedtime story, and I don't think I've read any books with its perspective of the narrator telling you what you did. I might be wrong but I think that second person, little one definitely had fun with it so all in all I think it was worth it.
6 reviews
February 3, 2017
Absolutely brilliant, engaging and fun story.
The perfect bedtime story, full of excitement and adventure and a sence of humour which can be appreciated by all agea. It puts you or the child you are reading to, into the story. Truly captivates the imagination and encourages children to explore and experiment with nature and biology in a subtle manner.
The authors style bears resemblance to that of A.A.Milne and shares the some ability to draw you in from the first words.
It is wonderful how they have found a way to make the impossible into the possible in so much as finding imaginative ways in which you cam shrink and grow.
It was a delight to read this book and I would not hesitate in rereading and recommending this for children of all agea as it is not just fun to read but fun to he read too. I look forward to reading more stories from the collection.
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2,080 reviews9 followers
October 6, 2016
Neil McFarlene has written a book that children will enjoy listening to. Older children can read it themselves. The imagination and creativity of this story will have the children thinking about what it would be like if this happen to them.
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11.7k reviews102 followers
July 17, 2016
More creative and a better storyline than most free Kindle e-books for children.
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Author 22 books187 followers
April 11, 2017
Very creative bedtime story that stimulates a child's imagination. What might have happened when a bear follows a swarm of bees into the forest? If one put his hand into the bee hive and met the queen, what might she have said? Well, the author creates a story about a queen bee who invites a human to steer a submarine full of bees to explore life in a puddle. McFarlane has an unusual writing style which is humorous and creative. Targeted for children who are ages five to ten, I think that it will appeal most to children five through eight. This tale is one of the stories in a larger collection titled A Month of Bedtime Stories. Highly recommended.
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